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Title: A perfect title that is suitable to the subject of your poem, which caught my interest.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Good just the way it is.
Overall: I can really relate to this poem because I live in Minnesota and we get tons of snow each year. So I know of what you speak of in your poem about having to shovel the snow and all the rest you speak of. It brought back alot of good memories of when I was young and played in the snow and playing in the snow drifts. Oh, what fun memories!!! You chose your words carefully to evoke beautiful images for the reader. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. I really enjoyed reading your poem, I think it is very good. I hope alot of people get to read this because of the great imagery it puts in ones mind. This poem deserves: . Good Job!!
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Title: Good title and it caught my interest.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is okay, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is okay, and the flow is okay.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: My only suggestion is with punctuation. Somewhere down the line someone gave me sound advice and it made sense to me. The punctuation, or lack thereof in a poem, is the direction of the writer, guiding the reader. The punctuation is where the author wishes the reader to take a breath; to contemplate; to pause for dramatic effect. The lack of punctuation says the same thing, "Read in one breath, whether slow, or fast, down the page". To me, punctuation is direction from the author to the reader. My personal opinion, this poem would benefit from punctuation. By using punctuation it would let your poem flow better and make for a better read.
Overall: About a man who is keeps having dreams of his love interest. You could just feel the love the man has for this woman through out the whole poem. Just Lovely!! As I read it, I was wondering if the man is just to shy to approach his love interest or if his love interest is someone he can not have? The words you use are very loving. There is beautiful depth of emotion and feeling which comes through in every line. My favorite lines were:
I know no matter what
Regardless of what may come
There is nothing I'd rather do
Then wake up every morning, next to you
I really enjoyed reading this because it was filled with such beautiful words. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None,
Overall: This poem is a very sad and emotional one. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. I can really relate to your poem. I had a very close friend of mine betray me also and felt as you do. I think that either you need to let that friend go or try and forgive that friend. In my case I decided to let my friend go because I could not forgive her for what she had done to me. But, you must look deep down in your heart, before you make that decision, because you do not want to regret it later, if you make the wrong choice. All in all a good poem. This poem deserves: . I'm so sorry that you have to go through this. But, just put your faith in God, and he will help you make the right decision. Good Luck!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Good just the way it is.
Overall: This poem is so heart catching, breath taking, and tear dropping and brought a tear to my eye. Absolutely pulled at my heartstrings. Speaks of a mother losing her child. I can not even begin to understand what that mother is going through. This poem is a very sad and emotional one. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. This poem deserves: . If this is a true story you have my deepest condolences and prayers.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Good just the way it is.
Overall: Beautifully written poem. Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. The imagery was so good, I could picture everything so clearly in my mind while I was reading it. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. I truly enjoyed reading this poem. This poem deserves: ,
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Title: The title is great and perfect for the content of the poem, which caught my interest.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. The flow is nice and easy. The form is very nice, being centered on the page, which I think looks attractive. This, of course, is a matter of taste, and what I prefer.
Word Choice: Good assonance and alliteration. Choice of words is good which makes for good readability.
Suggestions: I have no suggestions for this lovely poem.
Overall: Beautifully written poem here. You definitely have a true gift with words. You painted a lovely picture of your mother with Alzheimer's. It great to know the good side of this disease. You can tell you love your mother very much and that you have a special bond with her and this disease will never break the love and bond you have for one another. Great Message!!! You chose your words carefully to evoke beautiful images for the reader. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. The language in this poem is beautiful. I guess my favorite lines (though it's hard to choose) is:
Now
Frightened, confused
Lost and nirvanic
Still
She’s always
Mother and friend
Such beautiful words to end a beautiful poem. I really enjoyed reading this poem. I hope other get to enjoy this poem as much as I have. One in which I would highly recommend. Kudos to the author. This poem certainly deserves: .
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Title: A perfect title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Good just the way it is.
Overall: Found it very inspirational. It shows so well how it feels when one is willing to let the false sense of self go and become one with God. He does all of these things and more, giving a sense of peace and relief in the wake of fear and pride. A wonderful message. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. I enjoyed reading this poem, I love to read inspirational poem. Great Job!!! This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem, that caught my interest.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: The punctuation, or lack thereof in a poem, is the direction of the writer, guiding the reader. The punctuation is where the author wishes the reader to take a breath; to contemplate; to pause for dramatic effect. The lack of punctuation says the same thing, "Read in one breath, whether slow, or fast, down the page". To me, punctuation is direction from the author to the reader. Use it, or don't , to your heart's desire and don't let anyone persuade you otherwise. However, if using it, be consistent throughout the piece. My personal opinion, this poem would benefit from punctuation.
Overall: Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. I could just picture in my mind that bald headed angel. Nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. All in all a good poem. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Good just the way it is.
Overall: Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in him or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. Speaks of a man that works to much and in the process he pays the price with his health and wife. What a sad situation this man is in. But, now a days with the economy the way it is, people need to work a lot of overtime, just to make ends meat. You conveyed the message of pain and despair of this man very well in this poem. I could just feel his misery and pain. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Good poem, one in which I enjoyed. reading. This poem deserves: , Great Job!!!
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Title: The title fits and is appropriate.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Good just the way it is.
Overall: Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout.You definitely have a true gift with words. Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. All in all a great poem. One in which I enjoyed reading. This poem deserves: . Good Job!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is okay, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is okay.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: My only suggestion is with punctuation or lack there of. The punctuation is where the author wishes the reader to take a breath; to contemplate; to pause for dramatic effect. The lack of punctuation says the same thing, "Read in one breath, whether slow, or fast, down the page". To me, punctuation is direction from the author to the reader. Use it, or don't , to your heart's desire and don't let anyone persuade you otherwise. However, if using it, be consistent throughout the piece. My personal opinion, this poem would benefit from punctuation.
Overall: Nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. All in all a good poem. this poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem, that caught my interest.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: My only suggestion is with punctuation or lack there of. The punctuation is where the author wishes the reader to take a breath; to contemplate; to pause for dramatic effect. The lack of punctuation says the same thing, "Read in one breath, whether slow, or fast, down the page". To me, punctuation is direction from the author to the reader. My personal opinion, this poem would benefit from punctuation. But, once again, this is only my opinion.
Overall: This poem is about a girl or woman marching to the beat of her own drum. She does not follow anyone but herself. Now a days that is very rather. Especially our youth today with what they see on T.V. They want to be like people the see on T.V. Yes, a very rare commodity these days to march to the beat of your own drum. What a great message that you have conveyed in your poem. To just be yourself as best as you can be. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. I throughly enjoyed reading this poem. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your story, that caught my interest.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Good just the way it is.
Overall: Wow, this must have been very challenging to write a story in 25 words. You did a great job with it. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. About a mother who looks back at the stroller and her son is gone. What a sad, sad story and situation that person is in There is very strong depth of emotion and feeling in every line. I cannot imagine going through such a difficult situation. You conveyed the message of despair and pain very well in this story. This story deserves:. Good Job!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem, that caught my interest.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. The flow is not like because of the lack of punctuation. The form is very nice, being centered on the page, which I think looks attractive. This, of course, is a matter of taste, and what I prefer.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: The only suggestion I have is with punctuation. The punctuation is where the author wishes the reader to take a breath; to contemplate; to pause for dramatic effect. The lack of punctuation says the same thing, "Read in one breath, whether slow, or fast, down the page". To me, punctuation is direction from the author to the reader. Use it, or don't , to your heart's desire and don't let anyone persuade you otherwise. However, if using it, be consistent throughout the piece. My personal opinion, this poem would benefit from punctuation. But again, this is only my opinion.
Overall: All in all a good poem. Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. This poem deserves:.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem, that caught my interest.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Good just the way it is.
Overall: Beautifully written poem you have here. Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. What an artistic way to show your love you have for someone and put it into an oak tree. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. There is beautiful depth of emotion and feeling which comes through in every line. The language in this poem is beautiful. I guess my favorite part (though it's hard to choose) is:
Remember spring comes too,
and our love shall bloom beautiful and bold. A beautiful poem written straight from the heart that I hope many people have a chance to read and enjoy it as much as I have. This poem deserves: . Great Job!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.
Overall: You conveyed the emotion of pain very well in this poem. Parting ways in any relationship isn't an easy job. Here the poet has displayed grace through soft and kind words when two poeple are going their ways. The poet wishes that she is remembered by the loved one till the last breath, I think this is sweet. I mean in today's world who would part ways like this? there would be more of speculations, blames and fights. But parting ways like this is a great way to burn all the grudges and live life afresh without ill-feelings. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: All in all a good poem. Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. This poem speaks about instability and chaos in the family. I think that all families go through that at one time or another, it is how one deals with the situation. You conveyed the message of instability and chaos very well in this poem. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors. I found a few errors in spelling. In the 1st line you need to spell out the whole word (You). Also in the first line you spelled (til) wrong, it should be (till). 5th line same thing, need to spell out the word (You). Makes the poem flow better.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, The flow was not so good.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: Found it very inspirational. It shows so well how it feels when one is willing to let the false sense of self go and become one with God. He does all of these things and more, giving a sense of peace and relief in the wake of fear and pride. A wonderful message. All in all a good poem. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. The flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: The form is very nice, being centered on the page, which I think looks attractive. This, of course, is a matter of taste, and what I prefer.
Suggestions: None. Good just the way it is.
Overall: Beautifully written poem you have here. You chose your words carefully to evoke beautiful images for the reader. About how spring has come to life. You paint a lovely picture of the robins calling, singing, poking his head out for breakfast. I truly could imagine this in my mind. Also, it makes me long for spring, because I live in Minnesota were we get a lot of snow. So, I'm anxious for spring to arrive again. All in all a very beautiful poem, one in which was a joy to read and to let my mind get away from winter for awhile. This poem deserves: . Great job!!!
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Title: A perfect title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: I have no suggestions for this lovely poem.
Overall: Wow, this is a beautifully written poem. It sounds more like a love letter to the woman that you love. There is beautiful depth of emotion and feeling which comes through in every line. Nice originality. This poem captures the attention of the reader from the very first line and keeps the reader's attention throughout. You wrapped that up with lovely words and made this poetry worth to read. One in which I would high recommend. Kudos to the author. This certainly deserves; . I sure hope you showed this lovely poem to your girlfriend, I'm sure she would just love it.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.
Overall: You paint a picture of a woman or man who is in agony and wants to cut his or her wrist because of the bad things that he or she has done. But, then he or she decides that he or she will put her hands in God's hands and gets the faith back. This was a very emotional poem. You conveyed pain and faith in God very well in your poem. This poem deserves: . All in all a good poem. Good Job!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.
Overall: Found it very inspirational. It shows so well how it feels when one is willing to let the false sense of self go and become one with God. He does all of these things and more, giving a sense of peace and relief in the wake of fear and pride. A wonderful message. This poem deserves: . I really enjoyed reading this inspirational poem. Good Job!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Good just the way it is.
Overall: Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. Your imagery was so good in this poem, I felt as if I was on your journey with you. Very nice originality and imagination. Beautiful poem, one in which I enjoyed reading. Good job!!! This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word good is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: The punctuation is where the author wishes the reader to take a breath; to contemplate; to pause for dramatic effect. The lack of punctuation says the same thing, "Read in one breath, whether slow, or fast, down the page". To me, punctuation is direction from the author to the reader. My personal opinion, this poem would benefit from punctuation.
Overall: I think you have some good ideas with this poem, but, it left me wanting more. And the last sentence: The Stars are.... did not really flow very well with your poem. I would have like to read more about the stars. This poem deserves: . Looking forward to reading it again if you choose to rework it. All you have to do is email me for a re-review and I would be more than happy to do so for you.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Good just the way it is.
Overall: The feelings evoked in this poem is one of the best parts and also one of the worst parts. You brought forth your emotions and I felt as if I was feeling them myself. You definitely have a true gift with words. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. All in all a good written poem. This poem deserves:: : : : . Good Job!!!
Keep On Writing And Rock On!!!
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