|When I read this, I ask myself, is the author speculating, or is this information from someone who knows? Of course, there is no way for me to know this. As a reader who has some knowledge of this phenomenon, I hear it as an objective, cognitive sort of description that can inform a poorly informed reader. It does this very well. It communicates the confusion. It also sounds like someone well into a healing process might write as opposed to someone who has not started the healing process. In fact, it seems like wrting it could have been an act of healing. It could also promote healing in someone who is working on the same issue.
I see no problem with the writing and have not suggestion for improving it. The content is very challenging and probably over the head of the average reader. Yet, for those who can benifit, this is an excellent poem. Are you aware there are publications for people who have these symptoms? I hope you can share it there, as I feel it has real value.
Thank you for sharing.