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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. The flow is nice and easy. The form is lovely, being centered on the page, which makes it attractive to the eye. This, of course, is a matter of taste, and what I prefer.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: Beautifully written poem you have here. Speaks of love for another person. You conveyed the message of love very well in this poem. The language in this poem is beautiful. There is wonderful depth of feeling and emotion in this poem and it shows through in every phrase. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. All in all, this is a wonderful poem, and a good read. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors. In stanza 1 you put an extra period at the end of the word (goals) same thing in stanza 2,3 and 4.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is good.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: My only suggestion is not to capitalize all the words in your poem. Example:
On the moonlit path I walk,
As the tress by my side talk.
Walking in here to talk to the souls,
Who have left some paths to reach my goals.
By doing this, it makes your rhyme scheme and flow much better and makes for a better read. But again, this is only my opinion.
Overall: What a great poem you've written here. Speaks lovingly of people in your life that have either passed away or moved away. No matter what you are right to say that their memories of them will always be with you. No one can ever take away those memories from you. They are still with you in your head and heart, you conveyed this very well in your poem. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. My favorite lines were:
I MISS THEM HERE AND NOW,
BEFORE THEIR PORTRAITS IN HONOR I BOW..
I'M THANKFUL FOR WHAT TO ME THEY GAVE,
WITH THEIR PRINCIPLES MY SUCCESS-PATH I SHALL PAVE..
This is such a beautiful phrase, excellent in depth of emotion and the imagery is gorgeous with this phrase. Great way to end your poem. This poem deserves:.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.
Overall: Very beautifully written poem you have here. The language in this poem is beautiful. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. There is beautiful depth of emotion and feeling which comes through in every line. My favorite lines were:
To be thankful, and to be grateful,
For no gift I’ve ever seen,
Can replace the gift
Of Christ for Christmas.
A beautiful poem written straight from the heart that I hope many people have a chance to read and enjoy it as much as I have. Great Job!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. The flow is nice and easy. Being centered on the page, which makes it attractive to the eye. This, of course, is a matter of taste, and what I prefer.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.
Overall: What a great poem you've written here. About a woman who is proud of her heritage. You conveyed this message very well in your poem. The language in this poem is beautiful. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. I really enjoyed reading this because it was so beautifully written. This poem deserves: . Great Job!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Good alliteration, assonance and consonance.
Suggestions: None. Good just the way it is.
Overall: Very well written poem you have here. This poem is a very sad and emotional one. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. Speaks of a man or woman who has lost his or her love. He or she still has the calendar marked April on their wall marking of when they parted. Really pulled at my heartstrings, that this person can not seem to get on with their lives. What a sad existences for one person to live. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. All in all a great poem. This poem deserves:, Great Job!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. All in all a good poem. It was a joy to read. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: This is a lovely poem about about a woman who wants a man to love her in the worst way. You conveyed those feeling very well in your poem. There is wonderful depth of feeling and emotion in this poem and it shows through in every phrase. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: Unfortunately I found alot of mistakes in your poem. First off, spelling: In the 2nd stanza, you put a little i you need to capitalize the (I), again in 2nd stanza same thing need to capitalize the words: (You and Then} same thing in stanza 3 and 4 with the words: (But,So, I, I.}. Now the form of your poem, my suggestion would to do this:
On that first friday night,
I saw the most perfect sight.
I looked at you and smiled,
And thought,does this feel right?
See how the sentence (does this feel right is in italic, you are thinking a thought. And how you do this is: (i)then sentence(/i}. Now, with punctuation: I do have a few suggestions, which of course, are up to you whether you want to use them or not: A strategically placed comma at natural pauses will give emphasis to your thoughts as well as make the flow and rhythm even better in my opinion.
Overall: You have some really good thoughts in here. I think with a little work this could be a very good poem. If you decide to re-work this poem, I would be more then happy to do a review for you. All you need to do is email me. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. The flow is nice and easy. The form is lovely, being centered on the page, which makes it attractive to the eye. This, of course, is a matter of taste, and what I prefer.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: Wow, I found this poem is a very sad and emotional one. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. Made me think of all the women and men still overseas fighting for our country. And all the men and women we have lost since we have been in this war. I pray to God every night for safe return home. You conveyed the message of what war is like. Absolutely pulled on my heartstrings and brought a tear to my eye. This is a well written poem. This poem deserves:.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. The flow is nice and easy. The form is lovely, being centered on the page, which makes it attractive to the eye. This, of course, is a matter of taste, and what I prefer.
Word Choice: Good assonance and alliteration. Choice of words is good which makes for good readability.
Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.
Overall: Very well written poem. Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. I think the picture really brought your poem to life and made it pop of all the imagines in the readers mind. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Very nicely done, and a pleasant read to boot. This poem deserves: . Great Job!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. The flow is okay. The form is lovely, being centered on the page, which makes it attractive to the eye. This, of course, is a matter of taste, and what I prefer.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: The punctuation, or lack thereof in a poem, is the direction of the writer, guiding the reader. The punctuation is where the author wishes the reader to take a breath; to contemplate; to pause for dramatic effect. The lack of punctuation says the same thing, "Read in one breath, whether slow, or fast, down the page". To me, punctuation is direction from the author to the reader.. By using punctuation would make your poem flow better. My personal opinion, this poem would benefit from punctuation.
Overall: Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. You painted a lovely picture inside the reader's mind about all the colors of the flowers and how they bloom. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. I really enjoyed reading this because it was so beautifully written. This poem deserves: .
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Title: I love the unique title, fits the content well.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy. You definitely have a true gift with words.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Good just the way it is.
Overall: I think everyone that works, can relate to this poem. Because we all go back and snooze, don't want to be late for work and want to just go back and sleep for a few minutes longer to go back to what we were dreaming about. Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. My favorite lines (though it's hard to choose} were:
Do you hate it when I constantly snooze?
Do not complain or I’ll blow your fuse!.
These words were a great way to end your poem. Had to chuckle at these lines also, because I feel that way everyday. Thanks for giving me my laugh for the day. Very nicely done, and a pleasant read to boot. This poem deserves:. Great Job!!!
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Title: The title is great and perfect for the content of the poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: I have no suggestions for this lovely poem.
Overall: This is a poem about that special person in your life. There is wonderful depth of emotion and so much feeling is expressed in every line. Again, this reminds me of a love letter which you wrote to your loved one, and in essence, I believe this is what this really is. The reader can tell that you love this person very much and that the two of you had a very special relationship. The language in this poem is beautiful. I guess my favorite lines (though it's hard to choose) were:
Climb the highest mountain, or scale the mightiest wall;
Our love is from heaven, and our truth conquers all!
You wrapped that up with lovely words and made this poetry worth to read. I hope others have a chance to read this poem and enjoy it as much as I have. This poem deserves:, Great Job!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: All in all a good poem. Very loving words. You could just feel the love you have for this person. You should really show this poem to him, I'm sure he would just love it. There is beautiful depth of emotion and feeling which comes through in every line. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem, which caught my eye.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: This is a beautifully written poem you have here. You could just feel the love your have for your baby sister. You also sound very proud of you baby sister. What lovely words you have used to describe your baby sister. Simply beautiful!!! A lovely tribute you have given to your baby sister. I'm sure when she is older she will really appreciate this poem you have written for her. There is beautiful depth of emotion and feeling which comes through in every line. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. A beautiful poem written straight from the heart that I hope many people have a chance to read and enjoy it as much as I have. This poem deserves:. Great Job!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: Parting ways in any relationship isn't an easy job. Here the poet has displayed grace through soft and kind words when two poeple are going their ways. I mean in today's world who would part ways like this? there would be more of speculations, blames and fights. But parting ways like this is a great way to burn all the grudges and live life afresh without ill-feelings. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Nicely written poem, one in which I enjoyed reading. This poem deserves:
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: This poem is a very sad and emotional one. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. About a daughter who's father is never around when she needs him. What a sad situation this girl is in. I really felt heartache for her. This poem deserves:.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Good just the way it is.
Overall: I can really relate to this poem, because I suffer from depression myself. It is not an easy life to live. People do not understand about depression at all. They just think that you can just pull yourself out of depression at anytime. Which is not true. You conveyed the message of depression very well. It is a message that needed to get out there. I thank you for put it out there, so people understand depression better, and what a person has to go through when they are suffering with depression. Great Message on Depression. This poem deserves: . Again, thanks for putting the message out there. You did a great job with it.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is okay, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is okay, and the flow okay.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: The only suggestion I have is with punctuation. The punctuation is where the author wishes the reader to take a breath; to contemplate; to pause for dramatic effect. The lack of punctuation says the same thing, "Read in one breath, whether slow, or fast, down the page". To me, punctuation is direction from the author to the reader. My personal opinion, this poem would benefit from punctuation.
Overall: This poem is a very sad and emotional one. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. About a girl or boy cutting themselves to erase the pain they are going through. What a sad situation this person is living. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Good just the way it is.
Overall: I can really relate to this poem, because I suffer from depression myself. It is not an easy life to live. I feel all of those things of which your wrote. A lot of people do not under stand depression. They just think that you can just pull yourself out of it at anytime, but, this is not true. I commend you for getting the message out there on how it feels to live with depression. Just Awesome!!! You conveyed the message of pain very well in your poem. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Very well written poem. This poem deserves: . Again, great message, thanks for putting it out there!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Good just the way it is.
Overall: Beautifully written poem you have here. When I read it, chills went down my spine. You speak of bigots,war you pose the question of when will we have peace. This world is in such an awful state these days, that it is hard to believe that we will not see peace anytime to soon. Which really makes me sad. You conveyed the image of the impossible dream very well in this poem. My favorite line was:
How much longer before the world knows peace?
It really gets the reader to think about that question. Only God knows the answer to that question. I really enjoyed reading your poem. I hope a lot of people have the chance to read this poem, because then they can have the chance to think about these things. Great Message also!! Thanks for putting it out there. Very good poem. This poem deserves:.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Good just the way it is.
Overall: Parting ways in any relationship isn't an easy job. Here the poet has displayed grace through soft and kind words when two poeple are going their ways. I mean in today's world who would part ways like this? there would be more of speculations, blames and fights. But parting ways like this is a great way to burn all the grudges and live life afresh without ill-feelings. This poem is a very sad and emotional one. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. All in all a great poem. This poem deserves: , Great Job!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. All in all a good poem and good read. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors. There were some words that were spelled wrong. In the 7th and 8th stanza, the word here should be spelled, (hear).
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is okay, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is okay, and the flow is a little choppy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: I would suggest going over and re-read your poem to see where the choppy parts are in your poem.
Overall: You have some very good ideas here, but your poem needs some work. If you chose to re-work this poem, I would be more than happy to give you a re-review. All you need to do is email me. This poem deserves: .
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem,that caught my interest.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.Good just the way it is.
Overall: Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. There is very strong depth of emotion and feeling in every line. I found it very inspirational. It shows so well how it feels when one is willing to let the false sense of self go and become one with God. He does all of these things and more, giving a sense of peace and relief in the wake of fear and pride. A wonderful message. Very nicely done, and a pleasant read to boot. This poem deserves: . Good Job!!!
Keep On Writing And Rock On!!!
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