A very exilerating tale. One that is sensuous as well as visual.
I feel that what we write is an extention of our true selves and that within us is a story of imagination just trying to find a way to excape these shallow flesh covered walls that confines our imagination.
It is always nice to pay tribute to someone that help our self esteem. For another person to get this treatment they must be a very special person and deserving of this very very much!!!
Nice tribute to someone that deserves it I am sure!!!
I like to read how the seasons affect others. It shows through their words and feelings how they feel about others most times... With you there is not a doubt in anyones mind.
Although this is not a long poem it says what you want it to and does it in a depth that few others can attain in so few words
John
I am glad that there are those here that are not afraid to speak their mind!!
I have noticed some that thrive on the "upgrade" issue.
I have been homeless actually and so I know both sides of this coin. I have been able to be upgraded at times when I didnt have the funds to do this and for those who have helped me I only have the deepest of gratitude.
Thank you so much for putting into words what takes place from time to time
John
Sounds like a very interesting life and one that demands to be read about... I would like to see sometime what the English family entailed in it growing up together. I am sure there are many very amusing tales and episides that you describe quite aptly!
I cant beguin to tell you how much I really appreciate this, your poem, as it tells the truth however in jest!!! Was it Ben Franklin that once was quoted as saying sometimes the truth is best told in jest?
Lawyers and Ethics should not be words contained in the same reading.... Unless we are describing what lawyers lack and will never accept...
You almost tricked me here didnt you... I am putting away my soapbox I almost stepped up to the plate for a swing at the next pitch tossed... Send lawyer guns and money....?
Hopefully the money is to lure the lawyers into shooting range.... And a true bonfide lawyer would advocate gun control too I bet... My definition differs from theirs I bet.... Gun Control: shooting what you aim at.
Almost got me going again... Ill close before I start telling Lawyer jokes.... btw what do you call 50 lawyers at the bottom of the ocean?????????
Wow you are quite gifted!!! All you may need is some help in a few areas to "present" your words in a form that others will appreciate!!
I would start with a capital W in When I was a kid...
Maybe break up the poem into stansas... But ultimatley you have the last and final say about what stays and what goes...
I am fairly new at this writing thing and I dont have any degree in the English language... But hey I still try and I see talent in the words and the way you use them here!!!
Welcome to wdc and I hope to see more things in your port as your writing gets honed and sharper in the ways of the language!!
I am fairly new to this area called writing and I now have access to the most comprehensive research that I know of online in any site that I have been to on writing and poetry!!!
I am sure that the assemblage of such a paramont nature took not hours or days but months in straight research and many trials and errors in searching to fine all the info you are sharing here with us!!!
Have you ever thought about writing this in a book form?
The context of this is one that I readily identify with!!!
I have woke from a sound sleep to try and capture a dream or thought of a dream and then later upon the morning to assemble it in a poem or a story.
These alway tend to feel so real as I write them down!!!
Simple and to the point. It directs the reader to the very existance that we endure to survive and maybe I am wrong but that is what I feel when I read this.
I apologise... I dont have a "structured" review form that I use.
I dont even have a degree in English or writing... so all I can do for many of the posts I read is say how it affects me through the emotions or feelings that come from the reading.
Thank you for this post, it awakened different thoughts as I read it.
Its interesting to find out about the person behind the words beforehand. I will find something I am sure to read and probably enjoy.
I too am guilty of the thousands of technical briefs and documents that are just filed away somewhere that wont be viewed unless some nuclear powerhouse craters and becomes a chernobyl in Amerca's backyard somewhere. (And then the reports will be "hot" for something like 5000yrs half life lol.
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