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Review of All For Her  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In a moment in time
with some rhyme,
all for her now
feel her love.

Keep her safe
on that new day,
by the good Lord
fighting for freedom.

Sending her prayers
to find him alive,
keep him safe
from dying.

Going home
in his memory,
by StarvingArtist
our fine poet of note.

Simply Positive Review.

 All For Her  (13+)
A poem not only in honor of our troops, but for the women who support them.
#2022928 by StarvingArtist





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Review of This Time  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time
sorrow is forbidden,
I’ve locked you in
reaching for me.

Newness created
there in happiness,
from our memories
I still had so long ago.

My searched for you
in so many years,
why will you stay
for this time?

By our Cindy
dear poet of note,
reviewed by embe
heart filled with peace.

Simply Positive Review.

 This Time  (E)
From pain to realization to a new beginning, a heart filled with peace.
#2022400 by Cyndi



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Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)

In that moment in time
I am the shine in the ink,
the world is full of colors
my life of silver is unique.

In songs of dancing chimes
will shine the brighter colors,
layers that they show proudly
as they gain their lovely sheen.

I am this new gift that is prized
sparkling so brighter in the light,
by our poet of note, aundria _ k
reviewed lovely by embe here.

Rising Star Review.
STATIC
The Life of Silver  (E)
How would you describe the color of your life and do you know your place in the rainbow?
#1907905 by Angels in my Ear


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Review of Summer Nights  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time
on my summer nights,
we watch the lights
as sun goes down.

Seeing the moon
drifting fading away,
night lasts a lifetime
and ends all too soon.

The magic is still there
tasting the salty air,
ends all too soon
in our hearts.

This scenery
within our minds,
heighten our senses
in a memorable potion.

By our poet of note
dear darling Elizabeth,
reviewed lovely by embe.
My Simply Positive Review.

 Summer Nights  (E)
the magic of summer
#1945460 by Elizabeth


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Review of Life  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
In this moment in time
to treasure everyday,
love your tomorrow
death is inevitable.

Face life as it is
it isn't an excuse,
when running away
suffering with this life.

If you hit rock bottom
death is expected,
you may hate it
to escape.

Reviewed
by embe today,
for our poet of note
dearest duskymeadow.

Simply Positive Review.
 Life   (ASR)
it's about a short writing about life ^^
#1801852 by duskymeadow





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Review of Breath  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Within this moment in time
every breath you take,
so shall I write
with a tear.

Crying why
in my emotions,
that I feel this day
you are my strength.

No matter my hope
to love you now,
in this review
by embe.

For Arlene
our fine poet,
with my regards.
Simply Positive Review.

 Breath  (E)
Emotional distance
#2022885 by arlene


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Review of "A Man Among Men"  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In a moment in time of love
dad was a poor man in prayer,
to his friends and many strangers
with love and care from his heart,
teaching me these lessons.

When we needed any help
he was this man among men.
he would speak in loving words
although his back was weak,
he would never shed a tear.

Reviewed by embe for Kings.
Tazzy our fine poet of note.

Simply Positive Review.
STATIC
"A Man Among Men"  (E)
The respect and honor gained to have been my father's son.
#322003 by Kings





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Review of Marshall Road  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In a moment in time to remember
seeing dad tending to moms roses,
a rainbow appeared out of nowhere
settling there at the bottom of our hill.

The happy days we played in the attic
while mom was fixing an apple pie,
as the stranger arrived that day
greeting her with his smile.

My dad opened the box
there it was in his hands,
his dog tags that were lost
by our dear poet Yellow Rose.

embe with my memories,
the kindness of my dear friend
always gifting so many members.

Simply Positive Review.
STATIC
Marshall Road  (E)
tribute to our Vets free verse
#2014741 by Yellow Rose





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Review of Winter Wishing  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment in time
these wishes of a girl,
with tears in her eyes
drumming in her head.

Grasping for the light
that will never come,
keeps me from sleep
in this map of scars.

My heart beats out
as I cannot breathe,
cold like a corpse
stuck living alone.

Reviewed by embe
for our poet of note,
dear flowerchildish
with this suggestion.

The lines of your poem
should be separated,
similar to my review
for this my star rating.

Simply Positive Review.
 Winter Wishing  (E)
The wishes of a girl with no hope.
#2021899 by C. J. Hajek





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Review of Brain Damage  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time
forgotten and irretrievable,
the wounded soul must grieve
for healing to find a way back in.

Relations now rendered and hurt
darkness shrouds in the mind,
my trip down memory lane
from the eyes behind.

By our poet of note
in this review by embe
for lovely Michelle Nelson.
My Simply Positive Review.

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Review of Freedom  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment in time in nature
let the birds sing and fly
high in the blue sky.

But I never saw them play
in the lonely forest
being caged.

Complaining all together
under suffocation
dying lonely.

So sad this kind review
for our poet of note,
nature_perfect.

By embe your friend.
Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Become the Giant  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
the candle burns brightly,
until all comes to shelter
but never ever to meddle.

Let love teach the way
with guidance to hope,
out of this blindness
there we can rejoice,

in our own seclusion
bring us a new song,
by our poet of note
reviewed by embe.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
When in time of need
you need to pray today,
that God may save you
choosing to be this way.

The born again Christian
by our dearest ShelleyA,

God believes I’m worth it
I’m not bragging of success,
I’m admitting that I’ve failed
and cannot ever pay the debt.

Reviewed lovely by embe,
you dearest friend for life.

Rising Star Review.
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Review of The Terrible Gift  
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
In this sad moment in time
reflecting on breast cancer,
to break my very existence
I want to run away and hide.

It was that unwanted gift
from my mother’s mother,
by our dear poet of note
GeminiGem why me?

Reviewed by embe
with my sympathy,
may God bless you.

Rising Star Review.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In that sad moment in time
little girl you didn’t go home,
you have no clothes to wear
and you’re out there all alone.

There where embe found you
in the darkness of the night,
the teenager running away
now our fine darling poet.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Fleeting  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time
through the void of space,
the distance of my thoughts
galaxies spin uncontrollably.

where planets turn in orbits
here we are, specks of dust,
upon the blue green rocks
an instant in a vast ocean.

Reviewed for our Turtle
in maps of inner beings,
where embe is found
for our poet of note.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of In Her Memory  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)

In this moment in time the tears we shed
knowing you did not pass this world alone,

you will always be there in our memories
smelling your scent in the air every time,

with guests at a table filled to the brim
reviewed by embe for our poet of note.

My deepest sympathy for dear Webwitch,
may God bless you in health and happiness.
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Review of The Bubble  
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In a moment in time inside my bubble,
I yearn to do these many things
to live and love and play.

But today I waste away
sitting in my chair,
bickering still.

My life not worth it
lost in this neighbourhood,
pretending my life is complete.

Reviewed for our poet of note
by embe for JimBoB-for-Apples,
in this my sad Rising Star Review.

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Review of Passing Time  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a long moment in time
a dream never lived again,
as days past tension raise
sadness turns to silence,
for embe with this review.

Forgiveness now asked
from our poet of note.
Envi where are you,
maybe a new poem
a dream we can share.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Our Lady's Tears  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In a sad moment in time
every May from the tears
these flowers grow again,

from the Prince of Peace
cleansing us brand new
so we would rise again.

From these worldly sins
in the lily of the valley
white bells display,

for a poet of note
lovely Yellow Rose
kneeling in a prayer.

Simply positive review
by embe your dear friend.
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Review of Lyrics: Mommy  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment in time
Mommy, don't you cry,
the angels are with you
in heaven with memories.

Dancing with the angels
spinning on the clouds,
I will love you there
for all you've done.

Reviewed lovely
for our poet of note,
by embe with thanks.
Simply Positive Review.
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Review of TENDER HEART  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
In a sad moment in time to cry
my fragile soul seeks eternal rest,
the years together we were blessed
with fine memories of our golden days.

Words etched on these granite stones
yet I must go on living day after day,
my emotions firmly in their place
by our dearest Countrymom.

Reviewed lovely by embe.
Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Loving  
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In a moment in time
opened your heart
when I was lonely,
you came to me
for me to abide.
just as I am.

Loving you
God will abide
no need to cry,
just as you are
your skin is dark
my dearest darling.

By our poet of note
rising star member
reviewed by embe,
for Edwin Phillips
welcome home
my dear friend.

Rising Star Review
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Review of Heaven's "Tears"  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time
dear drifter getting it right,
in heavenly tears of wounds
celebrating in God's open arms

Adoration with no more doubts
hallelujah comes the lamb,
with a healing balm
amazing grace.

By embe here
your friend for life,
may God bless you
no more tears to cry why.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time
a shadow jealous of life,
longing to take my place
when illness strikes me.

Then look in the mirror
living now in my mind,
to wilt and fade away
with childhood dreams.

When all I have done
is to follow her success,
for our dear Aundria-k
by embe in my review.

Simply Positive Review.
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