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Review of Jesus Called me  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
When Jesus called me, Kings answered are you a Christian?
I sat in my room crying in a state of fear and pity please,
the burdens of life were hard for me to bare then
praying on my knees remove my burdens.

Yes! Each day at a time in daily prayers
my eyes seeing his glory on the cross,
no more tears here in our church
listening to our preacher.

May embe pray my thanks,
in this Simply Positive Review.

 
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 Jesus Called me  (E)
Jesus Christ called for me to come to Him that night.
#149386 by Kings



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Review of My Old Pal  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
We were young those days in this moment in time
when I left the house you wanted to go and play,
roaming around through the secluded hills
when you were a young healthy pup.

But my pal will always be beside me
running, jumping always being this funny,
but our love was sad when you were so sick
by your Kings who cried tears at your tiny grave,

Reviewed emotionally my simply positive review,
by embe who loves all the animals on this earth.

 
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My Old Pal  (E)
When we were young my old pal we had much fun running and jumping.
#1678614 by Kings




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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In that moment in time about that southern pest vine
it remains a particularly odious plague so noxious,
everyone knows it's that very the deep south
as this cursed nuisance called ...Kudzu.

With spring, the dormant vines resume
some folks can even eat deep-fried leaves,
that are good if included making bales of hay
by our most wonderful poet of note, being Harry.

But not embe who has never been the farmer
with herbicides tried now failed to control,
my scenery - Simply Positive Review.

 The Vine That Swallowed The South  (E)
An informative poem about that southern pest vine.
#851374 by Harry



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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time long ago in the isle of Ahr'kanis
guarded by the mighty one, a legendary beastly beast,
slain a many a men, with so much as never a speech
there bellow shook the corridors below the suns gaze.

The surface erupted violently for mountains that tremor
the embodiment of power materialized a physical form,
as foretold in stories when the mountain beast awakes.
a fine poet of note being our lovely Northward Daughter.

Reviewed by embe there - Simply Positive Review.

 The isle of Ahr'kanis  (E)
A short poem dedicated to a great serpent beast.
#2034458 by Shells





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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this most sad moment in time
taking back a life from slavery,
how would you feel all alone
strapped in that incubator.

I have multiple disabilities
using a power wheelchair,
because I was premature
in this review by embe.

For the writer of note
our suffering dogpac,
what are your needs
embe to pray for you.

 TAKING BACK MY LIFE  (E)
Recent events from slavery to freedom. On being a good and faithful steward according to-
#2035290 by dogpack:saving 4 premium: DWG


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
In this wonderful moment in time
I walked the streets of Dingle,
with my lovely poet hooves
and her handsome cat.

In the streets of Dublin,
shopping at the chemist,
in these long Decembers
reading her fabulous poem.

Reviewed lovely by embe,
your kind words in reviews
my lasting friendship for you.
This Simply Positive Review.

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♥Streets of Dingle♥  (E)
♥we walked in Ireland♥
#1979965 by ♥Hooves♥


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In this moment in time shadows and prisms
just let my fingers type and be discovered,
this my story about a boy's first glimpse
sitting in these fields of my tall grass.

Focused only on each other's faces
so tender in that loving embrace,
Aaron startled out of this stare
as they both looked back.

Seeing poet DM Carroll
the writer of this fine poem,
being reviewed lovely by embe
this simply positive review today.

 
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Shadows and prisms  (E)
Just let my fingers type and discovered a story about a boy's first glimpse of a dragon.
#2035178 by DMCarroll


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Review of Create in Me  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time to create me
here by my name is Shirley Hampton,
to do your blessed will shake me there
with every thought and hold me in vision.

I have this passion for reaching out now
bridge cultivate the beast of success,
every day the impossible dreams
there in the heaven earthen clay.

By our fine poet of note ShallB
reviewed by embe so lovely,
in these wonderful words.
Simply Positive Review.

 Create in Me  (E)
This poem describes how humans were created by the Creator in his likeness.
#2035285 by ShallB






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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time I'm not a poet I try
for embe to review thirty one years ago,
now we are in the present page
for Elle Maeson Hughes.

Thirty one years ago in time
that existence greeted her there,
but then in love was meant for one,
by the woman that conceived her birth.

But if I leave it there to hide this face
existence with grace is always mine ,
the life I leave there to hide away
for embe to review this scene,

Simply Positive Review.

 Thirty One Years Ago  (E)
Well, it's a shot at poetry. I'm not a poet, but I try.
#2035292 by Elle Maeson Hughes





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Review of The Acrostic  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time true love never dies
in the acrostic with seventeen lovely lines,
the uttering bards think only of harmony
time after time deceit comes alluring.

Spiritually cosmic there now asleep
defiled and lost finally we see the future,
embraced by the marl, we are finally home,
spiritually cosmic asleep in the loam of time

By our fine poet of note xreen in an acrostic
reviewed lovely by embe in this scenery,
my simply positive review for you.

 The Acrostic  (E)
The Acrostic - Poem written by my dad.
#2035143 by xreen


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Review of Missing skin  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time the missing skin
deep inside my chest and within rest
I want to touch and feel your grace
to love now and much longer.

Thoughts when once united
though these happy heart beats,
touching my own and your smiles
never again to part in souls sorrow.

By our fine poet Sonny Monteiro
reviewed so lovely by embe,
in this scenery here below -
Simply Positive Review.


 Missing skin  (E)
I got dumped. That's it.
#2034962 by Sonny Monteiro






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Review of Never, And Again  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In this moment in time
never and again a secret,
again and again from a wife
beamed the concern vanished.

There in a dark black garden,
he slipped out at that gate,
wondering why vanished
he agreed once more.

She teased playfully
he stood in the kitchen,
wondered where will I be
celebrating thoughts away.

By our fine writer of note
reviewed by embe now,
in this scenery here
bricksandsparrows.


 Never, And Again  (13+)
A man keeps a secret from his wife, again and again.
#2029429 by James Heyward





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Review of Seeing The Dirt  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In this moment in time seeing the dirt
I try those things I have done before,
hiding my spirit in God, then what
in the room in an empty house.

Opening windows and doors
rooms dusty in a memory,
the walls listing now
to these chairs.

A wooden floor
there with my candle,
windows in a space of mine
waiting for a gift from almighty.

By our seasoned writer of note
reviewed by embe wonderful,
my simple positive review
for dear Whiskerface.

 Seeing The Dirt  (13+)
waking up to my surroundings
#2035080 by Whiskerfacebythefireplace





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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
In this moment in time a smooth band of gold
she shook her head; tears made her eyes sting,
our love carried us times our luck hit these skids
you know that old ring had an inscription now lost.

found carried these old times our luck hit the skids
of how now our love endured tho tested and tried,
although the core remained intact and still strong
through the years we raised crops and our kids.

By our fine poet of note reviewed by embe
lovely this scenery simply positive review,
a rhyming poem about a wedding band.
A Smooth Band Of Gold  (ASR)
A rhyming storoem about a wedding band.
#1526035 by Harry






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Review of 0-211  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In this moment in time ninety-six percent of the land is rural
but there in the city television only shows you the stardom,
for the general merchandise is borderline profit today
our biased media will have you believing still.

If that isn't so couldn't it possibly be true
the welfare isn't fair justice isn't just,
I've got no time to talk right now
by our fine poet, Fivesixer.

Reviewed lovely by embe.
Simply Positive Review.

 0-211  (13+)
1/08 Maybe there really is something wrong with society and normalcy.
#1374997 by Fivesixer



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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment in time two poets for another work
the years now lost found recently for a friend,
nothing matters close to the one you love
be they black or white maybe female.

Always in thought the same as you
to thing that you notice this your lover,
hiding away with a cuddle for sweet kisses
late at night singing those sexy songs of love.

By our famous poets being reviewed by embe,
in this scenery - BcInally & Anne Narke,
or maybe - scarlett_raven -
Simply Positive Review.

 Eternal By B McInally & Anne Narky  (E)
Another old work. Lost for years found recently. It was given its title by a friend
#1849970 by scarlett_raven






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Review of Wink and a hug  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
In a moment in time easy there matey,
don't you worry if you are married,
disappointment over my face
to say where to there.

Don't let me keep you
sealed with a handshake,
at that my upcoming meeting.
important business to attend to.

Delicate flowers for my love
you are so good to me in bed,
O boy that was something else
it collapsed when you kissed me.

By our fine writer of note - Smee
reviewed by embe in the scene,
my simply positive review
for a wink and a hug.

 
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Wink and a hug  (13+)
Prompt : A world where money doesn't exist and people pay with social contact.
#2034924 by Smee



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Review of Space Holder  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
In a moment in time today
we see the space holder,
in our story master
five hundred,
and eighty
eight.

Sorry
old chap,
this is nothing
in item 99,999,
for embe to review
being created so lovely.

Sentimental, I guess
why do I keep forever,
it's my childhood dreams
begging to be a lovely poet,
reviewing my dear StoryMaster
posting these sparkling five stars.

Simply Positive Review for you.
 Space Holder  (ASR)
Nothing but a space holder.
#99999 by The StoryMaster

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Review of Hunger  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hunger in a moment in time
he fills his rumbling stomach,
chewing at his mind to dine
it feels the dreadful agony.

With two starving souls
it would mean a full belly,
developed this sickness
there to whither away.

Starvation in his mind
with souls sorrow now,
repulsive to his eye
that cannot fill the void.

By our Justine Ashford
the poet of note today,
for embe to review here
Simply Positive Review.

 Hunger  (E)
A poem I wrote for my creative writing class.
#2034842 by Justine Ashford





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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment for 7/27/11 Newsletter
this fine editor's pick of the week,
for a flash story must contain
the truck steal and hair.

Look at me guys now
wading down to the lake,
to attach the broken cable
you didn't put on the brake.

For embe confused in time
now they stole that truck,
I need it for saying yes -
Simply Positive Review.

 Fish Tails (1st Place)  (E)
Harry finally caught the big one... Now if they could only find their truck. Editor Pick
#1775515 by BScholl



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Review of Night and day  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
being night and day,
now in darkness
under the sky,

Werewolves
eating their preys,
of bloody corpses
in their black magic,

Ghouls came out
for eating their flesh,
from diseased corpses
a wicked witched potion.

By our fine writer - Ashle
reviewed so scary by embe,
with my Simply Positive Review.
 Night and day  (E)
The light beats always the darkness...
#2034560 by Ashle1
Just in time today.


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Review of The Muse Says  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment in time to tell the truth
my muse says I turned on the lights,
but just in a flicker there in the night
under the veil of a poem after you.

In this uncharitable darkness
sifting through your sorrows,
stumble into storage rooms
in the dead air of the night.

Where stars dive into time
there in the curl of the moon,
finding our famous writer - Joy.
reviewed by embe in the scene.

This my simply positive review.
 The Muse Says  (E)
Turning on the lights but just a flicker -- for Slam
#819352 by Joy


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Making tortilla soup in this moment in time
in this scene so sweet for his little sister,
Junior just threw babies' shoes outside
hitting her so hard who now turned blue.

Such an idea should have it's galleria
loudly screaming like the diva queen,
big bro has showed he's no John Doe
he warned her of woe, quid pro quo.

By our fine poet of note Rhychus
just for a laugh in the crazy scene,
for embe to review so lovely here
my simply positive review for you.

 
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Making Tortilla Soup  (E)
Such an idea should have it's own galleria.
#2034694 by Rhychus



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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
In this lengthy moment in time
eighty six fascinating lines,
moving through now
once for you.

By Keaton
or maybe Foster,
this new begining
so lovely on this page.

Poignant from a man
within your mind
clearly there
brand new.

A new day
better than ever,
reviewed by embe
Simply Positive Review.

 Moving Through You  (18+)
18+ A dark poem about a man who does what his faith and life finally drives him to do.
#1978940 by Keaton Foster: Know My Hell!




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Review of Blood Red Roses  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
In this moment in time
the thirteen starting lines
with red and black words,
conveying in five lines
then red staring at me.

Now only three I see
red petals scattered,
evidence now denied.

Red a shag carpet
rumors forbidden
in stolen kisses,
someone else
I cannot lie.

It must be now
the poet of note
reviewed by embe,
our Prosperous Snow
Simply Positive Review.

 Blood Red Roses  (18+)
Acrostic Created for Every Week Something New Contest.
#979018 by Prosperous Snow celebrating
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