I feel like I got sucked in with the character right away! The imagery was perfect reminding me of the better narrative games I've played including one in particular called "The NADI Project" or maybe "Song of the Sea". The only reason it's not a 5 is only because the character is ambiguous. I crave more!
It wasn't exceptional, but I enjoyed how you painted the picture of the perfact friend and partner, then ended with a few lines about what we as humans should do. The one issue I have is there must have been a better ryme than "put food in my toot-ey". I have questions about that sentence...
This was a senseless act of violance and hate, but we must remember for those whose blood was spilled. As tragic as this was, it only helped to stremgthen us. Not only were those who worked inside doing what they could to strengthen ties around the globe, or many of the first responders giving their lives selflessly for other's, but we found our true kindred spirits around the globe rallying for the good of freedom and right against the attempted reign of terror. While Americans mourned, the royal british guards gathered to sing our anthem. This is proof that our idea will never die. Despite being enemies when the Anthem was first written, our common bond of humanity unites us against all odds. We are to be thankful that even as the world crumbles, many of us still hold on to decency, to each other, and to God. May He bless all who hear and respond to the wrongs of the world with kindndss, compassion, and support. May this day of infamy also be the day of His infinite love.
Um... Kinda all over the map and I couldn't tell what the subject matter was. You start of with food, then describe the home, while throwing a couple of lines about memories and love. What's the connection?
It feels a bit plain. Water is a common theme so it's hard to rate it highly without something else. Perhaps use more lines to elaborate or use different synonyms to add a "lyrical redundancy." It's by no means bad though.
Good start, but you should continue with more polls or maybe use a survey for more detailed questions. Also, you dont have the choice "breast expansion", which suprises me. Lastly, you have "giantess" and "shrinking", but not "growing".
I only recognized two choices. This should really be explored in more detail as a survey. Especially the pokemon choice due to its multiple regions and stories.
This is exactly what I need! I don't have trouble setting goals, its motivating myself. Nice way to earn easy GP and improve myself! Here is some GP for such an awesome idea!
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