Very noicely done. I learned something from you. I never knew that Major Reno was reinterned in 1965. And with full military honors. I am glad that was done. He deserved it. Whether you like or dislike Custer, nobody can say he was not a fine military man. On this occasion he just made a bad decession and it cost him big time. Well written. Keep on writing! Jeff
Sounds like you experienced someone taking their own life. This world is a cruel place and no one is immune from it. Too bad people can not just accept you as you are. no one is perfect, but we are as perfect as we can be. well done. keep on writing! explore your talent. Jeff
Very nicely done. You gave the reader an over all view of the history of light houses and you kept the wording simple and easily understood. Maybe you should have talked about modern light houses and named some of those. Give the reader the different types and why we still need them today. I liked this piece. Keep on writing! Jeff
Each of your offerings on here I come across shows a different aspect to your talent and your way of thinking. The idea for this woke you from a sound sleep? That must have been some dream you were having. When I was finished reading this I got the impression, the main character whos point of vieew this was written was trying to decide which path to follow darkness or sunlight? Keep on writing! Jeff
Keaton, once again in thie piece yoou have showing that you are talented. and someone that must be watched in the future to see wht else you can deliver into the hands of your waiting fans. Your characters asked themselves deeply, Is this what I am? Where do you get your insperations from? Keep on writing! Jeff
Intereasting point of view from the assassin. I like how you chosen to tell the story this way. It gives it a different aspect not normally taken in a story. You have talent and I hope you keep on writing and exploring your depth. Many of us who have children and grandchildren often wonder how far would we go to protect them? That question only the individual can answer. Keep on writing! Jeff
Straight forward opion in your writing. I know you did not meant to upset anyone with this piece. I think you were just trying to say to the world; Ok, I know you are gay and that is your choice. Let's stop ragging on this and get on with more worthy problems with our planet. well done. Keep on writing! Jeff
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