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Happy Spring Richard! Thanks for participating in our Free for All March Raid. Here is one of your reviews from your winning prize! 
I imagine it took some ingenious thought and editing. Kudos!
I so enjoyed the way your poem flowed off the tongue with its solid inner rhyme
I like the way your message shows the history of music and types and song with references to myth, history and sagas. Your words convey so many ideas. The image of the "song's coals" made me think of early peoples singing around fires and the idea of saga words drifting made me think of early bard's tales that could go on and on. I like how you describe the variance of musical rhythms too. 
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Oh my gosh! This ad is so funny as well as being seriously convincing.The last line was perfect and we all would hope so. 
I think appealing the environmental issues and the techy aspects makes this ad of interest to a wide audience. Even compulsive cleaners would love it!
The tone of the piece is friendly and inviting and you give lots of reasons why it would make a perfect purchase. Your ideas are so creative and original. I laughed aloud at the "bluetooth capabilites." 
I like how you add a bit of history in your reference to the inventor of the toilet and the name you give yours is brilliant. Everyone likes Super...heroes or super anything. Or a smart toilet. 
Let's hope it does not have a Siri voice! 
I wondered about making "it will give your bathroom..." it's own sentence as opposed to a phrase. Or better yet... something like "to your home, giving your bathroom the swanky.." so it flows freely as a phrase. 
Wow! I love the potency of feeling in this expression as you tell it like it is in some places. I like how you give advise at the end, trying to encourage men to wake up.
Using rhyming couplets was a good choice as it reminds me of wisdom poetry. Your rhymes are well chosen and your facts on the subject stark. Well done.
This poem clearly illustrates your theme and how you feel about it. I even picked up a feeling that you see some hope....if man will listen. The point about being fed by the mother should hit a heart in them, yet I suppose with years of society norms make some attitudes automatic. The world is changing though, and voices like yours are a light! 
I was amused by your "Cut the Cake" and enjoyed the romantic story where you used the H words. It is quite a feat to use the words repetitively and make sense. Lovely. I am finding this one tough to do. Kudos!
I had to laugh at the dog monopoly! Very inventive idea for the prompt. The trip on the train was charming and I like how you incorporated some Wonderland characters and the Goat's story about the billy goats Gruff and the nursery rhyme references like the cow over the moon! Wonderful imagination! 
I liked your take on manners. References to etiquette I am sure many folks today have no idea. Your jury folks were interesting and I like how you used some made up characters that might live in Wonderland.
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and the Queen's tarts if you know where they are. Save some for us fellow pawn... we may join you if we do not lose our heads. 
Helloooo fellow white pawn! Congratulations on your 
It gave another layer of your challenge.
Each chapter fulfilled on the prompts in original ways and I laughed at the story of avoiding punishment. Good one! The Thimble poem was brilliant. I was convinced it would make a cool prize. {for some) LOL The alliterative work in the H tale was effective and fun to read aloud. You had wonderful detail about your jury members and I could see why they would be helpful to your cause. And yay, you managed to get a poem about chess in the chapter task: a game of chess! 
I liked the cool ending of Talking with Time and your poem in the "haddock eyes" prompt had an original theme. Yummy! Well done. Your closing entry was sincere and helpful to future fellow pawns. Gifting a trinket in some of your public prompts was a generous and lovely gesture too. 
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I am happy to review you item in "I Write in 2021" forum.
Oh wow! I see this is for the Cupid slam contest which seeks ratings of 1 star or less! LOL I think this is tough call.
The darkness of this form of love is well illustrated and the idea of cupid being not such a good love symbol is awesome. The painful results of his work is potent here.
You might have messed up the punctuation to have the poem be less easy to follow. LOL The poem has no form as even the free verse is broken up.
I wondered about the word "rose quickly" in the first line. Or maybe if you say "had risen quickly" it might sound better. And you need a comma after "over the city, over Pearson." I think the "I" is missing in "“Sir please, am sure you ." Niggling typos! 
I like how you begin with the gravestone script centered and then follow with a free verse reflection. It has a personal voice and aura. The image of the rose that will not be put on the grave is vivid. Using Father's Day is evocative too as our minds do think of our dad's then.
It is so moving that the poet has knowing and faith that prayer reaches its destination regardless of distance. The image of sitting at the computer and praying is a wonderful one. I think my dad is buried with his parents back in a village near Quebec. We never did go there. 
The free style suits the theme and content. The repeating in the last two lines is effective too. I was drawn to the first two lines..appealing images to begin with. "breathing the sky" is expansive idea.
Wow! In this short verse you capture what anxiety feels like in a vivid way. I could imagine the speaker sitting there hiding within and the inner termoil of the mind. It has an intense tone and the punctuation assists the read.
The free verse style suits the theme and emotional content. The one inner rhyme with "head" and "dead" is perfect for emphasis. Your use of some assonance also adds to the soundscape when I read it aloud. {eg. repeating long e, long a, ing,} Good job.
I have never heard of this form before so thank you for the link about it. Your rendition is well constructed with correct syllables and emotional tension. I love the video highlighting your poem. 
Wow! What a great idea for a theme: expressing exaltation in a psalm like the ancients. I enjoyed reading it aloud and it covers the important aspects of what God is to you.
Your first lines are brilliant images to begin with and I like how you use past tense and then switch to present...setting up a timelessness to the relationship with the divine. The end notion is evocative too as it illustrates how much we receive. if we open..even gratitude returned. 
I would have liked more details about the characters and some description of the action between the knight and the troll. I wanted to hear more about this passage and where it was and who locked up the princess and why. It would make it more exciting and fill out the story line. 
Also, just a note. I found it a bit distracting to read as you capitalize every word and are missing punctuation so I could tell when one sentence ended and a new began. It gives the reader time to pause to take in what you said when punctuation is consistent.
Your genre choices are well chosen and tag line gives us the theme of the story. 
Wow! I was really engaged with your imagery and deep thought in this short free style poem. It has a reality and felt a bit sad even though death is just a moving on. 
Wow! I like the idea of Space Kid adventure and the message about exploring to avoid boredom. Painting was a cool choice for them to try. It was interesting what they could watch on the planet. I smiled at "eating competitions."