This piece of writing reflects the author's s attitude towards work. Indeed it is very awkward to get up early morning and prepare to attend duty. It becomes monotonous repeating the same actions daily. But alas! . This is the harsh realty of life. For how long can you deny it? Working forms an essential part of life. As goes the saying- adapt or perish.
A little poem written without much effort. With the combination of the elements of nature the poet tries to illustrated his state of mind. But where is the central theme of the poem? I think due to its shortness the poem lacks conciseness. With the restricted number of lines it is very clumsy to understand the exact meaning of the writing.
A poem based on the different stages of life. It depicts our journey on earth. It has many philosophical connotations and focuses on the realities of life. As we grow older our experiences about life increases. I think maturity would have been more appropriate. I really like the lines on ' dust'. The poem needs some fine tuning regarding the gap from childhood to adulthood
The question put by your son has given you food for thought. Through the colours of time you are expressing this maternal love for your kid. According to your opinion time has no colour and is multicoloured at the same time depending on circumstances. Really it's a difficult question.. But it could have been life starts with the green time and ends with the red one simply. It's just an opinion.
A poem putting emphasis on the the prevalence of the four seasons. In fact, every season has its own importance and brings new happiness. However, every one has his /her own preferences. We have to adapt oneself with the changes specially now that there are global climate imbalances. The author has described only partly the natural scenes in each season.
An interesting story portraying the unexpected meeting of Matt with a girl. The girl seems to have been waiting for someone to tell her intentions. The first person comes in her way she informs him that she's leaving but we don't know where is her destination. It was the first and last meeting for Matt. He pretends to be mature by smoking.
A story which is narrated with minute details concerning the lives of the members in the group. The first tale about the twins easily captures the attention of the reader. But by and large with the mingling of several stories of other group members there seems to be a confusion. At certain stages the author uses too much description. I suggest that you rewrite the stories individually.
A poem evoking the impacts of loneliness on a woman. Ever since she had been widowed Miss Henrietta was not interested in another man in her life. She became pious engaging herself in ecclesiastical activities. She even developed a particular liking for animals. But gradually she plunges in depression and was in need of company. Finally a man comes in her life to solve the problem of loneliness and she's again happy.
A poem portraying the various facets of a human being. It is focused on the ego of man. This is an inborn quality which shapes each individual's character. It is very difficult to control and fight against. In fact due to our self esteem we becomes often victims of our ego. As it is well pointed out man is a prisoner of his ego. But the person who does yield to it comes out in an elevated position.
An interesting piece depicting the life of the monarchs. The use of roses in the opening lines prepares the reader psychologically about love matters. Eventually as the story unfolds it is a question of love and marriage. The princess is adamant concerning marrying a person whom she does not know. Moreover, her brother advises her to listen to the king. But she has already made up her mind about the issue.
A poem dealing with the different types of love and their facets. The use of many subterfuges in love is clearly outlined. Using artificial devices to win the heart of the lover is one way to be successful in one's aim. As it is rightly said 'Everything is fair in love and war. The boys a have recourse to lies to attain their targets. However, the poem is too long and repetitive.
A thrilling story depicting the nasty job of police officer trying to enforce law and order particularly among the alcoholics. It must be very awesome to deal with such fellows. Most of the time when they are drunk they create more problems for others that for themselves. The car accident was provoked due to Melvin'n carelessness which could have cost his life. It was a brilliant idea to cover the skull with the scalp till it was sutured. However, is spite of this the wretched chap continues to booze and did not learn any lesson from the mishap.
A practical story for spending Christmas. The whole day seems to be fully occupied. It is one other rare occasions to unite the entire family for celebration. Thee is much of laughter and fun on that day. The small and the elder ones enjoy themselves together. The sharing of gifts is a great event in the family bonding the relationship. But as pointed out we must have a thought for those children who for one reason or another cannot celebrate the festival.
A nostalgic poem depicting the sentiments of the college boy leaving home for the first time. Feelings of heart ache and sadness to part from t his Disneyland. In fact we have all gone through this home sickness once in our life. But life is not only playing and merry making. There are other serious matters to handle.The poem seems to been written through emotions. You have to liberate them in order to write freely.
A realistic analysis of the past olden days. Considering the mode of living to-day and bulk of problems we encounter I will unhesitatingly say that the bygone era was far much better than to- day. In childhood we were wearing rose tinted glasses but as soon as we grow up we must face the harsh reality. Those were the days. Old is gold.
A poem reflecting on the benefits of darkness. It is an opportunity to do a self critic. During that specific moment different types of thoughts cross the mind. it is a moment of tranquility which procures peace of mind . It contributes towards meditation. But it is also a sign of escapism from one self and by avoiding light.
A good descriptive piece portraying the festivities during Christmas. The decorations seem to be sumptuous and suitable for this auspicious occasion. All the requisites of the festival have been minutely programmed. While waiting for the arrival of Santa Claus, the person is enjoying a song on the record player. Indeed it must be a beautiful scenery. But why the gifts are displayed before the arrival of Santa Claus?
A romantic piece depicting the love which the person cannot express fully. It is compared with the phoenix. The bird symbolises love and continuity. Through the bird the poet evokes periods of time spent together which will never return. Feelings of nostalgia. But the phoenix is supposed to be born again from its ashes
A poem written in the form of a love letter. The person is deeply in love with the girl but he feels that he cannot fulfill the desires of his beloved . He looks joyful and desperate at the same time. Happy because the love is reciprocal, sad since the love seems impossible on the practical side. But it is difficult to obliterate her completely from the mind.
A poem illustrating the preparations carried out to receive a special guest.It is announcing the arrival of somebody coming on holidays. Ice cream, chocolate and doughnut are proposed as desert. But the reader gets little or no information about the guest itself. The table is almost set and everybody is patiently awaiting for the arrival of the important person.
A poem written in a quite different way. It appears an amalgamation of words through which the poet tries to express different situations. The reader can grasp the strength and weakness of the poet across the lines. There is a repetition of the word cry several times which account for the lamentable conjecture in which the individual finds himself. It requires some fine tuning.
A tragic poem evoking the life of a desperate chap. He seems to be frustrated with the existence. There are innumerable problems which he finds difficult to resolve. But can he fight these hurdles all alone? Of course, he needs the support of a saviour. And only God can save him. But he must knock at the right door.
A romantic poem depicting the impacts of love on the individual. The idea of going apart from his/ her lover already starts to torment the person mentally. The lovers are being manipulated by the hands of fate. Man is a mere puppet in the hands of destiny. Will the lovers be successful in their goals?
A completely different writing style with particular writing in each stanza. The poem is set on the climate changes depicting on the approach of the storm and its impacts on the environment. The wind is blowing over the leaves and affecting the animals also. There is a sudden transformation of the weather.
A sensitive poem portraying how the king was profoundly affected by the death of his queen. He was terribly grieved by this unexpected demise of his beloved. However, he continued to reign but in a grieved state. Finally, he ceased laughing. The jester Snoot succeeded to make him laugh for a last time by making him swallow the poison. He fulfilled the king's last wish
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