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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem, that caught my interest.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Good just the way it is.
Overall: This poem is so heart catching, breath taking, and tear dropping. Absolutely pulled at my heartstrings and brought a tear to my eyes. About your friend who died of AIDS. What a horrible thing that your friend had to go through. I could just feel the pain and hurt from the writer. You conveyed this very well in your poem. It is never easy losing someone you love, but, that friend is now with God and is out of pain. i hope you can find some comfort knowing that. My condolences and prayers go out to you. This poem deserves: . I know it must have been hard to write this, but good job!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Good just the way it is.
Overall: What a lovely poem you have written here. It speaks of a daughter or son that is missing to talk to their mother in their international
language. It sounds to me like your mother is no longer with you. If this is true, you have my deepest condolences and prayers. It also sounds like you had a very close and special relationship with your mother. And loved her very much. You conveyed the message of love very well in this poem. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Beautiful poem, one in which was a joy to read. This poem deserves:. Great Job!!!!
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Title: A good perfect that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. The flow is nice and easy. The form is very nice, being centered on the page, which I think looks attractive. This, of course, is a matter of taste, and what I prefer.
Word Choice: Good assonance and alliteration. Choice of words is good which makes for good readability.
Suggestions: I have no suggestions for this lovely poem.
Overall: Such a lovely poem you have written here. You chose your words carefully to evoke beautiful images for the reader. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. This is a lovely poem about winter that is like a lullaby. You definitely have a true gift with words. It is a poem from a talented poet. This is a beautiful poem one in which I enjoyed reading. I hope others get the chance to read this and enjoy it as much as I have. This poem deserves:. One in which I would highly recommend. Kudos to the author!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.
Overall: Very nice originality and nice imagination. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. Brought back great memories for me when I was younger and playing in the leaves. I felt as though I was there sharing your experience. Beautifully written poem, and a joy to read. This poem derserves:: : : : . Good Job!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem, that caught my interest.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: This poem is a very sad and emotional one. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. All in all a good poem. This poem deserves:. Good Job!!!
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Title: A perfect title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.
Overall: This poem is so heart catching, breath taking, and tear dropping. Absolutely pulled at my heartstrings and brought a tear to my eyes. To think of all the children now days that are being abuse. Not by stranger, but mostly by there parents. I have read up on child abuse for a short story I wrote and found that 1760 children are murdered each year from child abuse. It has become a hidden epidemic in the U.S. It just breaks my heart to hear this because children are precious works from God and should be treated as God's treasures. And under no, circumstance, should a child be abused. You conveyed this message very well in your poem and thank you for getting the message out there. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. There is very strong depth of emotion and feeling in every line. I cannot imagine going through such a difficult life as these abuse child have to endure. This poem deserves; . Thanks again, for getting the message about child abuse out there. Just Awesome!!! This poem is one in which I would highly recommend. Kudos to the author.
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Title: A perfect title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. The flow is nice and easy. The poem draws the reader in from the first sentence and holds the reader's attention throughout.
Word Choice: Good assonance and alliteration. Choice of words is good which makes for good readability.
Suggestions: I have no suggestions for this lovely poem.
Overall: Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. I really liked how you put your words into a Christmas tree, really brought alot to your poem. Very artistic. Such beautiful imagery! A beautiful poem written straight from the heart that I hope many people have a chance to read and enjoy it as much as I have. My favorite lines were:
And up upon
the very top an angel sits so daintily -- watching over
everyone and
the Wondrous
Christmas Tree.
Such beautiful words to end a lovely poem. This poem certainly deserves:: : : : : .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. The flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.
Overall: Speaks of someone wanting to help another, but is unable. You can just feel the hurt and frustration from the writer. You surely have a talent with words. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. There is very strong depth of emotion and feeling in every line. Very nice poem. This poem deserves:: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Good just the way it is.
Overall: Wow, this poem really makes a reader think about what line they will be in when they die. Truly made me think about what line I will end up in when I die... You conveyed this message very well in this poem. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. All in all a good poem. This poem deserves: . Good Job!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.
Overall: Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. You should really show your boyfriend this poem, I'm sure he would just love it and be very proud of you. Good poem and a good read. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: I found this poem to be sad and very heart breaking. About a person who loves his or her past love, and cuts themselves. What a sad, sad thing for a person to do to themselve over the loss of a relationship. I myself can not even begin to imagination how the person can do that to themselves. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. All in all a good poem. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.
Overall: This is a sad and emotional poem about a person who lost their love to someone else. You could just feel the pain and loss in this poem. Very Emotional. Powerful!!! You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Great poem and a good read. This poem deserves:. Good Job!!!
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Title: A perfect title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: I have no suggestions for this lovely poem to make this any better.
Overall: Very nice originality and imagination. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. Beautifully written and a joy to read. One in which I would highly recommend. Kudos to the author. This poem certainly deserves: .
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Title: A perfect title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: I have no suggestions for this lovely poem to make it any better.
Overall: This is a poem about your beloved father. There is wonderful depth of emotion and so much feeling is expressed in every line. Again, this reminds me of a love letter which you wrote to your father, and in essence, I believe this is what this really is. The reader can tell that you love your father very much and that the two of you had a very special relationship. I know that sometimes this can be a rare commodity indeed, so please consider yourself lucky. I know many people who have not had this kind of relationship with their fathers. I, too, was blessed to have a special relationship with my father, so understand of
those things of which you speak. You are are really wearing your heart on your sleeve in this poem, which is just lovely. Beautiful poem, one in which I would highly recommend. Kudos to the author. The poem certainly deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem, which caught my attention.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Good just the way it is.
Overall: I found your poem to be very motivational. You conveyed the message well, on how exercise would benefits ones health. I think everyone dreads to get up and do some kind of exercise during the day. I know I'm guilty of that. But, by reading this it really makes the reader think about better health. Great message!! Good poem, one in which I enjoyed reading. This poem deserves: . Great Job!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: The only suggestion I have is to not capitalize all the words in your poem. It is very distracting for the reader. By doing this, you poem does not flow well and does not make for an easy read. This is only my personal opinion.
Overall: I totally agree with everything you say in your poem about people now days living in hardship. Especially, our economy is so bad, that there are so many people that are unemployed and become homeless. Something soon has to happen in our country for our economy to become better. You conveyed the message of hardship very well in your poem. Good Message!! You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. The flow is nice and easy. The form is very nice, being centered on the page, which I think looks attractive. This, of course, is a matter of taste, and what I prefer.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.
Overall: Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. You conveyed the message of love for this person very well in your poem. There is beautiful depth of emotion and feeling which comes through in every line. You have a talent with words. My favorite lines was:
Enchanted by the power
Of the magic smile.
What lovely words you used here. What a great way to end your poem. A beautiful poem written straight from the heart that I hope many people have a chance to read and enjoy it as much as I have. This poem certainly deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.
Overall: Parting ways in any relationship isn't an easy job. Here the poet has displayed grace through soft and kind words when two poeple are going their ways. The poet wishes that she is remembered by the loved one till the last breath, I think this is sweet. I mean in today's world who would part ways like this? there would be more of speculations, blames and fights. But parting ways like this is a great way to burn all the grudges and live life afresh without ill-feelings. Well written poem, was a good read.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: I can really related to this poem. I remember my first meeting also, and I was just as nerves as you were. Brought bad alot of memories for me. But, in the end, like you, I had nothing to worry about. But, I think everyone feels the way you did when they go to their first meeting or interview. You conveyed the message of nervousness very well in this poem. Good job!! You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. All in all a good poem. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: The only suggestion I have is to not make all your words capitalized. It does not make the poem flow well and also makes it very distracting for the reader to read it. If it were me, I would go back and not use all capitalization in your poem. But, that is only my personal opinion
Overall: Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. You painted a great picture of how our country is today and how it needs to change. Good message. All in all a good poem. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Good just the way it is.
Overall: Very nice originality and great imagination. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. The imagery was so good, I could just picture the angel taking your hand. Just Lovely. Really liked this poem and a good read to boot. This poem deserves:. Good Job!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: A very sad and heart breaking love that has gone bad. I found bitterness in this poem. Unable to understand and confused. It is never easy when you love someone and it goes south. You just need to pick yourself up and try and get on with life the best way that you can. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. You conveyed the emotion of pain very well in your poem. All in all a good poem. This poem deserves:.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.
Overall: Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. There is very strong depth of emotion and feeling in every line. Your poem to me speaks of what people should be grateful for these day. Especially, with the economy the way it is. My favorite lines were:
Love for oneself shall reward every soul,
But being alone makes us feel less than whole;
Conflicts and duties persist as the norm,
With loved ones and friends, we will weather the storm…
These were lovely words, and a perfect way to end your poem. Well written poem and a good read. One in which I would highly recommend. Kudos to the author. This poem deserves: . Good Job!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.
Overall: Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. The imagery was so good, in my mind I felt like I was on that boat. Found it very inspirational. It shows so well how it feels when one is willing to let the false sense of self go and become one with God. He does all of these things and more, giving a sense of peace and relief in the wake of fear and pride. A wonderful message. Beautiful poem you have written here. I really enjoyed reading it. This poem deserves: . Good Job!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem that caught my interest.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Good just the way it is.
Overall: Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. There is beautiful depth of emotion and feeling which comes through in every line. Your imagery of basket ball was well conveyed in this poem. My favorite lines were:
Once you settle into a groove,
No one will question this well-practiced move;
This is fine wisdom, which shall behoove,
Your glorious rank, and time shan’t remove!
I thought these four lines were the perfect ending to you poem on a basketball game. This summed up your poem very well. All in all a good poem and a joy to read. This poem deserves: . Good Job!!
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