What a precious love story. I have tears in my eyes, now I have finished reading it. You have written this like a professional. Your beginning is strong, your body is filled with drama and your ending was very emotional. I understood how upset Lisette was when Philippe rejected the idea of ever marrying her, I felt her heartache. I was happy that she was going to return Nicolas's love and was very sad to learn that he had died.
A great job writing your poem Difference Of One. I found it very inspiring , and I loved the closing.."Trivial
Small
Quiet
Are whispered in the ears
of the world."
I also like the way you have it layed out on the page, Very nice.
I voted other as I am not sure what a witch looks or acts like, although sometimes I think I might act like one. ... What do they do and are they real? A good subject for a poll.
A nice story. Your beginning is nicely written. Your plot has nice descriptive writing, and I can conceive your ending is true and complete. I know that human nature being as it was, someone would try to take over and be the king and queen. very nice.
What a terrible experience. I am sorry you had such a terrible experience with your step Mom. I believe step Mothers are jealous and not secure and that is why way to often they are unkind.
Oh my dear I am so sorry for the loss and for the pain that you went through. I also lossed a baby, a few days after their birth. I had twins one died one lived.
A nice write, it is filled with imagery. Love is so sweet and so painful when it goes sour. "Heartbroken, she moved inland away from shore" nicely worded.
This subject of the O.J. trail has affect many people throughout Usa and other place. I know here in Canada people were glued to the Tv set, many of them arguing is he guilty or is he not. One thing is for sure,two human beings died unfairly. A good job in this item.
Dear Angel, this indeed is true and so very inspiring. There is nothing any better than giving. Even for those who have no means they can always give a helping hand, a smile, a listening ear, time and so many other free things. When I was a child we used to sing a song: You have a talent , use it for the Lord. You have a talent use it for the Lord, If you do not use it, You will surely lose it. You have a talent ,use it for the Lord. This item reminds me of that song. I do not recall if it was longer or not. Thank you for this write. Funnyface
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