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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hmm. This was a very interesting read. Some parts felt a little off. For example, the prose was on a very serious note until the end when you used the phrase "see you later alligator". Also, the reference to the bible with "creator's love" being the only true love is incorrect. God also has a "maternal love", a "fatherly love", & many more.


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Review of Envelopes  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hmm. This was an interesting read. I liked how you chose the snail mail letter as your subject. It really is true that almost no one sends physical letters anymore and that is just a crying shame. After all, a hand written card means so much more than an email or text.


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Review of Change  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hmm. This was a very interesting read. Regret can indeed be a very powerful emotion. It can haunt you your whole life simply because you wish things could have been different, but you know that it never will. This can feel like a very fatal "Catch 22".


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Review of Silver in Streams  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hmm. This was very interesting and very beautiful. The subtle use of wording was very well done and provokes some strong emotions in the reader. Beauty can very well be deceiving in more ways than one. Of course, beauty is also in the eye of the beholder.


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Review of So young.  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hmm. This was a very interesting and very sad poem. War has truly been devastating to so many people in so many ways. It's especially hard hearing about how it affects those who don't even help support the war such as the very young. Why should they suffer for others greed & hate?


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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hmm. This was a very interesting item. I love the Christian appeal. It was very insightful about how we tend to think we know better than God & unintentionally try to manipulate him. Thank God we can't! He will always ensure that what we really need will happen.


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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hmm. This was a very interesting poem. It was short and sweet. I liked the simplicity of the rhyming. It was a perfect bite sized read that gave me a very satisfactory feeling when I finished. I enjoyed it very much. The title is confusing though with the extra stuff.


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Review of The Flower Girl  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hmm. This was a very interesting and an extremely well done short story. You had an excellent plot, a decent back-story, great detail, and a wonderful revenge ending. I suppose this is what they mean by "frienemies". This was just overall so well done.


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Review of Opposites  
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hmm. This was a very interesting type of poem.. I learned what a cinquain is, which I have not known about before. I have to say that I thought you were very clever with how you created this particular poem. I really enjoyed it and believe it is quite good.


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Review of Shirley Homes  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hmm. This was a very interesting story and it was rather humorous. However, I feel like there is a disconnect between the first and second half of the story. I cannot say exactly what, but the talk about the trash and what the kid is going to be when grown up did not seem to have much to do with the first half.


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Review of Little Boy Blues  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
That was a pretty funny twist at the end!


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Review of Sun  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hmm. This was both very interesting and very lovely! I really loved your haiku. Sunrise & sunset are both indeed very beautiful and very lovely. They made great subjects for your haiku. This particular haiku actually made more sense than any other I read too.


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Review of The Crossing  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hmm. This was both very interesting and very deep. Regardless, I actually understood it to some degree! I thought you did an awesome job with the prose and a great job on the word choice. This reminded me somewhat of a hybrid of something written by C.S. Lewis and J.K.R. Tolkein.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great idea for a raffle!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hmm. This was a very interesting read. You can really feel the torment, pain, and suffering of the main character. The nightmare was well done. So much so that you caught me off guard when you revealed that it was a dream. You were really detailed and it felt like I was really there.


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Review of Second Thoughts  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hmm. I thought this was both a very interesting and informative read. You gave a good background for context and you were both extremely detailed as well as very thorough. I think your writing would benefit by stating the second amendment at the very top of the item.


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Review of Somewhere Else  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hmm. This was an interesting read. Unfortunately, I have no idea what to make of any of it story wise. On the technical side, you had really great detail and I found no spelling or grammar issues. Some explanation as to how he got there & what is going on would be appreciated.


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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I thought this was a very interesting short story. It was definitely a horrifying scary thriller. There is one thing that doesn't make sense though. If Jonah sacrificed her to get his father back, then why is he still there? Also, this implies someone else went back when his pop was exchanged.


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Rated: E | (4.5)
This was a very interesting read. The prose and topic reminded me of the classic country I always listen to. I could swear I could hear a banjo and a cowboy/girl singing. This was totally made for a countrymom and I loved it. All it needs is someone jumping off a bridge (get the reference?).


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Review of See What It Is  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This was an interesting read and I love the topic choice! I found some of the rhyming iffy because it felt like you were forcing it. This caused some lines to just not "fit" in the poem very well. Other than that, you wrote a fine poem that caught my interest.


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Review of On Alice Chu...  
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Rated: E | (2.5)
Two things are going on here. First, I have no idea what is going on here or what this is supposed to be. I suspect a prompt is involved, but you need to clarify what that prompt is. Second, the use of the word "whore" makes this at least a "13+" rating, not an "E" rating.


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Review of JUDGING PEOPLE  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I found this to be an interesting read. There are quite a few spelling and grammatical errors that need to be corrected. In some ways I agree with you. Judging is just how our minds categorize others to try to predict risks. However, treating others based on judgments is not ok.


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Review of That book  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This was an interesting read. I also found it to be aptly timed because I just saw this earlier today as I'm doing the same challenge. I found it to be a bit sad as the book has been forgotten and abandoned. I can't think of many more sad things than a lonely, unread book.


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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hmm. This was a very interesting read. However, while some parts I get, others I do not. I get the, be careful what you wish for moral, but as for how it ended up happening, I'm afraid that it made the story feel underwhelming. Nothing personal you understand.


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Review of The Jabberwocky  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This was an interesting read and definitely a nonsense poem inspired by the Jabberwocky. I think there might have been one or two proper nouns that were not capitalized, such as "manderake", but I recognize I could be wrong due to the nonsensical nature of the poem.


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