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Review of Flying  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour Sawyer *Smile*

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 Flying  (E)
I am flying
#1966382 by Sawyer
in your Portfolio.

I‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.*Smile*

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*Reading* *Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
I can relate this to our guardian, our hero, the one who always take care
of us,loving us, our inspiration, the one who lift us and beneath our wings in reaching our dreams and goals, to strive for our success.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
I liked the given title, the one that hook me while roaming in your port. *Smile*
I liked flying, like birds, makes me think to be light and free.
The imagery is good,vivid, your crafted words reminds me of a bird who is capable to do things and can depend also.
This is not a rhyming poetry, and I liked how you express it in the free verse,the rhythm is good, it blends with the verse.
I liked also how you form it, it shaped like a bird, that spreading its wings.

*Heart* MY FAVORITE LINES :
Metal wings brisk and cold
Wings that never close
Of a bird that never sleeps

Great imagery reminds me of a character of the one we can hang on.

{e :questionP} MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t see any word that can distract the flow.
And no doubt arise.

*Thought2* MY FINAL THOUGHT :
This is a nice piece, you portrayed here a firm hand that we can rely and depend, thats how I see to all those who surrounded and loved us.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review.
I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5.

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
Until next time.
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Review of Yin and Yang  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A pleasant hour Anistasya *Smile*

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 Yin and Yang  (E)
Love from two perspectives - boy and girl
#1976013 by Anistasya
in your Portfolio.

I‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and just disregard it, if doesn't fit to your taste.*Smile*

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*Reading* *Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
A story in a poem. Wow!, that talks about relationship, a beautiful love story behind it.
Love in a relationship is not always been sweet, there is always the other shade on it-pain, because of our differences sometimes we often disappointed if it doesn't meet our expectation .

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
I liked the given title, the one that pulled me to see and taste your piece, makes me intrigue, it reminds me about the beliefs of Chinese. The imagery is good, vivid. Seeing a two lovers, who are different in each other and has its own character, but love blends them, and they ride the roller coaster of love. This is a free verse, concrete, every line have its own idea. The format is good, just using short or one word, but, I've found it firm.

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t see any word that can distract the flow.
And no doubt arise.


*Thought2* MY FINAL THOUGHT :
This is a nice piece. You showed and expressed two different perspective about how we think and feel about love and relationships, but it truly blend with our love faith and understanding. Truly love conquers all.
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review.
I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

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In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (4.5)
A pleasant hour C.E. Thieroff *Smile*

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Meet your friend here Joanna pen name: Samberine Everose
I was captivated by your piece
 With These Loving Hands  (E)
A spiritual message/ prayer of service
#1435623 by C.E. Thieroff
which was listed on the List of Public Reviewing Pages and I’m here to offer you a review and comment on this nice stuff of yours.


I'm not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and just disregard, if doesn’t fit to your taste. *Smile*

*Reading**Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
This is a beautiful prayer, asking blessing and guidance from our Lord.
It can enlighten one's spirit, because there is a faith that attached on it.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
I liked how you crafted this piece of yours,words are really light and can uplift a burden heart, because it is full of encouragement and sincerity.
I feel also a sympathy for others,with drops of enthusiasm and love.
This is a free verse and I liked how its form, they blend together.

*Heart* MY FAVORITE LINE :
with these loving hands
All parts in us was created by God, so indeed we must use this to glorify His name.

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any words that can distract the flow.*ThumbsUp*

I just wonder, why you don't use punctuation on the end of every line.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
An inspirational piece, Prayer is always been encouraging and can uplift one's spirit, specially if prayers comes from the heart. I see that in your piece.You showed and portrayed it well.
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5


Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.
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In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour Redtowrite *Smile*

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Meet your friend here Joanna pen name: Samberine Everose Your piece
 
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She Walks with Angels   (E)
the gentle letting go of a dying child
#1779229 by Redtowrite
hook me in the List of Public Reviewing Pages and I’m here to offer you a review and comment on this nice stuff of yours.

I ‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn’t fit to your taste. *Smile*

*Reading**Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
This is an expression of love of parents to their child.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
The emotion is tender and gentle, and I liked how you crafted it. Just like
a soft breeze of wind that gently let my eyes to drops its tear, and chill my skin.
Somehow, its like a lullaby that slowly flew its tune and slowly fade through the night.

*Heart* MY FAVORITE LINE :
sprinkling sunshine on a harsh winter day.
children is always been the joy of every parents.

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any words that can distract the flow.*ThumbsUp*
And no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
This is a great piece. The sadness in this piece is truly sincere and emotional, but you let and showed it in a lighter tune.You portrayed it well.
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5.

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

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In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
A pleasant hour ChuChuRocker *Smile*

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Meet your friend here Joanna pen name: Samberine Everose
Your piece
 A Precious Stone - A Story In 21 Pieces  (ASR)
This is a 21 part story written as little poems.
#1830297 by ChuChuRocker
captivated me, which was listed on the List of Public Reviewing Pages and I’m here to offer you a review and comment on this nice stuff of yours.


I ‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn’t fit to your taste.*Smile*

*Reading**Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
I like to read biography, I can find the uniqueness of life here, we have different journey in life. God gave us what we have now about life, because He knows that we can endure it and we can succeed on it. He create us and He knows our strength and weaknesses,He always give a challenge that we can be succeed and gain from it.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
I liked how you crafted this story into poetry.
You succeed in showing it within your words.
Sometimes I am not a fan of a poetry that is too long, but you hold me in this piece of yours until I didn't notice that it is already its end. Beautiful.
The words you used evokes emotion and sympathy,
And I liked how you create it in the rhyming form.
You're brave.

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any words that can distract the flow.*ThumbsUp*

But just because this is a rhyming poetry I just noticed that there are two lines that were not rhyming on part XI the first two lines there.
Maybe you want to work on it.

*Thought2* MY FINAL THOUGHT :
This is a great piece. Another face of life, and life is really not boring. Problems, trials are challenges that God let us to have because He know at the end we can succeed all this things.
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

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Review of I am an Echo  
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour Angels in my Ear,*Smile*

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I am an Echo  (E)
Will my cry be heard, or will silence fall?
#1970592 by Angels in my Ear
in your Portfolio and I’m here to give you a review and comment on this nice stuff of yours.

I‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn't fit to your taste.


*Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
I relate this piece into a shadow, or a copy of the original, want to be seen, want to be distinguish, its real character or personality but can't, because an echo is just only borrowing its power to its original.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
I liked how you crafted it., the words you used is soft and subtle.
I liked also its flow, it is continuously flowing, I didn't noticed that I already reach its end.
I liked also the title, it makes me think so deep, and lead me to create a character of an echo you are showing here.
I liked also when you repeat that line in the last part of every stanza.
I think this is the concluding emotion of the echo and already accepted its role.

*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn't find any words that can distract the flow.
And no doubt arise.

FAVORITE LINE :
 echo of thunder and light.

So many things that comes to my mind while thinking this like
The reflection of yesterday,
Second part,
substitute.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
This is a great piece. You succeed in showing and relating the character of an echo to real life situations. That a piece of echo must have also a role that should be recognize, because the echo always supports its original.You portrayed it well.
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review.
I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5.

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep

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Review of For You  
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
A pleasant hour CarpeNoctem *Smile*

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Meet your friend here Joanna pen name:Samberine Everose
Your piece
 For You  (E)
About giving everything you have to be with someone who doesn't even know you exist.
#1968118 by CarpeNoctem
captivated me in your Portfolio and I’m here to give you a review and comment on this nice stuff of yours.

I‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn't fit to your taste.


*Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
This is a one sided love affair. Loving someone, without expecting in return is really true and consider as a great love, like how our Lord Jesus Christ sacrificed just to redeem us.
But in a relationship this is not healthy, this is not how God planned for us, He always want us to be happy. He have chosen one that really fit and best for us.


*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
I liked how the emotions was expressed here, I really feel the sincerity in every words.
I also liked the words used it is light and easy to grasp but full of emotions.
I liked also the rhythm, it creates a beat, that blends in the rhyming.Nice.

FAVORITE LINES :
 Because the louder I get, the less you hear.

 Sometimes, the absence of one make the other realized its importance.

*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I just have doubt on the given title, it seems so simple to me.
Title is the first thing that allures a reader.
The one that hooked me in your piece is your brief description. Very intriguing.

 MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A great piece. You poured your emotions here, and I really feel. You portrayed it well. Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

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Review of For You  
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.0)
A pleasant hour Darasaidthis , *Smile*

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Meet your friend here Joanna pen name:Samberine Everose
Your piece
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This item number is not valid.
#1968911 by Not Available.
on your Portfolio has a magnetic rays that charm me to see for it so I’m here giving you a review and comment on this nice stuff of yours.

I‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn't fit to your taste.


*Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
Practicality is one of the great issue to survive in today's world. They said if you are not practical you can't have an easy and somehow a good life, that is one of my father's belief and taught to me about the deep meaning of life. His right, but for me as I begin and having my journey to know more about life, I begin to believe that one must have the drops of creativity because it is the heart or the feeling of life.
I can relate this piece of yours into practicality that every time we do something there is the equivalent or a token of exchange of it, because this is maybe how we can be worth, and it is our needs. We work, we should be paid, to live, but somehow in the Bible said that words can sustain life also.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:

I liked how this writing flow. Truly, there is something that makes it interesting,
As I go along with, I begin to create a character into my mind, a playful but serious personality.
That has its own disposition in life on what he/she really believed.


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :

Just some sort of mis looked, I also have this mistakes in my writings.

4th paragraph - I not only tripled our following,
you might mean : I not only tripled our followers..

4th paragraph - but I kept them all entertained and maintained a steady audience.

4th paragraph - but, I kept them all entertained and maintained as a steady audience.

The use of small letter i , I just wonder why you don't capitalize it..?

6th paragraph - I just hate you so so much.
The word 'so, was repeated in there.
11th paragraph - Thats nice.
That's nice.

 MY FINAL THOUGHT :
This is a great piece. You did well in holding your readers attention, somehow to know you in this piece of yours. And it gives an idea to your readers about character and personality uniqueness. Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.0

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep

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Review of Broken  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A pleasant hour Stephanie Distefano !, *Smile*

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I am captivated by your piece
 Broken  (13+)
A world turned to ash by monsters of men.
#1967480 by Seffi
in your Portfolio, and I’m here to give you a review and comment on this nice stuff of yours.

I‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn’t fit to your taste.

*Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
This is truly a short story, but full of meanings, emotions, imagery. Compact in one structure or paragraph.I can relate this to a broken dreams that snatched by strangers.
I like also the flow,I didn't find any distraction. It convey with the emotion.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
I liked you imagery, very descriptive.
It evokes emotions, I feel the dreams, the rights that grasp forcefully by those heartless undeserving strangers.

*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any grammatical error here.*Thumbsupr*
and no doubt arise.

 MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A great piece. You really crafted well a piece that is full of emotion that every girl can relate about their dreams that were shattered. Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

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Review of Santa Darling  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A pleasant hour Minja !, *Smile*

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I am captivated by your piece
 
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Santa Darling  (E)
Importance of someone's presence
#1968029 by ~Minja~
in your Portfolio, and I’m here to give you a review and comment on this nice stuff of yours.

I‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn’t fit to your taste.

*Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
It’s a cute short poem about the recent holiday, so light and interesting, Santa Claus is one of my favorite character also when Christmas time arrive. I'd never outgrown what most others believed him that he always have plenty of gifts to give and share, and its so nice that you have here in your poem his character.I can relate this also to the real meaning of gift.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:

I like words you used, they are just simple and easy to grasp, they made me smile and a little bit curious about its story.
I like also the given title, it is the one that hooked me to read it.

*Heart* MY FAVORITE LINE :
I know if I take diamonds then important thing I loose.
Truly, there is always much important than diamonds.Nice.

*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any grammatical error here. *Thumbsupr*

I just have doubt on the second line, because it doesn't rhyme on the first line.
It distract the flow.
For me its better when they rhyme.
How about using "your do" instead of "you were".
or you may have much better idea.

 MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A Great piece.This is just only a short piece, but you nicely portrayed here that our joy and happiness can not be exchange to any material things.Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.0

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

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Review of Sword poem  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour Princess Zelda!, *Smile*

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Meet your friend here Joanna pen name:Samberine Everose
I am captivated by your piece
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Sword poem  (E)
My first try at a shape poem. The poem is sword shaped.
#1874234 by Princess Zelda
in your Portfolio, and I’m here to give you a review and comment on this nice stuff of yours.

I‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn’t fit to your taste..

*Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
A character or the feeling of a real hero/heroine, that have the determination to win, whatever it takes.
It is not how many times we stumble or fall that counts in every victory, but the moment that we stand and determine to face the challenge.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:

I like this shape poem of yours, its not only the sword form that links to the theme, but most
specially the inside, the tone, the flow. Very inspiring.
Words are easy to grasp and it doesn’t distract the flow.
It just hold the flow until its peak. Nice

The given Award deserves well. Congratulations!!!

*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any grammatical error here. Perfect. *Thumbsupr*
And no doubt arise.

 MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A Great piece. You crafted well your sword poem, and you succeed in letting your readers feel and see what can be the inspirational messages that always hides in a simple sword. Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5.

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

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Review of Number Ten  
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Rated: E | (3.5)
A pleasant hour Lynda Mahan Miller *Smile*

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Meet your friend here Joanna pen name: Samberine Everose
I was captivated by your piece
 Number Ten  (E)
Chickens, hungry Rooster
#1967567 by Lynda Miller
which was listed on the List of Public Reviewing Pages and I’m here to offer you a review and comment on this nice stuff of yours.


I‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn’t fit to your taste.

*Reading**Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
A simple piece that talks about the celebration in welcoming the New Year.
How every family have their own preparation to capture the moment of a coming Year.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
I liked its tone, light and comical.
I liked also your inspiration, using chickens as one of the menu to celebrate and welcoming New Years.

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
Dinner was at six P.M.
You might mean
Dinner’s ready at six P.M.
Or
Dinner will be at six P.M.

Knowing well, on chickens fate.
You might mean
Knowing well, on chicken’s fate

I will take me a hen
You might mean
I will take a hen

And you will be in chicken heaven.
You might mean
And you will be in chicken’s heaven.


*Thought2* MY FINAL THOUGHT :

This can be a great piece, there are some things that needs to be polish, to spark its real beauty.
This is my rate just for now, and I’d be willing to change and re-review it, just email me after.
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 3.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.


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Review of you see  
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
A pleasant hour Gemma Wiseman, *Smile*

A greetings from the "The WDC Angel Army" 
Meet your friend here Joanna pen name:Samberine Everose
I am captivated by your piece
 you see  (E)
reflection
#1963115 by Gemma Wiseman
in your Portfolio where in you were listed as one of the Port Raider Author of the WDC Angel Army in this month of December, and I’m here to give you a review and comment on this nice stuff of yours.
I‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn’t fit to your taste, cause I believe that everyone knows their best.

*Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
I think this is a moment or a past or a yesterday that was treasured and cherished and it sized up its status today.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
I like its simplicity of words and forms, it is in depth.
The flow is good, it creates an impact. I like the rhythm and the tone, somehow it is sentimentalist.
It reminds me of a summer afternoon with the radiant rays of the sun coming from a window, and leaves were scattered from trees. Nice

FAVORITE LINES :
 The slice of cake was sitting there..

Nice personification, I feel its stillness.

*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any grammatical error here. *Thumbsupr*

I just wonder why you don’t capitalized the letter even just only the title.

 MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A great piece. Words you used are just short but you captured well the essence of the past or yesterdays. You crafted and showed in just only a few words. Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

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In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (4.5)
A pleasant hour!! Dan Sturn *Smile*

A greetings from the "The Poet's Place " 

I am captivated by your piece
 The Whole You Left  (E)
Six months after my dad died . . . .
#1960025 by Dan Sturn
in your Portfolio and I’m here to offer you a review and comment on this nice stuff of yours.
I‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn’t fit to your taste, cause I believe that everyone knows what’s their best.

*Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
This is an inspirational piece, stating the love of a Father. We can’t measure the love of every father, most of it are priceless and immeasurable like our Father above.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
I like the given title, I think about the whole pertains to be his son. The whole for me pertains to be the moments that was shared and the wisdom in which every father always shared. Good title.
I like also every words used it flows fluently without any distraction of the tone or emotions that evokes.
This is a rhyming poetry – my impression about rhyming is having a playful or a happy tone, and can only distract the sentiment of a piece.
But you relate well here, using rhyming can be portrayed and well good also in a slow and emotional tone. Well done.

FAVORITE LINES :
 to save our regrets for the past, and the dead.
But for the living, give them love and thus bread,

In other words It is important today than yesterday..?

*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any grammatical error here.
And no doubt arise.

 MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A great piece. You crafted and showed here about the love of your father and the wisdom he had shared. You portrayed it very well.
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5.

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

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Review of Wise Bee.  
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A pleasant hour Mash *Smile*

Welcome to WDC !!! from "Invalid Item" 
Meet your friend here Joanna pen name: Samberine Everose
Thank you for your interest to join the contest"A Great Value of Expressions" 
And this is my gift review for you in which I am captivated by your piece
 Wise Bee.  (13+)
The wise bee speaks.
#1964824 by Mash
from your Portfolio.
I‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn’t fit to your taste, cause I believe that everyone knows what’s their best .
*Reading* *Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
This is cute, The bee is really wise, we always found sound everywhere, except only when we are in our sleep. But even if we are in our sleep. We still found sound. -

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
I like how you crafted.
It is like I am reading a story. It flows and goes fluently until it reach the end. And I like the final part, it creates an impact.
You captured a friendly imagery. Vivid. Nice.

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any grammatical error here. Perfect. *ThumbsUp*

I just wonder if this is a rhyming poetry,
because some are in rhyming, some are not.
I suggest that you stick in the rhyming form
The tone is some kind of playful and friendly,
It will combine a rhyming pattern.

*SuitHeart* MY FAVORITE WORD :
Wise Bee
The one that very appealing to me, and made me intrigue.

*Thought2* MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A great piece. You showed a fascinating and a fun kind of poetry. Sharing your experienced to your reader. You portrayed it well. By the way if you need something or an assistance in roaming this wonderful site of WDC . You can take a look our group "Invalid Item"  We are giving help to anyone who would like to embrace the colorful world of Writing here in WDC.
Again, thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

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Review of Run  
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
A pleasant hour LOT!!, *Smile*

*Balloon3**Balloon3* Congratulations !!! for being one of the Member's Showcase on the "Invalid Item"  this month of December.*Balloon3**Balloon3*

Meet your friend here Joanna pen name:Samberine Everose
I am captivated by your piece
 Run  (E)
55 Word contest entry (Won 1st Place)
#1958228 by LOT
in your Portfolio, and I’m here to give you a review and comment on this nice stuff of yours.

I‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn’t fit to your taste, cause I believe that everyone knows what’s their best.

*Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
Nice short story in 55 words count, you captured well the scene and the feeling while we are waiting the decision of our work. And it tells also about Expectation.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:

I like words you used, you just only used few words but you successfully portrayed it well.
I like also the given title, the one that hooked me to read it.
The feeling other than escaping the truth.

The given Award deserves well. Congratulations!!!
*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any grammatical error here.
And no doubt arise.

 MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A Great piece. You crafted well in just only in few words but you showed completely to your reader the feeling and well imagery, in times when we are afraid to face the truth because of our doubts. Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

Samberine
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Review of Aimee Amanda Alms  
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
A pleasant hour Unpronounceable last name!!!, *Smile*

*Balloon3**Balloon3*Congratulations !!! for being one of the Member's Showcase on the "Invalid Item"  this month of December.*Balloon3**Balloon3*

Meet your friend here Joanna pen name:Samberine Everose
I am captivated by your piece
 Aimee Amanda Alms  (E)
An entry for the Writer's Cramp
#1938821 by William Fowlkes
in your Portfolio, and I’m here to give you a review and comment on this nice stuff of yours.

I‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn’t fit to your taste, cause I believe that everyone knows what’s their best.

*Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
A short piece, and it described well and its sounds cute the character of Aimee Amanda Alms.
Maybe, you are symbolizing a girl, focusing your attention but not attentive...?

*Heart*MY FAVORITES:
I like how the form was created. Short and simple, just like it easy to carry, but heavy and full if we’ve see.Sometimes,I like miniature poems, just like Miniature houses in Architecture, few materials in small spaces but properly arranged. That’s how I see in your piece. Great.
FAVORITE LINE :
 Aimee Amanda Alms
 I like how these names rhyme. Sounds good.

*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any grammatical error here.
And no doubt arise.

 MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A Great piece. Short and Appealing, I believe you described her well here in your own short forms of words. Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.0

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

Samberine
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In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
A pleasant hour Patrece *Smile*

Welcome to WDC !!! from "Invalid Item" 
Meet your friend here Joanna pen name: Samberine Everose
Thank you for your interest to join the contest"A Great Value of Expressions" 
And this is my gift review for you in which I am captivated by your piece
 Why I Had to Share my Tuna Melt  (E)
Just a goofy little poem I came up with for the writers cramp contest. For the fun of it!
#1963696 by Patrece ~
from your Portfolio.
I‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn’t fit to your taste, cause I believe that everyone knows what’s the best in their works.

*Reading* *Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
A clever little piece, that talks about our everyday scene with our pet. It perceived also that you are a pet lover for using them as an inspiration in this piece of yours.Lovely.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
I liked how you weaved your words here. Light- playful and enjoyable to read.
It captured a friendly and delight able images between you and your pet.
And you described it well in your words how your pet looks when he is craving also.

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any grammatical error here. Perfect. *ThumbsUp*

I just confused by the format you used
if this is a rhyming poetry or free verse.
Some are rhyming and its sounds good- I liked how you rhyme it- it can add its playful tone,
But some are not rhyming and it can or not really but there is the possibility to distract the flow.
Maybe you want to try to work those un rhyme words.

*SuitHeart* MY FAVORITE LINES :
My puppy stared right up at me,
His eyes were big and bright.
Then his ears perked suddenly,
His nose, sensed much delight.

Great description of your pet.

*Thought2* MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A great piece. You showed here the fun and maybe worst of having a pet sometimes that they really need to care for them. By the way if you need something or an assistance in roaming this wonderful site of WDC . You can take a look on our group "Invalid Item"  We are giving help to anyone who would like to embrace the colorful world of Writing here in WDC. Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

Samberine
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In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour Sisco *Smile*

A greetings from the "Retired Founder, Rising Stars Program" 

Meet your friend here Joanna pen name: Samberine Everose

This is from the Rising Stars Member to Member Reviewing Program.

I am captivated by your piece
What is love, Daddy?  (E)
A daughter asks her Dad, "What is love?" ~ WINNER The Five Star Poetry Contest Feb 2010
#1639918 by ~ Santa Sisco ~
from your Portfolio and I’m here to offer you a review and comment on this nice stuff of yours.
I ‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn’t fit to your taste, cause I believed that everyone knows what’s the best in their works.

*Reading* *Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
We really have different definition of love, and it always depends on how we think and look on it. This piece talks about a love of a Father to his child, and love in the eyes of a child. They are different, but it blends in the end.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
I liked how you crafted your words which create a tender and imagery of pure.
All words are demanding and intense, has a soft music that can touch every heart.
The given title captivate me first and intrigues me how is that father’s love that portrayed here.
You really expressed well your thoughts and feelings. Beautifully written.

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any grammatical error here. Perfect. *ThumbsUp*
And no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. Congratulations!!!

*Heart* MY FAVORITE LINES :
It’s a moment in time that you can’t replace.

It is indeed true. So we always tend to keep it in a special place in us.
*Thought2* MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A great piece. You really showed here and described it well and let also your readers feel and see the beauty of love of a father in your own perspective. Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5.

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

Samberine

"Retired Founder, Rising Stars Program" 
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In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
A pleasant hour Cat Caroll *Smile*

Welcome to WDC !!! from "Invalid Item" 
Meet your friend here Joanna pen name: Samberine Everose
Thank you for your interest to join the contest"A Great Value of Expressions" 
And this is my gift review for you in which I am captivated by your piece
Upside Down (Unshortened Version)  (E)
The original version of Upside Down. Angela is shocked at how everything's changed...
#1964029 by Cat Carroll
from your Portfolio.
I‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn’t fit to your taste, cause I believed that everyone knows what’s the best in their works.

*Reading* *Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
This piece have two faces – A face that is full of fantasy in her own world, and the face in which her world in reality. Maybe that is why it is entitled to be Upside down. Double meaning in every side. Beautiful Imagery.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
I liked how you crafted your words in every paragraph. I can feel and see those images you want to share to your readers. Very vivid, full of colors.
You have high and creative imagination.
You portrayed it well and I can grasp it easily without distraction of the flow and hold it until it ends.

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any grammatical error here. Perfect. *ThumbsUp*

I just have doubt on the word:
“pitter-tatter”

you might mean
pitter-patter..?

And the font maybe you may want to make it bigger in size to be more appealing.

*SuitHeart* MY FAVORITE WORD :
Upside Down

I liked how your description here about the story. Simple but it means a lot.

*Thought2* MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A great piece. You really showed here and shared the things you feel and see in your high and creative imagination, and you delivered it well. By the way if you need something or an assistance in roaming this wonderful site of WDC . You can take a look on our group "Invalid Item"  We are giving help to anyone who would like to embrace the colorful world of Writing here in WDC. Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5.

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

Samberine

"Invalid Item" 

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In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (4.5)
A pleasant hour GroovyStella *Smile*

Welcome to WDC!!! from "The Poet's Place " 
Meet your friend here Joanna pen name: Samberine Everose
Thank you for entering the contest "A Great Value of Expressions" 
And this is my gift review for you in which I am captivated by your piece
Find Me in the Rain  (E)
Life is too much for her. She loves her son and doesn't want to leave him.
#1963378 by GroovyStella
from your Portfolio.
I ‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn’t fit to your taste, cause I believed that everyone knows what’s the best in their works.

*Reading* *Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
A piece that talks about a love of a mother to her children. A mother’s love is valuable and priceless, one of the greatest love of all. And sometimes mother’s inspiration is her children to struggle and to fight the agony of life .

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
I like how you crafted your words-intense.
Every line has a memory attached on which create a vivid imagery. Soft and subtle.
I liked also the given title- in depth and captivating, the one that hooked me to read and feel your piece.
It evokes emotions like pain, yearning, longing, sorrow.
You really expressed well your thoughts and feelings .

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any grammatical error here. Perfect. *ThumbsUp*
And no doubt arise.

I just wonder if you intended not to use any Punctuation marks at the end of every line.
Punctuation marks helps to control the flow of a piece.

*SuitHeart* MY FAVORITE LINE :
He’ll find me in the rain.

Very emotional- I liked how you used the rain to signify your feelings.
Rain showered us blessing specially its drops.

*Thought2* MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A great piece. You showed here in your crafted words the feeling of a mother’s sentiments on life and her longing and loving her son. You portrayed it very well.
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5.

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

Samberine

"The Poet's Place " 

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Review of Brilliance  
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
A pleasant hour Stormfoedt *Smile*

Welcome to WDC!!!from "Invalid Item" 
Meet your friend here Joanna pen name: Samberine Everose
Thank you for entering the contest"A Great Value of Expressions" 
And this is my gift review for you in which I am captivated by your piece
 Brilliance  (E)
I will be brilliant, and I will show all that ONE is more than none.
#1959848 by Stormfoedt
from your Portfolio.
I‘m not a professional or an expert,anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn’t fit to your taste, cause I believed that everyone knows what’s the best in their works.

*Reading* *Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
An inspirational piece that talks about having our own brilliance and ability. You relate it to the sun of what humans have and it is more than the bright of the sun. God created us and gave us our own sheen that can really light and bright others. That’s the thing that we can truly make a difference.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
I liked how your words flow and how you expressed it in free verse.
Every line has an inspirational message which create a vivid imagery. Slow and soft.
I liked also the given title- simple and yet captivating, the one that hooked me to read and feel your piece.
Its really an interesting piece, and very intriguing, you tackled here the unique ability and capability of a person and you expressed it well your thoughts and feelings .

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any grammatical error here. Perfect. *ThumbsUp*
And no doubt arise.

*SuitHeart* MY FAVORITE LINE :
We each have our role.

God gifted each of us a role that we can handle.

*Thought2* MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A great piece. You showed it here that one can make a difference by having each role and trying to fulfill what God’s planned to accomplish that role.
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5.

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

Samberine

"Invalid Item" 

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Review of Breathing Autumn  
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
A pleasant hour S E Smith *Smile*

Welcome to WDC!!! Greetings from the "The WDC Angel Army" 

Meet your friend here Joanna pen name: Samberine Everose
I am captivated by your piece
 Breathing Autumn  (E)
Autumnal perspective
#1960456 by S E Smith
on your Portfolio where in you were listed as one of the Author Spotlight this November on the WDC Angel Army and I’m here to offer you a review and a comment on this nice stuff of yours.
I ‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn’t fit to your taste, cause I believed that everyone knows what’s the best in their works.

*Reading* *Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
Autumn is one of my favorite season also, here in our country, Autumn signifies the harvesting of rice and December breeze is expecting or an after a hard rain, the sunset, the orange. Truly like other seasons, Autumn have its own beauty.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
I liked the given title – captivates me to read it.
I liked how your described there the Autumn. Breathing-
maybe it pertains also your birth here- Breathing in the season of Autumn.
I liked also your inspiration- because everyone has a unique definition of what we think about season.
And you crafted your words here in an very inspiring mood and relaxing time of Autumn.
It really reminds me –creating a vivid imagery of what Autumn looked like in your eyes. Truly Refreshing.
You expressed well your thoughts and feelings .

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any grammatical error here. Good job. *ThumbsUp*
And no doubt arise.

*SuitHeart* MY FAVORITE LINE :
Breathing Autumn

Nice Personification, and a moving description- reminds me an Autumn full of life.

*Thought2* MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A great piece. You really showed here what you felt and see the beauty of an Autumn season, and indeed lovely and beautiful. Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5.

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

Samberine

"The WDC Angel Army" 

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Review of By Chance  
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
A pleasant hour Alma Waits *Smile*

Welcome to WDC!!!Greetings from the "The WDC Angel Army" 

Meet your friend here Joanna pen name: Samberine Everose
I am captivated by your piece
 By Chance  (E)
My first Sonnet (that I wrote for my friend's senior final *laughs*)
#1960395 by Almea Waits
on your Portfolio where in you were listed as one of the Author Spotlight this November on the WDC Angel Army and I’m here to offer you a review and a comment on this nice stuff of yours.
I‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn’t fit to your taste, cause I believed that everyone knows what’s the best in their works.

*Reading* *Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
An expression of feeling to someone we loved and how we see him/her. Our thoughts to every person is always been different, but the one that can be the source of our inspiration would be more likely be different- to move us, to lift us and inspired us. And its very hard knowing that not everything has always have a happy endings.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
I liked the given title, it really portrayed the piece as itself- by chance in meeting the love of our lifetime and falling to him by chance, and ended by chance.
But I think about soul mate if really true.
I liked also the words you used you probably described it your love one the way you see and feel. Very romantic and passionate, and pain when that someone that inspired us will fade.
You really expressed well your thoughts and feelings .

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any grammatical error here. Good job. *ThumbsUp*
I just wonder if you intended not to put punctuation at the end of every line.

*SuitHeart* MY FAVORITE LINES :
What hearts do often wander through the night
The loneliest of spirits without hope

Nice flow, and very creative chosen words.

*Thought2* MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A great piece. You really showed here that our love one can be a source of our inspiration that can lift us to do great things and can be also a source of our pain.Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5.

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

Samberine

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Review of This Life I Lead  
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
A pleasant hour Ulysses Worthington *Smile*

Welcome to WDC!!! Greetings from the "The WDC Angel Army" 

Meet your friend here Joanna pen name: Samberine Everose
I am captivated by your piece
 This Life I Lead  (E)
A short poem about life being boring enough to drive someone insane.
#1959424 by Ulysses Worthington
on your Portfolio where in you were listed as one of the Author Spotlight this November on the WDC Angel Army and I’m here to offer you a review and a comment on this nice stuff of yours.
I ‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn’t fit to your taste, cause I believed that everyone knows what’s the best in their works.

*Reading* *Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
Truly, freedom is one of the most important things that every living things must have, because it says here our individuality, freedom to choose what we want, what we like, what we decide. We should not let others to monitor and control us, As God had been done when He created us in His own image and likeness and the way how He created us in our unique forms.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
I really liked the given title, it intrigues me and I see it inspiring. But when I go beyond the line- its an statement where in the poet was hoping and wishing for.
I liked also some words you crafted like mindless clones, Men upon thrones.
It evokes emotion, I feel the emptiness, hopeless. If only the sun could really light and shine.
You portrayed it very well the tone and expressed well your thoughts and feelings.

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any grammatical error here. Good job. *ThumbsUp*

I just only have doubt on line:
In only my mind I can flee
I just didn’t grasp easily the idea of this line
How about:
Only in my mind I can flee.

*SuitHeart* MY FAVORITE LINES :
This life I lead

We are the transporter of our own life, we hold it and it depends in us on how we drive on it to reach our dreams and goals because God in His goodness gave us the power to decide what we like. So we always lead our own life, and we should let God have a part to take in charge in us.

*Thought2* MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A great piece. You really showed here how freedom is really an essential to humans. God knows our needs so He let us to decide what we really chose in life. Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5.

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

Samberine

Proud member of
"The WDC Angel Army" 

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"A Great Value of Expressions" 


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