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Review by gladiola
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)

Hello waynelee
This is gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your poem entitled Object Of My Affection.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

Concept/Premise *RollEyes*
A girl who doesn't know of the love someone has for her. That is really very hard.

Overall impression: *Reading*
I really sympatized with that poem specially that he had great respect for the girl and wished to treat her in a great way and make her so happy. It is a loss that she doesn't feel that at all.

What I liked most : *ThumbsUp*
I would treat you like an angel,

and fill both our hearts with bliss,
Those where my favourite lines because it shows pure love and not mere infatuation. I can feel how precious she is through those lines.

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Review of The Eagle  
Review by gladiola
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)

Hello Norswede
This is gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your poem entitled The Eagle.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

What I liked most : *ThumbsUp*
I loved the bautiful description of the powerful eagle and the beautiful nature around it.The description here is very finely done. I could see vivid images of that eagle, the pretty maiden and I could see very well what happened to him and how she was crying bitterly over her beloved.

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Surrounded by the suns sun's hot beams

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I don't know if that is just me or what, but I think the poem is based on a legend or so which may be familiar where you but I don't know it, so I couldn't really get the brief description nor the relation between the eagle and the maiden. I am sorry but I really hope to know it.


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Review by gladiola
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)

Hello
This is gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your poem entitled Because I Love Him.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

Concept/Premise *RollEyes*
A poem about a girl who loves a boy do dearly. She describes how handsome he looks and how she sees him.

Overall impression: *Reading*
It is nice to read. I enjoyed reading it and felt it is great. You managed to describe him well and describe how she feels when she thinks about him. That is nice and flows smoothly.

What I liked most : *ThumbsUp*
I loved repetition of (because I love him) at the end of each stanza as a confirmation of the love she has for him. Great Job!


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Review of What's Nice?  
Review by gladiola
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)

Hello Malik23
This is gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your poem entitled What's Nice?.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

Overall impression: *Reading*
That poem is so cute and fun to read. You are mentioning a lot fo nice things from food to writing to summer to playing. It has a lot of varieties.

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I think what is ice? ( the second question in the poem) seems a bit awkward, because it is the only one that way, the rest are all what is nice? so I felt you should either make it what is nice or continue like that ( what is ice, what is choose a set of different words that rhyme with nice and rice).


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Review of Refugee  
Review by gladiola
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)

Hello Max
This is gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your short story entitled Refugee.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

Concept/Premise *RollEyes*
Refugees. This is a really bitter thing. I always hate war and violence, and without any political interest, I believe war to be a loss to everyone. The premise is a serious one and you are able to write about it due to your current location. It is good to describe how these refugees were, the food they had and a bit of how they felt.

Overall impression: *Reading*
It is sad to read but true. It is really heartbreaking when people have to leave their homes and escape with their lives together with who could make it from their families. The explosions, violence and fear people are exposed to is really great and terrible.

What I liked most : *ThumbsUp*
I loved most about it the coccoon the girl was in, that was of help to her. She only listened to the only comforting voice found and not paying attention to any other thing. This sounds so true and I believed it. Well done!


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I actually expected the end, I expected her grandmother to have died and so I suppose you try ti add something to it like how she died or make it a bit tricky.

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Review by gladiola
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello again allymonsta
This is gladiola from "The WDC Angel Army"  and I am pleased to offer my review for your poem entitled One Misty, Moisty Spring .
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

Concept/Premise *RollEyes*
A girl who say a fairy gathering. A great concept. Fantasy I think. It is a new premise and so you have a privelege.

Overall impression: *Reading*
You are so talented. You succeeded in drawing a vivd, lovely colourful picture in my mind of those beautiful fairies. I felt their beauty so strongly and I think I could artist can express your words in wonderful drawings. That day is truely unforgettable, and worth remembering. Your poem is a very joyful one. I loved that.
You also have individuality which appeared in your poems, which mixes beauty with simplicity.
*PointRight* I believe that you are off to a great start. Be sure of that!

What I liked most : *ThumbsUp*
The rhyme added music, together with that lovely picture, makes an original and unique poem.


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Review by gladiola
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello DeBo
This is gladiola from "The WDC Angel Army"  and I am pleased to offer my review for your poem entitled A Palace called "My Imagination".
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

Concept/Premise *RollEyes*
Imagination. That is really a palace as you described it. The sky is the limit to it and we are the only ones who have control over it. That it as great premise and I have not read about imagination before, so I think your poem is original. Well done!


Overall impression: *Reading*
That is a very cute poem. I enjoyed reading it. The way you look at things and describe them to be so great, due to your imagination is nice. It is as if I come to discover another fabulous thing with each line, coming at the end to say that all of this lies at your big imagination. This is great, simple, and straight to the point. I love it.

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I don't see anything missing about the poem , but I have a piece of advice regarding writing as you mentioned shyness and so. Before I joined WDC, I never showed anything I write to anybody, so here it was my first place to be display my talent and I was a bit nervous when I recieved the first reviews to a new item, however by time, I gained more confidence and learned alot, about writing and many other things. So that is okay!


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Review by gladiola
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)

Hello Sum1
I am pleased to offer my review for your favorite poem entitled Is It More Than That?..

That is romance. The question "Is It More Than That?" shows unlimited love that doesn't have any boundries if I might say.
All through out the poem different ways by which the lover thinks of his girl are mentioned and he just always think of her.
The ending was so special and smart. You simply ended with a relieving confirmation that she is in the heart,in the soul and "more than that". It is great that you come to answer the same question that was at the end of each stanza.
I think if you could use rhyme here, it would be good. Adding music to romance is a good thing. It is just a suggestion but it is great taht way though.





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Review of Dead Flowers  
Review by gladiola
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)

Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating
This is gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your poem entitled Dead Flowers.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

Concept/Premise *RollEyes*
Dead desperate flowers remaining after a wrecked love. This is really a very powerful concept and you managed to express it very well all through out your poem and that made it live up to my expectations. Well done!


Overall impression: *Reading*
The image and the situation created here are perfect and complete. I can see the whole picture of a vase with dead flowers whose colours have faded and all what is remaining now of them is the thorns. The beauty is no longer there but it has been replaced by sadness and loss of hope.

What I liked most : *ThumbsUp*
*LeafBr* I loved the initials of each line which form the words " Dead flowers" which is also the title of the poem. That was really well done.
*LeafBr* Also the motion in the petals falling slowly one by one seemed nice, slow and fitiing.

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This seems so perfect.


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Review of Consequences  
Review by gladiola
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello Coda Napeland
This is gladiola from "Invalid Item"  and I am pleased to offer my review for your Short Story entitled Consequences.

Your story, despite being very short, as you need it to be, has great potential. It is finely writeen with great description that I can feel the motion and see the image of that delicate lovely lady.
All the emotions there are very powerful and they speak so loud to be heard.
You did very well by just using few words, which is a hard thing to to.
But I couldn't quite get the ending part, which I believe to be important which is "No one leaves me and makes it away with her life."
Do you mean the consequences will be for leaving? I am not quite sure and would love to know.
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Review of Never Alone  
Review by gladiola
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello very thankful
This is gladiola with a review brought to you by showering acts of joy for your poem entitled Never Alone. *Delight*
As a reviewer, what I offer is just my opinion and what I know so you are free to take it or drop it. You know better than anybody what fits.

Concept/Premise *RollEyes*
A relieving fact when you feel alone, just believe that God is always with you. A great premise indeed! There are times when everybody feels so alone and needs someone, so it is good to trust that God is always there for us and put our faith in that.


Overall impression: *Reading*
You did a great job just with few words. It is straight to the point and so simple. I loved it.

What I liked most : *ThumbsUp*
I loved that you proved that God is there because of his love to us. Everybody needs to feel this love specially when they feel lonely.


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Review of Turn Around  
Review by gladiola
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hello Sugar Rose Dupre
This is gladiola with a review brought to you by showering acts of joy for your poem entitled Turn Around . *Delight*
As a reviewer, what I offer is just my opinion and what I know so you are free to take it or drop it. You know better than anybody what fits.

Concept/Premise *RollEyes*
A lady seeing the same dream over and over again, of a man who she wishes him to turn and face her. This is really a strange and amusing idea because it raises so many question like: who will he be? is he someone she knew? is he handsome? You made a great choice here.

Overall impression: *Reading*
I liked this specially that she finally could see him, she always longed to see him and fuinally her wish came true. I loved that you left it to the reader imagination to decide whether or not she will ever meet him and fall in love with hiom or not.

What I liked most : *ThumbsUp*
I loved that you made her wake in the morning, starting a new day with a beautiful wish; to meet someone who will love her and no longer be alone. Who could wish something more beautiful than that?

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Review of ANONYMOUS RATERS  
Review by gladiola
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hello Sherri
This is gladiola with a review brought to you by showering acts of joy for your essay entitled ANONYMOUS RATERS. *Delight*
As a reviewer, what I offer is just my opinion and what I know so you are free to take it or drop it. You know better than anybody what fits.

Concept/Premise *RollEyes*
Anonymouse raters. These are really strange and bugging but I am glad they are not many on the site, so that is the good point. They rate and run! I really wonder why they just come to annoy others and discourage them, why even participate if that was their only intention?


Overall impression: *Reading*
I agree with you completely. They are just cowards. If they think something is bad they can just move on to another or constructively suggest what could be done to make it better. We are here to grow not discourage each other. You mentioned that in fine and few words. Finely written essay.

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Review of This is My Cry  
Review by gladiola
In affiliation with Let's help each other grow...  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello F. Garcia
This is gladiola from "Let's help each other grow- Closed"  and I am pleased to offer my review for your poem entitled This is my cry.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

Concept/Premise *RollEyes*
Promoting the use of contraceptives and emphasizing the consequesnces of having children when parents aren't ready. A real vital issue to discuss!


Overall impression: *Reading*
This is heartbreaking but unfortunately so true. The so called "parents" are sometimes never planing to have children and it is really a pity when an unprepared couple have a child. I see poverty and suffering and working children and it is really so sad to see an innocent "angel" having to suffer and face horrible situations, just because his parents are not reponsible enough.
You expressed all that in very fine words.

What I liked most : *ThumbsUp*
My favorite lines are :
Open your eyes to reality
The world is dangerous it's plain to see
I feel there is a great warning in here and I agree that the world is a very dangerous place.


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I didn't stumble anywhere.


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this is perfect!

*PointRight* The poem along with its video are really so nice, and I respect so much the message and the call within.
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Review of I leave  
Review by gladiola
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello ridinghhood
This is gladiola from showering acts of joy and I am honored to review your poem entitled I leave. *Delight*
As a reviewer, what I offer is just my opinion and what I know so you are free to take it or drop it. You know better than anybody what fits.

Overall impression: *Reading*
This is refreshing to read. Yes, it is a little bit of poetry, however, it is a great deal of emotions and very fine words.
I enjoyed reading this.

What I liked most : *ThumbsUp*
*MushroomG* There have been some words here which are perfectly chosen and had a powerful effect on me while reading this like "become small birds...trembling in my hand." this is really a strong description and an accurate one actually about fear and shows how horrible it is.

*MushroomG* I also liked the end where souls will get free of their freedom.

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What is hatchlings? was that a typo?

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Review of A Note To Pray  
Review by gladiola
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Feather Duster
This is gladiola from showering acts of joy and I am honored to review your poem entitled A Note To Pray . *Delight*
As a reviewer, what I offer is just my opinion and what I know so you are free to take it or drop it. You know better than anybody what fits.

Concept/Premise *RollEyes*
Thanksgiving day.

Overall impression: *Reading*
This is nice to read because we really need to be thankful for what we are given and for the blessings we have.

What I liked most : *ThumbsUp*
I loved the gratitude, celebration, freedom, food and finally peace. Lots of great meanings and joyful things.


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I felt that the oranging colour is a little distracting and not necessary, I recommend that yuou change it to a darker colour to be easier to read.


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Review of WHO AM I ??  
Review by gladiola
In affiliation with Let's help each other grow...  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Mou Dutta
This is gladiola from lets help each other grow and I am pleased to offer my review for your poem entitled WHO AM I ??.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

Concept/Premise *RollEyes*
Who is a human from the beginning of his life as a baby and till he grows older and finally when he is dead. You followed the pathway of life in an incredible way.


Overall impression: *Reading*
I was surprised to find that you have more than one poem rated 5, however, when I began to read this, I immediately felt that this deserves a full mark.
You have been speaking about the the good and bad things a person does, from breaking laws and taking others rights to doing the mission he has to do and living every day as it should be.
Human beings are really a mixture of good and bad, mistakes and correct deeds, and no body is totally perfect or bad.
I loved this here.

What I liked most : *ThumbsUp*
There have been certain lines that I loved most about the poem which are:
"For I know the almighty listens to my heartbeat with an invisible stethoscope……." This is certain and faithful and that is loveable about it.

"I am one who was born out of love" a great thing to mention that the beginning of a person is love and it is nice to remember that.

"I am the one who can embrace the past with fond remembrances , the present with affection & the future with longing….." This is optimistic and seems to carry great expectations for a better tomorrow.

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There have been few punctuation mistakes that I'd like you to take care of:
the comma should be placed directly after the word, without any spaces in between, so I'd recommened that you go through your poem and remove some spaces before commas.
also sometimes there had been random spacing between words which I don't think is necessary, so again I recoomend you remove it.
But I don't think there is a need to mark you down ofr these minor issues.

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Review of First Paragraph  
Review by gladiola
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Taryn
your story beginning seems quite interesting and I think that it will go on with lots of amusing and interesting incidents.
I urge you to go on with it since the first paragraph is a great one, even if you don't think it is as good as you wished, write it the way you have it for now and you can revise it later with lots of reviews and advice to help you with it.
cheers,
gladiola
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Review by gladiola
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Rose Grey
This is gladiola from showering acts of joy and I am honored to review your prose entitled Light from my Life. *Delight*
As a reviewer, what I offer is just my opinion and what I know so you are free to take it or drop it. You know better than anybody what fits.

Concept/Premise *RollEyes*
Few words about a friend who passed away. A loss indeed for true friends are rare to find.


Overall impression: *Reading*
Sad but heartful. I could feel how you felt towards your friend and how that friend was a great one, so kind and generous.
If I could think of one word about your friend, it would be "loveable", since s/he was the light to your life and you described him or her as an angel.

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I have a feeling that you should add a little part that you feel satisfied that your friend is in he heaven, his or her place, happy and comfortable.


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Review by gladiola
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
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Hello Pat
This is gladiola from showering acts of joy and I am honored to review your short story entitled Danny. *Delight*
As a reviewer, what I offer is just my opinion and what I know so you are free to take it or drop it. You know better than anybody what fits.

Concept/Premise *RollEyes*
The sutobiography of a child with a serious disorder. A hard and serious one!


Overall impression: *Reading*
This is true and hard. It is really hard to have a child with this disorder because they are aggressive and can harm their family members. Their behaviour can not be expected and how far they might go is never known.
They need a greal deal of love, patience, persistence, awareness of course together with therapy. A real demanding child!

What I liked most : *ThumbsUp*
I loved how you explain what adoption is like at the end in a loving, yet a real and warning way. You give reason for that warning and it is a true one.

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Review of A Ghostly Poem  
Review by gladiola
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Maryann - House Martell
This is gladiola from showering acts of joy and I am honored to review your poem entitled A Ghostly Poem. *Delight*
As a reviewer, what I offer is just my opinion and what I know so you are free to take it or drop it. You know better than anybody what fits.

Concept/Premise *RollEyes*
Living in a haunted house. Scary!


Overall impression: *Reading*
I am dazzled. The story is an enjoying one and instead of the cliched ending of leaving a house since it is haunted, you had a different ending by getting along with those ghosts and living together peacefully and happily. Brilliant!*ThumbsUp*

I loved the vivid images there although not evoking all the senses but the imagery is still a nice one.
Great!

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Review by gladiola
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Hello Zaring
This is gladiola from showering acts of joy and I am honored to review your poem entitled A hard lesson to learn. *Delight*
As a reviewer, what I offer is just my opinion and what I know so you are free to take it or drop it. You know better than anybody what fits.

Concept/Premise *RollEyes*
A lesson to warn the young girls not to follow their emotions recklessly.

Overall impression: *Reading*
Well written and covered it all.


What I liked most : *ThumbsUp*
*BalloonBl* A great fitting title, which explains what the poem is about. It is really a bitter and hard lesson for any young lady.

*BalloonBl* Also different feelings are elaborated here, like fear, shame, revenge and feeling unable to do anything about it.


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a mans touch (man's)


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The ending line didn't seem so appropriate to me, because it is threatening rather than warning and it is what prevented me of rating it higher.
I hope that you think about it and try to replace it.


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William Wordsworth



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Review of Reviewing  
Review by gladiola
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Jaeff | KBtW of the Free Folk
This is gladiola from showering acts of joy and I am pleased to offer my review for your article entitled "Reviewing" .
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.
I chose to read this because I always love to know more about reviewing. Here at WDC, my review ballooned from being (good job) which is not even a review to a lonegr one with sections. I love to know more about reviewing because I feel so happy when I recieve an in-depth review and would like the reviewee to feel the same for mine. Therefore, this is what I am searching for.

Concept/Premise *RollEyes*

Advice on reviewing and the sections which are worth mentioning in a good review. A helpful one! *BoxCheck*

Overall impression: *Reading*
I loved this because it is professional and helpful. There were times when I had some more things to mention in my reviews but I didn't know how to say them or how to put them in words, therefore this article helped me greatly with this. I saved it to return to it every now and then to revise it and apply it.

What I liked most : *ThumbsUp*
*BalloonP* There were things which I didn't know how to express and I've found here. Like:
The style, sometimes I don't point it out although there is a clear individuality in what certain authors write. I will do them justice from now on.

*BalloonP* Explaining the items using well known examples because sometimes I read what this or that item means but I don't really get it. That is so helpful.

Spelling and grammar *Magnify*perfect

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As I mentioned, this is professional. There were some terms used which I couldn't get. I suggest that you put the meaning in simple words between brackets or if they are known, I would love to know them for myself.
These words are: twist and character arc.

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Review of No Baby  
Review by gladiola
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Karl
This is gladiola from showering acts of joy and I am pleased to offer my review for your prose entitled No Baby.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

Theme *RollEyes*
Refusing to let a lover, who once left, come back. Correct decision!*CheckB*

Overall impression: *Reading*
*Bird* I like how decisive and final the tone here is.
Well written and fine words were chosen.

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I just don't know why some words are written as they are and if that was meant; like kid's ? (why not kids)

I can't complain either she is a wonderful lover. I think a semicolon is needed here after either in order to explain why he couldn't complain.

Stay where you are we don not need you here ( I think it is do not)

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None for this one.

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Review by gladiola
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Daizy May
This is gladiola from showering acts of joy and I am pleased to offer my review for your poem entitled There's A Spider On My Foot.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.
Actually I chose to read this because I am stressed and need to smile, and because i am so childish and I get scared of insects especially spiders so I would certainly get lost if one stood on my foot. Therefore, this poem is the one for me. lol

Theme *RollEyes*
How to act when there is a spider on your foot. This is hilarious. This is the strangest theme I have ever written.FOFL

Overall impression: *Reading*
This is so funny Daizy. I like your poem and I like you as an author. It made me laugh all the way through with the different options that you offered and your final decision seemed the best thing to do.
A strange idea and a great poem.

What I liked most : *ThumbsUp*
I liked it all honestly.

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I believe it is perfect.


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