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Review of Roses in Heaven  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour winnie !, *Smile*

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so I'm giving you a review.
I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in Wdc. { e:smile}


I‘m not a professional or an expert in writing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste. *Smile*

*Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
This is an expression of love to our mother, and I see this like a prayer, a tribute, a feeling of missing, and love. Roses are a bunch of love.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:

Title - I really liked the title, it's the one that enticed me to read. I liked roses, and roses in heavens are so sweet, such kind of mystery.
Imagery - I see this as ethereal, by using the word heaven, Lord. It also reminds me of a bouquet of roses that has been properly arranged, filled with emotions and full of missing ness . You delivered it so nice slow and gentle.
Rhyme and Rhythm - I liked the created rhythm and rhyming in every second and fourth line of every stanza, it blends with the flow, and emotions were evoke.

*Heart* MY FAVORITE LINE:
Roses in heaven

Lovely.

*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any words that can distract the flow. *Thumbsupr*
And no doubt arise.

The Awardicon deserves well.
Congratulations!!!

 MY FINAL THOUGHT :
This is tender, a piece that talks about someone's love to mother. Its true, that our mother is only one and no one could ever replace her in our heart.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5.

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
Until next time.


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Review of Decaying Beauty  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Decaying Beauty  (E)
The beauty is in the dying. [Villonnet]
#1722334 by Winnie Kay
I've found in your Portfolio.
I'm your friend here Samberine Everose


I‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste. *Smile*


*Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
I relate this to changing of season. Every end, a new beginning is waiting.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:

Title - the captivating part of a piece, it's the one that every reader look before they enter into a piece, and the given title allures me.
Imagery. - its vivid, and clear, the weaved words which pertain to nature holds me and showed the slow flow in imagery and it's beautiful, where it was lightly in changing .
Rhyme and Rhythm - good in using the Villonet form.

*Heart* MY FAVORITE LINE:

for in decay is born a new domain.

End to start something.

*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any words that can distract the flow. *Thumbsupr*
And no doubt arise.

The Awardicon deserves well.
Congratulations!!!

 MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A nice piece.
Changing- the only permanent here on earth, and we are have the nature to adapt it, sometimes it makes to painful specially in the adjustment- but when we think that changing is for our own good, then it is better to change.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5.

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
Thank you for sharing your piece. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing.
Until next time.


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In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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A Father's Love   (E)
A father questions his decision to let his daughter fulfill her dreams. [Elegy]
#1726282 by Winnie Kay
I've found in your Portfolio.

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I'm your friend here Samberine Everose


I‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste. *Smile*


*Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
The real love of a father, like our Father's above. He always wanted His child to follow the right path.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:

Title - The captivating part of a piece, the one that hook me to read your piece.
I came from a broken family, and it always fascinated me to read other than nature, about love, like the given title, although I already have a stand on what Our Father's above love in us, I still have doubt what father's love here on earth.
Imagery - The given imagery is subtle as it flow, I liked the story behind on it. All I find is true and certain love of a father who always want his child to be good. Every line evokes and create emotions.

MY FAVORITE STANZA:
They placed her in my arms that day.
She met me with a smile.
God knows full well the price I’d pay
To hold her now awhile.

This is so tender. I liked the simplicity of the emotion of joy.


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any words that can distract the flow. *Thumbsupr*
And no doubt arise.

The Awardicon deserves well.
Congratulations!!!!

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A nice piece. Father have different personality, and have different way in parenting, but the only thing I always keep and I'll stand - a father's love like our Father's above is worth more than a million, sometimes we don't understand how- in His own way, but He definitely think the best for us.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5.

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
Thank you for sharing your piece. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing.
Until next time.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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 I Remember When... - 8-28-10  (E)
I remember when your hand found mine, Standing in the rain. I remember when...
#1974508 by CJHanna84
I've found in your Portfolio. I'm your friend Samberine Everose

I‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste. *Smile*

*Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
This is so romantic and an emotional piece, that talks about the value of a love one in someone's heart.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:

Title - is captivating, I liked the punctuation that you used, it seems that there's something more to say .
Imagery - some kind of sentimental, the crafted words in every line was short but in depth. There's more than what it means than the created line. It evokes emotion like certainty.
Rhyme and Rhythm - I think this is a free verse and it blends with the flow.
Form and structure - I liked the breaking of lines, and the spacing.

*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any words that can distract the flow. *Thumbsupr*
And no doubt arise.

 MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A nice piece.
Good memories are those we treasured and cherished that sometimres it gives an inspiration to us, to be still and go and inspired.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
Until next time.

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Review of Come Deep Joy  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A pleasant hour Carly,

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 Come Deep Joy  (E)
Day 2 - Entry to Birthday Bash Poetry Contest
#1951616 by 💙 Carly
while roaming around in your Portfolio.
So I'm here giving you a review.

I'm your friend Samberine Everose

I‘m not a professional or an expert in writing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste.


*Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
I see this as a prayer or a wish with hope.
Peace of mind and a heart of contentment are one of those things that gives us joy.


*Heart* MY FAVORITES:

Title - The word 'come' invites me to read it, in every piece the title is the alluring part, it is the one that hook a reader to see a piece.
Imagery - a short poetry that tells more.I liked the word deep, usually we don't easily find deep joy here unless if we asked, search and keep them.


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn't find any word that can distract the flow.
I just only have a thought on the three words
come deep joy - I just see them all as firm.
Maybe you want to scattered them on the piece.

 MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A nice piece.
The deepest joy in our heart will always comes to us, if we are contented and appreciate all the great things that God already blessed in us. *Heart*

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.0

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Review of If I Died Tonight  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
A pleasant hour Eric Rager *Smile*

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I'm your friend here Samberine Everose
and I'm here giving you a gift by reviewing your piece that I've found in your Portfolio. Sorry its just late.

I'm not a professional or expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and disregard it, if doesn’t fit to your taste.


*Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
Do we really need to know our own destiny?
Do we really need to perceive where should we be ?


*Heart* MY FAVORITES:

The title is the hooker of a piece, it is the first thing that every reader first to see, your title is intriguing, every one I know are afraid in death, but it seems that you don't afraid in death.
Imagery - Some kind of vivid, and a bit of scared on my part, a different dimension, I'm afraid thinking about death and what comes after death,but it seems that you just delivered it so lightly.You're brave.

*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
Just some misspelled word, I have also that in my writings,

If that be me fate; dear friends don't hate.
If that be my fate; dear friends don't hate.

What is ningga?

Singin- singing
Climb in - climbing
Crashin - crashing

Slappin- slapping

Dewinged - I looked in dictionary this word but I didn't find it.
Watchin - watching

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A nice piece.
We have different beliefs, and I respect every person beliefs, because it gives me another Perspective.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.0

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
Until next time.

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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
A pleasant hour redbaron, *Smile*

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 Melody and Harmony  (E)
This poem is a product of two words to write about,melody and harmony.
#1978510 by redbaron
that I've found in your port. Sorry, its just late.

I‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and disregard it, if doesn't fit to your taste.*Smile*


*Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
This is about the peace that brings in every creation.


*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
The title - These two words are perfect combination, in every melody we always search its harmony, that's the one that captivates me.
Imagery - I liked that you used nature to link this two words, you crafted it so vivid, and you took me to that beautiful scenic view of nature wherein there is its melody and harmony.
Rhyme and Rhythm - This is free verse and it blends with the created tone.

*Heart* MY FAVORITE STANZA:
Melody and Harmony
Singing peace through God's own love
Reminding us He is the creator
Of all things we have come to know

*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn't see any words that can distract its flow.
And no doubt arise.

 MY FINAL THOUGHT :
This is an inspirational piece, every God's creation, we find Him in there, and it has always the melody that flows on it with the harmony, and that is Peace.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A pleasant hour Inspired soul *Smile*

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I've found your piece
 Just like a Memory  (E)
Watching someone become a memory.
#1980477 by Inspired Soul
while roaming around your port and I’m here to give you a review.


I‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste.

*Reading**Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
I relate this to a faded love that will slowly have the possibility to become a memory.
We should always need to polish something, to always maintain its sheen.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
Title- is the captivating part of a piece, it is the one that hook us to read.
The given title makes me think something sentimental, because of the word memory you used.
Imagery - vivid and clear, your words reminds me of being faded, you delivered it so clear your point about fading, not only the reflection but also maybe the feeling that was been felt.
And there's a tone of sadness.
Rhyme and Rhythm - I like how you dabble it in the free verse, it just blend with the tone.

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn't find any word that can distract its flow
Just only breaking of lines.
It will make this piece more emotionally impact.

*Thought2* MY FINAL THOUGHT :
We can allow things to happen if we might.
A sentimental piece, that reflects emotions in just only a part of a vision or thought. You portrayed it well.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. Its my pleasure to read a review. I rate it 4.0

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

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Review of Poetry  
for entry "Sad Heart" 
In affiliation with WDC Addicts Anonymous  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A pleasant hour Cat Carroll *Smile*

A Greetings from the "WDC Addicts Anonymous" 

I'm your friend here Samberine Everose .
I've found your piece SAD HEART while roaming around your port, and it enticed me to read, so I'm here giving you a review.

I'm not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste. { e:smile}

*Reading**Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
Love for me is making a person to be a better person, by bringing out the best in him\her without forgetting our self.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
Title - there are many words that can describe a heart, so I am intrigue why you called it sad heart, that's the thing that enticed me to read your piece.
Imagery - I am still learning the depth and the true beauty of poetry, we used to craft words just to hide real meanings, our real intention and it depends the reader how she\he would reflect on it. That's how poetry so deep, and I always try to learn that also.
Rhyme and Rhythm - a free verse, and I know you freely showed and delivered because it blends with the created emotion.

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I just have doubts on some words, just light and wordy to me.
Like hit, yelling, boss, crawl.

 MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Even though the Genres are dark and death. Poetry is personal - formed of words that hides the true meanings and totally in deep but sometimes it was delivered in light and it evokes emotions,its the same like a piece of Artwork.That the only one who can understand its real meaning is its creator. Readers just only reflect on it.

Thank you for sharing your piece and for allowing me to drop some review.
It's my pleasure to read and review. I rate it 4.0

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

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Review of Etheree on Spring  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A pleasant hour Mo *Smile*

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I'm your friend here Samberine Everose
and as I've promised, here's my review on your piece
 Etheree on Spring  (E)
Spring means Flowers
#1982640 by Moarzjasac
I've found it in your Portfolio. I hope you will like it.

I‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn’t fit to your taste.*Smile*

*Reading**Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
Yes, spring means flowers, and summer means flowers too, all the season have different beauty of flowers, and I just thought that spring is your favorite, because you see it through etheree, I search the word etheree in the dictionary, but the word ethereal I've found, so I assume that you see spring in an ethereal manner.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
Title - I liked the combination of two words you used, etheree on spring, maybe your expectation, your high impression about spring, and its so beautiful.

Imagery - Vivid. It reminds me of a new fresh bouquet of flowers in the morning of spring, and I really feel and smell fragrance through your crafted words.
Rhyme and Rhythm - I liked how you chose the free verse to delivered your piece. It just blend with the imagery and flow.
Form and structure - I also like the form and shape, just like a bouquet of flowers also that laid.

MY FAVORITE LINES:

that scent the evening breeze
with the aroma of spirit.

Lovely.

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any words that can distract the flow.*ThumbsUp*
I just have a thought on the word evening you used on the seventh line
That scent the evening breeze.
On the first line it reflects the morning, so my mood and vision is in the morning, but when it comes on this line, you already refer to evening, it just lost me.
I just also think that maybe the flowers scent are like evening- at rest,or mystery?
But morning breeze can also be a refreshing and can soothe also a spirit.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
This is an inspiring piece.
Beautifully written.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5


Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
A pleasant hour Mo *Smile*

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I'm your friend here Samberine Everose Here's my review again to your piece
 The sound of a rainbow  (E)
In the aftermath of a storm comes a symphony of color
#1982251 by Moarzjasac
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I hope you will like it. *Smile*

I‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste.

*Reading**Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
After a night comes a morning, it consider as a day. As they said after a rain, sun will shine.
But our weather here in the Philippines, summer then comes rain. So I always said when rainy season comes, my happiness were gone, because rainy season defines here as storm.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
Title - I like the given title, it gives a playful and tender idea, and intriguing too, what could be that sound of a rainbow.
The rainbow is a colorful, bright and amazing reflection, its sound will be like it also.
Imagery - your crafted words are certain and delivered it in light tone, but truly when it read and think it really pertain to wisdom and an inspiration of life.
Rhyme and rhythm - I've found this as a lyrical, like a lyrics in music, fine tune.

*Heart* MY FAVORITE LINE :
the sound of a rainbow.

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :

I didn't find any words that can distract the flow.*ThumbsUp*
And no doubt arise.

Just only using some capital letters on the title.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
An inspirational piece.
Specially the brief quote, its already stated here that after a storm, sun not only would shine, but also the rainbow and it gives us beautiful colors.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

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Review of Loss  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A pleasant hour Bear *Smile*

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I'm your friend here Samberine Everose
Your piece
 Loss  (E)
a brief thought about losing things in life
#1910139 by BEAR
hook me, while roaming around your port, so I'm here giving you a review.

I‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn’t fit to your taste.

*Reading**Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
Losing - a word that is no difference in pain, because when we lost something a part of us would be missing, and in pain, it cause destructive emotions and thorniness of our heart, but both can ease through time and love.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
Title - the title is simple, but it captivate me to read your piece and give a review, and I've found it emotional.
Imagery - I liked the words crafted, vivid and certain.
I liked the part that you are asking, it makes your reader think also what you are asking, which create their own ideas and opinions.
Rhyme and Rhythm - I think this is a rhyming poetry, some stated the rhyming pattern to distinguished clearly, but you've got it, it blends with the created tone.

*Heart* MY FAVORITE LINES :
you can write down your feeling,
And most will not care.
Because when you write the real things,
No one is ever there.
The best thing to express down emotions is by writing, because through writing, we are free to pour everything that is hard to express in words.

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any grammatical error here.*ThumbsUp*
And no doubt arise.


*Thought2* MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A nice piece.
One of the beauty of a piece is when created through emotions by the crafted words, and you did it. You showed and portrayed it well.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Your piece
  " Just One Heart And No End "  (E)
some thoughts about relationships
#1654084 by BEAR
hook me while roaming around your port and I’m here to give you a review and comment on this nice stuff of yours.

I ‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and just ignore it,if doesn't fit to your taste.

*Reading**Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
Why is it that if we love, its only the beginning of heartache.
Sometimes pride can make a relationship rot.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
Title - The given title enticed me to read, I see it certain and true, maybe this is a wish, that only one heart only would stay forever.
Imagery - your crafted words are easily reach, and I see some story on it. What most have a relationship. Vivid, and it flows subtle with the created emotion.

*Heart* MY FAVORITE WORD :
why is silence , better than to talk,
When you know that talking will work?
Maybe, when we are in silence,
We always hear the beating of our heart,
That's how we perceive what really we felt and think.

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any words that can distract the flow.*ThumbsUp*
And no doubt arise.

*Thought2* MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A great piece.
We face many things when we gone into a relationship or love, but we should think that we can grow on it.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

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Review of the same moon  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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your piece
the same moon  (E)
pondering the role of the moon in our memory
#1959139 by christo
in your Portfolio hook me and I’m here to give you a review and comment on this nice stuff of yours.

I ‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste. *Smile*

*Reading**Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
I relate this to a moment that were treasured and kept.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
Title - I liked the given title, it gives me like familiarity, intriguing.
Imagery - clear, the crafted words create a mystery tone, because of the combination of night and moments.
Rhyme and Rhythm - this is not a rhyming poetry, I just look it as a story, continuing because I noticed that you didn't use capital letters or period at the end off every stanza.

*Heart* MY FAVORITE LINE :
same moon, here, dashing from cloud to cloud, which lays softly splintered on the ocean
I like how you described the moon here.

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I just don't understand the line
No one basket can hold the separate moments,
The word "one" there
I just think if you could eliminate it, or you might mean
None in every basket can hold the separate moments.

*Thought2* MY FINAL THOUGHT :
This is a a nice piece.
Moments is like the mystery of the night, and the same as the moon that light.
You portrayed it well.
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5.

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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 A Weight Worth Bearing  (E)
A young man realizes the value of a conscience.
#1975474 by Daniel Wilcox
I've found in your Portfolio.

I‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn’t fit to your taste.

*Reading* *Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
The only thing we have that can't stole in us is our integrity and conscience.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
Plot and Format - The plot is good, it talks about the worth of a material/thing in a man's thought - integrity.
Setting - this is one of the important of a story, its fine also, it holds my attention, specially on the first part that create an intriguing tone for describing and defining the locket dangled thing, somehow it took me also in my curiosity about the main character.
Length - even if its long, I decided to read it, because of the intriguing part on the first part.
Grammar and Punctuation - I didn't see any words that can distract the flow.
Dialogue - is one of the part of the story that entice a reader to read a piece, if this is a dialogue about characters thought.
Maybe you can have a separate paragraph on the dialogue of your story, it can be more enticing, and will create a breathing part of the story.
Point of view - the POV here was the first person, and you took me like I am on his feet, thinking the way how he think.
Flow - the flow is good, it holds me until its end.

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any word that can distract the flow of the story *ThumbsUp*
And no doubt arise.

*Thought2* MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A great piece. You portrayed it well.
Even just only a material thing it took us to think its essence and the most important is how we can learn on that piece.
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
Until next time.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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 Springtime Renews Our Hope  (E)
I describe springtime by using symbolism to express my beliefs.
#1980452 by marylou4
in your Portfolio.

I‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn’t fit to your taste.

*Reading* *Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
We have different definition of spring and its time, and you described and showed it here in your piece ,another idea of spring, but the only thing that we have all in common, we always believe that spring is a new beginning.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
Title - the one that captivates me to read your piece, nature was one of my favorite genre and it hook me on the given title.
Imagery - I liked the words you crafted, it creates a vivid and clear imagery, somehow a combination of ideas and poetic imagery.
Rhyme and Rhythm - This is a rhyming poetry and I liked how you did the rhyming pattern it blends with the rhythm.
Form and Structure - Short poetry but full of ideas, it creates many reasons.

*SuitHeart* MY FAVORITE LINES :
springtime burst forth in a glorious birth.
I've found this as refreshing.

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any word that can distract the flow of the story *ThumbsUp*
And no doubt arise.

*Thought2* MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A great piece. You portrayed it well.
Mostly, they see spring as a beginning, but for me its the end of something, because here, summer ends when comes spring.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
Until next time.
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Review of Poem : Reading  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A pleasant hour Red Rose *Smile*

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 Poem : Reading  (E)
Word count (excluding title) : 74 Line count (excluding title and blank lines) : 20
#1980022 by Red Rose
in your Portfolio.

I‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

*Reading* *Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
You're right, reading is fun and adventurous, we can learn everything through reading, its a key to acquire knowledge .
We can develop also our writing skills, because writing is next to reading.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
Title - The title is simple, but it captivates me, because writing is a partner of reading, and vice versa, I liked writing and indeed I liked also reading.
Imagery - very vivid, easy to grasp because its light, and creates a friendly tone, it reminds me of a nursery rhyme.
Rhyme and Rhythm - I think there is a rhyming pattern here, some authors stated the rhyming pattern below to easily determine it.

*SuitHeart* MY FAVORITE LINE :
Books are the key to education
This is true, indeed.

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn't find any word that can distract the flow,
And no doubt arise.

*Thought2* MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A nice piece. A light piece but you portrayed it well.
Reading is my key before I started to write, through reading I begin to appreciate the beauty of writings.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
Until next time.
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Review of Spring  
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour Emiliya Wolfe *Smile*

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 Spring  (E)
March contest entry
#1977883 by Emiliya Wolfe
in your Portfolio.

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*Reading* *Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
I relate this to hope, every spring is a hope, a new day, a new beginning, a new morning.
There is always a hope in every morning like the grass sprouted in times of spring.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
Title - one of the genres that I liked is nature, so your piece hooked me while roaming around your piece.
Imagery - The words you crafted reminds me of the combination of the images of spring and its principle. I liked how you combined the two.
Rhythm and rhyme - I can't say that this as a rhyming poetry because I didn't seen any pattern, but I liked the created rhythm in every line, somehow it blends with the flow.

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t see any word that can distract the flow.
And no doubt arise.

*Thought2* MY FINAL THOUGHT :
This is an inspiring piece.
When we are down, one of the best place we can seek refuge, is nature because this is one of the gifts which God created for us, and we always found Him in here, in His creation.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review.
I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5.

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
Until next time.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
A pleasant hour Moarzjasac *Smile*

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As your request, here's my review to your nice piece
 Where do Angels Live?  (E)
Inspiring Question from my Granddaughter
#1981170 by Moarzjasac
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I‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the beauty and uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste. { e:smile}

*Reading**Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
This is tender. Sometimes the simplicity, purity and innocence of things can direct to an indepth meaning and it always certain.
I relate the angels to all who is capable of giving without expecting in return just for the benefit of others.That's what most call it Angel, and its true they were in there, specially to those who are in needs.


*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
Title - I liked the given title, very curious, its tender, but creates a deeper impact.
Imagery - vivid, it just light as it see, but when it read and we think it so deep and seriously, there are many things behind it.
Rhyme and Rhythm - a rhyming poetry and it blends with the tone.

*Heart* MY FAVORITE LINES:
Not just in heavens above,
Anywhere there's need of love.
This is true, they were exist to those who needs them, that's why they called angel.


*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn't find any word that can distract the flow.

I just have doubt on the line - "13 lines" you put there in the upper part of your piece, it just distract my preparation and mind setting when I am begin to read, maybe you can put it below after the piece when already ended.
And some spacing, spacing can stimulate the created tone and mood of a piece, the spacing between the line or stanza and the created conversion.


 MY FINAL THOUGHT :
This is a great piece. I liked the created tone which in combination of tenderness and deep and seriousness of the idea on it.

Thank you for sharing your piece and for allowing me to drop some review.
I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
A pleasant hour Keaton Foster *Smile*

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Your piece
 She Wears A Painted Mask  (E)
A trippy poem about being in love with someone who hides who she really is.
#1914702 by Keaton Foster: Know My Hell!
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*Reading**Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
We always see a person on his/her face.


*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
Title - the title captivates me, I already have the idea but your piece succeed in pulling me.
Imagery - I read it twice, and I've found a story on it., an emotional but good story, I liked how you mentioned the title on the body of this piece. For me, it makes the piece its breathing part because I am familiarized already on that line as same as the given title.
This is a free verse, and there's a rhythm, you succeed in delivering it.
Form is good and unique, you have your own style, and its good.

*Heart* MY FAVORITE WORD :
pleading ignorance

I just think this as in the act of exploding but better to hide...?

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any words that can distract the flow.*ThumbsUp*
"Even through"

I think the word through-
And also think the word though.

*Thought2* MY FINAL THOUGHT :

This is another great piece of yours.
Sometimes we like to wear a painted mask, specially if a situation really needs specially if this is for the benefit and goodness of others.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour Kristi *Smile*

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I am captivated by your piece
Why Do I Hate You?  (E)
A question and an answer.
#1587867 by Kristi
in your Portfolio and I’m here to offer you a review and comment on this nice stuff of yours.
I ‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
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*Reading**Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
Denying the truth just to forget a feeling., its really hard when our mind is in contrast on what we feel, the two should be the same, but its more really hard to teach our heart.Sometimes heart always have its reasons, and sometimes its true.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
The given title caught my attention while roaming in your piece to search something to review.
It made me curious, like the question mark at the end.
The imagery is good and vivid,through your words you evokes emotion like
holding something that we can't refuse.
I liked how you dabble your rhythm and rhyming on the 2nd and fourth line, it blends with the given tone.
And the format is good also, I liked how you create the dash between stanza, each stanza became like a quotation.

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :

I didn’t find any words that can distract its flow.*ThumbsUp*
And no doubt arise.

*Thought2* MY FINAL THOUGHT :
This is a a great piece.The Awardicon deserves well. Congratulations!!!
There are several piece that showed and define a broken heart feelings, and you did well in portraying in this piece.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5.

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

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Review of Evening Sky  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour Carly *Smile*

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 Evening Sky  (E)
Day 4 - Entry to Birthday Bash Poetry Contest
#1951622 by 💙 Carly
from your Portfolio and I’m here to give you a review and comment on this nice stuff of yours.

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*Reading**Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
You captured the beauty of an evening sky, or in a twilight while turning to dark.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
I liked the given title, its the one that enticed me to read your piece, for me an evening sky is silent and is at rest, reminds me of an enjoyable time of a family from a hard working day.
I liked your imagery, your words create a subtle flow and a soft tone, while the slightly dull clouds begins to turn to dark, while the sun slowly fade its rays and stars begin to spark their light.
A free verse, and it blends with the tone.

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any word that can distract its flow.*ThumbsUp*
And no doubt arise.

*Heart* MY FAVORITE LINES :
cotton candy clouds

 fascinating, I really love to touch.

*Thought2* MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A nice piece. A beautiful scene of an evening sky in which one of the natures best created by God to remind us the changing of time in an hour.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. You potrayed it well. And I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5.

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A pleasant hour Ben, *Smile*

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Your piece
 Death Of A Thousand Cuts  (13+)
Thoughts on love, in the briefest possible form (vers libre)
#1700437 by Ben Garrick
in your Portfolio has a magnetic rays that charm me to see for it, so I’m here giving you a review and comment on this nice stuff of yours.

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*Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
Love is not always been sweet, if we want to taste the sweet of love, we should expect also its twin-Pain.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
The title- is the one that captivates me, and I liked how you relate it as the death of love.
The imagery is fine, every line there is a good reason attached on it, and I also see a story behind it.
The format and structure is fine also is just too simple,
Maybe I am expecting more like breaking of words and lines to be more emotional.

FAVORITE LINE :
 Death of a Thousand Cuts

What's really in hurt..?
The death or the thousand cuts

*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn't see any words that can distract the flow.
and no doubt arise.

 MY FINAL THOUGHT :
This is a great piece.
For me its better to been dead, than always facing the pain of the thousand cuts.
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
Until next time.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Meet your friend here Joanna pen name:Samberine Everose
I was hooked by your piece
 New School  (E)
Another unfinished story.
#1971947 by Gabriel Wolfbane Phoenix
in your Portfolio and I’m here to give you a review and comment on this nice stuff of yours.

I‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and disregard it, if doesn’t fit to your taste.

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*Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
This is a cute story, I think about a romance of a girl vampire and a boy vampire, unique, having another version of the Twilight saga.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:

The title is the hooker of a piece, it is the first thing that an author will see, I thought your piece is just a typical teenage story about school and classes as the title says, I didn't expected that you relate it to the world of vampire. I also created a short story in our own language about some funny romance of Mr. Vampire and a white lady, It just reminds me while reading your story. *Smile*
Imagery is good, clear for me by crafting those words you used.
The flow is good also, it evokes emotion like suspense but it doesn't scared me.
The only thing I see is a blooming romance between the two.

*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
Just some misspelled word, I have also that in my writings,

I've moved from one school to other as my identity..
I've moved from one school to another as my identity..

Her eyes flutter open, reveling large, beautiful, blue eyes.
Her eyes flutter open, revealing large, beautiful, blue eyes.

Scratches as the young mans face.
Scratches as the young man's face.

The bat only manged to deliver one large blow..
The bat only managed to deliver one large blow..

She pulls a white handkerchief out out of her..

She pulls a white handkerchief out of her..

Donovan says he he starts to walk down
Donovan says he starts to walk down

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A nice piece.
I liked how you narrate it, and I am waiting to the next episode.
You portrayed it well.
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

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Review of Falling - 1-8-08  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Meet your friend here Joanna pen name Samberine Everose
Your piece
 Falling - 1-8-08  (E)
It starts down deep with a flutter. The crimson rises to your cheeks. The urge to speak...
#1974505 by CJHanna84
in your Portfolio captivates me and I’m here to give you a review and comment on this nice stuff of yours.

I‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn’t fit to your taste.

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*Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
This is about falling again into love, its hard to be fallen so deep, the more its deep, the deeper its hurt.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:

The given title is the first thing that entice me to read your piece, I've been curious what is that falling that you mean, and I perceived that it was falling on the negative side..?
I think about fallen too.
The imagery is vivid, you used words that paint the emotion, or what a person felt when it is in falling again.
This is a rhyming poetry and I liked how you dabble your words into the rhyming.
Even if emotional, it makes it in the lighter shade because you tend to be in rhyming.

FAVORITE LINE:
 How to remember when forgetting feels so good.

I just like it.


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t see any words that can distract the flow. *Thumbsupl*
And no doubt arise.

 MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A great piece.
We have different definition about falling, and yours is one of the truest things about really in falling. You portrayed and described it well.
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

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