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Review of As It Was To Be  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Ohh so beautiful. It touched my heart deeply. How do you find the words to express feeling in a poem? I can only write in prose. This was lovely, really. It meand to you in one way and it meant to me in another but the words you used and the way you put them altogether... it was so nice to read. Christina Daltro
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Very nice, really. It touched my heart. This was my first exoerience with poetry, this way, from the dark... yet with light! My favorite part:
Is my soul not to sell
To get serenity through Hell?
I write in prose. I can't write like you do, so difficult, as if... I had to think twice as much. You do a great job. Naturally.
Christina Daltro
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Review of The Tree Sap  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This was really a different and enchanting experience to have... reading The Tree Sap. I usually like to read prose and short stories but suddenly I came your poem. I enjoyed it and felt that I was taken inside it. Where will iy lead me to? Nice work and usage of words. Christina Daltro
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Review of Mankind  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Where do you find the words? How do you make this up so... eloquently? I liked it. Simple but says it all. I agree with your ideas and you said it all. Nice work. My favorite:

The only diff'rence that exists
Is that which men create.

Christina Daltro
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Wow! That was good and different. I liked the way you used your words and grabbed my attention. I like dark, supernatural stories and your The Tempter in the Night --- it was the first poem that I've read in this genre. Nice, creative work. Christina Daltro
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Review of Seeds  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This was beautiful. Really. In my country, Brazil, there are many, many battered and abused women suffering daily torments and not being able to a anything about it --- there aren't even shelters to run to and if you go to the Delegacia da Mulher (Women's Police Headquarters) there are policemen there to help you - not policewomen. It's a sad reality and still - even in our modern times - it's a world that belongs mostly to men (especially in South America and Brazil). Nice work. Christina Daltro
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Review of Eyes  
Rated: E | (4.5)
It is a sad poem yet it depicts a sadness that is within you and me and people everywhere. I was touched by it. I like the way you use your imagination and words. My favorite part: "They look at me through closed eyes Shallow pools of deep despair". Nice. Christina Daltro
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Rated: E | (5.0)
What a different, beautiful and deep story. You grabbed my attention since the very beginning. I like the way you use words --- especially the adverbs, as Brazilians do - we like describing colors and images and we speak with deep emotion. As you did. I could practically see Denise walking along the long lane to the road. I felt what she felt. Nice work. I enjoyed it. Christina Daltro
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Review of A Bunch Of Things  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I thought this was different and interesting; a wonderful way of using words. I could never do this. I can only write stories not write poems and I wish I could. I enjoyed the structure and flow of ideas. Nice work. Christina Daltro
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It was really scary and I couldn't stop reading your story. You have a really different way of writing words and ideas. Your style is direct and immediate, so different from mine. I liked it but I was a bit confused in the end. Maybe it's my Portuguese vs English "twisted" mind that makes it difficult for me to understand English to its fullest.
Christina Daltro
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Review of The Journey  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This was beautiful. I couldn't stop reading. I felt the warmth of the explosion. I like your writing. I felt sorry for Samantha though, I am quite like her; I like to be my own self and sometimes disagree with others, just because... no reason. Nice journey.
Christina
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Review of Absolute Horror  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Dear Pennywise,
I am a real newbie to WDC and this bitem format... and so I cannot figure out HOW to send you my short story The Medium (#1702140) . I want to participate in your contest so much! Forgive me. How can I send it to you or post it? I'm frustated!
Christina Daltro
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Review of I Wonder  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Wonderful!
I can't write poems. You can. And so well.
Maybe it's my Brazilian upbringing, I can't write in verses. My "twisted" Portuguese vs English mind.
Really nice, Suu.
Do you know which is my favorite word in English? It's: Atonement.
I like it but I just can't really figure it out. Maybe that's why I like it.
I will more of your poems!
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Review of I AM  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi. I came to visit you and read your work too. You are good. Very good.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi! I was here just to say hello! I edited The Umbral. Loved your suggestions. Fique em Paz. Christina
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