Welcome to WDC BlizzardBlitzer!
Happy Poetry Month!
I am charmed by your romantic expression and really enjoyed the old fashioned aura of the words like "err to succomb", "ministrations" and "yonder" and "petrified hollow" is so descriptive!
It was pleasing to read aloud and I could hear the plaintive tone of pleading. The style is a quatrain and while the syllable/rhythm count is not consistent in each verse, it did not detract from the impact and message. I did want to read "fumble on paper stilts" as "upon" made the flow a bit long there. I was wondering if there should be a word like "the" or "a" in line 3 in v 5.
The rhyme scheme is effective and adds to the overall flow and soundscape along with your assonance and consonance useage. The last line evoked a sadness and the image of "knoll and turn" is lovely as it is different. I would maybe put a comma after 'Hope" though I see your choice of no punctuation does work.
Your images are vivid and effective In drawing me into this vision.
Thanks for creating this evocative piece and sharing your talent.
Keep on writing!
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