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Review of Watercolor Dreams  
Review by CapriceRogers
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I really like this. I don't know if you're Christian or atheist but this poem has a Christian feel to it. It made me think of a "dream" I had of goin to heaven and meeting my dead sister. (My counselor calls it a dream. I call it a near death experience. I remember feeling so connected to her, mother nature and God. This is a really good poem. Write On.
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Review of Our Only Kiss  
Review by CapriceRogers
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is really good!! It reminds me of the song Last Kiss by Taylor Swift. It also made me think of my first kiss when I was twelve. He was two years older than me and had short blonde hair and blue eyes. We were walking home from school and I kissed him. It was the best kiss I've ever had! I'm twenty-one now no kiss I've had since then can compare to that one. Thank you for the memory.
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Review by CapriceRogers
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you so much for featuring me in the Rising Stars Gazzette!! I am honored!! :
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Review of Loss of Color  
Review by CapriceRogers
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is really good. It sounds like you're tellin a story of a bad breakup. It's almost like a Taylor Swift song. It reminds me of a breakup I went through when I was eighteen. Do you have anymore poems like this? I think you're a really good writer. Keep it up. Write On!
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Review by CapriceRogers
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem is really good. We all have times when we thought there would be no hope for us. As a teenager, I've been there much more than once. It's good that you wrote this because a lot of people can relate to it. God bless you and keep writing! You're good! :o)
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Review of It is Dark  
Review by CapriceRogers
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi! My name is Caprice Rogers and I will be reviewing your poem It Is Dark! :o)

My review: This is very relatable to me. There are times when I've felt trapped in darkness and despair, as recently as last month! But I got through it, and I know that anyone else who's feeling this way will get through it, too! thank you for writing this! :o)
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Review of Sex on Demand!  
Review by CapriceRogers
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi!! My name is Caprice Rogers, and I will be reviewing your short story. It's really funny!! I for one could never picture Jennifer Aniston as a sex symbol!! She's more of the girl next door. You did a great job on this! God bless you and keep writing!!
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Review by CapriceRogers
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi!! My name is Caprice Rogers, and this is my review for your story. Your granddaughter sounds adorable!! My grandma says that when I wad two I used to cuss people out in the grocery store!! God bless you and keep writing!! I really like this story!!
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Review of Behind Progress  
Review by CapriceRogers
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi! It's Caprice again, reviewing another one of your poems. I really like this poem. Even though it's kind of morbid, it has really good intensity. I think it shows how precious life is. You're a really great writer. Keep up the great work! Write On!
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Review of At two  
Review by CapriceRogers
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Rated: E | (5.0)
hlHi! my name is Caprice Rogers and I will be reviewing At Two. This is really good!! I love it!! It shows how much you really love your children!! When I'm a mom one day, I hope to have as much passion. as you do! God bless. you and your family! Please review one of my stories when you time!
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Review by CapriceRogers
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi! My name is Caprice Rogers, and I will be reviewing your story My Neighbor's Guilty Conscience.

My review: This story is really good! I've been getting into Sci-Fi and romance a lot lately and this really reminds me of Twilight and The Hunger Games. The vipor made me think of Edward (Twilight) and the speed of the action made me think of The Hunger Games! Awesome read! Keep Writing! :o)
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Review by CapriceRogers
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, My name is Caprice Rogers, and I will be reviewing 229 minutes, 44 seconds.

My review: It's a very interesting poem in the way that I'm trying to figure out why it was written. It also reminded me of when I found out my dad was dying last December. I really like it. Keep writing!
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Review by CapriceRogers
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi! My name is Caprice Rogers, and I will be reviewing your poem Bresis's Perfect Man.

What I like: I laughed at the joke in the beginning, but I like the realism. The main character didn't request a fairytale, like most women would!

God bless and keep writing!!!!! :o)
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Review by CapriceRogers
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, Jim! It's Caprice again, reviewing another one of your pieces! This one is something I can relate to! There is a young man that I think about as much as this poem describes! He barely knows I exist though, but as I was reading this, he is the first person that came to my mind!

God bless you and keep writing! :o)
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Review of The crab  
Review by CapriceRogers
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi! My name is Caprice Rogers, and I will be reviewing your poem The Crab.

My review: Very short and cute. As I read it, I was wondering why the crab was hiding in the sand. Is he scared of the sun? Or is he a newborn whose mother has abandoned him?

God bless you and keep writing! :o)
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Review of I Have Seen It  
Review by CapriceRogers
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi! My name is Caprice Rogers, and I will be reviewing your poem I Have Seen It.

My review: Such a touching look into teen pregnancy from a caring prospective, which we usually don't get! Teenage mothers need compassion and understanding, not judgment. Being a teen mom is very hard, especially for young women that are my age (seventeen going on eighteen) because their parents are so quick to give up on them. Almost three years ago, my cousin got pregnant at the age of thirteen, and got sent to live with her mother. She came back a few months later because of dehydration. A couple months ago, she got sent back to her mother again for not going to school. For whatever reason I don't care! She is now sixteen with a two year old, and she needs help trying to get a job and eventually an apartment to get away for her "idiot" mother, and everyone has seemed to give up on her. Let's not continue to give on teenage mothers. No matter what they've done in the past, they need our help and support, not our judgment and glares.
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Review by CapriceRogers
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi! My name is Caprice Rogers, and I will be reviewing your poem Seasons And Separation.

My review: This is a very nice poem. I like the rhyming and the emotion. It seems like, as the year went by, the family gradually crumbrled until they couldn't co-exist anymore. Very deep!

God bless you and keep writing! :o)
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Review of Seasonal Symphony  
Review by CapriceRogers
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi! My name is Caprice Rogers, and I will be reviewing your Seasonal Symphony.

My review: This poem is a very beautiful perspective of nature. The flow is nice and the rhyming is perfect! I can see why you won an award for this!

God bless you and keep writing! :o)
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Review of September  
Review by CapriceRogers
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi! My name is Caprice Rogers, and I will be reviewing your poem September.

My review: This poem is so heartfelt and very relatable for the people that lost family members on 9/11. I'll never understand why bad things happen, bad I think it's great for people to express their sorrow through poetry and writing.

God bless you and keep writing! :o)
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Review by CapriceRogers
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi! My name is Caprice Rogers, and I will be reviewing your poem The Epitaph Of March 16, 2008.

My review: This poem is very deep! I don't know what happened on that day because I was only fourteen, but I liked reading your reflection on it!

God bless you and keep writing! :o)
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Review by CapriceRogers
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi! My name is Caprice Rogers, and I will be reviewing your poem I Had Hoped To See You.

My review: The poem is off to a good start, but I don't think it's finished. I think the character should be looking for her long lost lover, and you should explain why she's looking for him. That's the direction I felt the poem was going.

God bless you and keep writing! You can do it! :o)
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Review of Superstitious  
Review by CapriceRogers
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi! My name is Caprice Rogers, and I will be reviewing your poem Superstitious :o)

My review: The poem reminds me of my own childhood superstitions! I'm pretty sure they'll be around for another generation, though. I don't quite understand the ending, though. Why did you choose to end the poem the way you did?

God bless you and keep writing! :o)
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Review of Poem 1  
Review by CapriceRogers
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi! My name is Caprice Rogers, and I will be reviewing your story Poem 1.

My review: This is really sweet! It's really a story dedicated to someone you love. I hope my future husband will write something like this about me. There are a few grammar and spelling errors, you might want to read it over to find them. It's a really sweet story, though!

God bless you and keep writing! :o)
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Review of LEARN TO LIVE  
Review by CapriceRogers
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, Sherri Gibson! It's Caprice here, reviewing more of your work! This is truly inspiring! I can see why you won an award for it! As teenager of almost eighteen, I know that I will soon be in the adult world, and sometimes the mere thought can be overwhelming! But thanks to this, I will remember to take a breath when things get tough, believe in myself and just make time to be a normal teenager!

God bless you and keep writing.
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Review of Silence  
Review by CapriceRogers
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi! My name is Caprice Rogers, and I will be reviewing your poem Silence.

My review: Your character seems to be haunted by a lot of "skeletons in the closet". I wonder what happened to her that made her feel this way? And why was her beauty mentioned?

God bless you and keep writing! :o)
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