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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Good just the way it is.
Overall: Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Ypu painted a lovely picture of how a partner should be. Just lovely. You certainly have a way with words. This poem deserves:. A beautiful poem written straight from the heart that I hope many people have a chance to read and enjoy it as much as I have. Great Job!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. The imagery was so good, I could just smell the coffee brewing in my mind. I can truly relate to this poem, because I love coffee and I don't think I could live without it. This poem deserves:. All in all a very nice poem, one in which it was a joy to read. Good job!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem, that caught my attention.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: I found this poem to be very sad and heart breaking. It speaks of a person who is filled with emptiness inside and wants to be with others, but the only person he or she can trust are themselves. This is a very sad and lonely life to lead. I think one, has to give someone a chance in order to be able to trust another person. You conveyed the pain very well in this poem. This poem deserves:. All in all a good poem.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem, that caught my interest.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Good just the way it is.
Overall: Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. I thought the picture you used really brought the poem to life. This poem deserves: . Beautiful poem.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. The flow is nice and easy. The form is very nice, being centered on the page, which I think looks attractive. This, of course, is a matter of taste, and what I prefer.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Good alliteration, assonance.
Suggestions: I have no suggestions for this lovely poem.
Overall: Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. You chose your words carefully to evoke beautiful images for the reader. I thought the picture you used brought your poem to life and gave the reader a good imagery. This poem deserve: . I enjoyed reading this poem, one in which I would highly recommend. Kudos to the author. Great Job!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Good just the way it is.
Overall: This poem speaks of inner beauty instead of outer beauty. You did a wonderful job in conveying this message in your poem. Now a days people are so much into outer beauty, that they never think about the inner beauty of a person. My favorite line was:
In heaven and on earth...Beauty is the LORD. Just Beautiful
This poem certainly deserves: . I found this very beautiful and very inspirational. It was a joy to read. One in which I would highly recommend. Kudos to the author. Great Job!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Good just the way it is.
Overall: Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. There is wonderful depth of feeling and emotion in this poem and it shows through in every phrase. You truly wore your heart on your sleeve in this poem, which was just lovely. This poem deserves: . Good poem, one in which I enjoyed reading. Good Job!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. My favorite lines were:
Alas, we meet my twin and me.
Two souls, one heart, are intertwined.
How do those who do not know us,
Tell one from another?
Only our wives can tell.
I thought these lines were a great way to end your poem. This poem deserves: . All in all a good poem.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Good just the way it is.
Overall: Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. There is beautiful depth of emotion and feeling which comes through in every
line. A nice heartfelt poem which speaks of love you have for someone special. This poem deserves: . All in all a good poem!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.
Overall: Wow, very beautiful poem. Your words are truly lovely in this poem. A man speaking of love to someone he loves so. You really wore you heart on your sleeve in this poem. Just Lovely!!! This poem deserve:. A beautiful poem written straight from the heart that I hope many people have a chance to read and enjoy it as much as I have. One in which I would highly recommend. Kudos to the author!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.
Overall: This is a beautiful poem which you have written to your best friend. There is such lovely depth of emotion and feeling in every line and every phrase which you have written. It seems to be a lovely friendship and you are fortunate to have such a friend. This poem deserves: . It is so thoughtful and beautiful. Great job on this one. Your friend is very lucky! Ans she is equally like to have you as a friend!! Just Lovely!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Good just the way it is.
Overall: Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. There is very strong depth of emotion and feeling in every line. This poem deserves:. All in all a good poem. Good job!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem, which caught my interest.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Good just the way it is.
Overall: You definitely have a true gift with words. LovIng words that you speak of your friend. Just lovely. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. There is wonderful depth of feeling and emotion in this poem and it shows through in every phrase. My favorite lines were:
But through all of the trials,
The good, the hard, or whatever,
I know I'll always love you,
For always, and forever...
Perfect words to end this poem. This poem deserves:. Truly a lovely poem, one in which I enjoyed reading. Good Job!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. There is very strong depth of emotion and feeling in every line. What a great poem you've written here. Very nicely done, and a pleasant read to boot. Good Job!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Grammar and punctuation: The only error I found was in spelling, in the second line, you need to capitalize the word, "I".
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: All in all a pretty good poem. You could tell that it was coming from your heart. Which is just lovely. There is beautiful depth of emotion and feeling which comes through in every line. You have some good ideas in this poem, but I would have liked to hear more about the death in your family. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Good just the way it is.
Overall: Very beautiful poem you have written here. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. There is wonderful depth of feeling and emotion in this poem and it shows through in every phrase. This poem deserves:. I truly enjoyed reading this lovely poem. Good Job!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Good just the way it is.
Overall: It's clear that you write from your heart with this poem. Found it very inspirational. It shows so well how it feels when one is willing to let the false sense of self go and become one with God. He does all of these things and more, giving a sense of peace and relief in the wake of fear and pride. A wonderful message. This poem deserves: . This is a very good piece. I enjoy reading spiritual pieces. Thanks for sharing this!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: It's clear that you write from your heart... It's nice to see such loving words here. It puts the reader in to a happy place for a while and that is great. It shows clearly here the the love that special someone in your life. This poem deserves: . All in all a good poem.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.
Overall: This poem is so heart catching, breath taking, and tear dropping ...Brought tears to my eyes. To think of a teenager who takes his own life. He must have been awfully depressed to do this. The sad thing is, that there is so much of this in our world these days about teenage suicides. It is truly a shame. You could tell you wore your heart on your sleeve in this poem. If this is a true story, you have my condolences. This poem certainly deserves: . Although, this was a very sad and heart wrenching poem, I enjoyed reading it. The message of teenage suicides really needs to be put out there more. So no more teenagers have to take their lives.... Thanks for sharing this sad story and getting the message out there.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem one that caught my attention.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.
Overall: Beautiful poem. I just love the imagery of it, with the leaves floating every where on the page. I think this added alot to your poem and brought it to life. You definitely have a true gift with words. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. This poem deserves: . This was pleasure to read and good job!!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammarn: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: I did find a few mistakes with punctuation. In the 4th stanza, I think you need a (.) and also in the 6th stanza, last word, needs (.)
Overall: All in all a good poem. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. There is beautiful depth of emotion and feeling which comes through in every line. By reading this you could just feel the nervousness from the writer and also how well it turned out for that person. This deserves: . Pleasure to read and good job!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem and caught my interest.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Good just the way it is.
Overall: What a beautiful and loving poem. Speaks of what a joy it is to be a mother. I can really identify with this poem. There is no Greater feeling or Honor in the world, then to be a mother. I'm so greatful to God, that he gave me the privilege to become a mother. Some woman are not that luck. I thank God every day for my children. Your expression of words about what a joy it is to be a mother was just lovely. This poem deserves: . What a beautiful piece and a joy to read!! Great Job!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: All in all a very nice poem. Speaks of a long distance relationship and different cultures. It must be a hard thing for a person to be so in love with the other person, and not beable to be together because of those two things. You can tell you love this person very much. You conveyed the feeling very well in this poem.I can tell you have put alot of heart into this poem, which is just lovely. This poem deserves: . Was a pleasure to read!!! Good Job!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: All in all a cute little poem. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. You chose your words carefully to evoke beautiful images for the reader. I would have like to hear more of the nectar of god. This poem deserves:.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem that caught my interest.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors. As far as punctuation, you started off with it, but did not continue through the whole poem. The punctuation is where the author wishes the reader to take a breath; to contemplate; to pause for dramatic effect. The lack of punctuation says the same thing, "Read in one breath, whether slow, or fast, down the page". To me, punctuation is direction from the author to the reader. My personal opinion, this poem would benefit from punctuation.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. There is very strong depth of emotion and feeling in every line. Parting ways in any relationship isn't an easy job. Here the poet has displayed grace through soft and kind words when two poeple are going their ways. I think this is sweet. I mean in today's world who would part ways like this? There would be more of speculations, blames and fights. But parting ways like this is a great way to burn all the grudges and live life afresh without ill-feelings. The poem deserves: Beautiful poem and a joy to read!! Good Job!!!
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. A beautiful poem written straight from the heart that I hope many people have a chance to read and enjoy it as much as I have. Great Job!!! 