Well written. I had to reread through this twice to really enjoy it. There is a lot of truth in what you wrote here. Thinking the slowness of the mind of Southerners. The man from the North found out fast he was way out of his league down in Alabama. I liked this and I think you do have talent. Keep on writing! Jeff
Good job. He did try to warn him off didn't he? I enjoyed your piece here. Ever think about expanding it? I would love to read the rurther adventures of AppleJack. Jeff
You hit on some of the biggies in your piece here. It was nicely written. I grew up as well watching those Saturday morning tv shows. I still find them all or most of them on cable and the internet as well. You tube, Westerns on the web and western movie fest are three of my online favorites. Have you checked them out? If not I would recommend them. Keep on writing! Jeff
Very nicely done Jessica. I know you said this was only an idea, maybe. After reading this, you need to finish this story. I am waiting to read the finished product. You have talent. Keep on writing! Jeff
Very funny. I laughed while reading this. As did my wife when I read it to her. Can you imagine what you would have done? If you were in that cowboys place and giving the choice. I would have done exactly what he did. Follow the turtles tracks. I hope to see more of your work. You have talent. Keep on writing! Jeff
oh where to begin? I like the cowboy tv shows , movies and books and you are right in what you said. You never do see any of that. Does that make you like the show or movie, or book any less? Not me. I just enjoy the hell out of them. Think about how many people today you could say follow them cowboy ways. It was pure entertainment to enjoy. You did a good job though writing. Keep on writing! Jeff
I get the feeling that this story is the beginning of a much larger body of work. Do you read Nora Roberts? I believe that is her name. Well, anyways, the author of the book The Horse Whisperer. Your piece here reminds me of that type. I can picture a Romantic Western movie of the week on Lifetime network. It is good and I liked it. Keep on writing! Jeff
Interesting. I happen to like to show Gunsmoke and I can plainly see Festus stepping out to stop the pelicans and telling them to stop right thar. Nicely done. Keep on writing! Jeff
This piece reminds me of an old comedy country song. I could easily see any number of singers singing this on the stage of the Grand Ole Opery. Mainly it is a Jim Stafford type of song. I can picture it now. Jim straight faced strumming a guitar, but wearing a goofy overly large cowboy hat as he sings. He'd make it a number one hit for sure. I Liked it. But then I have a warped sense of humor. Good Job. Keep on writing! Jeff
Other than a few punctuation mistakes. You did a wonderful job Angus. I liked the idea behind the story and it kept me wanting to read on. Explore your talent. Keep on writing! Jeff
Nicely done Sara. You have talent. You captured the attitude and feelings of an sidewinder. Showing that no matter how beautiful snakes maybe to see. They are still wild and need to be watched out for no matter what. I wonder how you could expand this and make it longer. You have weaved a short story. Is it over with? Keep on writing! Jeff
I loved this story. Combining the Western and Science Fiction you did very well. I think you could write an entire series using this character. Keep on writing! Jeff
Well done James. No one ever said a Western had to be longer than this. A good story. Would you consider making it longer? Liked what I read. Keep up the good job. You have talent. Keep on writng? Jeff
I grew up watching and reading and loving WESTERNS! All the shows yoou talked about I watched then and still do today. Hardly miss them. Ever want to chat Westerns drop a howdy. Take care and have a great day. SADDLE UP! Jeff
Very, very good. It is a wonderful story. I enjoyed it immensely. keep up the good work. I want to see much more from you. As I am sure others here want as well. Keep on writing! Jeff
Great story . Can not wait to read onward. A family story concerning the Younger's. I have read a bit about them. Keep up the good job. You have talent. Keep on writng! Jeff
Good job Michele. Your story kept me interest throughout and with me, a lover a Westerns, that is hard to do. Explore your talent. Keep on writing! Jeff
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