|Dear Thomas Seeker, dear friend,
Please accept my review of your short story: Being a whole person
What does it mean to be a whole person?
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.
Likes: I was struck by the truth in your words, your wisdom. The word I remembered when I finished reading your thoughts was:
Understanding. That's what we need--more-- in our lives. If things and events always went the way we wanted, we would have a better world; but, we don't do that. When faced with unpleasant situations, we run away. To care, love and feel compassion is--sometimes--taken, by others--as a weakness. It isn't! It's a powerful feeling of awareness. We should never let an opportunity slip: care, love, listen and this will make you bigger, better, full of accumulated knowledge. You made me write on ...
Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.
Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be corrected. It's perfect. A life's analysis. Congratulations. This is my favorite of all your pieces. You show that you are a whole person.
I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!