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Review of Kipuka  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Kare Enga in Montana,

Please accept my review of your poem Kipuka.
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.
Likes: NOw this was really interesting and different, educational and full of vivid images of beauty and intensity. I wanted to be there and see it all, feel the environment, touch Kipuka. I loved your poem. Well done!
Dislikes: There was nothing I disliked.
Please correct/notice: There was nothing to be corrected. It's perfect. I liked the definitions and the link. Thanks for sharing.
I am sending this review because I really liked your poem.
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina
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Review of ITS SPRING AGAIN  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Sweethonesty,

Please accept my review of your poem Its Spring Again.
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.
Likes: Each and every sentence of yours was a delight to read - smells, beauty, sounds, colors, noises... of Spring. Really nice, congrats. I loved it. I could feel Spring coming from your poem and from the choices of words and from your written images. Well done!
Dislikes: There was nothing I disliked but I think that there is an I - before your poem's title which needs to be deleted.
Please correct/notice: There was nothing to be corrected. It's perfect.
I am sending this review because I really liked your poem.
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina
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Rated: E | (5.0)
AWESOME. First time I see the cNotes - they are beautiful. Christina Daltro
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Review of Verse  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Dear Feather Duster,

Please accept my review of your Verse
How can we use "poetry" in the best way?
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.
Likes: It was an excellent read, I liked your thoughts on how can we use "poetry" in the best way. I must confess that I cannot write poetry, only prose - short stories. I only wrote ONE poem (please check it out one day) but don't think I'll write another one again... I spent hours and hours only to write a few lines... and you, you do it so well! Congratulations! Your style and imagination (and feelings) are powerful.
Dislikes: There was nothing I disliked.
Please correct/notice: There was nothing to be corrected. Don't change a single word!
I am sending this review because I really liked your piece. Well done!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!
Always,

Christina Daltro
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Review of More, Like Her  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Dear Hunters Moon, dear Ken,
Please accept my review of your short story More, Like Her
An intercepted space transmission opens a road to discovery. A song-based story.
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.
Likes: I enjoyed EACH word you wrote! I loved the story. I have to rate it 5.0, there is no other reason why I shouldn't... it's LOVELY. You have a powerful imagination and the story, Xerxic and even the gorgonian kept me interested. You rock!
Dislikes: Nothing disliked me at all!
Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be corrected. Don't change a single word. It's perfect. It's really nice.
I am sending this review because I really like your story! Well done!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do!
With admiration,

Christina Daltro
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Review of Into the Light  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Just an Ordinary Jyo,

Please accept my review of your poem
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.
Likes: I liked your Into the Light
55 word story.
It was awesome! I was expecting a spiritual story about death and reincarnation but... surprise... it was about life, birth and living! LOVELY!
Congratulations!
Dislikes: Nothing disliked me at all.
Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be corrected. Don't change a word. Did you win the contest?
I am sending this review because I really liked your story. Well done. I hope to read more of your work again. Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do!

Christina Daltro
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Review of Be The Change  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear frontierman,

Please accept my review of your essay Be The Change
What makes WDC work? Quite simply it is the reviews. What impact do we have on community?
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.
Likes: I liked your essay very much and agree with your thoughts and creative process towards reviewing, participating a making a difference in someone else's life/work by simply caring/reviewing and letting the person (author) know... how you felt after reading his piece (in reality you are reading a person's mind, his heart, his dreams) and encouraging guidelines or suggestions for the better. That's why I am reviewing you because I learned with you today. Yes, everything starts with a thought. Great essay. I have never felt so active and addicted to writing and writing and writing since I joined WDC - and reviewing!
Congratulations!
Dislikes: Nothing disliked me at all.
Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be corrected - it is well written, perfect!
I am sending this review because I really liked your work and I enjoyed visiting your Port! Well done. I hope to read more of your work again. Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do!
With admiration,
Christina Daltro

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Review of Alchemy  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear jaya,

Please accept my review of your Alchemy
Fusion of the special kind.
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.
Likes: This poem was intense and deep and it made me think and wonder and imagine where I am in my life and if I am meant to be with him. While I was reading I was going far away and thinking about love and lost loves. You made me travel.
Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.
Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be corrected. It is perfect and... beatiful.
I am sending this review because I really like your great Port, so organized and full of awardicons! Well done, dear friend. Thanks for all the fine reviews you do!
With admiration,
Christina Daltro

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Review of Absence of Time  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My dear Pat,
Please accept my review of your poem Absence of Time
A walk on the beach becomes more.....
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.
Likes: The title of the poem caught my eye while going over your work in your Port. Maybe I am feeling an absence of time... somewhere inside me and while I read I could feel your words flow in my heat as if I understood you or... you understood me. It was a surreal experience. I loved the soft words you used: peace, float, serenity, inevitability, tomorrows... so nice, Pat.
Dislikes: Nothing disliked me at all.
Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be corrected - it is well written, lovely.
I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done. I hope to read more of your work again. Write on!
With admiration,
Christina Daltro

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Review of Escape  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My dear SoCalScribe,

Please accept my review of your short story Escape
Freedom is almost within reach...
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.
Likes: I really enjoyed reading your short story and you kept me going, curious, eager to know what was going to happen and then... surprise! I loved it! I liked it when you wrote this:" Unfortunately, the dry wheat stalks were not kind to the boy, and one snapped as he moved over it." Nice, I could ... hear it! Then, this: "For the last time,” the man replied, “You’re taking a bath whether you like it or not! Why do you always have to make it so difficult?
The man’s son eventually gave up the fight and resigned to his fate."
And finally this part: "The man may have won this round... but tomorrow night would be another story."
Dislikes: Nothing disliked me at all.
Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be corrected - it is well written, interesting and funny.
I liked it that your "horror/scary" story had exactly 666 words!
I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done. I hope to read more of your work again.
With admiration, much love,
Christina Daltro

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
My dear Maryann,

Please accept my review of your poem Penelope, My Beloved Cat
This is a poem about the death of a beloved pet.
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.
Now I understand wht you liked my short story The Cat so much! You are a sweet, loving person that expresses your feelings for an animal, a loved pet, your cat, a little animal/human being. It brought tears to my eyes, Maryann. I had a dog, a black poodle and our bond was special. I lost her in Brasilia, Brazil. She must be living with somebody else that must love her just as I stil so. I know she is well. Your poem made mew think of Blackie and it warmed my heart.
Likes:
"By my side is where you prefer to be."
Dislikes: Nothing disliked me at all.
Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be corrected - it is well written and sincere and I could feel your sorrow.
I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done. I hope to read more of your work again. Write on!
With admiration,
Christina Daltro

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Review of The Sea  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear WhoMe,

Please accept my review of your poem The Sea (Contest Entry)
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.
I liked your poem a lot. I love the sea, looking at it from my balcony in Porto das Dunas, Northeast Brazil. I love to go to the beach and swim, feel the salty water while I swim... I think it's part of Brazilians - the ocean. I could feel your words and your happiness.
Likes:
"The ocean, the sea
she will be my home.
Her nets have been cast,
her waves I will roam." >>> LOVELY!
Dislikes: Nothing disliked me at all.
Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be corrected - it is well written and perfect. I heard your thoughts.
I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done. I hope to read more of your work again. Write on!
With admiration,
Christina Daltro

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear YellowRose,
Please accept my review of your poem If Six Weeks Remains.
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.
I really enjoyed reading your poem and sincerely had to rate it with a 5. I simply loved it!
Likes:It's sincere and sweet.
Dislikes: Nothing disliked me at all.
Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be corrected - it is well written; a perfect poem.
I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done. I liked the surreal picture in the end and it made the poem more emotional to me. I hope to read more of your work soon. Write on!
Christina Daltro
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Dear Max,
This was really helpful... especially now that I've started reviewing for the WDC Power Reviewers Group. Thank you. I read it three times and each time I find something new! I'll follow your instructions and create my very own template. Nice. Thanks! *ButterflyV*
ChrisDaltro-Chasing Moonbeams
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Review of Love is Red  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Dear Tony,

Please accept my review of your poem Love is Red
My description of the color red (My mom's favorite!)
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you; be sure that I am also learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion.
I enjoyed reading your poem a lot! I love the color red, too, specially when it's a kiss or red roses!
Likes: My favorite sentence:" Love feels like a day with cake and lots of filling." Really nice, Tony.
Dislikes: Nothing disliked me. Really creative.
Observation: Please have a space between the first and second sentence.
I am sending you this review because I really enjoyed your work. Well done. Write on! You mom must be proud of your and of your poem!

Christina Daltro
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Review of Your Heart  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Lovely,

Please accept my review of your poem: Your Heart
Poetry, poem.
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you; be sure that I am also learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion.
I enjoyed reading your poem a lot! It is well structure-based, really creative.
Likes: "Both your hearts in line. . . and everything is fine."
Dislikes: Nothing disliked me, really. Bravo!
Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be corrected.
I am sending you this review because I really enjoyed your work. Well done. Write on! I hope to read more of your work again! Congratulations!

Christina Daltro

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Review of Always Watching  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Halp,
Please accept my review of your poem Always Watching
(I envision the perfect woman - although it would be impossible for her to exist.)
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you; be sure that I am also learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion.
Your poem is AMAZING! I have been reading and reviewing many poems lately and many of them were just words put into the keyboard but your poem, your thoughts, yyur words, they all made sense... in this awesome, deep, sad, emotional poem (told as a story) of passion and lost love, a love that is in heaven but that you treasure on earth. Beautiful!
Likes: All of it but specially this part:
"The Heavens will always be dark and eerie
Until then, lay your ears upon the ground
And listen carefully for the sound
Of my muzzled voice… or my shriek
Or the silence… of my heartbeat"
Wow!
Dislikes: Nothing disliked me at all. Well written. Creatine from beginning to end.
Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be corrected. I learned with you today, Halp.
I am sending you this review because I really enjoyed your poem. Write on! I hope to read more of your work again. Bring your words to life!
Christina Daltro

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear Can-do, dear Ron,
I enjoyed reading your story/comedy Lee gets a new Laptop very much! It was witty, funny and I was curious to see what was going to happen to Lee. He sure does have a friend in Denny but this Denny guy is really something, huh? He knows exactly how women react! Some guy! Your story is well written and creative. Good work. I'll read more of your stories... tomorrow. It's late and I need to sleep - I was working hard on the WDC Power Reviewers Newbie Raid. I just wanted to read one of your stories and review it.
Please go through your story again and correct some spaces missing after or before commas; even periods, like these here: "money first ,then"; "to that.Lee", OK? Also you need to correct the a to at here: “ Yes, but you have to stay a my place for a week first." Apart from that it is a GREAT STORY! I loved it! Write on! Talk to you tomorrow!
Christina
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Review of My Husbend  
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Dear Her Holiness,

Please accept my review of your short story My Husbend
Spiritual relationship with my husbend Eugenio Maria Giovanni Pacelli A.K.A Pope Pius XII
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you; be sure that I am also learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion.
I felt your sincere emotion in your writing but sometimes I was troubled if you really meant it or if you were writing a story - there is always a truth in what we write about, sometimes not, but this story troubled me. Yet, it is basically well expressed but there are some mistakes I'd like to point out so thast your piece can be much better and WDC readers can understand without having to stop reading because of the spelling mistakes. So, dear Her Holiness, please correct:
1. Husband, not husbend (or was it to be like this?);
2. Boyfriend,
3. Girlfriend,
4. Although not all though;
5. End with not and end in.
Apart from this it's alright and OK. Good luck with your writing and Write On! I hope I have helped you with curious your short story.

A dragon reading a book by candle light
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Just a Kid,

Please accept my review of your poem Sonnet to a Setwork
Just the product of being bored in class. We were reading Othello when I wrote this.
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you; be sure that I am also learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion.
Well, I must tell you, Just a Kid, you shouldn't get bored in class but you did get... inspired though because this is very well written. I see a great future... but please write your poems after class, alright? Promise me this or I won't review your poems/stories again!
Really awesome work!
Please correct: I found no mistakes. You really worked hard on this!
I am sending you this review because I really enjoyed your poem. Write on!

Christina Daltro
A dragon reading a book by candle light
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Review of The Sorry Lover  
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Dear tbakes94,

Please accept my review of your poem The Sorry Lover
The speaker of this poem is a man. Please let me know what you think.
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you; be sure that I am also learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion.
I liked your poem and felt sorry for this sorry lover that can't express his feelings for the loved one... but you did it for him, though. Really nice work.
My favorite part:
"Silence sells under two cents,
Only words make her believe."
This was so well written.
Please correct: Nothing is to be corrected.
I am sending you this review because I really enjoyed your poem, tbakes94. Write on! I hope to read more of your work again!
Christina Daltro

A dragon reading a book by candle light
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Review of February  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Franci,

Please accept my review of your poem February
(A short piece I wrote for the 28 words contest.)
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you; be sure that I am also learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion.
Hey, Franci, that was really cute, sweet, nice and told really well in... 28 words! Good job! And I was having trouble writing for The Dialogue 500 (only dialogue, no he said, no she said) and then I read your 28-word poem... Wow! I won't complain anymore! You said it all in 28 words!
Write on! Let me know if you won! You sure will!
I am sending you this review because I really enjoyed your poem. Write on! I hope to read more of your work again!

Christina Daltro

A dragon reading a book by candle light
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Dear designbykris,
Please accept my review of your story The Fate of Elizabeth
(contest entry: make the reader side with the world's worst female serial killer)

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you; be sure that I am also learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion.
Since the very start, I couldn't stop reading about Elizabeth's story, her past, what made her kill virgins... really interesting and you kept me going. You followed the contest's promp completely and I wish you success. It is well written, creative and interesting.
Please correct:
1. beauty(pale skin and long black hair) helped. (a space is needed after beauty);
2. –It evolved. (a space before It).
I am sending you this review because I really enjoyed your story. I really wanted more. You could make this into a story, you know. Write on! I hope to read more of your work again!

Christina Daltro

A dragon reading a book by candle light
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Review of Voices  
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Dear Mr. Meltdown,

Please accept my review of your poem Voices
(This is my first one on this site. I hope everyone likes it. Let me know what you think.)

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you; be sure that I am also learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion.
I read your poem and I thought it was different and sincere. It was as if the voices you hear and write about are the voices you want to cry out; verbalize concerns. I understood many things and imagined hidden secrets.
Please correct and i to I; Ill to I'll; ill to I'll; Its to It's, cant to can't; dont to don't as it makes the reading interrupted - the reader cannot concentrate and becomes distracted by the lack of contractions. Apart from this, great read, really creative. Write on!

Christina Daltro

A dragon reading a book by candle light
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Review of Bump' em Love  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear jpsmtl,
Please accept my review of your story Bump' em Love.
Contest entry. A story of a woman who finds love while playing an online game of Bump'em.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you; be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion.
I enjoyed reading your story very much. I was curious from the very start because I often wondered what made people spend long hours of their lives playing games and computers and hidding behind Avatars. Your story was fascinating. I never expected the ending, I thought Jack wouldn't like what he saw - a plump short woman... but maybe Jack saw through her, he saw her mind and smart opponent. A very interesting story, indeed, jpsmtl!
Congratulations! There are no mistakes, it is well written and curiously different from what I have read today. I hope to read more from you again.
Remember: Bring your words to life!
Christina Daltro

A dragon reading a book by candle light
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