Gasp!!! I haven't reviewed this either?!? I guess something has to be done about that too!
Overall Impressions:
This is a lovely group forum that you have created! You have come a long way in decorating and customizing since making it. Well done!
Imagery:
The graphics and imagery blows me away. Anywhere from your little animated graphics to your cute little angel pics.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.
Originality/Uniqueness:
By far this is a very original and unique idea! You deserve every reward and words of praise that you recieve for creating this!
Closing Remarks:
You have always been a leader on this site since the first day you joined! Thank you for inviting me to join and creating this wonderful group! I am proud to be a member. Keep writing!
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Overall Impressions: This is a beautiful poem. I love the description and visuals that you gave. The Haiku form is one of my favorites to review. I haven't written any yet. Hopefully one of these days I will. You did a great job! Keep writing!
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Overall Impressions: This is very beautiful! Your use of words and description are very breath-taking! I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors. Well done!
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Overall Impressions:
Hello again! I haven't reviewed this yet? This is a great review forum for our group. It is well decorated and very colorful. Offers help in all areas for newbies. This shows that you are a caring and sweet girl! But I already knew that.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.
Closing Remarks:
Good job girl!
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Imagery:
You gave great visuals describing the beauty of a gladiola, and the envy of the plain daisy. Although
the daisy in my opinion is gorgeous. Some of the most beautiful creatures are the ones that go unnoticed are in fact the true envy of all the rest!
Flow:
This had excellent flow and was easy to read through. Well done!
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors. Good job!
Originality/Uniqueness:
So far today, this is the most unique poem that I have read all day!
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for a great read! Keep writing!
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Overall Impressions:
This is a very beautiful poem! I enjoyed reading it and learning a new form!
Imagery:
Muse Unleashed had great imagery and details. I could just picture your muse emrging from the great chrysalis like a beautiful butterfly and taking flight! Well done!
Flow:
This had great flow and form. You followed the Senryu perfectly! Great job!
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors. Good job.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for introducing me to a new form! I will have to try one of these! Keep writing!
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Overall Impressions:
This is a very sweet poem about your daughter.
Imagery:
I love the pink that represents that of a girl.
Flow/Structure/Form:
This didn't follow the prompt of the Cinquiano form. Although you did a great job with this. The form should be in this syllabic pattern: 2/8/6/4/2
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors. Well done!
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for entering! Good luck! Here are 100 gps just for entering! I hope to see you in the next round!
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Overall Impressions:
This is a pretty good poem.
Emotional Impact:
You did really well with the emotional part of the poem; 'aspiration', 'blaze', 'vacancy' and of course 'lust'. All of which are great words. You made great use of description and choice of words.
Flow/Structure/Form:
The flow isn't too bad, you did very well with this. The syllable count is way off. I will show you. Please don't take this the wrong way. For instance:
Line 1 has 4 syllables when it should have 2.
Line 2 has 7 syllable instead of 8.
Line 3 has 4 syllables instead of 6.
Line 4 has 5 syllables when it should have 4.
Line 5 should have 2 syllables not 1.
The end result should be 2/8/6/4/2
Maybe you could consult a thesaurus and look for alternative words to use. Or you could turn it into a free verse or another form of poetry. This is just a suggestion.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors. Well done!
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for entering! Good luck! Here are 100 gps just for entering! I hope to see you in the next round!
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Overall Impressions:
This was a very sad story. I can definately relate to this piece,.
Emotional Impact:
This story hit home for me. My mother has both schizophrenia and bipolar disorder. She is difficult to deal with at times. She doesn't live in a sanitarium or anything. It's hard to love someone in that condition, especially when you've been treated badly by that person.
Imagery:
Your description was extraordinary!
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors. Well done!
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for entering! Not enough entries were received for the short story prompt, so I have divided up 10k gps, plus I am giving you 100 gps just for entering, for a total of 1528 gps. I hope to see you in the next round!
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Overall Impressions:
This is a well written story. It uses a lot of expressions and subliminal messages. You did a great job!
Emotional Impact:
This made me so sad. No matter how old a person is, they are always someone's baby or little one. When they get hurt or worse, it hurts all the same.
Imagery:
You gave a great description in this. You are a very good author.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors. Although, you do need to be careful with your spacing when you type. Otherwise, well done!
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for entering! I didn't receive enough entries in this round for the short story prompt to give out any prizes. I have divided up 10k gps. Here are 1428 gps and 100 gps just for entering! Thank you for understanding.
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This is a very inspirational piece! I love the description and skill it took to write this beautiful poem. Your choice of words are very impressive. I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors. Well done! I hope to see more form you! Keep writing!
Well done! A great guide for all mothers who have to juggle several things at once! I don't have children, but this will be a very useful article when I do. Does having a boyfriend/fiance count as having a child? You did a great job on this and wrote it flawlessly. Well done!
This was a very moving piece of writing! I am angry at how the homeless are being treated. I knew that it was getting bad, but they're actually getting arrested just for eating in public? Come on, it's not like they're eating out of dumpsters in public! I live in the Tampa Bay area and I have read in the St. Pete Times that they forced the homeless out of tents because it posed a fire hazard along the streets. The police went and slashed and destroyed the tents so that they couldn't be slept in. I think that is so heartless. I share your concerns on the homeless and the inhumane way that they are being treated. I hope that this piece reaches a lot of people so that the homeless will be fed and housed. Bless you.
I really loved this one too! Of course I have always been one to admire nature poetry, especially in haiku form. You gave an excellent description plus beautiful visuals. I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors. Keep writing!
Hello! I enjoyed reading this interesting poem! You seemed to have followed this form perfectly. I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors. You gave a great description in each segement with a beautiful array of colors! Well done!
Overall Impressions:
A very beautiful and touching piece of poetry! This poem had something from almost every genre, something for everyone to enjoy! I didn't find any grammatical or spelling errors. Well done!
Gemini
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A very original and unique piece of poetry! This is a poem that asks all the greatest and hardest questions in a philosophical form. I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors. Well done! You are very talented! Welcome to WDC!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions:
I had a lot of fun cruising through your port! I all of the hard work that you put into this! You are an inspiration to everyone on this site! Well done on a fantastic port! Welcome to WDC!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions:
This was a very sad and sombering poem. It hurts me to see homeless/starving people. You wish that you could help them all, but that is nearly impossible to do. I know what it's like to go without food when you are low on money or you are fasting for cleansing purposes, but no matter why you are hungry, it's an uncomfortable situation. This was a very well written piece, and flowed smoothly.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't see any grammar or spelling errors.
Closing Remarks:
Well done! Keep writing!
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A very beautiful collection of cnotes! I admire your work! The imagery is breath-taking and inspiring! What kind of software did you use for these? Thank you for making these!
GeminiStar
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I guess something has to be done about that too!
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors. Well done!
I haven't reviewed this yet? This is a great review forum for our group. It is well decorated and very colorful. Offers help in all areas for newbies. This shows that you are a caring and sweet girl! But I already knew that.
This was very cute! I really enjoyed reading this! 
I knew that it was getting bad, but they're actually getting arrested just for eating in public? 
Come on, it's not like they're eating out of dumpsters in public! I live in the Tampa Bay area and I have read in the St. Pete Times that they forced the homeless out of tents because it posed a fire hazard along the streets. The police went and slashed and destroyed the tents so that they couldn't be slept in. I think that is so heartless. I share your concerns on the homeless and the inhumane way that they are being treated. I hope that this piece reaches a lot of people so that the homeless will be fed and housed. Bless you. 
This poem had something from almost every genre, something for everyone to enjoy! I didn't find any grammatical or spelling errors. Well done!