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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. The flow is nice and easy. The form is lovely, being centered on the page, which makes it attractive to the eye. This, of course, is a matter of taste, and what I prefer.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: I found this poem to be very inspirational. It shows so well how it feels when one is willing to let the false sense of self go and become one with God. He does all of these things and more, giving a sense of peace and relief in the wake of fear and pride. A wonderful message. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. I enjoyed reading this inspirational poem.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: What a nice poem and tribute to your mom. This is a poem about your beloved mom. There is wonderful depth of emotion and so much feeling is expressed in every line. Again, this reminds me of a love letter which you wrote to your mom, and in essence, I believe this is what this really is. The reader can tell that you love and appreciate everything your mom has done for you. You can tell the two of you have a very special relationship. I know that sometimes this can be a rare commodity indeed, so please consider yourself lucky. I know many people who have not had this kind of relationship with their moms. I, too, was blessed to have a special relationship with my mom, so understand of those things of which you speak. You are are really wearing your heart on your sleeve in this poem, which is just lovely. Very nicely done, and a pleasant read to boot.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: This is a beautiful, well written poem that conjures up wonderful pictures for the reader. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. There is wonderful depth of feeling and emotion in this poem and it shows through in every phrase. My favorite lines or phrase were:
I wish you rainbows in your skies
pure joy to release;
asking from you, in return
color my world with only peace.
This is such a beautiful phrase, excellent in depth of emotion and the imagery is gorgeous with this phrase. I thought this was a great way to end your poem. Very nicely done, and a pleasant read to boot.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: I found this poem is so heart catching, breath taking, and tear dropping. Just pulled at my heartstrings. This poem is a very sad and emotional one about losing some one you loved. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. Although this was a sad poem, I enjoyed reading it. Good Job!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: What a beautiful and inspirational poem you have written here. There is wonderful depth of feeling and emotion in this poem and it shows through in every phrase. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. My favorite lines or phrase were:
Won’t you open up your troubled heart
And find beauty in front of your eyes
Any questions that need to be answered
Comes to you as nature speaks of the Lord
This is such a beautiful phrase, excellent in depth of emotion and the imagery is gorgeous with this phrase. I enjoyed reading this beautiful and inspirational poem.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: I can totally relate to this poem. My sons always have to be reminded of my birthday and such. And some times they do get the day mixed up. This poem gave me a laugh because it reminded me so much of my two sons. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. All in all a good poem.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. The flow is nice and easy. The form is lovely, being centered on the page, which makes it attractive to the eye. This, of course, is a matter of taste, and what I prefer.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: What a great poem you've written here. This poem speaks of a person that is trying to find their way down the right path with the help of family and friends. As I was reading this, I felt like I was on the journey with you. I think the picture added a lot to your work. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. There is very strong depth of emotion and feeling in every line. Very nicely done, and a pleasant read to boot.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. he flow is nice and easy. The form is lovely, being centered on the page, which makes it attractive to the eye.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: Very nice poem you have written here. There is wonderful depth of feeling and emotion in this poem and it shows through in every phrase. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Good imagery of the drummer boy playing his drums, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. Very nicely done, and a pleasant read to boot.
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Title: A good perfect that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: I have no suggestions for this lovely poem.
Overall: You definitely have a true gift with words. The language in this poem is beautiful. You chose your words carefully to evoke beautiful images for the reader. I also like how you used different colors for certain words, it really made your poem pop. As I was reading this poem, I felt as if I was on the journey with the fairy princess. Thanks for taking me on a journey in my mind for awhile. There is wonderful depth of feeling and emotion in this poem and it shows through in every phrase. This is a lovely poem about a princess who meets her prince and is lonely no more. My opinion is you should have this published, children of all ages would love this poem, even adult would love it. Very nice originality and great imagination, too. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. You defaintly belong here, you have an amazing talent. I must say that I think this was a pleasure to read and wondefully written. One in which I would highly recommend. Kudos to the author!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem, that caught my interest.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. The flow is nice and easy. The form is lovely, being centered on the page, which makes it attractive to the eye. This, of course, is a matter of taste, and what I prefer.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: What a great poem you have written here. Speaks of a man who looks back at his life with regret for all the wrong doings he has done. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. You definitely have a true gift with words. I must say that I think this was a pleasure to read and wondefully written.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: I can't find any suggestions to make this poem better.
Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.
Overall: What a beautiful poem you have written here. Good imagery of the ocean waves., which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. As I was reading it, I felt like I was right there at the ocean and the waves were splashing on me. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. I really enjoyed reading this because it was so beautifully written and a good read. One in which I would highly recommend. Kudos to the author!!
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Title: A perfect title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. The flow is nice and easy. The form is lovely, being centered on the page, which makes it attractive to the eye. This, of course, is a matter of taste, and what I prefer.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Good alliteration, assonance and consonance.
Suggestions: I have no suggestions for this lovely poem.
Overall: What a beautiful and inspirational poem you have written here. About God's love and how when we die we will finally see his face and be in his grace.The language in this poem is beautiful. You definitely have a true gift with words. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. You defaintly belong here, you have an amazing talent. I liked reading this poem because it was so well written and very inspirational. Keep hiding His word in your heart. This poem is one I would highly recommend. Kudos to the author!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem, that caught my interest.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. The flow is nice and easy. The form is lovely, being centered on the page, which makes it attractive to the eye. This, of course, is a matter of taste, and what I prefer.
Word Choice: Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Good alliteration, assonance and consonance.
Suggestions: I have no suggestions for this lovely poem.
Overall: This poem is a very sad and emotional one. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. It just pulled at my heartstrings that this person was so lonely and had no friends. What a sad, sad existence. I could just feel the pain as I was reading this poem. Although this was a sad poem, I really enjoyed reading this because it was so well written.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: You really used variety of words as well as metaphors and imagery that pertains to the senses to evoke feeling and picture. This poem is a very sad and emotional one. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. All in all good poem and good read.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: Good imagery of, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. Nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. All in all a good poem and good read.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.
Overall: Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. You chose your words carefully to evoke beautiful images for the reader. You definitely have a true gift with words. Really enjoyed reading this poem because it was well written. Great Job!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.
Overall: What a great poem you have written here. Good imagery Of the piper, which helps the reader to see in her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. I think children would just love this poem. Very well written and a joy to read. Great Job!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is okay, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is a little choppy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: My only suggestion is on punctuation. My suggestion would be to place a a strategically placed comma at natural pauses will give emphasis to your thoughts as well as make the flow and rhythm even better in my opinion.
Overall: Nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: This poem is a very sad and emotional one about when your wife left you. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. Although this poem was a sad one, I enjoyed reading it.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: I found this poem to be very inspirational. Someone who realizes that he or she needs God in their life. And finds it. Gods love is probably the most taken for granted thing in the universe. Which I think is very sad. At, one time or another people that do not believe, will realize like you did that you do need God in their lives. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. I enjoyed reading this inspirational poem. And keep hiding His word in your heart.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: All in all a good poem. Nice originality and imagination. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Good imagery of a warrior dying before his beloved one, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Good alliteration, assonance and consonance.
Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.
Overall: What a heartwrenching poem. :( I wanted so badly to extend a hug and offer words of comfort, but what can someone really say? I'm sorry doesn't seem to cover it. For what it's worth though, I am deeply sorry for the amount of pain and suffering you've had to endure. No one should have to experience life under such a heavy shadow. You leave the reader with strong images and a firm grasp on what it is like to endure the most brutal of days. I, too, suffer from depression, so I know of what you speak. You have put a good message out there on how it feels to have depression. I think that writing difficult pieces like this one about depression and that put your feelings out there are something every writer should pursue at least on occasion. thanks for putting the message out there. You really wore your heart on your sleeve. My hope is that a lot of people get to read this poem, so they will understand what it feels like to have depression. A lot of people just don't understand what people go through when they have depression. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. I really enjoyed reading your poem because you have put your heart out there and expressed what it is like to have depression. Great Message!! One in which I would highly recommend. Kudos to the author!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.
Overall: What a great poem you have written here. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. You have painted a lovely picture of someone who is in love. Just lovely. I really enjoyed reading this because of the great imagery and it was well written. Nice job!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: First off, in the first line you can see (center and right) the same thing in the last line with the word (right and center) My suggestion is to go back and fix this in your poem. Also I found a few mistakes with capitalization. In the 4th stanza, you need to capitalize the word (I) also in stanza 6th you need to capitalize (i'm) also in stanza 7th same thing (i'll), again in 8th stanza (i'll}, also in last stanza the words (I and i'll}. My suggestion would be to use the spelling tool. I use it with all my work and find it to be a gem of a tool. But, this will not reflect on your rating.
Overall: What a beautiful poem and tribute you have written to your friend. This is a poem about your beloved friend. There is wonderful depth of emotion and so much feeling is expressed in every line. Again, this reminds me of a love letter which you wrote to your friend, and in essence, I believe this is what this really is. The reader can tell that you love your friend very much and that the two of you had a very special relationship. , too, was blessed to have a special relationship with my best friend, so understand of those things of which you speak. You are are really wearing your heart on your sleeve in this poem, which is just lovely. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. A beautiful poem written straight from the heart that I hope many people have a chance to read and enjoy it as much as I have. One in which I would highly recommend. Kudos to the author!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.
Overall: You really used variety of words as well as metaphors and imagery that pertains to the senses to evoke feeling and picture. This poem is a very sad and emotional one. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. Although, this was a sad poem, I enjoyed reading it. Very nicely done!!
Keep On Writing And Rock On!!!
Thank you for allowing me to review your writing -- I consider it an honor and privilege.
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