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Review of Mochoa  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good evening and hello, Darth Owl!

I am not a professional reviewer but will do my best to give you a good review. I have reviewed "Mochoa". This poem is well-written. The ending was said when a man asked another man to marry him. Later on, the other guy told him that he wasn't in love with him. Any break-up is hard and painful.

I am proud of the fact that you dare to share your story with the public. I encourage you to keep writing. I could feel the emotion of pain that you were trying to project. I could feel the tears that were held inside from a proposal that went wrong.

Overall, I could understand the reasons why you would want to run away. It's a feeling of disbelief and shock; the after-effects of having a broken heart. You could continue with the feeling(s) of how you felt (what was going through your head) when you were told that you weren't loved by him.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good evening and Hello, Amy Jo-Spooky Season is Here!

I got all the words solved in this puzzle. I had fun trying to find them; some were easier to find than others. I am learning new words, which is exciting! It's like searching for eggs and then putting them in the Easter Basket.

I like to find words; still, there are words that I am still trying to find, but, then again, I find the words and then give the writer an encouraging sign for them to continue going on with their work.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, Wily, and Good evening!

I was able to get one out of two correct. I noticed that it was the same question. This may be a trick question. I gave a different answer to both. I was not sure how this quiz was going to go, but I was happy to get one out of two correct. I enjoyed taking your quiz; it got me to use my brain.

I want to encourage you to keep doing quizzes; you've done an excellent job. I want to send you many smiles and hugs for your effort to put this quiz together. Let them bless you tonight and continue throughout your future.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I scored 40 on this test. I enjoyed taking the test. I didn't think that I would do so well. Keep on writing quizzes. You've done a great job.
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Review of one piece quiz  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and Good Evening!

I got three corrections out of ten. I got brave and took this test to find out what I knew. I will not give up. I will try again at another time.

I encourage you to keep on doing quizzes.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of SHADOW  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and Good evening, Kayden!

I am not a professional reviewer; however, I can give you feedback on anything that needs to be corrected and how your poem affected me.

My sister, not a twin, was not a happy camper when I came into the world, because of our parents being older. My dad was 56 when I was born and my mother was 39. Out of four siblings, my sister, who is the oldest, was 18 when I came along. My sister is 85 years old and I am 66. Since I was about 11 or 12 years old, I felt like I was the black sheep of the family. I can relate to the feeling of being the shadow because she hasn't been that nice.

Keep believing in yourself. You are a good person. Don't let anyone take you away from that. Give yourself a hug to remind you that you are special.

I encourage you to keep writing. I admire the courage you put forth in writing this poem.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and good evening, George!

I scored a five on your quiz. I wish you the best in deciding a title for your project.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Celebrating WDC  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good evening!

I am excited. I took the "Celebrating Wdc" quiz and got eight out of ten correct. Not too shabby. I like taking these quizzes to help me know how much I learned. Most of the time I need to guess what the answer might be.

Keep up the fantastic job of putting these quizzes together. I appreciate your time in doing this.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi! I solved your puzzle and had a blast doing so. I appreciate the time and effort that you put into preparing this puzzle. Keep up the nice work! I enjoy learning by doing word searches and it keeps my brain active. It works out, especially when you're sixty-six years old like me.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I have a total of 17 reviews so far. I need to know if I am posting it right before I go any further. I may have put one in twice.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Thanksgiving  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good morning!

I completed another puzzle; this one was on Thanksgiving. Thanks again for the word searches.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good morning,

I solved your puzzle on Elemental Discovery. I remembered some of these terms when I took science in Middle School. I enjoy doing word searches. It keeps my mind active and alert. Keep on doing these puzzles. Keep on bringing them.

Anna Marie Carlson
Preferred Author

Keep smiling, you're doing great!


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I am not a professional reviewer but I can offer feedback on what mistakes I may find that could be improved and how your story has affected me.

I edited all of the editing points to possibly make it sound better. I would suggest having a professional editor to do this. I decided to take a try at it. You can change it if you would like or leave it as is.

I enjoyed reading your story. I hope that this will bring a smile to your day today and in the future days ahead.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Unforgotten Souls  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and good evening!

I am not a professional reviewer but I can offer you feedback on anything that I come across that may need to be corrected and how your story has affected me.

Your story was very interesting to read. I did not see any spelling errors. Even when people get to be 106 years old doesn't mean that someone didn't have a love life. It was sad that she lost Cristopher at 23 years old and David died after over eighty years. Christopher and David were happy together. She was asked by her great-great niece if she was poly. She never thought of that at the time. The three of them were all happy being together.

It's sad when someone is being shuffled into a nursing home. After my mom had to go to a nursing home, it was very sad. She had dementia. I remember my mother crying when I had to leave her. I know how that felt.

I encourage you to keep on writing. I can only imagine the sadness that the lady felt when her great-great niece was moving away to live with her fiancée.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Farewell  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, and good evening!

I am not a professional reviewer but I can offer you feedback on whether I noticed any mistakes that need to be corrected and how your story affected me.

This was an exceptional story about a man who played baseball for nineteen years playing for Denver. At an age of free agency and frequent trades, he never left the team and he was proud of the fact. He met his beautiful wife, Jessica there. He noticed that the clubhouse was empty when he walked in, turned on some music, and sat in front of his locker to relax. He noticed a small box on the top shelf; it was a box of Geritol. Dave, the clubhouse manager, laughed behind him. The baseball player said, "The jokes have already started" he said, laughing. It was hilarious and definitely what he needed to ease his nerves.

Joe Hardy, who had been with the club for ten years, said, "Hey, Jake, how are you feeling?" "I'm doing all right, Skip. Been here for a little while, kicking back and taking things in".

"Sports Network is here. They wanted him to ask Jake if he would like to be available for an interview before the game. Are you up for it? 'Not before the game. Tell them I'll give them as much time as they want after the game. They've been great with us. They'll understand."

The crowd got on their feet. He heard 46,000 people in unison saying, "Thank You, Jake. Thank You, Jake'.

At the end of the story, Jake plays a good one for his final game. This was a great way to say farewell to the game.

I encourage you to keep on writing. I'm confident that others will enjoy reading this too.

Have a great day and I hope that this brought you a smile.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, and good evening!

I am not a professional reviewer but I can offer feedback on how your story has affected me and point out any corrections that need to be made.

I enjoyed reading your story "Probable Circumstances Surrounding the Disappearance of the Vanishing Man". I saw no spelling errors in your story. I had some laughs when I read it and was embarrassed for Bob when he was doing an impromptu striptease dance.

At the beginning of your story, it tells of a seven-year-old boxer named Rosco, as he was sniffing about, he noticed a pair of pants with a brown belt. A man's collared shirt was noticed further off in the wood line. (I found that this was two words rather than one word).

Chapter Two tells that Bob Thompson was invited to a "Dress Backwards Party". He pulled a prank by wearing his clothes the right way around. The attendees were to dance the night away. Bob was beaming with pride about his prank.

Your story was well-written and very detailed. I encourage you to keep on with your writing. It was interesting to read.

I hope that you will be filled with smiles today and on into the future days ahead.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and Good Evening!

I am not a professional reviewer but I can offer feedback on how your story affected me and help point out any mistakes that might be there.

I thought that travelling was spelled with one l, but I looked it up and found that either way is correct. Spelling it with a double l is the way the British do it. Look it over then you decide which way you would like to do it.

It was nice of you to share some helpful tips while traveling; this was good to know.

I encourage you to write. I'm sure that these tips will be useful for those who are out traveling.

Have a smile today and in the future days ahead.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of The Book  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello and Good afternoon!

I am not a professional reviewer but I can offer you feedback on any mistakes I may find for you to look over and how your story affected me>

I reviewed "The Thief". I enjoyed reading this story; it was well-written and I found no spelling errors. This is remarkable.

For this story, you asked whether he would retrieve the wealth or fail. My answer to this question is that he will. When the soldiers gave him another horse, this was a chance to go back at another time to retrieve it.

I encourage you to keep on with your writing. The story was interesting. Edward could get away, even when the man threatened to hang him if he didn't get his coins back.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and good morning!

I am not a professional reviewer but I can offer you feedback and what I thought after reading your piece.

You left an email address here. Is this a book? I will have to read it sometime. What I can gather here is that this piece is about survival and conquering. I love to read books about someone overcoming obstacles that they've been through.

Keep writing and thanks for sharing.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Might I?  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and Good evening!

I am not a professional reviewer but I can offer feedback to you on any mistakes I see that may need correcting and how your poem made me feel.

Your poem "Might I?" was very well written. I could feel an image as I was reading it; it was very detailed and descriptive; I could feel the emotion behind it.

I did not see any spelling errors in your writing.

I am hoping that many smiles will come your way today and on into the future.

I encourage you to keep writing.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello and Good evening!

I am not a professional reviewer but I can offer feedback on what I feel needs correcting and how your poem made me feel.

Your poem was very descriptive. It was relatable to my experiences in life. The feeling of not being accepted by others because someone is different is terrible. I'm happy that you've come out of your shell. I am proud of the fact that you were able to share this with someone else.

Your poem was interesting to read. I encourage you to keep writing. Perhaps one day you can put your writings into a book.

I didn't see any spelling errors in your poem.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Echoes  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and Good Evening!

I am not a professional reviewer but I can offer my feedback on what may be a mistake and how your story has affected me.

This was a short poem; The words were strong: I felt as though you were talking to me. It looked like you gave a lot of thought to this poem when you wrote it.

I enjoyed reading this short but powerful poem. I encourage you to keep writing. I think that your poem was interesting enough to write more about.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Theirs  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and Good afternoon!

I am not a professional reviewer but can offer my feedback on mistakes that I may find and how your poem affected me.

You wrote a beautiful poem. I did not find any A's in it. It was well written. I encourage you to keep writing: I'm positive that others will find it interesting too.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of The Sunglasses  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and Good afternoon!

I am not a professional reviewer but I can offer my input on how your story affected me and offer any corrections that the story may need in the best way I can.

I saw places where a semi-colon or a colon could be used but not exactly sure where to put them.

I enjoyed reading your story "The Sunglasses". It goes to show that the reason the Wild Hair Lady wore sunglasses was the fact that she had no eyes because they never developed.

It only takes a moment for someone to look down before something happens; in this case, it was because of an accident: The driver looked down at a text message from his girlfriend; It only takes a split second for something bad to happen.

I encourage you to keep writing. I look forward to what happens next. Was the Wild Hair Lady dead or did she survive?


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello and Good evening!

I am not a professional reviewer, but I can give you my input on how the story affected me and point out any corrections that need to be made.

I was touched by the romance between Oliver and Isabella. Oliver was captivated by Isabella's radiant smile. Isabella was charmed by the gentle kindness in Oliver's eyes. Oliver began the conversation with her by saying "Your flowers are the most beautiful I've ever seen. Isabella blushed, her cheeks turning the same shade as the roses she tended. "Thank you," she replied, her heart fluttering. I've heard about your delicious tomatoes. Would you like to trade some for a bouquet of my flowers?

And so, a simple barter sparked a connection between them. Over the weeks that followed, Oliver and Isabella's friendship blossomed. They spent hours talking by the river, sharing stories of their lives, dreams, and aspirations.

Oliver learned about Isabella's love for art and her dream of creating a garden that would be a work of living art.

Isabella discovered Oliver's passion for cooking and his desire to open a small restaurant someday.

Their love grew like the most beautiful of flowers, slowly and steadily. Each day they found new reasons to smile in each other's company. Their hearts became entwined, just like the vines that adorned Isabell's garden.

One crisp autumn evening, as the leaves turned to shades of amber and gold, Oliver gathered the courage to ask Isabella a question that had been weighing on his heart. "Isabella," he began, his voice steady, "I've come to cherish our time together, and I can't imagine my life without you. Will you be the sun to my garden, the melody to my song, and the love of my life?

Tears of joy welled up in Isabella's eyes as she nodded, her heart overflowing with love. "Yes, Oliver, a thousand times yes".

Underneath the starlit sky, surrounded by the beauty of nature, they sealed their love with a kiss, and their journey together began. They worked side by side, nurturing both their dreams and their love, creating a life filled with the simple joys of tending to their farm and creating a garden of love that would forever bloom in their hearts.

And, so, in that quaint little town, Oliver and Isabella's love story became a testament to the enduring power of love, nurtured as tenderly as the flowers in Isabella's garden, and as timeless as the river that flowed through their lives.

I didn't see any spelling errors. You have a beautiful love story between Oliver and Isabella.

I encourage you to keep writing. You've done a great job! Keep on writing. I'm positive that others will be touched by your story as well.


Anna Marie Carlson
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