*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
Creative fun in
the palm of your hand.
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/chrisdaltro/sort_by/r.review_creation_time DESC/page/4
Review Requests: ON
486 Public Reviews Given
Public Reviews
Previous ... 1 2 3 -4- 5 6 7 8 ... Next
76
76
Review of The Red Sky  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Dear Jesse Avid,

Please accept my review of your short story: The Red Sky
This story puts you before, during, and at the end of a battle in civil war.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: I really, really liked your story, Jesse. In times of war your words cry out. Well done. My favorite part:
The blood of the soldiers who died are pouring from heaven. >>> Well done, here!
You were honest, sincere and expressed the true meaning of no meaning at all... for red skies.

Dislikes: You could have written more...

Please correct/notice:
Please correct all the i for I, for example: "Even now, i don't know if i could fight my family..."

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

** Image ID #1791799 Unavailable **
77
77
Review of My Friend Melanie  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Assortedtea,

Please accept my review of your poem: My Friend Melanie
I wrote this poem to a good friend, that later became a great romance.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: Nice, sweet poem about wonders and hopes. I liked it. You did well.

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be corrected.

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

** Image ID #1791799 Unavailable **
78
78
Review of Unspoken words  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Dear Paige Bann,

Please accept my review of your poem: Unspoken words
The moments the words you want to say and the words you can't become one and suffocate.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL! I read it again and again and found more beauty and passion in your words and meaning. Lovely! You caught me off guard---maybe this will be my favorite poem reviewed today!

My favorite part:
Meanings that truly mean nothing.

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be corrected.

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

** Image ID #1791799 Unavailable **
79
79
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear ChuChuRocker,

Please accept my review of your poem: I Wouldn't Trade It
Another poem written while I was pregnan

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: I simply loved it! You said so much in so little---4 lines of wonder and love. Well done! I like your work.

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be corrected.

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

** Image ID #1791799 Unavailable **
80
80
Review of A Dirty Mind  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear ChuChuRocker,

Please accept my review of your poem: A Dirty Mind
A simple poem about what goes on in my head.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: I liked the way you expressed your feelings into written words, and as if I could see them. Nice work. My favorite part:
Above your head, the colors play and paint a twilight sky... really nice.
Another favorite one: A pile of junk gives way to dreams. Well done!

Dislikes: I felt you could have written more.

Please correct/notice: Give another space after the last word, sight.

I am sending this review because I really liked your poem. Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

** Image ID #1791799 Unavailable **
81
81
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Sum 1,

Please accept my review of your poem: First Thanksgiving
First thanksgiving for the pilgrims in modern day Massachusetts

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: I always like to read about Thanksgiving, Sum 1, because in Brazil we don't celebrate it but we know about it and how important this date is for Americans (it's maybe more important than Xmas, am I right?). It was nice to imagine your words and your interesting way of writing about it in your poem, your choice of words, rhymes, and stanzas. Nice work!

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me; on the contrary - it's lovely!

Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be corrected. Well done!

I am sending this review because I really liked your poem. Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

** Image ID #1825757 Unavailable **
82
82
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear dogpack,

Please accept my review of your fiction story: I thought It Was Thanks Giving
Power Reviewers Contest Entry

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: I read, laughed and enjoyed the story very much. I liked your way you wrote it, and the color usage. Really nice. The ending was just about right.
Did you win the contest?

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me. Really nice story.

Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be corrected.

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

This image is on 'share' for reviewers to use
83
83
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear Nixie9,

Please accept my review of your monologue:Before They're Gone
Written for WDC Power Reviewers, in honor of Maryann's memories for her father.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: Beautiful, simply beautiful. You touched my heart, deeply. You said it all; I have no more words to express what I felt after reading your piece.
My favorite part:
"One day a woman asked me, “Why are you smiling? It looks like you know the secret of life.” >>> Wow!

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be corrected --- it's perfect.

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done!
Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

** Image ID #1825746 Unavailable **
84
84
Review of Without them  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear L.I.S.,

Please accept my review of your: Without them
Just a plastic view on what we should cherish.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: You made me feel all your words and see all your written images... amazing and lovely. You took me to my past and think of moments I had quite forgotten. Thank you for sharing. Nice work.

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be corrected - it's perfect.

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

** Image ID #1825743 Unavailable **
85
85
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Big Bad Wolf,

Please accept my review of your family letter: What I'd tell my Parents
Words are never enough.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: Hey Big Bad Wolf... you made me cry. I simply loved reading your letter and your honest, straightforward words... lovely. Thank you for sharing. I am already laughing... imagining your pink Xmas gift to your dad. You have great parents and they have a great son!

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be corrected - it's perfect! Well written.

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

This image is on 'share' for reviewers to use
86
86
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Dear Mark Lewis,

Please accept my review of your poem: THE LABORS OF HERCU-pig
The adventures of a mock hero. Dedicated to my cousin who goes on a diet.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: I really, really enjoyed your funny, creative poem, Mark Lewis. You can write a story in a poem! I was impressed. I loved this:
And as a reward for his labors, they said
An important job by the coast to him was handed
Now working as a lifeguard, so prim and hunk
Flocked by lady pigs in his pink swimming trunk.

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: It's perfect, don't change a word.

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

This image is on 'share' for reviewers to use
87
87
Review of Love's Mind Thief  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Dear flyingnell ,

Please accept my review of your poem Love's Mind Thief
An older woman watching a younger couple, remembers her passion.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: Sweet, touching poem. Imaginative and creative. I hope that I am loved enough till I become an elderly woman, and not become this elderly lady ... yet, it is beautiful---you are older but still young in your heart and soul. I really liked your poem. I thought of myself in my future ... and smiled. I guess In will be okay, though. I am loved. I loved.

Dislikes: nothing disliked me, on the contrary.

Please correct/notice: It's perfect - good work!

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

This image is on 'share' for reviewers to use
88
88
Review of The Bus  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Dear Scarlet Black,

Please accept my review of your short story: The Bus
A freshman's bus ride, based on my experiences. Written in second person.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: IN the beginning it was a bit difficult to follow but after I read it again, it was fine. It is really different and interesting--the way wrote it, told it. Good work, Scarlet Black, really creative.

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice:

1. Please put a space here:
... says Zombie Boy, “All
2. The comma should be after the ' here:
‘larceny,’

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

This image is on 'share' for reviewers to use
89
89
Review of I Fear the Night  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Lana,

Please accept my review of your poem:I Fear the Night
Villanelle poem.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: Your poem is sweet, soft and tender. I loved it. We should follow the light, right? It has rhythm and colors. I loved it!

Dislikes: NOthing disliked me, really.

Please correct/notice: NOthing is to be corrected, changed.

I am sending this review because I really liked your poem. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

This image is on 'share' for reviewers to use
90
90
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Thomas Seeker, dear friend,

Please accept my review of your short story: Being a whole person
What does it mean to be a whole person?

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: I was struck by the truth in your words, your wisdom. The word I remembered when I finished reading your thoughts was:
Understanding. That's what we need--more-- in our lives. If things and events always went the way we wanted, we would have a better world; but, we don't do that. When faced with unpleasant situations, we run away. To care, love and feel compassion is--sometimes--taken, by others--as a weakness. It isn't! It's a powerful feeling of awareness. We should never let an opportunity slip: care, love, listen and this will make you bigger, better, full of accumulated knowledge. You made me write on ...

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be corrected. It's perfect. A life's analysis. Congratulations. This is my favorite of all your pieces. You show that you are a whole person.

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!


Christina Daltro

This image is on 'share' for reviewers to use
91
91
Review of Life's River  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear friend, dear Rick,

Your story LIFE'S RIVER made me cry, softly, calmly and smile in the end. I am still crying as I write ... it is full of wisdom, honesty, essence, spirituality, and experience. You seem to be an old, wise soul that searches for answers (but already knows them) in the river of your eternal life in this universe. You already found many answers--because of the way you write and express yourself. Beautiful. I was (and am) impressed as I rarely find people that think (and write) this way. Really nice, Rick. You see, I think that our human condition doesn't make us tend to share the best of ourselves--we are afraid of rejection (as we are always searching for true love and approval) but you, me, and spiritual people/authors don't care about that; we are closer to the soul of the world. We are not afraid. We know we must leave our personal legend through to the world.
A great piece. I might stop writing altogether now. I will go over my latest story (My Ghost story) and review it for the 26th time. I put a sentence there because of your and your ... river of life. You Rock!
I am reviewing this as a WDC Power Reviewer as it is so especially creative and awesome.

Christina
** Image ID #1727519 Unavailable **
92
92
Review of Prophecy  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Isana ,

Please accept my review of your poem: Prophecy
This poem is a mysterious prophecy for a book I might write in the future.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: Really interesting, mysterious prophecy for a book. I think you should keep on with the idea. Have you started it yet? I think you should. Let me know.

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me - a great idea.

Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be corrected.

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!

Christina Daltro

This image is on 'share' for reviewers to use
93
93
Review of The Hand  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Samisoke,

Please accept my review of your short story: The Hand
family scary story, i shortened So children and adults can enjoy.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: I enjoyed the read. Well told and scary. I liked the way you started and ended, especially about The Hand.

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: (these are my suggestions)
> family scary story, i shortened So children and adults can enjoy - please change the i to I;
> You could hear the locking mechanism of the door working it was so quiet - maybe there is a word missing before it.

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done, Samisoke.
I hope I have helped you. My review is honest and sincere.
Write on!

Christina Daltro

This image is on 'share' for reviewers to use
94
94
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear EvilDawg - A Vigilante Ranger,

Please accept my review of your short story: Charlie - A Halloween Tale
A young boys experience on Halloween

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: Ohh so good. What a well written little story full of power and emotion. I loved it, EvilDwag. You know how to to do it - keep the reader's eyes glued to your storytelling. Great job here.

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me... at all.

Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be corrected.

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!


Christina Daltro

This image is on 'share' for reviewers to use
95
95
Review of The Lighthouse  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Escape Theory,

Please accept my review of your poem: The Lighthouse
The lonely life of a lighthouse.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: What a little delight to read and wonder... really. It made me go back in time.
My favorite parts:

"He stands to kiss the stars" >>>>>>>> LOVELY!

"Treasures of a lonely building." Great!

Dislikes: It's perfect.

Please correct/notice: Don't touch it, change it. It's great, honestly.

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!


Christina Daltro

This image is on 'share' for reviewers to use
96
96
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear strokecity,

Please accept my review of your poem: Where Does One Go?
Where does one go to find love, endearing, enduring and true?

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: So far your poem is one of the most beautiful and touching i have read in WDC. I am really impressed and touched by its beauty, depth and sincerity. Your words made me wonder: Where... does one go - for gentleness, quietness and love. Where does one go at the end of the day? Do you know?

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me - on the contrary - it's amazingly well written.

Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be corrected.

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!


Christina Daltro

This image is on 'share' for reviewers to use
97
97
Review of Moon wolf  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear Kayna-amy ,

Please accept my review of your poem: Moon wolf
poem that a lycan might write

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: Lovely! Well written and again... lovely!

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be changed or corrected.
I especially liked this part:

"Wolf, Lycan you are
Awake and be free.

To protect and guard
Those you love"

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!


Christina Daltro

This image is on 'share' for reviewers to use
98
98
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear dreamybanana ,

Please accept my review of your poem: Detina Park // Prologue Rewrite
Hopefully improved. The beginning of my supernatural fiction

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: I enjoyed reading your prologue... very much. I liked the way you made me curious and wanting to know more about the girl. What was it that the man knew? Why did he seem so sad? Why was it happening again?
I especially loved this part:
"The man sat up from beneath the covers to the moon, phasing from full to nothing as he broke away from his slumber, like he had done many times before." >>>>>>>>> Beautiful!

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be corrected/observed. It's perfect!

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

My Signature
99
99
Review of The Freak  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Tim Chiu ,

Please accept my review of your poem: The Freak
A rhyming poem about an unpopular, flirty, and ugly guy - for fun...

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: I enjoyed reading your poem very much, Tim Chiu. It was funny but sweet and so nice. I once met a person just like that and you made me go back in time... He was weird looking but had the kindest heart in this whole wide world.

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: Nothing to be corrected/observed. It's perfect.

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!


Christina Daltro

My Signature
100
100
Review of Sea  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear dvdtomkins,

Please accept my review of your poem: Sea - A poem about the Sea.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: Your poem is little but sweet. I liked it. You see, I love the sea. My favorite part: Kylidoscope of white and blue - so real. Write on!

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: It is perfect!

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!

Christina Daltro

A dragon reading a book by candle light
190 Reviews · *Magnify*
Page of 8 · 25 per page   < >
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/chrisdaltro/sort_by/r.review_creation_time DESC/page/4