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I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is a useful item to find. While many Items deal with what to look for when writing a review, this actually deals with how to write a review. It talks about making sure that the Review and Rating correspond to each other. It talks about how the spelling in the review should be correct, and that one should try the Review Tool when reviewing for a number of groups. Very useful.

Originality
I've seen many Reviewing items, but none about the writing of a review.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is a place where people can come and celebrate this person's account's Birthday- talk about being on for a long time, since 4/16/02. Something tells me they've seen a lot of good people come and go. Well, here's to another ten years of being on the site.

Originality
I've seen other Birthday-types of forums, but it's always nice to drop in.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Have a Happy Birthday!

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This looks like a fun little activity. Bid on someone, and if you win, that person has to send you a gift every day for a month. Such gifts are of course up to the person, but they could range from reviews, to reviewing packages, Gift Points, Merit Badges, Awardicons, and more. I hope I win the person I made my bid on.

Originality
Haven't seen too many of these type of Auctions.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Best of luck with your Auction.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Well, this is an interesting poem. A princess and her pet leopard are curse, she to live forever, and the leopard to remain a statue. As the centuries pass, the odds of them finding each other gets slimmer. Will they ever find the other one? We shall see.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well, this is an interesting contest event. While many contests deal in static items, mainly short stories and poems, this one deals in a whole lot more. Of course, like all contests, it has some rules, namely that the item being submitted must not have been given a 50K Awardicon or higher from another event.

Originality
Looks interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Best of luck with your contest.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is a funny little poem, which is about a video that's been showing up in a few places, about a lion that attacked a zebra, but messed up somehow and the zebra managed to escape. Well, such things do happen from time to time- not every hunt will go right.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
You might want to post a link to the video, if you can.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting little story. A dog thinks that his owner needs his protection, and is always barking when someone is near the house, such as the garbageman and the postman. As the owner of a dog myself, I know just how things can get with them- crazy.

Characters
Relating.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is your response for the "What an Old Character!" prompt, in which the responder was to read some old stories they'd written and come up with a profile for one of the characters and create a short story about the person. Since you're more of a poet, and the main character tends to be yourself, you did a poem about yourself. Looks pretty good.

Characters
Relating.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Story Cafe  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Well, this is a useful forum. Here people can come and discuss things about there writing, as well as those of others. Also, they can come here looking for help with a new story or chapter they are working on and ask for advice from other people. Very useful.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

May plenty of people come and talk about things.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Acid Tongued  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Well, this looks like a useful forum to locate. If someone dabbles in things that don't get many reviews, such as graphic stories, controversial topics, or their writing style just scares people away, they can come here looking for a review. I might have to come here from time to time.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

May you give plenty of reviews.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is your response for my prompt about annoying relatives, and about whether or not one should commit murder or try to get along with them. It seems you took the "Try to get along" route.

You talk about how there seems to be two types of fathers, the "Just be good to her" ones and the "Be good to her Or Else!" ones. You also talk about how to deal with them. Then there's the mothers, know the crazy stories about the daughter, so that you appear to be on the mother's side. Interesting advice.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of More Snow Melt  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is your response about how you'd deal with your annoying relatives.

You talk about how many of your relatives are annoying. You especially talk about your brother-in-law, who broke the cable on the land-line to your home phone- that is annoying- makes me glad about having a cellphone. You talk about giving him the benefit of the doubt. Well, strange things happen.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well, this is a useful little item to find. If one is having trouble with writing, they could get some friends/family members together and do something like a campfire- where one person writes a few sentences, passes the pad to another, and wait until it comes around again. Sounds like a good idea.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Legacy  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is an interesting story. When a young man is about to set off for a year-long stay on the Outer Edges of the Empire, his father gives him an unusual gift- a large book. When the young man reaches his destination, he finds out that the book is more important than he could imagine, as it contains information on how to survive.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting story. A woman buys an old book at a second-hand store and is surprised to find that it's addressed to her alter-ego. Then she finds an even bigger surprise when a man appears from it, claiming to be her long lost soul-mate. Makes me wonder what will happen.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Take it all  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Well, this is an interesting story. A young teenage girl receives the hardest news one could get at her age- she's pregnant. Now she is seeing things in something of a new light- the boyfriend being a jerk, girlfriend wasn't really a friend, and her mother- no words adequately describe her. Now she has to get in contact with some relatives she hasn't seen in some time.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
You might want to do some work with your paragraphs and sentences- it seems you've made partial sentences into paragraphs.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Oh this is funny. I can just sympathize with your pain, as I enjoy a nice long hot showers- until the water decides to turn ice cold for some reason. Of course, I don't think I've mistaken doggy soap for my shampoo/conditioner/body wash, but still- OW!

Characters
I hope I never get stuck in that situation.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Well, this is an interesting contest. Create a horror story based on the prompts, which include sub-genera and style, and you could win a nice pile of Gift Points. Also, other prizes might be given out, such as Merit Badges and Awardicons, depending on how the judges feel.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Best of luck with the contest.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well, this is an interesting contest. Create a poem using the day's prompt and you could win a nice prize. Wait until the end of the week and you could win a Great prize. Sound like a lot of fun, with new or old poems being used, providing they follow the prompt and haven't been previously entered.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Best of luck with your contest.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well, this is a nice looking raffle. Buy a ticket for a friend, a reviewer, or yourself, and there is a chance that you could win a share of the pot. Of course, the main thing is the fact that you will be able to help out some groups that are dedicated to helping people.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Best of luck with the raffle.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Life is full of hardship. Sometimes one forgets about the finer things in it. One must deal with problems everyday. The trick is to find the good in the days, but that's not always easy. However, being with friends and family can help one deal with the situation.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar. However, you might want some space between paragraphs.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is something to think about. Life cannot exist without death. Everything that is born/grows eventually dies. It always happens, and it cannot stop. The trick is to look at the good things in life, as long as one has it. It puts things in perspective.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar. However, you might want to put some space between the paragraphs.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Well, this is an interesting activity. Come sponsor a writer who is in NaNoMo, or join NaNoMo itself, and you'll be helping out a great cause, plus you could get some nice prizes. I don't know if I'll join, as I haven't had the Writing Fever in some time, but I'm sure that there are those who get the fever.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Best of luck raising funds for NaNoMo participants.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting chapter to your story. It starts off with a Mine owner, who also deals with drugs, having dealt with the last of his rivals in the drug trade, and he is making plans to expand his operation. The story then goes back to our pirate captain, as he and a crewman work on fixing up the shuttle that the captain plans to use to scout out the potential new recruits he's heard about.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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for entry "Chapter 1: Old Dogs" 
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Well, this looks like an interesting first chapter for your story. It starts off as a flashback, with a man trying to deal with an attack that an AI had launched against the base he was stationed at. Then it goes to the present, over a hundred years later, where the same man, who has turned pirate, is dealing with the problems aboard his ship, such as a lack of crew and personnel.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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