From age 1 to age 95 we go through a lot of things. Good job with this poem. It's interesting to see how things change the older we grow. Looks like you chose living it up, but going older as you go down. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
Good poem. It describes a relationship that is separated by distance yet have a few brief moments together with each other. The speaker has moments of enjoyment with her. The memories are great. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
Great poem. Butterflies can have very colorful wings. The description of the butterfly going from flower to flower and drinking nectar is great. The process does pollinate the flowers along the way. I love the descriptions it give. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
Your poem shows expectations about the qualities of a man. A man you can count on because he is true to his words and have met high standards. It does answer the question very well. I see no spelling or grammar errors. Good job and keep up the good work!
This looks like a great area to help with the editing process. I see a variety of assignments available to follow. It might take me more than a month to complete all of the assignments in reality. My books are fairly long to keep track of all the points. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
It begins with Joan going out on her fifth date. The setting seems pretty real and believable. Good entrance to the story. I noticed the perspective switched to Seto in Chapter 2. It shows his arrogance with his interaction to others. I wouldn't have guessed what kind of deal would be made. The dress hunting seemed to be a good part of the story. The flow from one chapter to the next worked out very well with the events leading up from when the deal was made. Polyamory is revealed quite well through the chapters.
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Chapter 4: "See? That's the attitude you need to keep a cool head in Seto's bed. Should have " after bed.
Overall Opinion: Good beginning and keeping the events in chronological order. I think the events matched up very well, flowing smoothly at a good pace. It's coming across pretty well for me. Good job and keep up the good work!
Content: Good beginning, where the boy Georgie looked for something to spend his quarter on and just happened to run across a mysterious machine. Then, in the last, he was able to fly on the back of the dragon.
Spelling/Grammar: No spelling or grammar errors found.
Overall Opinion: Great story, I enjoyed reading this. Good job and keep up the good work!
Great poem going with a story about the Alpha Lights landing on Earth. The Alpha Lights really has had a hard time with the people after they made their landing. I wouldn't have guessed that yogurt would be a break through. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
Good quiz. I had fun taking it. First attempt gave me a little over 50%, not bad at all for my first try. I did not see any errors made. Overall it is accurate and to the right answer as far as I know. Thank you for making this little quiz. Keep up the good work!
Comments: This poem feels like I am there, describing the moment of when it rains.
Content: A woman standing around waiting for the rain to come down. This poem is unique and interesting. It catches my attention. Starts out with before the rain comes and ends with after the rain comes.
Spelling/Grammar: No spelling or grammar errors found.
Overall Opinion: Great job writing this poem. I think the details are vivid. Keep up the great work!
The land of make believe sounds like a wonderful place to be. The adventures sounds like something anyone could dream about. This is a well thought out poem. Great job with the description and details. It paints a vivid picture.
No grammar or spelling errors found.
I enjoyed reading this poem. Thank you for sharing it.
This is an awesome group that will review anything that comes around and so many participants too! Hmm I am not very active in terms of reviewing right now but will join when I can. This is very neat and organized- with a set date for reviewing and other activities shown. Keep up the good work! :-d
Overall Opinion: This is a wonderful detailed information about writing free-verse poetry. The question and answer kind of setting really makes the information stand out and makes everything clear. I never thought about having a prose be turned into a poem. LOL Keep up the great work!
Overall Opinion: This is a great simple poem about awareness. It shows how a poet wants to use awareness whenever they write a poem. All the lines does achieve unity. I don't see any mistakes here. Keep up the great work!
Opinions: This is a spooky story. A promise of something that never did existed caused a person to die with false hopes. It is bad to start a wildfire as is. Good descriptive words to bring up images of the horror~ Keep on writing!
Opinions: This poetry made me laugh~ especially the first stanza. Great use with the language and voice~ it really shows through. There is a sense of confusion and frustration about what's going on. I can even picture it. Great job and keep on writing!
Overall Opinions: This is a very cute angelic poem. I enjoy seeing the picture as well as reading it. It is quite a twist to imagine angel wings being made up of scales. Great job with the flow. I don't see any mistakes. Keep up the good work!
This series sounds great so far. I know I am reading the summaries even though I haven't read the inteeractive. Looks like the worlds are thoruugh and Zena had a lot of trouble just to be able to survive. Planet Animalus would be great to live on. Hmmm... All I can say is- get the books published! :-d Keep up the great work!
Overall Opinions:This is a great poem. In the first stanza it describes the lonliness felt and how life seemed empty. Then, in the second stanza, there is a change leading into the third stanza, where the woman gives the pure joy and happiness the person longed to have. I always love to see happy endings- and this poem express happy feelings in the end. ^_^ I do not have anything to suggest to change. It is good as is. Keep on writing!
Overall Opinions: This poem can be related to troubles we have in life as well as just the friends we have. I can see where it can be both. I would say the two lines "Where are those days by the river? Where are those nights in the park?" I would not change anything. Keep on writing!
Overall Comments: Instead of the jungle it's the tiger, almost like a lullaby type of song- what you would sing to a small child just before they go to sleep. I enjoyed reading this! Too bad I couldn't sing it out loud- not that I'd stay on key anyway. Keep up the good work!