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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a super awesome poem! It flows and rhymes really well. I love how you created the creature with some rather disturbing descriptions. Then there was the part with the question of whether aliens observe us like we observe animals on Earth. I thought that was a nice touch.


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Rated: E | (4.0)
I don't suppose absorbing magic & energy to grow bigger could be an option? Another of mine would be befriending humans who love dergs as friendly, mysterious creatures.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Just curious how memories are a choice. Are you implying that you lose your memory when traveling?
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love how you made the name as part of the egg theme!
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Review of Derg & Khola  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I'm flattered! Note that this must have happened right after I hatched.
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Review of Dear Jesus  
Rated: E | (3.5)
This was a nice prayer. We all need to take a step back and ask to be filled with the wonderful peace that only the Lord can bring. This is especially true when we are exhausted from life. This is when we need to be filled the most. It's good to know we can always ask for such spiritual sustenance.


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Review of The Whole Truth  
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
This was a nice interesting story. Did this really happen to you or was the story made up? I'm assuming that there are words in bold because it is a contest entry. If that is the case, what was the contest's prompt? As for the story itself, it was well written and flowed well. I enjoyed how a well meaning explanation wound up backfiring on you.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow. Just wow. This is an amazing prayer/psalm. It somewhat reminds me of the prayers David sang to God in the book of Psalms. It is great that you recognize that we need spiritual help in life and that even with that help we will sometimes fail and we must learn our lesson without being too hard on ourselves, asking for forgiveness instead of wallowing in despair. Taking time to acknowledge this without emotions like anger give us a clearer view of how we should change. We all need the Lord's help in this regard. Lastly, I love that you made it rhyme.


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Review of Peanut Butter  
Rated: E | (3.5)
I found this bit of poem by searching in random reviews. I got to say that this really caught my eye. I too love peanut butter, especially with jelly. I thought your choice of peanut butter for the poem's subject was a good choice. The poem also flows very nicely.


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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
This is a nice signature. I always liked dragonflies with their iridescent wings and somewhat unusual body shape (for an insect). The spiderweb is very well done. The detail in the signature overall is amazing. The one downside is that the name is rather hard to read.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Would have liked to see "dragon dragoons"
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Review of Fall  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This was a really nice poem about fall. I like how you pointed out how it was nature putting on a show as the season changes from summer to autumn to winter. I also like the line about the birds. Autumn is indeed beautiful and should be appreciated more. You may have even convinced me to choose autumn as my favorite season. I do, however, have one critique. You could have added more to what fall brings. For example, you could have mentioned backyard BBQ or baseball/football season. There is room for more "meat" in the poem.


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Review of Lost in Space  
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Rated: E | (3.5)
This was an interesting item. I can't say that I'm familiar with this particular poem format, but that doesn't mean that I didn't enjoy the story! I liked the ending that let the humans and aliens settle among another peacefully. My one criticism is that the stories plot was rather mediocre. I do, however, understand that this was due to the item being an entry to a prompt contest. It was a nice short read, perfect for a random read (length wise). I wish you luck for any other contests you might enter in the future. I just got one question. How do you recognize an alien police station?


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Review of The Case  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I loved this story very much. It was riveting. I could have sworn that I was there watching the trial unfold. The way you animated your characters was astounding indeed. I thought that the "glimpses" in the accused was a great way to add to the story. They were well timed giving just enough to wonder without giving anything away. I'd like to give extra points for telling the story like it was an actual trial. Realism is more engaging than a cheesy drama. The only reason why it's not a 5.0 is because I save that for a precious few.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow. This is a great poem. As a christian I have come across countless praises and prayers and this one really hit me. I think I even cried a little. Jesus is indeed someone deserving to be thanked. It reminds me of the twelve leapers where only one came back to say thanks. I am also reminded of David's prayers. Even with many things going wrong, he acknowledged that God was with him. In a world with so much sin, it's awesome to come across someone who continues to cling to "the life and the way".


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Rated: E | (5.0)
You should make multiple choice an option and add both Metroid & Minecraft. I'm stuck between thd two I mentioned, Zelda, Spyro, & Sly Cooper. All so good!
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Review of Tired  
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Rated: E | (3.0)
I may be rating this poem as average, but that doesn't mean I did not like it or that I thought an aspect of it was sub-par. I thought the topic/subject of choice was a nice widely identifiable one. Personally it was one of well timing. We all have our difficulties and the sharing of such issues can go a long way in helping others handle their own. Thank you for putting this out there. I, for one, feel that life is a little more bearable now. I hope this review may give you some sunshine in return.


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Rated: E | (4.5)
This poem was quite incredibly clever. The only reason it's not a 5 is because you completely made up words just to continue the rhyming. However, I do get that this was more or less required. Well, on to the positive stuff. I loved how this was a Halloween take of the classic Christmas rhyme. I also loved the content scenes such as the dancing skeletons. Then of course there is the fact that you gave a nod to the Charlie Brown Halloween special. There is just a lot to love about this item. Keep writing!


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Rated: E | (4.0)
This was a very good entry! I loved the description of both objects and actions alike. The story itself flowed rather nicely. I could easily picture all that you wrote in my mind. I do however have some questions. Was this item a result of a prompt because it certainly felt like it. The ending felt a little off. Aside from the words being in bold, the use of that particular phrase didn't make much sense to me. The story also feels like it is missing something. I can't seem to identify what though.


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Review of The Whisper  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This was an interesting, albeit a long read. Emotions are obviously a big part of how you retain the readers attention. Your descriptions felt extremely relistic. I almost felt like I was there witnessing the tragedy myself. This was a great item to get lost in. Keep up the good work!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a very sweet poem indeed! These days it is much more common to have online friends. While there are definitely dangers, that doesn't mean you can't find true blue friends. During my Discord role play days I made some really great ones myself! One of them would even pester me to go to sleep if I got too wrapped up in chatting! The hallmark of a true friend is not what they do in your physical presence, but their intangible vibe you begin to know which knows no barriers or boundaries. This poem was a case in point.


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Review of Facebook Photos  
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
This was an interesting read. My favorite part was how you portrayed the dangers involved in using Facebook. You made it very easy to understand just how powerful it can be & how easily it can be turned against you. I also liked how the story had an open ending allowing the reader to image how things worked out.


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Review of Seventeen  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
It is wonderful to know that you got to see one of the best joys in life for your friends. This was a wonderful little poem. I am rather curious where the number seventeen came from. Was this a result from a prompt? Was the number seventeen meaningful in some way?


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Rated: E | (3.0)
I think you should have added Star Wars to the list.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This felt like a very honest telling of a dark part of your life. I want to commend you on your courage for writing this down, even though it was emotional and painful to bring up. On another note, I thought it interesting that the Cherokee were mentioned because that's the tribe of my great great grandma. I hope you are doing and feeling better.


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