Coral Boucher, nicely done here. This item # 2045155 entitled: Sweet Larceny reminds me of honey hunting with uncles and cousins. Those were good times. I am awarding you fives stars for taking me back to my youth. Keep exploring your talent and Keep On Writing! Jeff
Victoria, a wonderful job about a terrible in United States history. Well written with strong well defined characters and strong storyline. I am awarding you four and a half stars for a good job. Keep On Writing! Jeff
Mihai, interesting item you have here. # 2045201 entitled: Inner Conversations. Well done. We all have had these within ourselves. Most writer's do every single day. Guess that is part of what makes us do what we do. I am awarding you four and a half stars rating. Keep exploring your talent. But, most importantly, Keep On Writing! Jeff
Joe Haydon this item # 2045238 entitled: The Blank Page is an interesting prespective on setting down to write and staring at the blank page in front of you. Nicely done. We all go through that. You get an idea in your mind ,but when you set to write. Nothing comes forth and you wonder what was I going to do? Keep exploring your talent. I am giving you four stars for the effort.Keep On Writing! Jeff
Victoria Burnside nice effort here. Item # 2045396 is a good storyline. I understand the need to trim this down. Here goes. Take out these lines: Why does everyone look the same? Andy's family was very wealthy. The entire Brock Lee description. Other than that I can see of nothing to take out.Keep exploring your talent. I am giving you four stars for this effort. Keep On Writing! Jeff
Gentleman, nicely done this essay, item # 2045406 entitled: City By The Sound shows the reader Seattle at it's basic. It broought back memories to me of having been there. It is a wonderful and beautiful city. I am awarding you four and a half stars for a good job. Keep exploring your talent and Keep On Writing! Jeff
Bug, not a bad effort here. Your item # 2045427 entitled: The Immortals has a great storyline. Your characters are strong.I liked what I read. You have talent that needs to be explored. I do see grammer and punctuation mistakes that will ease with the more you write. These will make your piece more enjoyable to read. But, do not despair. We all need help from time to time.We are here to help one another to become better writers. I am giving you three and a half stars for a good effort. Keep On Writing! Jeff
WEb Witch. Very nicely done bringing the feel of the 1930's Chicago to this item # 1998004 entitled: One Long Day In Chicago. Great storyline and strong well defined characters. You hooked me earlier and brought me along for a fantastic ride. For a wonderful job I am awarding five stars. Keep exploring your talent and Keep On Writing! Jeff
Fantastic story Zombee Luv. This needs to be expanded into a book. Great job on this item # 2029897 entitled: Dragons Vale. It is a well written story with strong well defined characters and storyline. Keep on exploring your talent. I am awarding you five stars for this. Keep On Writing! Jeff
Gabriel nicely done here. This item # 2005567 entitled: The House On The Corneer is a well written story. Full of strong well defined characters. Keep up the good work and I'll keep reading. Keep On Writing! Jeff. Five stars for an excellant job.
well done for such a little piece Catdok. Your item here #2006361 entitled: Who Done It? is a well written strong character driven storyline. Keep exploring your talent and mosdt of all, Keep On Writing! Jeff
Not bad CEvan Thompson your item here # 2014015 entitled: When ALl Else Fails is a well written piece. I looked beyond the punctuation and grammer to the root of the story. You the makings a good novella or novel here. Maybe you should expand and explore this ? For the effort I am giving you three and a half stars. Keep On Writing! Jeff
Well done Ali Stone. Your item here # 2017341 entitled: A Fool Out Of Me. This is a well written thought out piece. With well strong defined characters and storyline. The dialog sounds natural. Written as if actually spoken. Nice job. I am giving you four and a half stars. Keep up the good work and Keep ON Writing! Jeff
Very nicely done GaelicQueen your item here # 1975884 entitled : The Essence Of Time. With strong well defined characters, such as Christo, Tromp and Master Zey and a strong storyline, you took me along on a wonderful ride. Keep exploring your talent. For a job well done I am awarding you five stars. Keep On Writing! Jeff
Beetle, I read this twice to enjoy it. Your item here # 1852318 entitled Dyre:Prologue and Chapter one is a well written and thought out story. With strong well defined characters and storyline. You captured the inner beast in me and carried me along for the ride. I hope to see more of this. Keep exploring your talent. I am awarding you five stars for an excellant job. Keep On Writing! Jeff
Wow Nasreen. This is a very well written piece that needs and should be expanded. Item # 1796027 entitled Room 315 woould be a wonderful book. You took this reader along for a wonderful ,though short ride. Keep exploring your talent and Keep On Writing! Four and a half stars. Jeff
Renetta, your item here #1855954 entitled Seige, Part one and two. It is a well written effort with well defined strong characters and storyline. i hope you plan on expanding this into a novella or full book length piece. For the great job I am awarding you five stars. Keep on Writing! Jeff
DyrHearte writes again, nicely done here this item # 1995300 entitled The Mighty Steed is a charming story. Keep exploring your talent and Keep On Writing! I am awarding you four star rating. Keep up the good work. Jeff
Sunflower in Texas, High Chaparral is one of my favorite Western shows. I am glad you choose it for your item here # 2018287 entitled Manolito. Hope you finish this? I would like to read the finished product. Four and a half star rating for a good job. Keep On Writng! Jeff
Hunters Moon, your item here # 2026155 entitled Cowboy Wise is well written and thought out. It says much in so little a space. I believe you inherited your own cowboy wise. Keep exploring your talent. Five star rated for the great job. Keep On Writing! Jeff
Jeannie, this item # 1907243 entitled Why I Like To Review. Shows of your love for reading. You enthusism shines through. I stumbled on WDC myself in 2011 and have not had any regrets whatsoever. I have found from your writing here things that relate to myself. I have alwways been and always will be an avid reader and writer. Keep up the great job you have done so far. Five stars for an excellant job. Keep On Writing! Jeff
NIcely done Safety Stars. Your item here # 2041453 entitled Tumescent Tenderness: Chapters one and two was well written. This piece keep me wanting to read onward until the end. I do hope yoou continue this. Keep exploring your talent. I am giving you a five star rating. Keep On Writing! Jeff
Wow. Very moving Lain. A great job here, item # 2041091 entitled One Size Fits All: Part One is thought provoking and well written. great job. For that reason I am awarding you a five star rating. Keep exploring your talent, but most of all Keep On Wwriting! Jeff
Not a bad try Sandraaaa19. This item # 2043872 entitled Limerick poem is interesting. Sorry to say I was not able to understand whats being said here. Nothing makes any kind of sense. So, you left me, the reader what was going on? For the effort I give you two stars rating. To make any poem read great. Rhyme. Keep exploring your talent and Keep On Writing! Jeff
Wow. Keaton Foster. What an interesting item. # 2044966 entitled Lessor Hope I Believe. This piece is well written. It makes you stop and think about your own faith and whether you are a true believer or not. You ingaged my mind, which is harder then you would think. But, you did it. Congrats! I am awarding you four stars for this reason. Keep exploring your talent. Keep On Writing! Jeff
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