Overall Impressions:
You present a great argument in this essay. I am not an athiest or anything. I believe God exists. Just because you can't see something, doesn't mean that it isn't there. But as a whole we are in the unknown. We don't know until we die. I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors. Well done!
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Character Comments:
I hate and detest people like Anita!
Emotional Impact:
The main emotion that I felt during this story was annoyance more than anything when Anita popped into the scene. Anita should've minded her own business, lol! It also brought a smile to my face at the same time.
Imagery:
How you described the flowers was breath-taking in their glorious splendor! All the vibrant colors just jumped into my mind.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing such a colorful story!
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Imagery:
What a better topic to talk about than a flower? You did a great job with the visuals and description.
Flow/Form:
This is a fun form! I have written one of these a long time ago. I wrote about anonymous reviews as the subject. You followed this form perfectly!
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.
Closing Remarks:
Well done on a splendid piece! Keep writing!
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This was a very powerful piece. What a great way to express your feelings! I feel the same way you do, and I imagine that most people do share your opinion. Like you, I am tired of this war and everything else that goes with it. You raise an important issue. I am always happy to see people stand up for themselves. I don't like any politician. I especially hate voting. This is only because neither of the candidates seem worthy to me on either side. Speaking of 'Quagmire', I wrote a Clerihew poem on Quagmire, but I think that it applies more to the character on 'Family Guy'. Well done on voicing your opinion!
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Overall Impressions:
This is a well thought-out forum. A wonderful chance for newbies to get to learn something new! I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors. I hope that this is very successful for you and everyone involved! Well done!
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Overall Impressions:
This is a very beautiful poem.
Emotional Impact:
It makes me angry that there are so many bigots among us in this world. Since when does skin color matter when it comes to love? This subject always makes me think.
Flow/Form:
You followed the Lune form perfectly. This had great flow and rhythm.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for writing such a beautiful poem!
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But as a whole we are in the unknown. We don't know until we die. I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors. Well done!
