Very imaginative! This was a good story and told so well. It was of her son that died and now she has a reminder of him in the card. That is something special. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of areview. You did a good job You did well as we said and I hope youwill keep on writing. Youre good at it.
Well, this is really something. I would love to find millions of candles in a room. I would love to see the fire glow. You did justice to this piece. It is beautiful. Keep on writing. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. Good job.
I don't know what to say about this piece. You didn't do the things you said you did. It is the Lord that causes the sun to rise no human could ever do that. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Just dont' get so high minded the next time. Keep writing.
This is a great collection of work. I would love to read them all but they are pretty extensive. You did a good job with this collection. It is hoped that you will keep on writing. You did well in presenting this collection of work for the purpose of a review. You did a goodjob as we said and I hope that you will keep on writing.
This is a good piece. It is regretable that you would speak of death in this piece when it is full of love. There are ways to get around thedying part and it s hoped you werent seriously thinking about doing yourself in. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. You are hopefully going to keep on writing.
Don't I know it! For without my computer I would dry up on the stalk. It is with the computer or else. A bad day is had and I am so lonely I could cry. Facebook is world wide now and though I m part of it I don't like it. You did well in presenting this piece of lliterature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Keep on writing. You're good at it.
WHEW! What a story! This is something I hadn't thought of and it is something that is really real with someone. They are allergic to sunshine. It makes perfect sense and I can just about hear the boys calling him a vampire. Youdid well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Keep on writing. I really enjoyed this one.
This is terrible! You have been touched by four men that should have known better than to have touched you. It is a terrible thing as I said and I am so sorry it has happened to you. Love should be expressed in warmth and grace. Not lusting after the young woman isn't the way to go. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Keep on writing. You're good at it.
A great tribute to your mother for this piece to be. You filled it with love and wonder. You see I wonder who your mother is but know one thing for sure she is a great person to have you by her side. I say wonder for I would love to see a picture of her so I would get a glimpse of who she is. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. You did well as we said and I am hoping that you will be writing more and more.
GREAT STUFF! I love a vampire story. You did this one justice and it shows so well. Imagine she using a gun to stop a vampire. It doesnt' work. It didnt' work is more to the matter. You did well in presenting t his piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and one that I am happy I clicked. Keep writing.
That would certainly break the ice a bit for you to do that. Saying Hello is so very meaningful and simple that it doesn't take any energy to do it. You are a good writer and having written this I hope to see some more of your work. You did well in presenting this piece of lliterature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. You hopefully be writing more as you go along. You're good at it.
This is a good piece. You have done so well in speaking your mind about doing thethings that should be done. True friends and such are the keys to good things. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did well and a good job. Keep on writing. I don't see any room for improvement. Here you done a great job. Keep it up.
This is a great piece. You have said that you want to be noticed for who you are. It is only right for you to feel that way. you want people to notice you for more than just who you are.I would if it were me. You have done well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Keep on writing.
Beautiful! I was let down though for you didn't use capital letters to separate the thoughts in the piece. It was looking like a bunch of words put together though they made a complete thought. It would have been better to have used the capital letters to separate the words and the sentences you did. Youdid well in presentng this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Keep on writing.
This is a great piece. It mentions about true love and the feelings one have the other. The music they listen to is the same and the pictures are the same. One gets lost in reading this piece for the love that is there.You did well in presenting this piece of llterature for the purpose of a review. You did well as we said. You did a good job. Keep writing.
GREAT piece is this one,. You have all the elements of a great piece here with this one. It is regretable that the two didn't stay together. You made it like there was someone between the two of them and they chose that person. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. You did well as we said and i hope you will keep on writing.
The reason you got a 4.0 stars is because I wasn't able to read the last line at all. Using the color choice you did would have been better to have used the black. I am not being a picky person here. It is so difficult for the people who have trouble with seeing that they miss part of the piece. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review.You did a good job for it was a great read as far as I could read it was good. I would have capitalized the references to God with the pronoun you to have it capitalized. Keep wriiting.
You are speaking about rose colored glasses. You are speaking about seeing things that were there before but for the first time have been seen. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. You did well as we said and i hope that you will keep on writing.
Beautiful but long! It is like a story and not a poem though it may have been meant for one. The words were lovely to read. It painted a picture f the sunset and the sunrise. You did well in presentng this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Keep writing.
What a good tail I mean tale! The dog's tail is something that you mentioned only briefly. it was funny to read this piece. You did a good job with it. Happy Sundays are the days when nothing gets in the way of having some fun right? You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of review. You did a good job. You did well as we said. It was a plesure reading this piece. I am glad that I clicked it. Keep writing. You're good at it.
A good piece is this one. It does paint a picture that you used your colors well. It is about a princess and the love that she has for this young man. It is hoped that the young man will want her and being so that satisfies her for the get go. You did well in presenting this piece of litearture for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and one I hope that you will keep on writing.
What a piece this is! Jealousy is something that affects people who are not sure of themselves. They build themselves up and think they are something when they are just as normal as anyone else. You have done wel in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You have donea good job. You did well as we said. It is hoped that you will keep on writing.
This is an ominous piece of work. It is totally dark and dreary. You say in the last stanza that you are suicide. People have chosen the route to suicide before and turned back. They didn't go through with it and for good reason. You bring out this stuff in your piece. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. You are asked to keep on writing.
The rhyming scheme was a good touch. It was a good piece to begin. It was someething that I wouldn't have done or thought of but you did and it is the thing that counts. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Keep writing.
Well, I was 5 years too late to enter the contest. It was all spelled out as to what was acceptable and what wasn't. i would have loved to have been a part of this contest. I hope you will run it again so I can have my hand at writing something for it. You did well and it shows. Keep on going strong.
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