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Review of Planted love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
This needs a little work in my opinion. There are definitely some capitalization errors to be fixed for starters. Next, the poem is a bit too short to properly express the concept and emotions that you are trying to convey. I do think you have a good start, it just needs some refining.


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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Oh wow! This acrostic poem is so very much the best and is just absolutely awesome! I love your idea with the aliens as not being petty by sharing technology rather than competing to have the best. The fact that this was done as an acrostic is impressive. Why can't we be more like that?!


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Rated: E | (4.5)
This was not only an interesting read, but a very interesting way of putting things. For the typical reader, it's a pretty high levels worth of reading. That said, I completely understood it and agree wholeheartedly. What's so hard about loving your neighbor as Mr. Rogers showed?


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Review of Super Hero  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This was an interesting read. Was this a true story? If it is, I hope the part about the lost kitten was made up. I liked how you played off the expression in the last line. The scene with the towel was rather cute as well as the idea of the transformer toys guarding the money. Not an excellent story, but pretty decent.


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Review of Snow's Quotes  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
This was a very interesting read. I would rate it higher, but many spelling errors are scattered throughout. However, I did love your words of wisdom! I also enjoyed how you formatted it and used different colors as well. Are you still adding to this?


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Review of Contents  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Ok. I got to ask. Why are these passkey protected if you will give said key to anyone who emails you asking for it. I mean, why bother in the first place? Also, the folder name isn't anything to do with what resides inside. It should be renamed to "Manhattan Poems" or perhaps just "Poems".


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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
This was indeed a gruesome story, but one that should be shared to spread awareness. This is exactly the kind of thing that can cause real disasters by those two young to know. No one is at fault and hardly anything could have been done to prevent it. That's why there is no substitute to personally keeping an eye on those of this age and certainly why it's not a great idea to let them play with your phone.


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Rated: E | (2.5)
To be perfectly honest, this prose was a mess. While there are no spelling or grammatical errors, the entire thing needs to be overhauled. Other than something along the lines of business, I can't tell what it is that you are talking about. The entire concept is lost.


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Review of "If"  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This was really good! It was also really sweet! I liked that you covered all three scenarios (love not met, love lost, and love kept). However, the rhyming was a little off, which I found unusual for you, after reading and reviewing many of your works.


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Review of One of Those Days  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I enjoyed reading this very much. It reminded me of Texas during March 2021. I also had a most wonderful black lab named Duke so I know how great they are to have. The difference is he hates getting his paws wet in the dewy grass! I loved the ending! They do make a wonderful warm blanket or pillow.


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Review of Time Tells  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Simply amazing. I do not know where to begin. The poem is full of love, romance, tragedy, & war. The words are true and the rhymes are more than adequate. It's long, but keeps your interest very nicely. I especially loved the twist with the watch at the end!


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Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
This was really short and I don't see the correlation to the other Rigel story. I must assume that there will be a tie in later on. I also hope that you will still continue to write more of the Rigel series. I must say that it did grab me from the start and the end makes me huger for more.


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Review of 2938: Rigel  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
This was a very interesting read. It is pretty good, but you need to edit that last sentence. Something is off there. Perhaps you ran a couple of sentences together? The story itself was rather intriguing. I look forward to more and I mean other than the character list and second Rigel story.


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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Wow! This was so very interesting! The detail you put into this was amazing and it was both very thoughtful as well as a nice touch to ad a picture. I really, truly felt like I was there. Great work! I'm thoroughly impressed. Have you done such descriptions of other famous locations?


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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I found this poem a little lax in grammar and word choice. I feel that the poem's structure and rhyming could have been better. That said, I thought the topic choice was both fun and silly. It got me thinking about the movie "There's a Zebra in the Kitchen."


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Review of To Find A Flower  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
This was definitely an interesting read. While I understand the statements are intentional, they don't make any logical sense. For example, saying that a flower was never alive if it hasn't died yet isn't a legitimate statement. A dead flower WAS alive, but obviously no longer alive. Death happens AFTER life so by the time it's applicable the question of it being alive is moot. On the other hand I take things literally so I'm likely missing the point.


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Review of New Year's Eve  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (2.5)
This was an interesting item. That said, it was all over the place and I had no idea what anything meant. It felt like a lot of gibberish to me. For example, what is Pollik? There also seems to be no form for the item. I am sorry that I couldn't understand it.


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Rated: E | (3.5)
This was an interesting story, but I am wondering what it was the parents were talking about. The ending was pretty good, but it wasn't one that really felt like an ending. Also, how is it the boy could understand the mice? Is the boy a Dr. Doolittle or do the mice speak human?


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh man. I'm hooked! This story grabs your attention and won't let go, if you'll pardon the play on your own words. This is indeed frightening, but not because of a character, event, or concept. Instead you use the unknown which is much more frightening.


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Review of The Cat  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This was an interesting read. The ending was very cute too. The poem rhymed nicely and I thought that picking a cat as the subject matter was a good choice. I can totally tell you are a cat person and I agree that they are amazing animals abounding in grace.


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Rated: E | (4.5)
This was a very interesting read. Is any of it based off a real experience? I truly believe that dreams have meanings and can tell us the future. The trick is knowing which dreams to believe, which I thought you explained really well with the rain as a sign.


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Review of Light to dark  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
That's your first poem?! I've written the occasional poem for my whole life and I could never create something that good! It was disturbing, yet beautiful which is hard to accomplish in my opinion. My only negative comment is I'm struggling with the meaning.


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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This was "Epic"! I loved your "Strange World" of movies and how they go "Onward" toward their membership so much I could "Sing"! What can I say? My tongue is "Frozen" from how awesome of this entry. I knew I would love it after I "Red" the first line. I felt like this was "Uncharted" territory. I just have one question. Have you been left "Home Alone" once too often to come up with this?


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Review of Fishful Thinking  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
This limerick was both interesting and "fishy". It was very short which I felt was a bit of a downside, but it gave me a chuckle. I did enjoy the clever rhyming. You also got me on the last line. I thought for sure you would end with a "tasty dish", not "Give a Wish"!


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Review of Teachable  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Great item! I love learning Biblical ins & outs like this. I thought the points were expressed well, even if they were all over the place (biblical wise). Might I suggest a group collaboration to organize these by topic & book? We could dissect the whole Bible together!


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