Happy February Azrael! I am happy to review your item in "I Write in 2019"! It is wonderful that you joined in the DEAR ME site contest!
I enjoyed you opening lines as I could relate to talking to yourself and had to laugh! I was not sure what the n(you) meant.
Your second paragraph was brilliant in imagery and vibration. What a wondeful way to describe success and the line about "doomed to drown" was priceless. I loved it!
Your summary of the downside of the year is hearfelt and I appreciate how you keep a lighter tone about it. I am glad you made it through!
I appreciate your metaphors and comparisons like "resettling is a migraine"! LOL I think you need a period after that word as the part of the line seems to be a complete thought on its own.
Your style and humour is so appealing here as you speak to yourself. You do have a positive outlook while you take a few potshots at yourself. I think it is cool to want to get Grandma's stories! Great use of the reference to Charon, and zombies! I had to laugh about the blog! The last line is perfect and your closing is so true. Hope it is a good thing to be stuck with you.
I really had a good time reading this letter. You have a wonderful sense of humour and I am sure that keeps you going in the tough times. May this year be all you wish for and more.
Looking forward to more of your awesome poems and stories. You have a gift.
See you on the POWER review pages too!