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Review of Hotly Scored  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (4.5)
You have spoke volumes with this simple poem!!!

You are a true poet and my hat is off to you !!!


Its those like yourself that keep me comeing back to see if you have added to your port!!!

Keep on writing and I'll keep on justa readin'
Your friend emil *Smile*
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Review of Stars Abound  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (5.0)
I feel like a peasant that took a wrong turn and now here I am peeking into the Queens boudoir...

I tried to open this pdf and It crashed me...got booted and everything....

I guess to a peasant the guards were called and out I went lol

Your friend John *Smile*

I'll try again soon
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Review of Hoosh-hoosh??  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice story wrote in prose for an animal that shares with us!!!
It shares its life with us as we share ours with them!

I personally since here as of late started trying to break up my poems into stansas.

It helps with the flow or so I'm told...

Any way its your poem and I hope you the best with it!!

Your friend John *Smile*
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Review of Older Poetry  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I always enjoy my visits to you wonderful port and I'm sure this wont be a dissapointment!!!
I really like the sig that you use too!!

The girl and the guy done with swirly lines!!!

We have just started a new club here and we was hoping that maybe you would help us put the word out that we are awarding 5000 gp's for these three catagories: sig for the group, Poem for the group, and/of a short little story/essay on something that might apply to us here in our club...

I suppose by now what is this club?
Well I'm glad you asked *Smile*
The Clueless club!

I hope you dont mind helping us or at least telling some here that want and like to make sigs about it!!

Your friend John*Smile*
sorry for going off on this tangent on to your fabulous port!!!
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Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice haiku *Smile*
This style really is a challenge to say worlds with so few syllables you have got it down here in your post!!!

There are alot of different ways to describe the winter and you deftly put pen to paper and accomplished this well!!!

Your friend John *Smile*
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Review by Emilbus™
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
yes Jerry we all have baggage. And you have found a cool place to vent and blow off a little steam through writing it.

Welcome to writing and I hope to see you add to your port. I have found so much talent here and there are many here who have helped me and I am sure will help you to accomplish the goals you choose to follow!

your friend John *Smile*

maybe this will help some...
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Review of As I See It  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (4.0)
Sounds like this could become a song very easily!!!

Ah perception... The observations that are our own. I think you did a wonderful job in showing that even though many may see the same item they all see it in their own point of view!

Keep up the good work!!

Your friend John
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Review of Or So I Figure  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Interesting outlook on the long dirt nap...

Your imagination shines forth in this poem and its a very substantial part of what we write with!!!

I am an electrician and didnt know this unusual fact.. If asked I would have said probably not a conductor...

Always your friend John *Smile*
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Review of Phases  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (4.5)
Its kinda rare to read a poem that gradually ages the subject!!!

You have inspired me to write a short story because of your poem!!!

I enjoy a good read and this meets all of those requirements in my book!!

The style you use is a great way to present your poem!!!

Keep on writing and I'll keep on reading!

Your friend John *Smile*
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Review of In Time  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (4.5)
The rhyme and meter really work here!!

I might if I were you center this but that is only a suggestion. Presentation is something that draws a reader in whether they realise it or not. Or whether they realise it or not.

Presentation makes a difference.

Your poem really hits home and its story rings true and shows wisdom and knowledge!

keep on writing and I'll keep on reading!
Your friend John *Smile*
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Review by Emilbus™
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
What a prime way to enhance anothers words but by the inspiration to write more on the same topic!

I wanted to read this as soon as I found out about a new post!!! And guess I'm the lucky first person to read rant and rave about the insight that flows freely in your words of inspired thoughts!!!

Keep on writing and I'll keep on reading my friend
John *Smile*
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Review of Non-Fiction  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I always find your posts intriguing and thought provoking!!!

I look forward to reading your words

I cant read songs for my dogs, its restricted it says.

I once wrote a song I called my dog doesnt sing anymore... Wild isnt it

Your friend John
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Review of The Hitchhiker  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (4.0)
Truths like these show us the days gone by and it is kinda sad that now days people are in such a big rush to get some place they dont even look at the man on the side of the road walking to get where he is going!!!

Keep on writing and I'll keep on reading!
Your friend
John *Smile*
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Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (4.0)
Exceptional!!!
Your writing takes us and thrusts us into the shadows and darkness you describe so well *Smile*
There is a lot of truth in the words you paint with so eloquently here!!!

I enjoyed it and plan to return to your port in the not so distant future my friend
Your friend John *Smile*
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Review of Plains Twilight  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
I have been all over today reviewing and it wouldnt be complete without checking back into your port!

Your wonderful metaphors sets this nature poem aside from many!!!

I think that nature has the power to open our eyes like you have here if we will only let it!!!

Your friend John *Smile*
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Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hey that made me laugh!!!
What a wonderful contest!!

I cant say I have ever written anything that someone has laughed over... at least I dont think I have...

Anyway good luck in the contest*Smile*
keep on writing and I'll keep on reading *Smile*
Your friend John
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Review of Whispers  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (4.5)
You paint a very interesting picture here!!

Congratulations on winning the contest!

I can see why you won!

this whispers into my soul the things that you pen so well!!

I enjoyed reading this and it seems very intense as well as insightful!

Your friend John *Smile*
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Review of Silence  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Wow awesome use of alliteration!!!
Your poetry has always been some of my favorites and this is no exception to the rule!!!

I'm glad to be back in your port!
I plan to come back often now that I plan to make this my home on the web!!!

Your friend always John *Smile*
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Review of PLEASE STOP  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (4.5)
Your writing shows talent as well as style!

I can relate to what your saying and this is kind of therapy for me to read works like this!!!

I am glad I wandered into your port!!!

Keep on writing and I'll keep reading!!

Your friend John *Smile*
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Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your tribute to Fred Rogers is quite a tribute and I really miss watching him and im almost 50.

Bravo for this wonderfully illustration of someone that some of us will miss and mourn for...

The media is something that I have written about and how they abuse the system that they are suppose to make aware of the world and what is happening... but dont get me started on a rant here ... sorry

You really have a wonderful way with words and as long as you write I will visit your port and I know that I will always find positives here :-0

Your friend John

I am glad you review so many here *Smile*
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Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (4.5)
You really have a way with words my friend!!!

I had a hard desision to make before I entered your port... should I read the item you rated in the public forum or read something in your port....

I chose your port first and I'm glad I did *Smile*

I find that inspiration to write is proportional to the one written about *Smile*

Keep on writing and I'll keep on reading my friend!
Your friend John *Smile*
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Review of Being a Teacher  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I truly believe in the concept of expect a miracle. For are we not miracles in our own way.

Seeing a newborn or a baby shows us that miracles still happen each and everyday and that if we choose to we too can show the miracle that lives within.

I have talked and read words that let me know that there is a spiritual side of life that can make a difference in how our roles play out!

Thank you for this experience to see how we can relate to our goals and how we must start somewhere to follow our dreams no matter how far away these dreams my lie

Your friend John
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Review by Emilbus™
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
The assimiles run rampant here and the flow seems flawless. An enjoyable read one that allows us the sense of rebirth just ahead!

Couragous winter how it seems to inhibit not only life but also our inner spirit somehow...

Keep on writing and I'll keep on reading!
Your friend John *Smile*
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Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (5.0)
After reading this I just sat here and thought about many things and how they relate to me in the ways described here. I see and feel the thoughts presented here. The same can be said about music or perhaps a hobby that tends to interupt our spiritual consentration.

It really hit home with me. It also made me delve into places I rarely visit. Thank you for this post.

Your friend John
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Review of The Toolbox  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I see that you have done your homework here!!!
I never knew what it took the poet or writer to be able to put his thoughts on paper before or even give it much thought.

This is quite an eye opening read and I plan to delve deeper into your writing!

Your friend John *Smile*
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