I feel that religion isnt something that a site about writing should really try to explain... I mean the one thing we all have in common is .... We are all different!!!
And this is true about our beliefs... The only problem is when religion is crammed down some cultures throat causing many of them to die because they dont believe like the ruling party...
Take for example the "********" church killed many natives of this land we call America for nonconformity or even being punished because we chose to use our own language and not the language that this church commanded be the only language to be tolerated...
Killing in the name of God is a scary thing... It makes the killer comfortable with what acts he has committed.
Sorry I will now get off the soap box and return to my teepee... lol
Your friend John
I am glad you took the time to sit down and help us figure out different ways to help others here!!!
I mean that is what this should be about... Each of us helping the other to write, convey, and/or describe the topic/subject in a manner that is well presented for others to understand or relate to!
I think the concept here is a positive way to get everyone here more exposure and experience by reading how others depict and describe certain thoughts or events!!!
I used to just R&R once in a while but I have found that by reading many others it seems to broaden and extend variety into our everyday lives!!!
What an excellent testamony to one that seems to be deserving of this esteemed position!!!
Well written and heartfelt are the words that come to mind as I review this wonderful piece!!
I have written about my father and I plan to write about my mother too!!
especially now that I see how it feels to read about another's mother and how it affects your life!!
I enjoy the metaphores you incorporate here!!!
I feel it really adds to the descriptive process showing others rather than telling them of the topic of your choice!!
The subject involved seems rather sinister but yet somehow you define it in a way that doesnt seem contrived!!
I can totally relate to what you say here and say with style I might add
I have recently had many anon reviews... Its almost like they are hiding behind the shadows afraid to show their face because they want to nit-pic whether a comma or a semi-colon belongs some place... Sometimes I think there are those that choose to find fault to make themselves and their ego so large they cant be touched...
I write like you to send out a message and not to see if I can get away with some little insignificant rule of language...
I have had some totally rewrite my message almost to the point to where it no longer says what I was trying to convey and there are other times what they suggest is very reasonable and worth editing my post for.
I have a few suggestions but like I said I dont want to change the whole just maybe modify this in a few places...
don't fit your mould, I think mold is what your shooting for here...
Atleast this comes off looking like one word in the post.
I commend you for your writing efforts!!!
To all those who choose to use the new writer as a rung on the ladder to step on to achieve a higher position in their own eyes I detest you.
I found this in the reviewing pages
This goes along way to helping us understand certain fundimentals of the English language and I applaud the writing and effort involved in this write!!!
This will be an eye opening subject for those dullards such as myself!
Outstanding
I dont know how to put this but
Thank you for the merit badge!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I have gotten a few here but this one means so much to me!!!
It means I am a part of this positive community and for letting me know this it means the world to me
Your friend John
I think many of us here at writing.com have been suckered into this scam to one point or another...
I myself asked some here (as I was already here when I seen the popup and entered the "contest") about it and they sent me links to hear about how others felt about this operation. Quickly I came to the conclusion that unfortunately they are Corporate America... Just chasing after the grand dollar sign as we chase our dreams...
So this is the truth as I see it... Presentation is 95% of sales. If you can paint a pig then have a good salesman take it to a mall he can sell it as a live piggy bank.
This kinda conjured up a beatle song before I got to that part of your poem... I thinks its off the Let it Be album. You wrote a very interesting read... It makes one think and ponder.
I am glad to be in your port I really need to read uplifting words from time to time to realise there is hope...for to lose sight of this is travesty to us and others.
You emotion in the simple words written says so much about who you are and what a positive you are to this and any other community that you are involved with!
Keep on writing and I'll keep on reading!
Your friend John
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