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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Dear Tim Chiu ,

Please accept my review of your poem: This World of Swarming Bees
"...one does not dare..challenge [the] insects...their virulent stinger protects" - a poem

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: Beautiful! I loved your poem so very much! It is full of nature, flowers, bees, honey, more bees... I could actually see and feel and hear the bees. Awesome!

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: It was perfect, words, syllables, lines and stanzas.

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!


Christina Daltro

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Review of Nature Pt.2  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Carlton D. Jones,

Please accept my review of your poem: Nature Pt.2 - poem by carlton jones

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: I enjoyed reading your nice poem very much. You wrote about nature and seas, cycles and tides. I liked the choices of words and rhythm. Well done.

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: It was well done.

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!

Christina Daltro

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Dan Sturn,
Your poem Another Butterfly Effect - A nature poem about terrorism and our culture of fear. From Bottle in the River... was a delightful read for me! I enjoyed each word and each stanza and I was sorry it ended so quickly. I wish I had your powerful mind for words and rhymes so that I could write a poem. I can only write stories. I was impressed with your colorful words, they had movement and life! Write on!
Christina Daltro
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Review of Calling Me Home  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear qaz4,
Your poem Calling Me Home - As darkness falls, I find where I belong... is a little work of art full of strength and meaning. I especially liked the last stanza:
" As the world closes it eyes,
A lone voice calls from the shadows,
Calling me home."
Wow... this was beautiful.
Christina Daltro
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Dear Kåre Enga in Montana,
I liked your different and interesting poem about nature very, very much. I had never read one like this one before. Speak soft my name - Can Earth be given a voice? Not a children's poem. Your poem is an insightful, descriptive, poetical and rich work full of meaning and whispers. I liked it a lot.
Write on!
Christina Daltro
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Intuey,
I loved your poem The Geese and the Willow
Nature's beauty is everywhere you look. The geese find their spot under the willow.
While reading it I could feel the breeze and hear the sounds and see the willow's branches touching the pond's surface. Your poem was full of tenderness and I relaxed, I felt much better after reading it. Lovely.
I loved the last stanza of your nice Lilibonelle poem.
Write on!
Christina Daltro
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Review of Dragon adoring  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear SeverinR,

What a delightful story!
Dragon adoring - Young elf looks closely at her beloved dragonets body as she sleeps after a hectic day is cute, full of love and colors and I wanted more. You're going to write more, aren't you? I want more, I want the novel written. You asked these questions:
Dragon adoring: This is a relaxing scene after several hectic events that kept her moving quickly. The scene is just a part of a much bigger novel. I am seeking review on the description of the hatchling dragon, is it too much? is it too boring? not descriptive enough?"
No... it was too little. I wanted to read more about Eildetha.
Not at all boring. It was sweet and relaxing.
It was descriptive but not enough... as I wanted more... descriptions. I also wanted and want to know why was Melima careful not to touch - again - the end of the dragon's snout as she had made that mistake before. What happened?
Wow... lovely story.
Write on!
Christina Daltro
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Review of Lost Souls  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Bookfan,

Again, I enjoyed reading another short story of yours: Lost Souls - Short Story I wrote in highschool. May not be the original. Inpsired by a real place.

I was really curious to know what would happen to Steve in his new job but never expected the ending. It was a good ending and it surprised me. Great story, Bookfan. If you read my review on your short story Grave Robber, again, I must ask you to make this one a bit longer too - you see, I wanted to read more of your story. I needed to "see" their faces, "feel" their thoughts. Maybe I wanted to be more scared than I already was. You write so well so I'm sure you'll certainly figure this out. Well done, great job.
Could you see if these corrections are needed?
"Steve moved into town to get away from a tragic life he had in Oregon and wanted to start a-knew." Shouldn't it be start anew?
"Finally a store clerk told him where he can be found and gave him the address." Shouldn't it be... could be found?
" He asked the family where he can find Jack the person who lived here." Shouldn't it be... he could find Jack?

I am happy you asked me to read your stories! I had a great time and enjoyed them a lot! Write on!
Christina Daltro
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Review of Grave Robber  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Dear Bookfan,

I really enjoyed your short story: Grave Robber - A grave robber get more then what he was bargaining for.
Your style is clear, easy to follow, you captivate the reader and made me curious until the end. Yet, I wanted more - descriptions, details, characters thoughts, noises, fears and much more. I wanted... more, get it? More. Once a WDC author told me something that I never forgot: "Show... don't tell." I hope my suggestion helps you - it sure helped me and probably this sentence made me earn m 1st. place in the Twisted Tales Contest this month.
Could you make your great story - longer? I must tell you - I liked your story - this is why I am asking you to do this if you think you want to, OK? Also, I think you must correct the following things:
"A grave robber get more then what he was bargaining for." Shouldn't it be: ...robber gets more?
"He ran from her as fast as he can." Shouldn't it be: ... as far as he could?
"Something got around he throat." Shouldn't it be: ... the throat or his throat?
By making these corrections and adding more visual images and maybe his deeper, darker thoughts (while digging the graves) would make your story even better than it already is!
Congratulations on your story!

Christina Daltro
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Albert Alaniz,

Please accept my review for your Haiku on a sunnyday
A simple haiku.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: I am almost always puzzled by haikus but thisone, yours today, made me understand them better and feel and see the meaning and images in your words. I loved it! How do you do it? It's amazing!

Dislikes: There was nothing I disliked.

Please correct/notice: There was nothing to be corrected.

I am sending this review because I really, really liked your haiku.

Christina
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Review of Two Mothers  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Pat,

Please accept my review for your poem Two Mothers
A poem about 2 mothers--a "first mom" and an adoptive mom

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: Oh Pat, this was so beautiful, so touching. I loved reading it. You really know how to express deep feelings put into words. Amazing!

My favorite part:
"Both gave all they had to give,
creating a beautiful tapestry.
The colorful threads from two
artisans, were woven tenuously.

Dislikes: There was nothing I disliked.

Please correct/notice: There was nothing to be corrected.

I am sending this review because I really, really liked your poem. You rock!

Christina
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Review of Night Song  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My dear dear Eyestar!

Please accept my review for your poem Night Song
The veil thins! a picture Prompt in Night,Night Contest

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: I searched and I searched. I needed to read something from you. This poem touched my heart. I read many of your pieces but this one - Ohh sooo lovely! I felt taken by forests and fairies and elfs and nymphs --- as if I was there! You write so well.

My favorite part:

"Flickering lights from fairy fires show
Wings in the air and water nymphs at play"

Dislikes: There was nothing I disliked.

Please correct/notice: There was nothing to be corrected.

I am sending this review because I really, really liked your sweet poem. You rock!

Christina
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Review of Silent Seduction  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear WW-Batting 500!,

Please accept my review for your poem: Silent Seduction.
What I sawin a moment...

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: I fell in love with your poem! It is both romantic and sensual. It is full of love and want. It reflected a feeling a have for my loved one which I could not explain in words and you did it. Amazing! Beautiful.

My favorite part: (this was so nice!)

"Silently savoring this special moment with the man I love.
My lips purse shamelessly; all is well in my little world."

Dislikes: There was nothing I disliked.

Please correct/notice: There was nothing to be corrected.

I am sending this review because I really liked your poem. Write on!

Christina
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Dear Berley,

Please accept my review for your poem: They were Submerged.
They leaned against each other as the world began to swirl, nauseatingly so.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: Wow, I must say that your poem was powerful. I read it more than twice - I wanted to grasp the idea and understand your deep meaning. Good writring... and your rhymes and stanzas were intriguing but well done.

My favorite part:

"Until the door opened.

Draining her from the inside
Making her sweat and sore,
Pulling out her hair,
With something crawling in her stomach,
She was left waiting for death.

They were submerged."

Dislikes: There was nothing I disliked but I sincerely ask you to please capitilize all the first letters of each line as I did with the title and my favorite part above. Just a thought.

Please correct/notice: There was nothing to be corrected.

I am sending this review because I really liked your poem. Write on!

Christina
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Review of Lighthouse  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Markymark,

Please accept my review for your poem Lighthouse.
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.
Likes: Your poem is lovely. It is deep and full of meaning and it made me cry with the words and wisdom that touched my heart. I think I was caught off guard and wasn't expecting to review such an incredibly touching poem. I needed to read yours words and it awoke great expectations in my soul. You write so well and express your thoughts in a powerful way. I loved Lighthouse.
My favorite part:
"We can change our direction but the world doesn't wait,
it revolves underneath us, it is we who must try.
Dislikes: There was nothing I disliked.
Please correct/notice: There was nothing to be corrected. It is perfect.
I am sending this review because I really liked your poem. Write on!

Christina
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Prosperous Snow,

Please accept my review of your Clip Art Nature Poem Winter in Las Vegas.
A shaped poem.
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.
Likes: I must tell you that I was really impressed with the beauty of your "poem". Ijoined WDC last year I have read and seen so much, learned so much (Haikus, etc and now our lovely shaped poem!)Interesting and different. And do you know what? I could feel the shaped poem: I saw mountains and birds and sun and rivers there, even some snow! Surreal.
Dislikes: There was nothing I disliked.
Please correct/notice: There was nothing to be corrected. It is perfect!
I am sending this review because I really liked your shaped poem. Write on!

Christina
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Picodoll,

Please accept my review of your short animal story Who you calling Chicken?
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.
Likes: I loved this story! I laughed and enjoyed it but... you are telling me that the rooster you had was a... giver??? Hah! That is really interesting! What animals do that amaze us, huh? I once had a dog thsat woyuld let me leave the house before him, can you believe that?
I really loved reading your little story.
Dislikes: There was nothing I disliked.
Please correct/notice: There was nothing to be corrected. It is really nice.
I am sending this review because I really liked your story very much. Write on!

Christina
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Review of Pod and Peng  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Rewbis,

Please accept my review of your short story Pod and Peng.
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.
Likes: Your story was interesting and kept me going, curious and motivsted till the end... and I wanted more of Pod and Peng. It is a lovely little story about two foxes searching for companionship and future. I liked it a lot. This is the beginning of something more... right? Think about that, Rewbis.
Dislikes: There was nothing I disliked.
Please correct/notice: Maybe there is a word or a period missing here: "urge to find companionship was Pod sat and pondered..."
I am sending this review because I really liked your short story. Write on!

Christina
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Review of In Fur  
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Dear Odd The Panda,

Please accept my review of your poem In Fur.
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.
Likes: I had to read your poem about three times to grasp the real meaning and great writing of your brilliant poem. I enjoyed it a lot - it made me think that the only thing that exists is matter and phenomena and that men's consciousness is the only fundamental reality. Your poem made me go so far in thoughts. Great work.
Dislikes: There was nothing I disliked.
Please correct/notice: There was nothing to be corrected. It is really deep and thought-provoking.
I am sending this review because I really liked your poem. Well done!

Christina
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Review of One White Rose  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Storm,

Please accept my review of your poem One White Rose.
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.
Likes: Ohhh so nice... I breathed deep and felt the scent of the roses in the air and all around me. See what your little poem did to me? Well done, Storm! The roses were white, right? Tell me!
Dislikes: There was nothing I disliked.
Please correct/notice: There was nothing to be corrected. It is really nice.
I am sending this review because I really liked your poem. Write on!

Christina
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Dear Delirium,

Please accept my review of your poem Silly little Bird,
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.
Likes: What a sweet, nice little poem to read, so enjoyable, really. Thank you for sharing it. It rhymed beautifully, perfect symmetry... better, the word would be harmonious.
Write on, dear Delirium.
Dislikes: There was nothing I disliked.
Please correct/notice: There was nothing to be corrected. It is really nice.
I am sending this review because I really liked your poem. Well done!

Christina
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Review of A Flower  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Shane,

Please accept my review of your poem A Flower.
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.
Likes: WOW! I loved it. It waws straighforward and well written. i liked the ending, Shane, really did. It might come a day when (if we continue to take nature for granted) that there will be no more flowers - yet, I hope not. We are wise, don't you think? You made me wonder. Nice poem!
Dislikes: There was nothing I disliked.
Please correct/notice: There was nothing to be corrected. It is perfect.
I am sending this review because I really liked your sweet little poem. Well done!

Christina
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Review of Kipuka  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Kare Enga in Montana,

Please accept my review of your poem Kipuka.
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.
Likes: NOw this was really interesting and different, educational and full of vivid images of beauty and intensity. I wanted to be there and see it all, feel the environment, touch Kipuka. I loved your poem. Well done!
Dislikes: There was nothing I disliked.
Please correct/notice: There was nothing to be corrected. It's perfect. I liked the definitions and the link. Thanks for sharing.
I am sending this review because I really liked your poem.
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina
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Review of ITS SPRING AGAIN  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Sweethonesty,

Please accept my review of your poem Its Spring Again.
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.
Likes: Each and every sentence of yours was a delight to read - smells, beauty, sounds, colors, noises... of Spring. Really nice, congrats. I loved it. I could feel Spring coming from your poem and from the choices of words and from your written images. Well done!
Dislikes: There was nothing I disliked but I think that there is an I - before your poem's title which needs to be deleted.
Please correct/notice: There was nothing to be corrected. It's perfect.
I am sending this review because I really liked your poem.
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina
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Rated: E | (5.0)
AWESOME. First time I see the cNotes - they are beautiful. Christina Daltro
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