Excellent work here. There is a lot going on in just those few chapters of Proverbs related to women. It goes without saying and many of them can be applied to me as well. Do I allow the wicked ways interfere with my life or can I learn from them and do the right things? It's hard to do when religions of both parents is conflicting one another.
Keep up with the consistency of labeling the versus. Now that there is free time you can fine tune with the consistency. Great organization on how it is neatly organized and listed with thoughts addressing the verse beneath. Maybe you could italicize the proverb verse that the thoughts are addressing them too to help make it stand out better.
This is a good study book for future reference in case anyone wants to look into proverbs and ask themselves what it would mean to live a life as a good woman. Back in that time they were expected to become wives with many children, but there are some things that could still apply to those who are single too.
Great details. There may have been spelling or grammar errors but I didn't record them. I mainly focused on the content. Way to pull off a nonfiction novel on time and keep up the great work!
This is a very fun image of dancing in the rain dressed up as cute yellow duckies. I smiled as I read this poem. I see the pattern of Gwawdodyn form followed perfectly too. The lines run smoothly from one end to the next. I have more than one favorite line of this poem, but I'll choose "imparting tons of sunshine to our hearts,". It shows what a day it turns rain into. Good job and keep up the good work!
Good start. Now, think of some topics you would like to cover in this forum. Heat lovers versus cold lovers could be one that I could think of. Very rarely could anyone afford to live in the 80s year round temperature. Nebraska is a mix for example. Having both. Alaska gets freezing and Hawaii is tropical. There are different countries to think about too. I love your quotes and hope they stay. It fits you so well. Just hope to help you out. Good job and keep up the great work!
This is interesting and horrific at the same time with the storm hitting and growing worse to the roof leaking and caving in to pressure while the hurricane raged on. I might have been like your sister. Thankfully, everybody was safe and sound even when things got lost. Good job and keep up the good work!
Roses have thorns or thorns have roses? Good question.
The prompt is followed and the poem is nice and short, straight to the point. Either perspective can be seen, but I like the second perspective. Amongst trouble there is a glimmer of hope. I love the details and it ties in so well with the prompt. Beautiful job. The poem ends open ended, giving the reader to choose which perspective they can take on. It strengthens the two point of views nicely. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
Could be a nemesis from an unknown past. Since she's a crime fighter, then there might be some enemies or an exboyfriend out to take revenge. This could lead up to an interesting story. You got the beginning. Now, you need her past and a middle, climax, and ending. The reporter would be a suspect as well. Keep on writing it down and maybe the story would come to you. I'm cheering you on! (The rookie might be one month into the job or six months into the job I don't know.) No spelling or grammar checks on. (Yes, this is a working idea, not a story or poem to judge. Lol) Some names you could have as well if it isn't a fanfiction: Violet, Ruby, Diamond, Pearl, Silver, Gold, Bronze, Copper, and Platinum to name a few. Yes, these are just fillers until you come up with better names.
This poem expresses Halloween as a clever acrostic. It introduces candy in the first line, costumes in the second line, and then activities that goes on during Halloween night with decorations (pumpkins) and more. Very fitting. I love the use of the orange to highlight the word Halloween going down. The use of imagery is strong and vivid. I can imagine what is going on with each line. In the end they do sleep it off. All that sugar wears out and they crash. I can imagine every Halloween night being like this except for 2020. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
A nightmare at the Halloween party finished happily with kids at home for the dad. Also, good poem to start out with. The details are just right. I imagine dad to be a zombie and his wife to be a vampire. Too bad they didn't fit in the Halloween party or it would have been a blast. Still, he got to enjoy his kids at home with a protective wife. The poem fits well, describing what to anticipate reading. The living-dead mixes and mingles with humans for a night. And the family is happy together at home. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the great work!
Great poem! It starts out with a yearning to be together but stuck at a long distance to ending with a joyful reunion and a desire to never be apart again. That is well said with seeing how I've been away from my friend for a while. When we're together again it's always been a joy. This poem could be personal experience. It could be Family too. (A third genre. Your genre picks are good.) No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
Looks like this activity is active and doing great! The prompts look very interesting and fun to read. Now I wonder where the link of the activity is. No spelling or grammar errors found. I would have picked on round 6 to write a story about personally. Sounds crazy fun. Good luck with the next round!
Halloween nears and Halloween Handles appear! This is a perfect opportunity to celebrate in the Witch's Garden. All those spooky handles are of some use. The appearance is easy to read and follow. The contest rules are clear. All you need to do is nominate a Halloween handle. No spelling or grammar errors found.
My favorite part is the nomination. I think 2 times a day wouldn't hurt anymore. The more nominations, the better it is. I love the images and use of emoticons the most. I think that makes this contest stand out. The list looks good too and well kept up to date. Keep on at it! Good job.
This sounds like you write out of experience. It is very deep and personal about your first experience in getting diagnosed breast cancer. It's a good thing you didn't need chemotherapy. What a long process. That would drive me crazy too. The tests alone sounds exhausting. Your details are perfect. The voice and action kept my interest. No spelling or grammar errors found. I personally never had a mammogram. Too young. But I get the idea that this process is done all the time if abnormality shows. Good job and keep up the good work!
Mint serves a lot of things. In this case, it's relaxing and being mindful. I totally agree with you. You followed the prompt well. The poem is free verse which works great. It describes the meditation perfectly without too much detail. No spelling or grammar errors found. I feel like mint does the same thing for me too. I like the description "Mint is the color of early spring.", but all of it is excellent. Good job and keep up the good work!
10 minutes twice! Great puzzles with actions and feelings involved in them. It is quite a frenzy and you know the last shopping deal. Cyber Monday is a great way to spend all of your hard earned money. So, putting that aside. Thanksgiving and Halloween are the major holidays coming up and you included it quite well. Thank you for this piece of action! HH as in Happy Holidays with big spending involved. (Handle = Happy Halloween) Good job and keep up the good work! Don't eat too much candy now, you hear?
The perspective is unique and draws the reader in. I know using I and you language can be jarring together, but this is meant for a certain someone who died and is missed and loved very much. So the you sentences is appropriate. There is much going on with the confessions being made and a promise to visit. Although every day might not be realistic, the idea is achieved to go and visit. Great details and apology. Things that happened in the past can't be changed but the future changes. One right step to move forward is with a visit.
No spelling or grammar errors found. The genre is perfect.
Good work on this flash fiction and keep up the good work!
Good article about Al. Al raises questions about the future- like will authors and writers be replaced by Al writings with the big companies? I doubt that. It takes great writing and even then not all great writing is noticed. There are benefits for some companies to use them. I wouldn't encourage it for school though. It would feel like cheating that way. No grammar or spelling errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
Great work! Though it fits the prompt it lacks creature characteristics for the contest. The beginning of school is a tough thing to face and the speaker is afraid of being invisible to the teachers. The feelings are genuine and concerned. No spelling or grammar errors found. Keep up the good work!
Excellent poem and what a unique way to introduce the watch. That place sounds great to go to and meet all of those creatures too. It looks like the form is followed. It's a happy discovery right before school. I imagine they would want to do it again. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the great work!
Good mystery with the beginning of school right around the corner. The characters is believable with only focused on Aliz. She wasn't sure if she would like the school until she met Marishka. Both of them were vampires. Great hints of features they had along the way! Good job and keep up the good work!
Great details and sounds like you experienced this. It must've been hard be at your first boot camp. I don't intend to join. The excitement could be felt and dimish quickly. There is a solid plot through out it all. Just like running out of gas. The pressure builds up. Good job and keep up the good work!
Great work with the details and using the familiar poem Twas the Night Before Christmas. Interesting story about the tiny intruder- a mouse. The dogs sure had an adventure and RIP goes to those ornaments. The poem fits the prompt nicely. I don't think it has to rhyme. Only that the words flow smoothly when read out loud. I love this style. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
Tough one. I think it is plausible. As far as I could tell the terms is used correctly and the protagonist will be in a tough situation. Security will be on high alert.
I do see a crime going on since I think the pump and dump is used without consent. There will be a conflict of interest for doing what would be better. The protagonist will have to lie to avoid being caught and the company may take notice eventually.
Well set up. Now it needs a beginning, middle, and end and you can start writing. The words are unfamiliar but I think I got the idea. No spelling or grammar errors found. Hope your plot is an inspiration.
The flow is smooth in free verse form. The poem starts with the question and then answers it nicely. I love the description of the answer it gives. All of these qualities define a good person. This will cheer your friend up.
I can't think of any suggestions. It looks like you covered everything. Well done.
The main character is a good Samaritan despite being there to rob an apartment. Calling the police to help a lady in need in the middle of doing a crime. The other person had sense to avoid jail. Fits the prompt perfectly. I am curious about what happens next but that might go over the word limit. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work.
In just a few short words, this poem speaks a lot. The dragon and rider works hard through the thunderstorm to become the champ before going back to the dragon camp. It does also follow the Terzanelle pattern perfectly. The dragon camp must be filled with dragons and riders alike even if the poem didn't say but gave hints of the camp being alive. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work.
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