GREAT! You gave your mother a tribute here that is very very good. You let us know that she could have died on the operating table but she pulled through. You are a grateful child because of your mother. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. You did well as we said and I hope to see more of your work as time goes on. Keep writing.
This is based upon your opinion and not the way things really are. I know of a girl right now who is seeking help from her mother. Her mother treats her really bad and causes her strife. It is a shame and the truth is that the young girl looks to someone for help and there isn't any. You did well in presenting this piece of liteature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Though I tend to disagree with what yo said it was still very good. Keep on writing.
You have got to do more with this piece of work. It is something you can build upon and be able to make it so much more interesting. It is already interesting but it would be moreso. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of review. You did a good job. you did well. keep writing.
My heart goes out to the family and the ones who knew this young man. It was a young man who died for his country. He gave all for his country and will be remebered well. You did well in presenting this piece of literature forthe purpose of a review. You did a good job. Keep writing.
Beautiful! t isabout the water and the things we do to her. You have said as much. It is something to see and know what we have done to her.
we have polluted the waters and the rivers to the point that it is unsafe to eat from them. You have done well in presentingthis piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job Keep writing.
This is beautiful! It makes you think of Christmas and all the things that go with it. You have a great family there and it seems so wonderful and right.I am happy that you wish for the ones who don't have such a Christmas like you to have them something special as well. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose ofa review. Youdid a good job. You did well as we said. Keep on writing.
WHEW! What a piece of poetry. It leaves me thinking of how much you love the night and the things of it. Like the stars, the moon , there are so many things that come to mind. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Keep writing.
This is some letter. It makes perfect sense to me. You have hit the nail on the head when you talk about cooperation and sweet praise instead of shrew's tongue. As you put it so well. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did good job.You were right on the money and I am glad that I clicked this piece. Keepwriting.
This is a great piece. I loved the wording of this piece so much. It paints a picture and you used your colors well in painting it. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. You are asked to keep writing.
This was spooky. It was a great job you did with this. I would have liked to have read more from this piece. It was exciting and I think you can build on what you have for some more. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did well. you did a good job and it shows. keep writing.
This was a great story. She had something that was finally hers and hers alone. Cheerleading was something back when I was going to school that was a necessary thing to have. We had a great football team. You did well in presenting this piece for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. It shows how well you did and I am glad that I clicked it. Keep writing.
This is a beautiful piece. Faith is the main thing that turns the hands of God. It is withfaith that we do so many things like turning on a water faucet and other things. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Keep writing. You did well, as we said. I am glad that I clicked this.
I did enjoy the work you did. It was very interesting to me that the good king would want two wives. It was with this story that I thought of my own story that I could write. You planted a seed and it will grow inside of me for a while. You did well. You did well in presenting this pieceof litearture for the purpose of a review. Keep on writing. you're good at it.
You did well with using the color you did it was very easy to read. You have some tough questions being asked here. To live or die is one of them that makes me think too of the same the thing that I ask myselfeveryday. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You dida good job. You did well as we said. I hope you will keep on writing.
This was a great piece you did. It was one I am glad that I clicked. You are asking some questions here and they all make good sense. I think that the last line was a winner. you said that your dreams were all but fiction and a comic strip of negatives. Well, that was very orginial. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. You did it well. Keep on writing.
This is a great piece and one that got my attention. The blood was something I couldn't have handled at all. The sweat is another story. It was something for you to witness. The armoire was grostesque as it were anyway and the doors opening with a gust of air is something else again. You did well in presenting t his piece of literature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job of scaring me to pieces and done well too. keep writing.
This appears to be two poems in one. Else it is quite confusing. You did a good job with it and it makes perfect sense to read it twice. There are a lot of don'ts in the message. It is a piece that I wouldn't have thought of writing myself though it is a good read. You have done well in presenting this piece of litearture for the purpose of a review. You did good job. and it shows how well you did. Keep on writing.
This is a good piece and well worded. You have painted a picture of someone playing music and that the feelings of that person are somber. This is what i am getting from the piece. You did well in presenting this pieceof literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. You are a great writer and I hope you will keep on writing.
Well, there is a lot to say about this piece. it is a good one. It is done well. The only thing I have to say against it is that it should have been done in black. You made the words readable. That is for sure. However, if it were in black then it would have looked better on the page You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of reviewing and youdid a good job. Keep writing.
This is hardly a tribute to your grandmother. It is blasting her for what she did to you. you gave her nothing to blast you for I assume and she did it anyway. Some people are like that. It was a short piece and not very hard to read. You did well in presentng this piece of literature for the purpose of reviewing and you did a good job. Keep writing.
A good tribute to the man and the feelings you have toward him is admiral. You have spoken well of his upbringing and the choices he made. He got into fights along the way but wound up being a great author. You did well in presenting this piece of litearture for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did with the piece for it is a great one. Keep writing.
Friends are the closest things or ones we have when it comes to our families. We make them a part of the family whether we believe it or not we do. Our friends are the ones who will tell us things that parents can't share. They are alway there to help and just be a friend. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job. Keep writing.
What a great tribute to your grandmother. It is something wonderful and loving to read. The memories are all that is left for you at this point and you can remember the things you both used to do. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it is hoped that you will keep on writing.
Sounds like you had some fun on this ranch. You did very well in using the words you chose. There were no errors found in the piece. It was a good read. Youdid well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. Yuu did a good job. Keep on writing.
The rhyming shceme is great. The picturre is dark and sad. It seems that you are questioning yourself on just how you are as a person. Maybe it is your character who is doing that. Anyway, it is a sad piece for there are no easy answers to the questions. You did well in presenting this piece of liteature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it is hoped that you will keep on writing.
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