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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is goood, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: All in all a good poem. This poem is a very sad and emotional one. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.
Overall: I found it very inspirational. It shows so well how it feels when one is willing to let the false sense of self go and become one with God. He does all of these things and more, giving a sense of peace and relief in the wake of fear and pride. A wonderful message. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. I really enjoyed reading this because it was so beautifully written. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.
Overall: This is a poem about your beloved dad. There is wonderful depth of emotion and so much feeling is expressed in every line. The reader can tell that you love your dad very much and that the two of you had a very special relationship. I know that sometimes this can be a rare commodity indeed, so please consider yourself lucky. I know many people who have not had this kind of relationship with their dads. A beautiful poem written straight from the heart that I hope many people have a chance to read and enjoy. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: This poem is a very sad and emotional one. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. You painted the picture of what is like at Christmas time in L.A. Good imagery. All in all a good poem. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem, that caught my interest.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: I can totally relate to this poem. As I too suffer from depression, so I know of what you speak. People do not understand depression, they just think you can pull yourself out of that state at anything. Which is not try. You conveyed the message of depression very well in this poem. And also put a great message out there for people who do not understand depression, showing them what it feels like. Great Message!!! This poem is a very sad and emotional one. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.
Overall: What a great poem you have written here. Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. About one brother that does not believe in Santa Claus, but the other brother has faith in him. As I read you poem, I could just picture on the roof the hoof prints and sled tracks. This is a very good piece. Very nicely done and a joy to read. This poem deserves: .
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Title: I love the unique title, it caught my interest.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. The flow is nice and easy. The form is lovely, being centered on the page, which makes it attractive to the eye. This, of course, is a matter of taste, and what I prefer.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Good just the way it is.
Overall: Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. While reading this poem, I could just picture that clock ticking back and fourth. My favorite lines were:
I don't need reminding
of how fast time flies.
I face the mirror
and I use my eyes!
I enjoyed reading this poem because it was well written and put great images in the readers mind. This poem deserve:.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Choice of words is pretty good which makes for good readability.
Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.
Overall: What a great poem you've written here. About making choices in your life and not putting them off till another day. Great message!! Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. In my mind, I felt as though I was picking those flowers with you. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. The language in this poem is beautiful. I guess my favorite lines (though it's hard to choose) were:
Lying in the meadow, I pick a flower,
then another, then another until
I have a bouquet of many colors.
The scent is pleasing the colors are beautiful.
This is such a beautiful phrase, excellent in depth of emotion and the imagery is gorgeous with this phrase. And a beautiful way to end your poem. I really enjoyed reading this because it was so beautifully written. This poem deserves: .
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Have a Wonderful Day!!!
Peace and Happy Holidays!!
Janice My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .
Please remember that I am an author, just like yourself, and as an author I am also reviewed by my peers, and I know what it feels like. Please remember that these are only my opinions, and they are respectfully given to you. You may do with them as you wish-- only you know what is right for your writing!
Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Choice of words is pretty good which makes for good readability.
Suggestions: I can't find any suggestions to make this poem better.
Overall: What a great poem you've written here. A message on keeping the hope. You conveyed this message very well in this poem. Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. There is very strong depth of emotion and feeling in every line. I found this poem very inspirational. I really enjoyed reading this because it was so beautifully written This poem deserves: .
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Thank you for allowing me to review your writing -- I consider it an honor and privilege.
Please remember that I am an author, just like yourself, and as an author I am also reviewed by my peers, and I know what it feels like. Please remember that these are only my opinions, and they are respectfully given to you. You may do with them as you wish-- only you know what is right for your writing!
Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is okay, as is the rhythm. Form and flow of the poem was a bit choppy
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: My suggestion is about punctuation. The punctuation is where the author wishes the reader to take a breath; to contemplate; to pause for dramatic effect. The lack of punctuation says the same thing, "Read in one breath, whether slow, or fast, down the page". To me, punctuation is direction from the author to the reader. My personal opinion, this poem would benefit from punctuation. By doing this your poem would flow much better.
As far as the form of your poem I would recommend using this format to make the flow and rhythm better:
A train in the distance,Never closer,
Perhaps a distress call.
Better a reminder,That frozen moments need thaw,
And past be left behind us.
Overall: All in all a good poem. Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. Nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. You conveyed the emotion of faith very well in this poem. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: What a great poem you've written here. This poem is a very sad and emotional one. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. All in all a good poem. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A perfect title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Good alliteration, assonance and consonance.
Suggestions: I can't find any suggestions to make this poem better.
Overall: I found this poem is so heart catching, breath taking, and tear dropping. Really pulled at my heartstrings. Here is a woman who is six hundred miles away from the one she really loves. I really felt sad for this woman. This poem is a very sad and emotional one. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. Deep expression of emotion. Powerful!! You've obviously spent some very creative energy in the construction of this bit of verse, made this a wonderfully smooth read. One in which I would highly recommend. Kudos to the author. This poem certainly deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: The poem conveys strong feelings and desires. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. What makes your poems is the love behind them - they come straight from the heart. My favorite line was: Share a lifetime of memories with me for just one moment......A wonderful poem in an attempt to convince the sweetheart of his or her true love. Such beautiful words to wrap up this poem. This poem deserves: .
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Title: Good title and it caught my interest.
Grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors. I find one spelling error in stanza 2 you put the word (They) I think you meant to put the word (The).
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. The flow is nice and easy. The form you used, the centering really added to your work.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: What a great poem you've written here. You really used variety of words as well as metaphors and imagery that pertains to the senses to evoke feeling and picture. Such as comparing this Ice Queen to snow falls, Niagara Falls. Good imagery you used here. Very nice originality and imagination. There is beautiful depth of emotion and feeling which comes through in every line. All in all a good poem. This poem deserves:.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem, that caught my interest.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: I can totally relate to this poem because I love winter also. I live in Minnesota so we do get a lot of snow. But, it is so beautiful when it starts to fall, it is such a beautiful sight to see!! Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. Nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Very nicely done, and a pleasant read to boot. This poem deserves:.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: I found it very inspirational. It shows so well how it feels when one is willing to let the false sense of self go and become one with God. He does all of these things and more, giving a sense of peace and relief in the wake of fear and pride. A wonderful message. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. My favorite lines were:
One day soon -- I’ll reach out
And faith and fate will grasp my hand.
The mother will hold me, protect me.
The father will guide me…
This is such a beautiful phrase, excellent in depth of emotion and the imagery is gorgeous with this phrase. Very nicely done, and a pleasant read to boot. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: This poem is a very sad and emotional one. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. All in all a good poem. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A perfect title that is suitable to the subject of your poem, that caught my interest.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Good assonance and alliteration. Choice of words is good which makes for good readability.
Suggestions: I have no suggestions for this lovely poem.
Overall: What a beautifully written poem you have here. I found this poem to be very inspirational. You chose your words carefully to evoke beautiful images for the reader. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. You certainly have a talent with words. The language in this poem is beautiful. My favorite lines (although hard to choose were:
To follow where you’d lead,
That they might find GOD’s gift to men.
The most perfect gift that’s ever been,
The little CHILD of Bethlehem!
This was a perfect way to end this poem. Sometimes we can write and write, but finding the ending line is difficult, but you have found the perfect one here. Simply lovely.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. This poem is a very sad and emotional one. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. It is never easy to loss someone you love. If this is a true story my heart, condolences and prayers go out to you. May God watch over you and help you get through this difficult time. All in all a good poem. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.
Overall: What a great poem you've written here. Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. All in all a great poem, one in which I enjoyed reading. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: I found this poem is so heart catching, breath taking, and tear dropping. Really pulled at my heartstrings. About a young that goes off to war and dies. This poem reminds me of all the men and women still overseas fighting for our country and all the men and women we have lost in this war. I pray everyday for their safety and to come home soon. This poem is a very sad and emotional one. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: A man or woman speaking of how much they love that special person. You conveyed the message of love very well in this poem. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. There is beautiful depth of emotion and feeling which comes through in every line. All in all a good poem. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling and punctuation: I could find no errors. Grammar was a tragedy.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme was awful, as is the rhythm. The flow is choppy.
Word Choice: Word selection is down right fowl.
Suggestions: Not to use fowl language in your poems.
Overall: I found this poem to be very offensive. The language you used was just awful. The only thing that was right in this poem was the title. I have never seen such an offensive poem in my whole life. This poem only deserves: . And I'm being generous. You really do not even deserve that!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. The flow is nice and easy. The form is lovely, being centered on the page, which makes it attractive to the eye. This, of course, is a matter of taste, and what I prefer.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: What a lovely tribute to your friend. The language in this poem is beautiful. This poem is also a sad one because you have lost your friend, and you conveyed the message of missing him very well in this poem. You have my deepest condolences and prayers. There is very strong depth of emotion and feeling in every line. I cannot imagine going through such a difficult life that your friend went through. But, it sounds like he was a kind man and accepted his life the way it was. What an exceptional man. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. A beautiful poem written straight from the heart that I hope many people have a chance to read and enjoy. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem, that caught my interest.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. The flow is nice and easy. The form is very nice, being centered on the page, which I think looks attractive. This, of course, is a matter of taste, and what I prefer.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. In my mind, I felt like I was taking the cab ride. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. This poem deserves: .
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