|My dear SoCalScribe,
Please accept my review of your short story Escape
Freedom is almost within reach...
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.
Likes: I really enjoyed reading your short story and you kept me going, curious, eager to know what was going to happen and then... surprise! I loved it! I liked it when you wrote this:" Unfortunately, the dry wheat stalks were not kind to the boy, and one snapped as he moved over it." Nice, I could ... hear it! Then, this: "For the last time,” the man replied, “You’re taking a bath whether you like it or not! Why do you always have to make it so difficult?
The man’s son eventually gave up the fight and resigned to his fate."
And finally this part: "The man may have won this round... but tomorrow night would be another story."
Dislikes: Nothing disliked me at all.
Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be corrected - it is well written, interesting and funny.
I liked it that your "horror/scary" story had exactly 666 words!
I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done. I hope to read more of your work again.
With admiration, much love,