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Review of peace

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Rated: 13+

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Please remember that I am an author, just like yourself, and as an author I am also reviewed by my peers, and I know what it feels like. Please remember that these are only my opinions, and they are respectfully given to you. You may do with them as you wish-- only you know what is right for your writing!

Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.

Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.

Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.

Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.

Suggestions: None.

Overall: All in all a good poem. You really used variety of words as well as metaphors and imagery that pertains to the senses to evoke feeling and picture. nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. this poem deserves:

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Review of The Baby

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Rated: E

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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.

Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.

Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.

Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.

Suggestions: None.

Overall: I found this poem to be very inspirational. Because not only in church that God is around us, he is around us all the time. Good imagery of God, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. Nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. My favorite line was:

I heard a baby with his mother, playing outside , very near.
While everyone was praying.
Through a window I saw as he watched a leaf
Fall from a tree.
He whispered as it passed him.

As I read this lines it just sent down a chill down my spine, because you know God was near because of the leaf that fell from the tree. Nice job and good read. This poem deserves:

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Review of Picture Perfect Romance

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Rated: E

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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.

Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.

Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.

Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.

Suggestions: None.

Overall: This poem is a very sad and emotional one. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. What a sad poem here, but it's about something I think we've all experienced sometime in our lives. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. This poem deserves:

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Review of I want Turbulence

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Rated: E

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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.

Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.

Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.

Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.

Suggestions: None.

Overall: I found it very inspirational. It shows so well how it feels when one is willing to let the false sense of self go and become one with God. He does all of these things and more, giving a sense of peace and relief in the wake of fear and pride. You are putting your faith in God and asking him to help you. Just lovely. You really wore your heart on your sleeve in this poem. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. It really touched my heart. Plus, I like to read inspirational poems. Nice job!! This poem deserves:

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Review of The Music of my Life Will Be...

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Rated: E

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Please remember that I am an author, just like yourself, and as an author I am also reviewed by my peers, and I know what it feels like. Please remember that these are only my opinions, and they are respectfully given to you. You may do with them as you wish-- only you know what is right for your writing!

Title: The title is great and perfect for the content of the poem.

Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.

Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.

Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.

Suggestions: I can't find any suggestions to make this poem better.

Overall: What a great poem you have written here. You really used variety of words as well as metaphors and imagery that pertains to the senses to evoke feeling and picture. I loved how you compared so lovingly the relationship you have with someone special, with musical instruments and with music. Very nice originality and imagination. Who ever you wrote this for, I'm sure they would love to see it. I'm sure they would just love it. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Your poem was wonderful. This poem deserves:

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Review of So In Love

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Rated: E

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Please remember that I am an author, just like yourself, and as an author I am also reviewed by my peers, and I know what it feels like. Please remember that these are only my opinions, and they are respectfully given to you. You may do with them as you wish-- only you know what is right for your writing!

Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.

Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.

Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.

Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.

Suggestions: None.

Overall: This is a poem about the one you are in love with. There is wonderful depth of emotion and so much feeling is expressed in every line. Again, this reminds me of a love letter which you wrote to the person you are in love with , and in essence, I believe this is what this really is. The reader can tell that you love this person very much and that the two of you had a very special relationship, despite the long distance. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. All in all a good poem, one in which I enjoyed reading. This poem deserves:

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Review of Darcy’s Struggles with Lameness

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Rated: E

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Please remember that I am an author, just like yourself, and as an author I am also reviewed by my peers, and I know what it feels like. Please remember that these are only my opinions, and they are respectfully given to you. You may do with them as you wish-- only you know what is right for your writing!

Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.

Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.

Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.

Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.

Suggestions: None.

Overall: Nicely written poem you have here. Really struck a cord with me. I just loved how his dad encouraged him instead of yelling at him. I can really relate to this poem because all three of my children played ball when they were younger and I would always encourage them and to just have fun. But, I also saw parent living through their child. It was no longer the child's dream, it was the parents. So sad. You chose your words carefully to evoke beautiful images for the reader. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. I really enjoyed reading this poem because it brought me joy when I was reading it. This poem deserves:

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Review of The Summer

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Rated: 13+

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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.

Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.

Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.

Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.

Suggestions: None.

Overall: This poem is a very sad and emotional one. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. But, I like the part where the write says that now is the time to fall upon faith again. Yes, these are the times were you do need to fall on your faith. God will never let you down. He is always right by your side. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. This poem deserves:

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Review of Natural Beauty

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Rated: E

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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.

Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.

Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.

Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.

Suggestions: None.

Overall: All in all a good poem. Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. You have some really good ideas here, but, I would have like to hear more about the rain. This poem deserves:

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#3435244

Review of Color My World

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Rated: E

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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.

Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.

Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. The flow is nice and easy. The form is lovely, being centered on the page, which makes it attractive to the eye. This, of course, is a matter of taste, and what I prefer.

Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.

Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.

Overall: What a great poem you have written here. A message on depression and what you feel like when you are depressed. Deep expression of emotion. Powerful!! I can really relate to this poem, because I too suffer from depression. Not a fun life to live. I know it must have been hard for you to write about this, but the message on depression really needs to get out there. Many people do not understand depression. They just think you can pull yourself out of depression at anytime which is not true. I commend you for putting the message out there. I liked how you put the word (brilliant and rainbow) in different colors. This really gave a vivid image of how sad and lonely it is when you are in the state of depression. You certainly have a talent with words. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Nicely done. One in which I would highly recommend. Kudos to the author. This poem certainly deserves:

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Review of My POEMS

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Rated: E

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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.

Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.

Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.

Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.

Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.

Overall: Review on: Guardian Angel. What a beautiful poem you have written here. You use lovely words to describe your Guardian Angel. I got chills from just reading this poem. You have a talent with word. I found this poem to be very inspirational. I too believe in Guardian Angels myself. You've painted lovely pictures in the reader's mind of what your angel looks like and how she is always there for you. Just beautiful!! Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. My favorite lines were:

I love my guardian angel
there's no one else I know
I could turn and look up to
because I know she loves me so

A beautiful poem written straight from the heart that I hope many people have a chance to read and enjoy it as much as I have. This poem deserves:

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#3435110

Review of White Nights/Black Mornings

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Rated: E

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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.

Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.

Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is okay, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow was okay.

Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.

Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.

Suggestions: My only suggestion is with punctuation. You started off with punctuation, but did not follow through with it in your poem. The punctuation stopped at stanza 4. If using punctuation you need to follow through with it through your whole poem. This would help with your rhythm and make your poem flow better.

Overall: This poem is a very sad and emotional one. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. My favorite lines were:

Only chance to get out,
Is to believe, in our hearts,

All in all a good poem. My opinion is if you fix those few little mistakes, you could have a great poem here. This poem deserves:

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#3435101

Review of The Animals High Above

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Rated: ASR

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Title: A perfect title that is suitable to the subject of your poem, that caught my interest.

Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.

Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.

Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.

Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.

Suggestions: I can't find any suggestions to make this poem better.

Overall: Wow, very great imagination in this poem. You have painted a lovely and fun picture of animals that are able to float in the air. You chose your words carefully to evoke beautiful images for the reader. As I read this poem, in my mind I could just imagine all those animals floating around in the air. Now, wouldn't that be something to see? You took me on a journey in my mind for awhile. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. This is a beautiful, well written poem that conjures up wonderful pictures for the reader. One in which I would highly recommend!! Kudos to the author!! This poem certainly deserves:

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#3435087

Review of The Flight Of Swans

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Rated: E

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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.

Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors. The only mistake I saw was in the 7th line, you need to capitalize the word: (through).

Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.

Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.

Suggestions: My suggestion is to use the spelling tool. It is a great tool to use. I use it with all my work, I found it to be a gem of a tool.

Overall: You give a lot of description in this piece, which I really like. You bring a strong image to the reader's mind, as well as a subtle emotion. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. This poem was a joy to read. This poem deserves:

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#3435075

Review of Heaven's Tears

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Rated: E

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Title: A perfect title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.

Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.

Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.

Word Choice: Good assonance and alliteration. Choice of words is good which makes for good readability.

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for this lovely poem.

Overall: Wow, what a lovely written poem you have here. The language in this poem is beautiful. You've created a very vivid piece, It was just lovely how you spoke of how rain is Heaven's tears. I have never thought of rain that way. Now, when I see rain falling down, I will remember that they are Heaven's tears. You have a talent with words. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Very nicely done, and a pleasant read to boot. This poem deserves:

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#3435060

Review of A Flock of Colourful Birds

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Rated: E

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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem, that caught my interest.

Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.

Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.

Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.

Suggestions: My only suggestion is with punctuation. You have used some punctuation but did not follow all the way through your poem. I suggestion, a strategically placed comma at natural pauses will give emphasis to your thoughts as well as make the flow and rhythm even better in my opinion.

Overall: This poem had a lot of emotion in it. You conveyed the emotion of sadness of the birds leaving. Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. Nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. My favorite lines were:

The birds are leaving, what will we do?
Cry and weep while calling too?
No, do not cloud with fear and sorrow
For the broken birds will come tomorrow

I thought this was the perfect way to wrap up your poem. This poem deserves:

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#3435048

Review of You Are Always Special

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Rated: E

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Please remember that I am an author, just like yourself, and as an author I am also reviewed by my peers, and I know what it feels like. Please remember that these are only my opinions, and they are respectfully given to you. You may do with them as you wish-- only you know what is right for your writing!

Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.

Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.

Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.

Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.

Suggestions: None.

Overall: Great emotions in this poem. First you start out very lonely and feeling like you are nothing. Then special people come along and makes you feel special and loved. You conveyed these emotions very well in your poem. You really wore your heart on your sleeve in this poem. Nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. My favorite lines were:

One day those people came along
They gave me love and a place to belong

I liked these lines because it gives me hope that there are people still left in this world, that are kind and loving. Now a days that is a rare commodity. I enjoyed reading this poem. This poem deserves:

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Review of Nothing Has Changed

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Rated: E

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Please remember that I am an author, just like yourself, and as an author I am also reviewed by my peers, and I know what it feels like. Please remember that these are only my opinions, and they are respectfully given to you. You may do with them as you wish-- only you know what is right for your writing!

Title: Good title that caught my interest.

Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.

Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. The flow is nice and easy. The form is lovely, being centered on the page, which makes it attractive to the eye. This, of course, is a matter of taste, and what I prefer.

Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.

Suggestions: None.

Overall: What a nice poem you have written here. I can really relate to this poem. I felt as if you were speaking of my husband, because he does all those things that you speak of, but I still love him. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. My favorite lines were:

And I still love you
Nothing has changed
Nothing ever will

Loving words to end your poem. I thought this was a great way to wrap up this poem. Just lovely!! Very nicely done, and a pleasant read to boot. This poem deserve:

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Keep On Writing

And Rock On!!!

Thank you for allowing me to review your writing -- I consider it an honor and privilege.

Have a Wonderful Day!!!

Peace and Happy Holidays!!
Janice

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Review of TOUCH

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Rated: E

| (3.5)

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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.

Grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors. I found only one spelling error. In the 1st stanza, 1st line you have (touc) should be (touch).

Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.

Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.

Suggestions: My only suggestion would be to use the spelling tool. It is a great tool to use. I use it with all my work, and found it to be a true gem.

Overall: All in all a good poem. You conveyed the message of how love and romance should be. You put good imagery in this poem, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. Nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. This poem deserves:

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Peace and Happy Holidays!!
Janice

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Review of WHAT CHRISTMAS MEANS TO ME

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Please remember that I am an author, just like yourself, and as an author I am also reviewed by my peers, and I know what it feels like. Please remember that these are only my opinions, and they are respectfully given to you. You may do with them as you wish-- only you know what is right for your writing!

Title: A perfect title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.

Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.

Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.

Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.

Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.

Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.

Overall: What a beautiful and inspirational poem you have written here. You certainly have a talent with words. As I was reading this poem, I had to stop for a moment to think. I thought how right you were by saying that Christmas is not about monetary things, it is about the birth of Our Lord, Jesus Christ. People now days are caught up in all the monetary things. They have forgotten the true meaning of Christmas. Which to me is truly a shame and very sad. Nice originality. This poem captures the attention of the reader from the very first line and keeps the reader's attention throughout. My favorite lines (although hard to choose) were:

So when asked what Christmas means to me,
the answer is simple, it's about Mary's baby.
The infant known as Jesus born in a stall,
is the greatest gift given to one and all.

You wrapped that up with lovely words and made this poetry worth to read. One in which I would highly recommend. My hats goes off to the author!! This poem certainly deserves:

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Keep On Writing

And Rock On!!!

Thank you for allowing me to review your writing -- I consider it an honor and privilege.

Have a Wonderful Day!!!

Peace and Happy Holidays!!
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Review of A PIECE OF MY HEART

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Please remember that I am an author, just like yourself, and as an author I am also reviewed by my peers, and I know what it feels like. Please remember that these are only my opinions, and they are respectfully given to you. You may do with them as you wish-- only you know what is right for your writing!

Title: A good title that caught my interest.

Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.

Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. The flow is nice and easy. The form is lovely, being centered on the page, which makes it attractive to the eye. This, of course, is a matter of taste, and what I prefer.

Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.

Word Choice: Good assonance and alliteration. Choice of words is good which makes for good readability.

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for this lovely poem.

Overall: This is a poem about the man you love. There is wonderful depth of emotion and so much feeling is expressed in every line. Again, this reminds me of a love letter which you wrote to the man you are in love with, and in essence, I believe this is what this really is. The reader can tell that you love this man very much and that the two of you had a very special relationship. You truly wore you heart on your sleeve in this poem. Which is just lovely. A beautiful poem written straight from the heart that I hope many people have a chance to read and enjoy it as much as I have. One in which I would recommend. Kudos to the author!! This poem certainly deserves:

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Keep On Writing

And Rock On!!!

Thank you for allowing me to review your writing -- I consider it an honor and privilege.

Have a Wonderful Day!!!

Peace and Happy Holidays!!
Janice

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Review of For An Angel

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Please remember that I am an author, just like yourself, and as an author I am also reviewed by my peers, and I know what it feels like. Please remember that these are only my opinions, and they are respectfully given to you. You may do with them as you wish-- only you know what is right for your writing!

Title: The title is great and perfect for the content of the poem.

Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.

Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. The flow is nice and easy.

Word Choice: Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Good alliteration, assonance and consonance

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for this lovely poem.

Overall: First off, I send you my deepest condolences on losing your friend and sister from here on WDC. My prayers are with you!! So very sorry!! This is a beautiful tribute to your friend Jaye. Deep expression of emotion. Powerful! You express the pain and sorrow felt by the loss of your friend. I could feel your pain as I read this poem. Beautiful how you compare her to an Angel. Just lovely. You can tell you have great faith in God and that your friend is in the arms of God now and at peace. My favorite lines (although hard to choose) were:

Loved ones from the past smile as they appear,
nothing but beauty, peace, and joy are found here.
No fear is felt as they gently take her hand,
as they show her the wonders of the Promised Land.

This is one of the loveliest poems I've read. There is such beauty in every line. It's honest and touching. One I would highly recommend. Kudos to the author!! This poem certainly deserves:

. Again, my deep condolences. You and your friend will be in my prayers!

Keep On Writing

And Rock On!!!

Thank you for allowing me to review your writing -- I consider it an honor and privilege.

Have a Wonderful Day!!!

Peace and Happy Holidays!!
Janice

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Review of Bathtub Haven

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Please remember that I am an author, just like yourself, and as an author I am also reviewed by my peers, and I know what it feels like. Please remember that these are only my opinions, and they are respectfully given to you. You may do with them as you wish-- only you know what is right for your writing!

Title: A good title that caught my interest.

Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.

Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.

Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.

Suggestions: I can't find any suggestions to make this poem better.

Overall: Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. I could just picture this poor little puppy jumping into the tub because it was so terrified of the storm. I can really relate to this poem. My dog was scared of storms also. He would go under my bed and hide. I felt so helpless because I could not do anything for that poor little dog. I did eventually take him to the Vet and he gave my dog sedatives for when he got like that. It really helped my dog. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. You conveyed the emotion of pain and concern for you puppy very well in this poem. This poem deserves:

. I really enjoyed reading this because it was so beautifully written.

Keep On Writing

And Rock On!!!

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Have a Wonderful Day!!!

Peace and Happy Holidays!!
Janice

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Review of Remember Me Before You Go

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Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

Please remember that I am an author, just like yourself, and as an author I am also reviewed by my peers, and I know what it feels like. Please remember that these are only my opinions, and they are respectfully given to you. You may do with them as you wish-- only you know what is right for your writing!

Title: A perfect title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.

Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.

Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.

Word Choice: Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Good alliteration, assonance and consonance

Suggestions: I can't find any suggestions to make this poem better.

Overall: Wow, this poem is very touching. This poem is a very sad and emotional one. You conveyed the pain and love in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. It is about a girl who does not know her own worth. How sad!! Really pulled at my heartstrings. I like how you went though each member of the family and told what they think of her and how special she is to them. Deep expression of emotion. Powerful!!! You truly have a talent with words. The language in this poem is beautiful. I guess my favorite line (though it's hard to choose) was :

When she hurts,
I hope she always remembers
Who we are to each other.
I love you, sis.

This is such a beautiful phrase, excellent in depth of emotion and the imagery is gorgeous with this phrase. You wrapped that up with lovely words and made this poetry worth to read. One in which I would highly recommend. Kudos to the author!!! This poem certainly deserves:

. Congratulations on writing such a beautiful and touching poem!! You defaintly belong here, you have an amazing talent!!

Keep On Writing

And Rock On!!!

Thank you for allowing me to review your writing -- I consider it an honor and privilege.

Have a Wonderful Day!!!

Peace and Happy Holidays!!
Janice

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Review of My Turn, My life

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Rated: E

| (3.0)

Please remember that I am an author, just like yourself, and as an author I am also reviewed by my peers, and I know what it feels like. Please remember that these are only my opinions, and they are respectfully given to you. You may do with them as you wish-- only you know what is right for your writing!

Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.

Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.

Suggestions: I found many spelling mistakes. In lines: 1,18,20 and 21 you need to capitalize the word (I) My suggestion is that you use the spelling tool. It is a great tool to use. I use it with all my work. As far as you rhythm and flow. It was very choppy. And also to many spaces between lines, made for a bad read. I suggest you put this in a different format to make the rhythm and flow better. I suggest this form:

Why am I to suffer and endure
This pain so pure?
Why is this life so hard?
Like playing a game of card.

Overall: Speaks of a man or woman who has no confidence in themselves. But, eventually get the courage to get on stage. You conveyed the message of no confidence very well in you poem. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. You have great ideas, but I think this poem needs a little work. I think if you re-work this poem it could be really a great poem. If you decide to re-work this poem, I would be more than happy to give you a re-review. All you need to do is email me. This poem deserves:

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Keep On Writing

And Rock On!!!

Thank you for allowing me to review your writing -- I consider it an honor and privilege.

Have a Wonderful Day!!!

Peace and Happy Holidays!!
Janice

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