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#4051005

Review of A Forest's Deep Secret

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

Hi Jeannie

Greetings!!!!
I chose this item of yours while roaming around in your Portfolio to give my gift review for you.

Please remember that I'm not a Professional or expert in reviewing. Anything I say here are just only my opinion as a reader.
Just take anything that fits and just ignore if doesn't fit.

THE TITLE :
It hook me on the word "strange happening" that you scribbled, if we think and we always feel that there is a strange happenings in anything or place, we always tend to look for it, human is curious in anything as we always like to search and find experience and knowledge in everything.
It gives an imagery of something that is adventure because of the word wood or place Kaplin Wood, I assumed that this is really happens on the woods or mountainous/forest of course because of the word wood.

THE BODY
I would like to concentrate on the thoughts and state or discuss one by one what I comprehend and feel about the story as I begin to enter to its body. .

Plot- so my first impression is right, that this is an adventure, Two teenager who have their adventure in the Kaplin woods in the time of summer.

Character - I liked how you introduced your characters here, I slowly get to learn their personality through their favorites, by emphasizing the way they talk and their gestures.

Dialogue - Its good that you added dialogue, that makes the story moving and alive, like a scene in movies, as I've said I learn also and know your characters.

Imagery - Words you used are easy to understand, easy to catch and appropriate, and that what makes the imagery good and vivid to me as a reader, I became part of the story, following also the sequence of the incidents.

Length - honestly, at first my first impression about the length of the story is long, but when I try to read it, it becomes short. That explain maybe that a long story can be short in length and the reader will crave for more if the story is well written and gave a good imagery, and a short story can be long if there are things that stated there that are not needed, and that's become boring.

Flow and Setting - I liked how you again shows the setting of the story, you did it not in the obvious manner but you added it as part of the characters life and activites or a part of the incident, which makes the flow to be subtle.

Doubts for Improvements-
I didn't find any grammatical issues here, and no doubt arise.
The only thing that I noticed is when the ghost appeared to the teenagers, I expect or crave for more expression on them, maybe lack of emotion how they were really afraid, and some incident or flow to suspense the reader.

FINAL THOUGHT
I can say that this is a good story, and its really a venture of adventures.

Hoping to see more of your works in the future.
Keep Writing.

Until next time.

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#4049959

Review of On My Own

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour Khariyya

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

A Greetings from the "Invalid Item"

I’m Samberine Everose

your friend here.
And it’s my pleasure to give you a review as one of the contest gift.
Thank you for your interest in joining the contest "A Great Value of Expressions"

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
Please try to chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste.

MY IMPRESSION ABOUT THE :

THE TITLE-
When I visit your Portfolio, to search something to review this item of yours caught my attention. As title said that should be enticing to read to lure a reader, because title serves as the door before entering to the body of the piece. The given title for me is just simple but it gives me a thought about Personal or opinions by using the word my own, that really creates and gives me to think on it.

THE BODY-
This is about friendship, as the first word already shows it. You stated here how friends are great and true, with their good deeds, to encourage us and inspired us.
The words that you used are light which it able me to reach and capture the meaning on it, so I said it creates a vivid imagery.
This is in free verse, and I liked how you did it in free verse, because it links to the created tone;
like the joy of having a friend but regrets, pain in the end for not considering them as friends.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn’t see any words that can distract the flow,
Words are just only light, but I just think its applicable because it talks about friends.

MY FINAL THOUGHT.
This is a nice piece, showing friends are good and great.
They are treasures which is more than diamonds or gems.

Well Done.
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

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#4049911

Review of Wildflowers

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour Kate

A Greetings from the "Invalid Item"

I’m here again Samberine Everose

your friend here.

And CONGRATULATIONS!!! for winning my package on the "Invalid Item"

And I'm really sorry if only now that I send my reviews.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
Please try to chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste.

MY IMPRESSION ABOUT THE :

THE TITLE- When I returned again into your Poetfolio to search something to review this one attract my attention. Wild Flowers.
Wild flowers they are not easy to find, as using the word Wild, they are not really in common, But I liked the combination of the two words, the word Wild creates a tough and rough impression where in it softens the word flower as we all knew that flowers are tender and soft. They are link and comfortable in each other. I always meet this two words in song and yes poetry, but even if its a cliché it still create an impact, because it stir the mind which creates a good impression about a unique kind of flower.

THE BODY- Wow! you scribbled a well written words, which described a wild flower. I think about this as a personality, a flower which we see as soft but because of circumstance and uncertain that it went through, it makes it to be tough. Like the wild flowers which we are only see in the forest or woods where surrounded by wild animals, but we only see its real stunning beauty, maybe the way how can this flower was raised and made in wild place. There is always a good thing on it.
I liked how the wild flower that you described here as even if it was wet from daybreak teardrops, it still write sweet lyric that untamed.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn’t see any words that can distract the flow,
and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT:
This is just in few words, but I liked how you did it in that way.
Sometimes in few words using words that are really need in the piece, can create a much more impact, and describes well the personality you've been portraying.
And liked that you sprinkled the ambience of nature while describing a personality here.

Well Done!!
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

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#4049891

Review of Autumn

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour Maineiac

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

A Greetings from the "Invalid Item"

I’m Samberine Everose

your friend here.
And it’s my pleasure to give you a review as one of the contest gift.
Thank you for your interest in joining the contest "A Great Value of Expressions"

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
Please try to chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste.

MY IMPRESSION ABOUT THE :

THE TITLE- I liked Autumn, it always attract me when the word Autumn comes to my mind, because it creates a good imagery, like orange rays of the sun, a lazy afternoon, rice fields where the grains are ripe and waiting to be harvested, the falling dried leaf. It just evokes an emotion which are peaceful, at rest, I also think contentment, just beautiful.

THE BODY- As I try to enter and read carefully the body of your item, the first word did hook me already fasten me in my seat to continue reading. I liked rainbow, but I have a sudden curiosity why you used it in describing the leaves, rainbows have different colors, not only the orange red colors but also the dark cool colors, and if I relate this to the season of Autumn, cool colors like the family of blue can’t link to it, but I think about the blue sky, maybe you are mentioning or adding here the blue sky in times of Autumn. I liked the word float you used other that falling, it balance when you combined the word down. I imagined leaves slowly drifting down that carries the wind, until it touches the ground.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn’t see any words that can distract the flow,
I’ve only mentioned the only doubt that arise..

MY FAVORITE LINE :
This is in few words and I liked every word you used.

MY FINAL THOUGHT.
Autumn is farewell also, like the leaves that gently drift down before it grip it rest.

Well Done.!
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

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#4043954

Review of Smile

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.5)

A pleasant hour Dreamer

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

A Greetings from the "Invalid Item"

I’m Samberine Everose

your friend here.
And it’s my pleasure to give you a review.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
Please try to chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

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MY IMPRESSION ABOUT THE :

TITLE: As title is one of the important part of a piece, because this serves as a door before entering to an item, this is the part where in a prospective reader continue to enter or just pass it on. So title should be fascinating to read, and may link to the body of the piece, first impression is created also here and also the expectation.

As I look at the given title, it fascinates me, who wouldn't be smile if you seeing a smile. The word is simple and light and creates a good impression. It is the simple gift that we can give instantly to others.

THE BODY- When a piece have a well balance and proper chosen of words it creates a vivid imagery, letting to take the prospective reader to the imagination of the Author, this can evokes emotions, without any distraction or abrupt in the flow.
Wow! I liked how you scribbled those words, they are light and easy to reach like the simple title. I liked how the tone it is, its lively and can makes one to wear a smile also.
This is a kind of encouragement or inspiration.
I liked also the rhythm form, there is a beat like the lyrics in a song.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find any word that can distract the flow.

Just only on the last line, the last word- smile.
Maybe, you can capitalized those five letters, to have an impact- SMILE.
You also forgot to add some punctuation like comma.

MY FAVORITE STANZA :
If there is one thing a favor I can ask of you
One task to fulfill before I die
Then that would have to be the most beautiful thing
Just simply watching you laugh and yes, SMILE.

I liked the message on this part, very encouraging and inspiring.

Well Done!
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

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#4043547

Review of The Prayer Quilt

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour Gemini Gem

A Greetings from the "Invalid Item"

I’m Samberine Everose

your friend here.
CONGRATULATIONS! For being the Captain Showcase on the Newbies Academy Member’s Showcase this September 2014.
And I’d like to give a gift review for you.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
Please try to chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHTS ON THE :

TITLE- As I scroll on your Portfolio for an item to review, this piece caught my attention by the word prayer.
I liked the word Prayer it reminds me of words that are blessed with comfort, sincere and love and when embedded to Quilt it really says its sentiments comfort and peace.

THE BODY-
PLOT – The given plot talks about friendship, the sincere love of our friends, in times of our agony, in our hard or rough times, they feel also what we feel, and they think and give anything they know what’s the best for us, and it’s true that the best gift they can bestow for us is PRAYER. And there is only one who is a great confidante and a friend who always listen to us, and always on our side, and that is our Father God who created us.

LENGTH – The given length is good, when I give my first glance, my first impression is long, but when I begin to read and finish, it gives me my last impression that this should had been more.
That’s explain that a short length story would be boring if the created item has no impact, and a long length story is enticing to read and the prospective reader will crave for more if there is an intense and gives an impact.

CHARACTER –
There is only one character here, and it is on the first person- point of view. I liked how the words was delivered because it shows and took me in the main characters shoes, I feel the emotions what she felt, and thought what she think also.

FORMAT/FLOW- The format is good, the flow is simultaneously and smooth, as the words were inscribe and emotions evokes. There is a proper paragraphing, and the sequence are important and that is one that creates the impact of the story.
I liked also the word that comes from a voice, it gives an impact for engraving it in that way, it helps to stimulate the tone which is sincere and peace.

IMAGERY – The crafted words creates a vivid imagery, I liked how you made it in light and understandable,
This means that this is in general or for everyone, that’s makes the story be powerful.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION- I didn’t find any word that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FAVORITE:
Although there is a sadness on the end,
The love, warmth, comfort and stillness is the one that are revealing and stunning in the Story.
And that’s makes It to be intense and creates an impact to me.

Well Done!!

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

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#4042222

Review of Green Leaf

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour Candy

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

A Greetings from the "Invalid Item"

I’m Samberine Everose

your friend here.
Congratulations for being the Newbies Academy member showcase this month of September.
And I’m here giving you a review as my gift to you.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
Please try to chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste.

MY IMPRESSION ABOUT :

THE TITLE –I like leaf, because its symbolize nature, they can symbolize also the different season. For me, The Green leaf symbolize spring, or springing, youth, fresh, vibrant. And all other leaf with different colors are all beautiful and have their own appeal.

THE BODY – When I begin to journey on the body of your item, capturing the words in every lines
The words you used are light and vivid and it creates an intense imagery which evokes emotions somehow like pain, sadness.
I liked also the created rhythm and rhyme, it did well in the flow of the poem.
Well done using the saraband form.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn’t find any word that can distract the flow.
And no doubt arise.

MY FAVORITE LINES:
Floating green leaf along the stream
Where is the branch you grew up with?

Perfect Rhyme and Rhythm.
Well Done.
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

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#4042221

Review of GHOSTS

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour Geoff

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

A Greetings from the "Invalid Item"

I’m Samberine Everose

your friend here.
I just found your item in the Newbies Academy Reviewing Page.
And it’s my pleasure to give you a review.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
Please try to chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste.

MY IMPRESSION ABOUT THE :

TITLE: The title of every piece serves as a door while entering to an item, this is the part where in a prospective reader will continue to enter or just pass it on. So title should be enticing to read, and may link to the body of the piece, first impression is created here and also the expectation.

I’m afraid of Ghost, but they make me think as they are mystery, if they are true or just an illusion.
While I stumbled into the title of your piece it makes me think about days of Halloween.

even if it still far away.

THE BODY- When a piece have a well balance and proper chosen of words it creates a vivid imagery, letting to take the prospective reader to the imagination of the Author. This will evokes emotions also, without any distraction or abrupt in the flow.

As I enter to the body of your item, I find the words are clear and creates a vivid imagery, it evokes emotions like mystery, curiosity. This is a metaphor and I relate this to past that are not resolve and haunting the present situation. Ghosts are sometimes those we are afraid of, we can’t bury them, because they are already a part of us. They exist when they are trigger especially their shadows.
I liked those words you used, they are all link in each other, which creates a dark tone.
I liked the word prey that you used to symbolized their victims.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find any word that can distract the flow.

And no doubt arise.

MY FAVORITE LINE :
The ghost have plenty to eat.

Ghost has always plenty to eat if we let them.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

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#4038622

Review of Soul Mates

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)

A pleasant hour Cheri Annemos

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

A Greetings from the "Invalid Item"

I’m Samberine Everose

your friend here.
Thank you for your interest in joining the contest "A Great Value of Expressions"

And this is one of the contest’s gifts.
Reviewing one of your piece in your Portfolio.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader. Please try to chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste.

WHAT I THINK ABOUT THE:

TITLE – This is my first time to visit your portfolio, and as I browse those items of yours, This short story got my attention, as I have my first glance on it, it did hook me already.

What enticed me to read and give a review is what I believed and feel about Soul mate.
I read a lot of it, it fascinates me, searching and trying to know from different views and opinions, if this is really true or just only an expression of every writer's creative imagination. And how true is this.
So that’s the thought that enticed me to read your short story, and would like to know what’s on your mind on these two words.

THE BODY –
PLOT – The plot is good, two sweetheart they met, love each other until the end. Yes, That is really one of the definition of Soul mate. You showed here and relate it in your story how it’s mean, that from the word soul which is mean mind and heart, with the word mate or friend, there is a compatibility in emotion and thought, but I don’t know the right time limit, if this is forever or maybe more than forever.

FLOW/SETTINGS – The setting is good also, I think the main character was having a flashback, remembering his love. I just lost in the flow or sequence, it’s just too fast, I mean there is an abrupt the way when you change the sequence/settings of the story.

DIALOGUE – I really loved dialogue, it makes the story moving, because this is the part where you can have a hint about the personality of the characters.
I just noticed that you mentioned more on the names of the character, just like on the first part. You can used pronoun also in mentioning instead of their names, I just found it reiterate and somehow irritating.

LENGTH- The length of the story is good for me, you stated here all the sequence of their life, from the first time they've met, until they engaged, married until the last part of their journey in which the one was being gone already.

IMAGERY- A well balance and properly chosen words can create a good and vivid imagery to the reader. This is the one that fasten me to read and continue until the end, because a good imagery may lead the reader to be a part of the story, to see, to feel the emotions of the characters with their beliefs and opinions.
The created imagery of your short story is good for me, just only the flow, where in I've stated first, maybe you can add some more words that can stimulate the flow or omit some of the words there.

GRAMMAR AND PUNTUATION-
I just found some on the first paragraph

..to share with his Becky on this their 40th anniversary..
To share with his Becky for their 40th anniversary..

…mental notes on what he needed for his anniversary celebration,
..mental notes on what he needed for their anniversary celebration,

MY FINAL QUOTE :
Take the time to sit and meditate
And think the Memories that was shared
Sometimes it refresh us and feel the love once we felt
Make us strong to face for every tomorrow.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

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#4038617

Review of Blue

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour Elisa Rose

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

A Greetings from the "Invalid Item"

I’m Samberine Everose

your friend here.
Thank you for your interest in joining the contest "A Great Value of Expressions"

And this is one of the contest’s gifts.
Reviewing one of your piece in your Portfolio.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader. Please try to chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste.

WHAT I THINK ABOUT THE:

TITLE – The title is one of the important element of a poem, this is where you can captivate a prospective reader, this is the part where in the first impression is created and expectation. So title should have a magnetic element to lure a reader.

What enticed me to read your piece and give a review is the given title- Blue. Simple but it says a lot.
Looking in the thesaurus, it stated there all about the other meaning of blue. Blue is calm, and it creates firmness and has a soothing element, like the blue sky or the blue sea. But in the other way around, blue can be sadness or gloom. But I like Blue.

THE BODY –Well, I liked your story as I read already, I liked the plot, simple but interesting, you started lines which is very intriguing, trying to explain the personality of the main character so I begin to intact on my impression on him, I liked also the flow, the sequence, you did a great job showing how the story is all about without any abrupt, but smoothly it flows until I finally reached the ending part which made me smile at the end why the main character likes to wear blue all the time. Nice job.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn’t find any word that can distract the flow.
And no doubt arise.

MY FINAL QUOTE :
We always have our own identity.

Great.Well Done!

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

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#4036276

Review of Well Watered Gardens

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour Kenword

A Greetings from the "Invalid Item"

I’m Samberine Everose

your friend here.
And it’s my pleasure to give you a review.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
Please try to chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste.

MY IMPRESSION ABOUT THE :

TITLE- As I perceiving the given title of your piece, trying to capture some tone or mood and thought to create my first impression and an expectation as has always been said that should be consist of every title. For me the given title is good, Well-Watered Gardens. The three words are already relating to nature, a beautiful view where in I imagined from the two adjective words, Well and watered, and Gardens is a place of various plants, and that is Nature.

THE BODY- What a beautiful Garden, as I entered in the body of your piece, you described it in here certainly and vivid the things that are found in a well manned garden, full of colors and different herbaceous plants. All I can see is green, the colors of Nature.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn’t find any word that can distract the flow.

And no doubt arise.

MY FAVORITE LINES :
None are hungry when garden water flows
When the savory sun in September feeds

Beautiful words, showing that nature is full of views and wonder.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

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#4036275

Review of The Same Picture (for Fox)

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour Unapologetic Poetess

A Greetings from the "Invalid Item"

I’m Samberine Everose

your friend here.
And it’s my pleasure to give you a review.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
Please try to chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste.

MY IMPRESSION ABOUT THE :

TITLE- The title is very important to an item, this is the first thing in which a reader have their first glance, this is the part when a reader decide or not to enter to the piece. First impression and an expectation was also created here.
As I am looking the given title of your item, just found it in the verdant poetry contest. For me its just simple, I am trying to convey an emotion on it, but I can’t, all I can think is somehow curiosity, the same picture-(for fox) it just blur for me.

THE BODY- This is a narrating style of poetry, and as the words comes to me, it did create an impact, telling about poet are really born and really in their nature. As they see, observed and perceived things, is always been their style, the creating of beautiful words that has been showed based on what they see.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn’t find any word that can distract the flow.

I just think about some spacing or breaking of lines, it can evokes emotion.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Why beautiful words can soften the heart of every poet.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

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#4036261

Review of Nature's Grace

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour Dave

A Greetings from the "Invalid Item"

I’m Samberine Everose

your friend here.
Its my pleasure to give you a review.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
Please try to chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste.

MY IMPRESSION:

TITLE – As title has been said as the first thing where in every prospective reader had their first glance before entering to a piece, As my first glance on the given title of your piece, it did hook me already, because the two words you used about nature is indeed true. The Nature’s elegance and beauty are true and the masterpiece from God that really gives grace to anyone who can see.

THE BODY – The first line fascinates me already as humming birds are like poets who try to carve words in their poetic impression about the beauty of nature, and as one of His masterpiece no one could ever match on it.
The words you used are vivid, it did create a good imagery in my mind, and nicely done using the Tros-par-Huit form of poetry.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn’t find any word that can distract the flow.
And no doubt arise.

MY FAVORITE LINES:
The beauty of a bird flitting before a rose
To the page, but cannot capture what God bestows.

Beautiful words. Well Done.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

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#4036257

Review of Camp California

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WDC Addicts Anonymous

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour Jeff

A Greetings from the "WDC Addicts Anonymous"

I’m Samberine Everose

your friend here.
And it’s my pleasure to give you a review.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
Please try to chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste.

MY IMPRESSION ABOUT THE :

TITLE- As every title has been said that there is a captivating effect to lure a reader, because it is the first thing in which had their first glance before deciding to continue to enter to the item. First impression was also created here and expectation, so we should be careful in choosing or creating our title.
The given title of your piece is somehow good for me, I think this is a place, just simple. But the thing that make me curious is California is a country and why you stated here as a camp, so I made a doubt if this is a country or just a camp, but whatever it is this talks about a place.

THE BODY- As I go along in the body, capturing and holding every word that was scribbled, the first thing that I did noticed is in which it creates a different style is you slowly showed starting from a single word until I reach into the middle part, words becomes more ad the thought becomes strong and depth also, where in imagery becomes vivid too, so I presume that on the middle part is the climax, and as I go along words were slowly fade as it reach its end. Lovely.
The emotion is like how the way you scribbled also the words, and the shape or format is good.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn’t find any word that can distract the flow.
And no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT
There are always a place that we always treasure,
Where we find inspiration and joy.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

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#4035336

Review of The Herald

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour Angels in my Ear

A Greetings from the "Invalid Item"

I’m Samberine Everose

your friend here.
And it’s my pleasure to give you a review.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
Please try to chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste.

MY IMPRESSION ABOUT THE :

TITLE- As I am looking the given title of your piece, trying to perceive the effect on me,
Its only two words but I liked how you capitalized the two words which makes and creates an impact.
I always meet this word when the topic is about Christmas because it pertains to Angels, they are messenger, and it makes me curious how can you relate this to nature?
That’s the thought that holds me to continue to enter into your piece.

THE BODY- I liked how you did the first line, the tone is slow, yes it was in free verse, and I liked how you did it in free verse, the words you used creates a vivid imagery, taking me to the place where you stated there, and simultaneously just flow, in which the emotions is the only thing I feel.
Emotions like frighten, cold, like in times of storms, asking that the devastating thing would end.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn’t find any word that can distract the flow.

And no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
There is another side of Nature,
Like day and night, to make it balance.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

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#4033835

Review of The Artist's Touch

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour The Ripper Returnsl

A Greetings from the "Invalid Item"

I’m Samberine Everose

your friend here.
And it’s my pleasure to give you a review.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
Please try to chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste.

MY IMPRESSION ABOUT THE :

TITLE- As title has been said that it is one of the important part of a poem, because the title serves as the door before entering to the body of the piece, this is the part where in an impression and expectation has been created.
as I read the given title, it did hook me already, by the two words you used artist and touch,
We are all artist, as our Father who's been the Great Artist created us, it reminds me of a magnificent work of art that promised a good view or work. So my impression is this could be a good read, and it is related to nature, and its true that one of the the greatest created art of our Father God above is nature.

THE BODY- As I go along trying to convey the words in every line of your piece, I found out that you used words that are vivid, and creates a good imagery, it creates a slow or subtle flow, explaining how an artist creates and paint the beauty, it doesn't rush, just following the emotions, as where every artist have. It reminds me of colors who has been paint it in subtle harmonic flowing.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn’t find any word that can distract the flow.

And no doubt arise.

MY FINAL COMMENT :
You really paint the beauty of nature in words like in the artist hands, magnificent touch of beautiful colors.
Well Done.!!

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

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#4033832

Review of Capturing Mother's Colors

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour Alan Davies

A Greetings from the "Invalid Item"

I’m Samberine Everose

your friend here.
And it’s my pleasure to give you a review.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
Please try to chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste.

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MY IMPRESSION ABOUT THE :

TITLE- As I'm looking at the given title of your item, perceiving what it means, through the word "capturing" you used, it did captured me already, with adding the two words mother's colors, it reminds me of the love of a mother, you are true in deed linking this to nature, because just like every mother's love like nature there are things that soften our heart while seeing every nature's beauty and that also like the love of every mother.
So I feel excited to know and capture what every mother's colors.

THE BODY- As I go along trying to catch the words on every line of your piece, the first line creates a vivid imagery to me, preparing me - using the word standing, wondering as we always feel while we are in front of every nature's view.
I liked that you used the different shades of colors which articulate the colors and emotions of nature, it links to the given title.
It evokes emotions like stillness, serenity, peacefulness, you did great in portraying these emotions, these are really stimulate while we are seeing the beauty of nature.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn’t find any word that can distract the flow.

I just only have a thought for using different colors on every line.
They are nice, somehow it reminds me of a beautiful flower that was arranged properly in a vase,
I also think in a birthday party where different colors are all seen.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
It soften our hearts, and will last forever --
Once we captured the beauty of every mother's colors.

Well Done!
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

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#4031109

Review of Whispering Tears

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WDC Addicts Anonymous

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour Alexi Mason

' Congralations!
You just won 50K worth of package from "The Wizard's Magic Fundraiser" ! And this basket is part of the package.~ GERVIC 🐉 WDC Dragon Vale '

A Greetings from the "WDC Addicts Anonymous"

I’m Samberine Everose

your friend here.
And it’s my pleasure to give you a review.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
Please try to chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste.

MY IMPRESSION ABOUT THE :

TITLE- The word whisper caught my attention while searching again for something to review in your Portfolio. It induces some kind of sadness especially when it links to tears. But tears tells a lot, be that tears in joy or tears in pain. That thought hook me to find out.

THE BODY- While reading the words through the line by lines of your piece- I liked how you delivered it, juts some kind of prose, A few lines that tells about the way we live with our love one. I can see a great story attached where in the emotions of joy, happiness, contentment, and pain was there.
I liked how you used the eyes as the starting word to explain how a feeling was work, and the word whisper, I see it in every lines but still great as you used it as the title.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn’t find any word that can distract the flow
And no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
We can always whisper the feelings
The moment that we have
With our love one through our tears

Well Done.
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review.
I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

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#4031102

Review of Take a Moment

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WDC Addicts Anonymous

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour Alexi Mason

' Congralations!
You just won 50K worth of package from "The Wizard's Magic Fundraiser" ! And this basket is part of the package.~ GERVIC 🐉 WDC Dragon Vale '

A Greetings from the "WDC Addicts Anonymous"

I’m Samberine Everose

your friend here.
And it’s my pleasure to give you a review.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
Please try to chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste.

MY IMPRESSION ABOUT THE :

TITLE- Sometimes, just because we are busy in our everyday life, we always forgot to take a moment to do some simple things like looking the flowers and observe its beauty, spread our eyes to look the vast blue sky and feel its immensity, or even listening to chirping of birds- that is my thought and impression while perceiving the title of your piece, and that way charmed me to continue my reading.

THE BODY- As I go along trying to convey the words in every line of your piece, I just find out that like the other items in your Portfolio, they are vivid which creates a good imagery, and evokes emotions.
As I begin to read the first line it took me already to a good imagery describing how beauty of every moment when we try to escape from the demands of the world.
I liked how you used our different senses to catch those beauties from our environment/nature.
This is a kind of meditation that take me into relaxing effects of your words.
That for just only a moment- we can smell the breeze from the heaven sky,
That flowers are dancing for the coming of a new day, the dew, and every one's prayer.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :

I just have a thought on the 13th line

The joys that he betrothed to we

The word he- if you are addressing to Him.
This should be capital letter.
And the pronoun we on the last line
I just think you might like to change it to us?

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Even the world is busy
We can make and take every moment as a treasure.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review.
I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

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#4031092

Review of Motherly Love

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour DJane

A Greetings from the "Invalid Item"

I’m Samberine Everose

your friend here.
I just roaming around in your Portfolio and found this beautiful piece of yours,
And I’d like to give you a review.

Just please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader, who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
Please try to chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHTS ABOUT THE :

TITLE – This is the part in which every reader give their first glance, if the given title have the effect that can lure a reader, it can let a prospective reader to continue to enter or just pass it by.
As I roaming in your Portfolio, I was stumbled in this piece of yours, what hook me is the word motherly love, which I understood as the love of every mother. I often catch my attention in every piece like this stating our Mother because it reminds me how good and how great how every mother’s love.

THE BODY- A well- crafted and chose formed of words can create a good and vivid imagery which take the reader to be in the thought of the Author. As I begin to read the first line of your poem, it did captured me already, stating how every mother’s do and doing to her child. I can feel the emotion, full and impact how mother’s showed here their love to their child.
I liked the words- fulfillment, joy, blessed, gift, completeness.
These are the words stated there how proud, and how love has every mothers to their child.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn’t find any word that can distract the flow,
And no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Love of a mother is different, we can’t replace to anyone else,
they are a blessing to us as children, and a treasure which is more than gold or silver.

Well Done!

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review.
I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

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#4030137

Review of The puzzle of life

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour GerryGalavoba

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

A Greetings from the "Invalid Item"

I’m Samberine Everose

your friend here.
And it’s my pleasure to give you a review.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
Please try to chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste.

WHAT I THINK ABOUT THE:

TITLE – The given title creates an idea or a thought which makes a reader intrigues. This is not the first time that I read about life which is relate it to puzzle, we all know that every one’s life are puzzle that have its own to build or search every piece to create the whole puzzle.
But, I like how you used it here, it driven me to hold and continue my reading.

THE BODY – – You did great in creating the idea about the puzzle of life.
I can relate it, you used words that are easily to reach, in which it means that it is for everybody.
I liked how you slowly explain and state how those pieces of puzzle were collect and work in each other until it reach the end which is the final piece of the puzzle to form a masterpiece.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
There are just some words that are reiterated, like
When you finally do, you are ready to start building and piece by piece the picture starts to form.
I already again meet the word piece by piece on the next line.
Piece by piece you match and you create and yet you can’t see.
I just found it distracting the flow.

MY FINAL COMMENT :
This is a good thought about life, which creates an inspirational message.
Well Done!
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

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#4030133

Review of Spilt Eggs

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour Stephanie Ferguson

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

A Greetings from the "Invalid Item"

I’m Samberine Everose

your friend here.
Thank you for your interest in joining the contest "A Great Value of Expressions"

And this is one of the contest’s gifts.
Reviewing one of your piece in your Portfolio.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
Please try to chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste.

WHAT I THINK ABOUT THE:

TITLE – The title serve as the door of every item, this is one of the important part, if a prospective reader would continue to read or just pass it on to another. So title should have a captivating element to hook the reader, first impression was also created here and an expectation.
For me your title is good, it reminds me of a home, a rice field; a country house where I always see hen laying their eggs and sometimes it spilt or fallen, and a good breakfast which always prepared by mom.

THE BODY –As I go along with the lines, capturing the thoughts and conveying in the imagery.
I just found it that this short story of yours was full of ideas and thoughts about spilt eggs.
And how you relate spilt eggs to problems or mess which every mother would always try to clean or handle on it.
Words you used are vivid for me, I can easily reach. It evokes emotions, stating personality and characters of every mother would and should have in every spilt eggs.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn’t find any words that can distract the flow.
Just only paragraph spacing and dialogue tagging,
These enticed to be more fascinating to read and evokes more emotion.
Like.
Most people say “don’t cry over spilt milk” I say,”There is nothing worse then spilt eggs, so don’t sweat the milk thing.”

For me-
Most people say “Don’t cry over spilt milk,”
I say, “There is nothing worse than spilt eggs, so don’t sweat the milk thing.
Just like that. These are just only my thought it may differs to others.

MY FINAL QUOTE :
Mother’s knows best to do, even the messiest spilt eggs.

Well Done!
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

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#4028220

Review of Until

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.5)

A pleasant hour cmfountain

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

A Greetings from the "Invalid Item"

I’m Samberine Everose

your friend here.
Thank you for your interest in joining the contest "A Great Value of Expressions"

And this is one of the contest’s gifts.
Reviewing one of your piece in your Portfolio.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
Please try to chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste.

WHAT I THINK ABOUT THE:

TITLE - This is one of the most important and sensitive part of an item. Title should have an alluring effect because this is the first thing that every reader have their first peek before entering to the body of the item. This is the part where impression and expectation was created. So a good impression that creates a good imagery that link to the body of the item must be crafted here.
As I visited your Portfolio to search of something to review, this piece of yours caught my attention,
One word but for me it tells more than that one word.
Until- I think about endless, because didn’t stated there when will be its end, the impression and thought is remain. That intrigues me to find out.

THE BODY - When I slowly begin to try to read the first line, it clasp me already on words that was crafted, because every line links to each other, I will not be satisfied with the idea attached if I'd stop my reading, until I didn’t notice that I reach already the end part.
The words you weaved creates a vivid imagery, of what is love is all about. You just not write here but you showed, so it evokes emotions- the feeling of how love sometimes is understandable and powerful.
But sometimes that is love, it’s hard to think but it’s true, denying ourselves for the sake of our love one.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn’t see any word that can distract the flow.
I just think about the use of spacing- or breaking lines-
They can stimulate also and make powerful emotions to the reader.

MY FINAL QUOTE :
As long as we still feel the love.
Make every time for last, and make the best for it.

Well Done!
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it.
I rate it 4.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

FORUM
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#4028191

Review of Whispering Stars

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour Angels in my Ear

A Greetings from the "Invalid Item"

I’m Samberine Everose

your friend here.

I chose to review your item today as part of my review challenge at the "Invalid Item"

.

Just please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
Please try to chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHTS ABOUT THE :

TITLE - Is there any whispering stars? That is the thought that hook me to enter to the body of your piece.
As every title should have an effect that can allure a reader, it gives me an enchanted impression,
An imagery of a night that is full of stars before going to bed is magnificent that take me to a good night sleep.

THE BODY- When I slowly begin to try to read the first line and continue again the next line by line, I found out that the word you used are all vivid, and easy for me to reach. I liked how you slowly used descriptive words to create a good imagery about a peaceful night, and what it brings to us.
My thought and impression that I’ve mentioned on the given title is true, and it didn’t disappointed me.
I like also how you describe the stars fades when comes the day, but they are still there.
It reminds me of friends who are always stick there, day and night,for better or in worse.
They are the true friends who always whispering encouraging words like the stars in your piece.

THE ENDING PART- As I reach the ending part, I am totally satisfied as my first impression that I feel and have on the first part, because it leaves me a magnificent and enchanting good night, staying in my heart that friends like the stars whispering even day turn to night or even night turn to day.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn’t find any word that can distract the flow.

And no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Whispering stars- they always there
Our friends whispering their love to us.

Well Done!

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

FORUM

A Great Value of Expressions

(E)
NEWBIES CONTEST"Pen me your Quote,and I'll send you Gifts" CLOSED-will resume on December
#1960298 by Samberine Everose

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .

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14 days may be credited.

#4028175

Review of The Bubble

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WDC Addicts Anonymous

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour J.Edwin Phillips

A Greetings from the "WDC Addicts Anonymous"

Its my pleasure to give you a review.
I'm your friend here Samberine Everose

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.Just chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHTS ABOUT THE :

TITLE - When I visited your Portfolio and look for something to review this item of yours caught my attention. The Bubble - just imagined the bubbles, when we see a bubbles they are captivating- just like we'd like to touch and have fun to play with it, that's how I was allure in your piece.

IMAGERY - I try to catch the words that you used, and it seems to me that they are easily reach some kind of in depth its meanings, but vivid in imagery. I found out that this piece pertains about life, how life can transform us, or how we face life.Emotions are evokes like I just think about contentment and emptiness.

RHYME, RHYTHM AND FORM - This part can stimulate also the emotions of the item, specially when the rhyming was created properly with the formed rhythm. This will create also a subtle flow. The rhythm and rhyme of your piece is good. It is in proper order, I like how I feel the swaying of words like the water along the sea when I read.

MY FAVORITE PART :
Living takes much energy you see, and that's a lot of trouble.
Sitting is much easier on me, as I'm safe inside my bubble.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

FORUM

A Great Value of Expressions

(E)
NEWBIES CONTEST"Pen me your Quote,and I'll send you Gifts" CLOSED-will resume on December
#1960298 by Samberine Everose

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .