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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Dear Arakun,
WONDERFUL. Part 2 is amazing and I liked it a lot. I liked the way you put the ghost's thoughts in bold type and how you made it mysterious and eerie---what a strange monster, too. Really well written, interesting and addicting. I will continue reading it bit by bit.
I wonder what will Nathan say. Will they go to Savannah, Georgia? I was often told that Savannah is a mysterious city and that if you are a medium you can see spirits walking among the living in the streets...
See you in part 3!
Always,
Christina
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Dear ARAKUN,
I read your The Witch's Diary, Part I
A strange book is found in an abandoned house.
I was speechless. No words can describe my feelings while reading Part 1. I cannot wait to... s l o w l y read the next parts... you got me all curious. I loved the way you described the house, the lght, the girl, the emotions, the mystery... Ah you write so well. I learnt a lot, you know and saw how poorly I write.
Congratulations.
I will continue reading about Melissa and... Rebecca.
Always,
CHRISTINA
Doubt 1:
In the sentence below did you mean:
in to, or
into?
“I’m very sorry for walking in to your house,
Correction:
Please correct the quote, there is an empty space:
...about the house. " A guy named Roger Garrett built it back in the fifties,"
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Review of What Matters  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Thomas Seeker,
Please accept my review of your poem. What Matters
Things that matter in Life

Your poem brought tears to my eyes. I was deeply touched as
it is romantic, heart ful yet full of sorrow and... sad. Still I feel that
somehow, know that you are loved by someone... and this warms
your heart and soul. I too, feel the same way, so I immensely liked
your beautiful poem.

Merry Xmas, Rick.
Christina
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Review of The Small Gift  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Itchy Water, *Santahat*

Please accept my review of your poem: The Small Gift
Sedoka poem. Great things come in small packages... or do they?

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.*Gingerbread*

Likes: *Candycaneg* Your Sedoka poem is PERFECT. Really well done. I admired your talent---it's a tough work! Wow! Besides, it's also meaningful and nice!

Dislikes: *Candycaner* Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: *Gingerbread* Nothing is to be corrected.
Write on!

Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!*XMasTree*

Christina Daltro

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Review of Car crash  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear dogpack: DWG & NaNo 70K 2011, *Santahat*

Please accept my review of your poem: Car crash
Pushing me to try write just to see what happens. poem a day contest. Not qualification?

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.*Gingerbread*

Likes: *Candycaneg* Really, really well done! You followed the rules and did well. Did you win??? Great work!

Dislikes: *Candycaner* Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: *Gingerbread* Nothing is to be corrected.

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!*XMasTree*

Christina Daltro

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Review of Bite me  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Amethyst Black, *Santahat*

Please accept my review of your poem: Bite me
25 word or less Hint Fiction

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.*Gingerbread*

Likes: *Candycaneg* I laughed, I enjoyed, I laughed again and enjoyed reading it again and again!!! Really well done! Hah hah! A SUPER poem for WDC members to enjoy! Creative, different and especially cute!

Dislikes: *Candycaner* Nothing disliked me!

Please correct/notice: *Gingerbread* Nothing is to be corrected! It's PERFECT!!!

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!*XMasTree*

Christina Daltro

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Review of A Job I So Need  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Tim Chiu , *Santahat*

Please accept my review of your poem: A Job I So Need
"Dear God, one’s belief in oneself is a necessity..." - a poem about reorganization.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.*Gingerbread*

Likes: *Candycaneg* I enjoyed your poem a great deal. Really well done, honest, sincere and powerful, you know why? Because you are sincerely "claiming" your job the the universe---it is yours. Being positive is the best thing in our lives! I really liked A job I So Need.

Dislikes: *Candycaner* Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: *Gingerbread* NOthing is to be corrected.

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!*XMasTree*

Christina Daltro

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Review of A Rough Day  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Jesusgirl, *Santahat*
Please accept my review of your poem: A Rough Day
A day which resulted in my child beign late for her examinations

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.*Gingerbread*

Likes: *Candycaneg* A DELIGHT TO READ! Lovely!

Dislikes: *Candycaner* Nothing disliked me, on the contrary!

Please correct/notice: *Gingerbread* Please correct the word beign to being, in the sub-title.

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!*XMasTree*

Christina Daltro

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Review of Would you?  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear Katawna Marea Poole, *Santahat*

Please accept my review of your poem: Would you?
A poem of a girl with a deep crush toward a guy.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.*Gingerbread*

Likes: *Candycaneg* Really creative, and... sweet. I really liked your poem!

Dislikes: *Candycaner* Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: *Gingerbread* Nothing is to be changed but please give a space between the last line and the word Copyright. Thanks.

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!*XMasTree*

Christina Daltro

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Mira Longer,

Please accept my review of your novel/prologue: *Santahat* Boss Death Prolouge
Miku Hatsune, Vocaloid, Boss, Death

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.*Gingerbread*

Likes: *Candycaneg* Really nice start! Whenever you write more, let me know. I'd like to read and review. I like this type of stories. Well done.

Dislikes: *Gingerbread* Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: *Candycaner* Nothing is to be changed.

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!*XMasTree*

Christina Daltro

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Review of November Rain  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Dear Deadlegend,

Please accept my review of your poem: *Santahat* November Rain
This is my first ever peice of poetry and although a little dark in nature.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.*Gingerbread*

Likes: *Candycaneg* I must tell you that I was taken aback by the ending... but I really liked it! I like reading things a little dark in nature or maybe dark in nature. Your poem was creative and really well done.

Dislikes: *Gingerbread* Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: *Candycaner* Nothing is to be changed.

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!*XMasTree*

Christina Daltro

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Duke of Concora,

Please accept my review of your poem: *Santahat* One Perfect Moment
Another experimental englyn poem; based on one perfect moment in life.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.*Gingerbread*

Likes: *Candycaneg* Delightful poem. Well done! I really enjoyed reading it, creative and sweet. My favorite part:

What is this voice? This soothing tone-
Is it the wind blowing?
The summer sun glowing?

Dislikes: *Gingerbread* Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: *Candycaner* Nothing is to be corrected.

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC! *XMasTree*

Christina Daltro

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Review of Played  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Ezequiel G,

Please accept my review of your poem: *Santahat* Played
It is a poem anonymously dedicated to the girl I once loved.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.*Gingerbread*

Likes: *Candycaneg* I was caught off guard, Ezequiel G, by the deepness of your words, and I was amazed by your poem --- lovely, different and creative.

Dislikes: *Gingerbread* Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: *Candycaner* Nothing is to be changed.

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC! *XMasTree*

Christina Daltro

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Review of Slipping  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Rylek Blayz,

Please accept my review of your poem: Slipping
Slipping slowly into madness...for what reason?? *Santahat*

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing. *Gingerbread*

Likes: *Candycaneg* Your poem is interesting, different and creative. Short but right on the spot. Really nice. Well done!

Dislikes: *Gingerbread* Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: *Candycaner* Please give a space between the last sentence and the word Copyright.

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC! *XMasTree*

Christina Daltro

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Review of Dreams  
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Dear P.W. Mitchell,

Please accept my review of your short story: Dreams
I'm 13 and this is my first story so please give feedback so I can improve! *Santahat*

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing. *Gingerbread*

Likes: *Candycaneg* I liked the first sector of your short story; I just wanted to read some more. Please let me know about updates or whenever you write more about Dreams.

Dislikes: *Gingerbread* Maybe too short but it is a nice beginning.

Please correct/notice: *Candycaner* Please write Dreams (title) above your name; correct hot chocolate and give a space in the very end, before Copyright; delete this: javascript:updateLine('BigSmile',%20'1') and write this: *Delight*

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC! *XMasTree*

Christina Daltro

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Review of Game Over  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear Marina, my Brazilian friend!

Please accept my review of your short story: Game Over
Through a pair of eyes, real memories spill out.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: Wow! Poderosamente intrigante! I felt every word and understood every memory, vision and places. It made me travel, taste, smell, remember and feel things I had... forgotten. Lovely, Marina. I loved the ending.

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me, on the contrary.

Please correct/notice:
Place a comma before two "and" words in your story;
Place the word counts in the end.

My favorite part: "I am forced to ask the man I gave my heart and my best to: ‘”You look so familiar. Have we met before?”

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

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Review of A true love story  
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Dear Jesusgirl,

Please accept my review of your short story: A true love story
This is a true story of what happenned to me recently (2011)

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: Your story touched my heart deeply. Incredible things we do in the name of love, but you overcame it and are wise and strong. You know how to love.
My favorite parts:
"We began to meet in private. Just a little glance, a little touch and a smile but love could not hide for long."
And,
" I told him that I would pray for him but he must remember that to every ying there is a yang, work there is pay and to every action there is a reaction."

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: NOthing is to be changed but I suggest that you place the word counts in the end of your lovely story.

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice! I'm in!
Christina Daltro
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear SUMMER WIND, dear Sandy,

Please accept my review of your poem: The Circus Church of Today
Step Right Up Into The Circus Church Of Today! poem about entertainment churches

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: Wow! Here you come with another great poem (yet I still love your My Missing Keys best)! You managed to said it Oh so well and I laughed and enjoyed it a lot. Good work, SUMMER!

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me. It's lovely.

Please correct/notice: It's perfect, and well written; has rhythm and truth in each sentence. No wonder you won FIRST PRIZE!

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
My Dear and Sweet Friend SUMMER WIND,

Please accept my review of your poem: My Missing Keys
This Poem is a Humorous Event At The Movies Contest Entry

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: LOVELY! I laughed and enjoyed your poem very much; creative and delightful.

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice:
Please capitalize the letter c for the words: crawled and couldn't;
I would place a comma after each line (but keep the period in the last stanza).

My favorite part:
" I searched all the rows and I started to panic,
couldn't find my keys and got quite frantic."
Did this happen to you or was it just your creative imagination? Well done, SUMMER!

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

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Review of Shearwater  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Andy,

Please accept my review of your poem:A Love
Beethoven's movements do just as her's do

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: Nice, sweet little poem. Sounded like music.

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be changed.

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

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Review of Lethargic  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Shawn Elias,

Please accept my review of your poem: Lethargic
First thing i've written in far too long...

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: Your poem expresses your innermost feelings and wishes; I understood the poem and its meaning. It touched me deeply. Well done. I especially liked this part:
"Am I still here or buried inside?" >>> Wow!

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be corrected.

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

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Review of The Red Sky  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Dear Jesse Avid,

Please accept my review of your short story: The Red Sky
This story puts you before, during, and at the end of a battle in civil war.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: I really, really liked your story, Jesse. In times of war your words cry out. Well done. My favorite part:
The blood of the soldiers who died are pouring from heaven. >>> Well done, here!
You were honest, sincere and expressed the true meaning of no meaning at all... for red skies.

Dislikes: You could have written more...

Please correct/notice:
Please correct all the i for I, for example: "Even now, i don't know if i could fight my family..."

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

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Review of My Friend Melanie  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Assortedtea,

Please accept my review of your poem: My Friend Melanie
I wrote this poem to a good friend, that later became a great romance.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: Nice, sweet poem about wonders and hopes. I liked it. You did well.

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be corrected.

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

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Review of Unspoken words  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Dear Paige Bann,

Please accept my review of your poem: Unspoken words
The moments the words you want to say and the words you can't become one and suffocate.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL! I read it again and again and found more beauty and passion in your words and meaning. Lovely! You caught me off guard---maybe this will be my favorite poem reviewed today!

My favorite part:
Meanings that truly mean nothing.

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be corrected.

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

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