The story revolves around tears and regrets.At the beginning it sounds somehow fictitious. But as the plot unravels it give a clearer picture of the situation. On reading further the reader gets the impression that the person concerned is mourning over the death of a beloved one. He is morally upset and has great remorse over what has happened to her. The suspense is maintained till the end when we know about Nicole.
A long exhaustive story narrating the preparations of the voyage to the unknown. Many bulky descriptions have been exposed to impress the reader. All the passengers are excited about the travel. The hustle bustle can be felt many hours before the departure. With the introduction of so many characters there is a tendency for confusion about who is who? In my opinion the writing needs simplification avoiding the unnecessary details.
A long story depicting how Nao joined her new school and gradually she adapts herself in the new environment. She thought that with her golden smile she could convince anyone to sympathise with her. But this strategy did not work with her professor who gave her a lot of school works as punishment for being late. With the stress which it created her health starts to get deteriorated.
A story reminiscent of the pre- marital period when both persons were still dating. Families from the husband's side and the woman's side were enthusiastic about the union. Many years before the wedding the families acquainted with each other. There were regular meetings and get together parties. The bride dips into the past when she asks a very sensitive question to her father- in -law making him emotional. He feels much touched by this question.
A good story narrating how Amanda cares about her health and practises jogging even in cold weather. But to her utmost surprise she is interrupted by the sudden appearance of a killer who mistook him for someone else.. But we note that the suspense is broken at the end when Amanda is able to handle the situation and inform Lisa. The story is well written but it ends abruptly.
The story begins well with the description of the sisters and putting emphasis on their characters. The reader gets an overview of the mode of living of the girls forming the family. But as it progresses it creates some sort of confusion in the mind about who is who.? At certain points there is a digression from the main topic specially about the teachings. Do you refer to male nurses when speaking about brothers? It needs better clarification.
Your poem is based on imaginative events and characters. Changing sex, looking for jobs , becoming old, everything happening automatically. It seems that the life of the individual has already been programmed.. If viewed from the funny side the poem appears to amuse the reader. It lacks some seriousness although it is very light. Not bad as a beginner I would say
A poem illustrating the impacts of drought on Texas. It analyses how life has worsened due to the absence of rain. Indeed without water there is no life. Its effects on food , agriculture and animals are very conspicuous. The line' Dust will be our tears ' is well adapted in this context.Prayers are most welcome to remedy the situation.
The poem delves into the pysche- mind of the distracted individual. He /she seems to have lost in thoughts. There is a tendency to relive past memories which are conducive to this lost.The poet is not living in the present. With all those preoccupations in the mind, it is rather cumbersome to recall what's going on actually. But with a distracted mind the fellow cannot go far in life.
A poem putting emphasis on the dire effects of drought on plants and animals. In deed, it is a very difficult conjecture with the yellow grass and the dying cattle. There is no life without water. Just imagine one day the planet without any single drop of water. Rain is beneficial to all living creatures. However, the poet has omitted to describe its effects on humanity.
A poem based on the generosity and superiority of God. Here the poet emphasises how magnanimous is the Lord. He should be remembered in both good and bad times.He showers light on us during darkness. In times of distress His help will obviously reach us even if sometimes it is a little late. Every cloud has a silver lining. Your views about God is well depicted in the poem
The poem describes how the lover is a victim of sufferings due to unrequited love. With a broken heart she is condemned to live the rest of her life in this way. Her mind is tormented by the thoughts of the disloyal lover.Moreover, she cannot find anyone to soothe her agonies. Unfortunately it ends on a sad note with no one daring to care for her.
The story revolves around social work and good deeds performed by Mary. She is ever ready to assist any body who needs he help. It's always good to have somebody around to help in case of emergencies. The most striking fact is that she never expects anything in return. Obviously, Mary will be compensated by God. Good deeds never go unnoticed.
A story evolving around the person's security. It is seen to what extent the individual is concerned about a secure environment.He /she does not get any guarantee about feeling safe. The fellow has the tendency to believe that he is undergoing torture. There is a tendency to become psychotic. However, the author does not give the reader the reason for this insecure feeling.
The poem reflects how a broken-heart person feels about his her future. There are signs of depression and the fear of being rejected once again. Emotional handicaps will obviously hinder him/her from treading on the same path. but such kind of people need somebody or something to trigger that willingness back.As an example which is well mentioned here is to praise the person about his /her beauty. Eventually, there isa need for support to come out of this marasmus.
Your poem reminds me of my short stay in Ireland in search of a job. The places mentioned are really fantastic. The lines are well painted with easy flowing of the verses. Indeed it brings peace of mind to the visitor. The sites are real feats for the eyes. The picture also contributes much to enhance the poem. But it seems a more a travel item than a poem.
The first two stories attract the attention of the reader due to the fact that they bear a similitude concerning the theme. In fact both are centred on negligence. It is well portrayed how it could have been catastrophic in both cases. It appeals for more precautionary measures on the part of the parents. But the third one is completely different. It has rather an erotic atmosphere with the description of lips and breasts. A real contrast from the two other stories.
An emotional story involving three characters em barked on the ship of love. At the beginning of marriage everything was going on smoothly. But why only after so many years Livi started this love affair with Dean. Wasn't she satisfied with her husband? It seems that Ray was fulfilling the role of the housewife looking at the baby. But the ruse played by him to know the truth is impressive. Livi admits that she was enjoying her life. It 's a real triangle of love
The poem is centred on a theme which reveals how the two guys wont to become popular by performing road shows. As per facts it seems that they specialise in providing entertainment to passersby. The form a team to venture in this business. But do people really have time to admire these activities?. The reader does not get any feedback about the response of the public.
A poem portraying the miseries and pangs endured by the individual. There is an enumeration of physical and moral sufferings gnawing the person. But what are the reasons for this agony? Why disdain has been so vividly painted? Although the main theme is pain the poet has not been able to really emphasize upon it.
A poem pertaining to a town dedicated to a dear one. The poet is complaining about the the reluctance to share information about his brother;s abode. However, there are not many hint about the details . In fact, the reader must fish for information through the lines. It requires a little extension to for clarity.
Tears and regrets. The poem can be summarised in these two words. The lover is being tormented while the other partner seems to be careless.. Only A few lines are enough to explain the state of the mind. Love is something soothing but here it is wrapped with sufferings. Is it necessary to suffer in love?
As per your story a butterfly can raise a storm by flapping its wings. This theory is based on visual and hearsay evidence. But there is no concrete explanation about the scientific or technical aspects. Being an engineer I think you must believe only according to facts. And where's the sin in the story?
A poem depicting the characters of girls when they start growing up. There is a sudden change which cannot be explained. People in their milieu should adapt and make adjustment with their behaviours..But why do they enjoy ladders? Maybe it is regarded as a measurement to estimate the level of growth.But till when will they climb the ladder? Where will they go on reaching the top?
Your poem fits a lot to me. I' also have a son. This relationship is exceptional. Both are attracted towards each other. The son confides his little secrets to his father whom he considers as his best friend. Indeed, they are inseparable and live with the companionship of each other. It is a way of life.
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