Please remember that I am an author, just like yourself, and as an author I am also reviewed by my peers, and I know what it feels like. I hope that my observations are in someway helpful, though I ask you to take into account that what I offer is only a personal opinion and respectfully given to you. Only you know what is right for your writing!
Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: This poem is a very sad and emotional one. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. While I was reading this it really pulled at my heartstrings. About someone that is losing their memory. That must be an awful thing to go through for the person and the family. I can not even begin to imagine what that would be like. All in all a good poem.
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Wishing You A Very
*★Merry★* 。 • ˚ ˚ ˛ ˚ ˛ •
•。★Christmas ★ 。* 。
° 。 ° ˛˚˛ * _Π_____*。*˚
˚ ˛ •˛•˚ */______/~＼。˚ ˚ ˛
˚ ˛ •˛• ˚ ｜ 田田 ｜門｜ ˚and A Happy New Year 2011!!!
Please remember that I am an author, just like yourself, and as an author I am also reviewed by my peers, and I know what it feels like. I hope that my observations are in someway helpful, though I ask you to take into account that what I offer is only a personal opinion and respectfully given to you. Only you know what is right for your writing!
Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.
Overall: First off, I send you my deepest condolences and prayer. May God help you through this trying time. There is a lot of feeling in this piece. I can tell the difference between someone being angsty and someone writing from experience, and I could feel the pain and the loss in your heart as I read it. There are tears in my eyes right now. This poem is a very sad and emotional one. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. I liked this poem because it was well written.
Keep On Writing And Rock On!!!
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Wishing You A Very
*★Merry★* 。 • ˚ ˚ ˛ ˚ ˛ •
•。★Christmas ★ 。* 。
° 。 ° ˛˚˛ * _Π_____*。*˚
˚ ˛ •˛•˚ */______/~＼。˚ ˚ ˛
˚ ˛ •˛• ˚ ｜ 田田 ｜門｜ ˚and A Happy New Year 2011!!!
Please remember that I am an author, just like yourself, and as an author I am also reviewed by my peers, and I know what it feels like. I hope that my observations are in someway helpful, though I ask you to take into account that what I offer is only a personal opinion and respectfully given to you. Only you know what is right for your writing!
Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.
Overall: This poem is a very sad and emotional one. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. This about a young youth that dies on the streets. It just pulled at my heartstrings, because there are so many of our young youths that live on the streets now days. It is truly a shame and not a life for a young youth to lead. You definitely have a true gift with words. You've obviously spent some very creative energy in the construction of this bit of verse, made this a wonderfully smooth read. One in which I would highly recommend. Kudos to the author!!
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Wishing You A Very
*★Merry★* 。 • ˚ ˚ ˛ ˚ ˛ •
•。★Christmas ★ 。* 。
° 。 ° ˛˚˛ * _Π_____*。*˚
˚ ˛ •˛•˚ */______/~＼。˚ ˚ ˛
˚ ˛ •˛• ˚ ｜ 田田 ｜門｜ ˚and A Happy New Year 2011!!!
Please remember that I am an author, just like yourself, and as an author I am also reviewed by my peers, and I know what it feels like. I hope that my observations are in someway helpful, though I ask you to take into account that what I offer is only a personal opinion and respectfully given to you. Only you know what is right for your writing!
Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: I found this poem to be very inspirational. Speaks of how we should all worship God at his feet. Very good message. Gods love is probably the most taken for granted thing in the universe. Which I just think is a shame. People need to realize that God is always with us and all he has done for us. Especially, dying on the cross for use. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. I enjoyed reading this inspirational poem. And keep hiding His word in your heart.
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*★Merry★* 。 • ˚ ˚ ˛ ˚ ˛ •
•。★Christmas ★ 。* 。
° 。 ° ˛˚˛ * _Π_____*。*˚
˚ ˛ •˛•˚ */______/~＼。˚ ˚ ˛
˚ ˛ •˛• ˚ ｜ 田田 ｜門｜ ˚and A Happy New Year 2011!!!
Please remember that I am an author, just like yourself, and as an author I am also reviewed by my peers, and I know what it feels like. I hope that my observations are in someway helpful, though I ask you to take into account that what I offer is only a personal opinion and respectfully given to you. Only you know what is right for your writing!
Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors. I did find one mistake with capitization. In line 8 word (it) this needs to be capitalize. No mistakes with spelling.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: This poem is a very sad and emotional one. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. This poem really touched my heartstrings. About a woman who wants to be like someone else. She does not feel wanted or lovable. What a sad situation for this woman, that she can not accept the person for who she is.
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*★Merry★* 。 • ˚ ˚ ˛ ˚ ˛ •
•。★Christmas ★ 。* 。
° 。 ° ˛˚˛ * _Π_____*。*˚
˚ ˛ •˛•˚ */______/~＼。˚ ˚ ˛
˚ ˛ •˛• ˚ ｜ 田田 ｜門｜ ˚and A Happy New Year 2011!!!
Please remember that I am an author, just like yourself, and as an author I am also reviewed by my peers, and I know what it feels like. I hope that my observations are in someway helpful, though I ask you to take into account that what I offer is only a personal opinion and respectfully given to you. Only you know what is right for your writing!
Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: The only suggestion I have is to take the numbers off you poem.
Overall: Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. You conveyed the message of addiction very well in this poem. Nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. All in all a good poem.
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Wishing You A
*★Merry★* 。 • ˚ ˚ ˛ ˚ ˛ •
•。★Christmas★ 。* 。
° 。 ° ˛˚˛ * _Π_____*。*˚
˚ ˛ •˛•˚ */______/~＼。˚ ˚ ˛
˚ ˛ •˛• ˚ ｜ 田田 ｜門｜ ˚and A Happy New Year 2011!!!
Please remember that I am an author, just like yourself, and as an author I am also reviewed by my peers, and I know what it feels like. I hope that my observations are in someway helpful, though I ask you to take into account that what I offer is only a personal opinion and respectfully given to you. Only you know what is right for your writing!
Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem, that caught my interest.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: Very nice originality and good imagination. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout.Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. You conveyed the message of negativity very well in your poem. All in all a good poem
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*★Merry★* 。 • ˚ ˚ ˛ ˚ ˛ •
•。★Christmas★ 。* 。
° 。 ° ˛˚˛ * _Π_____*。*˚
˚ ˛ •˛•˚ */______/~＼。˚ ˚ ˛
˚ ˛ •˛• ˚ ｜ 田田 ｜門｜ ˚and A Happy New Year 2011!!!
Please remember that I am an author, just like yourself, and as an author I am also reviewed by my peers, and I know what it feels like. I hope that my observations are in someway helpful, though I ask you to take into account that what I offer is only a personal opinion and respectfully given to you. Only you know what is right for your writing!
Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: I would shorten up the sentences. Would make the rhythm and flow better in my opinion.
Overall: Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. All in all a good poem. I think with a little work this could be a great poem.
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Wishing You A
*★Merry★* 。 • ˚ ˚ ˛ ˚ ˛ •
•。★Christmas★ 。* 。
° 。 ° ˛˚˛ * _Π_____*。*˚
˚ ˛ •˛•˚ */______/~＼。˚ ˚ ˛
˚ ˛ •˛• ˚ ｜ 田田 ｜門｜ ˚and A Happy New Year 2011!!!
Please remember that I am an author, just like yourself, and as an author I am also reviewed by my peers, and I know what it feels like. I hope that my observations are in someway helpful, though I ask you to take into account that what I offer is only a personal opinion and respectfully given to you. Only you know what is right for your writing!
Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is okay, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow kind of choppy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: My only suggestion is to shorten this up a bit. To wordy. This would help with the rhythm and flow. But, only my suggestion.
Overall: This poem is a very sad and emotional one. About losing the man you love. I could just feel the pain while I was reading this. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. I think this could be a great poem with a little work.
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Wishing You A
*★Merry★* 。 • ˚ ˚ ˛ ˚ ˛ •
•。★Christmas★ 。* 。
° 。 ° ˛˚˛ * _Π_____*。*˚
˚ ˛ •˛•˚ */______/~＼。˚ ˚ ˛
˚ ˛ •˛• ˚ ｜ 田田 ｜門｜ ˚and A Happy New Year 2011!!!
Please remember that I am an author, just like yourself, and as an author I am also reviewed by my peers, and I know what it feels like. I hope that my observations are in someway helpful, though I ask you to take into account that what I offer is only a personal opinion and respectfully given to you. Only you know what is right for your writing!
Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: This poem is a very sad and emotional one. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. As I read this poem I could just feel the pain of the person. It really pulled at my heartstrings. About someone stealing his precious letter. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. I enjoyed reading this poem because it was well written.
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What a great article on dying for freedom. This article really makes you think a lot about choices. I totally agree with what the article says about abortion. I believe it is a child from the moment of conception. And it is a sin to murder that child. That child did not ask to be created. So I do not think it is right for a woman to have an abortion. Great article.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors. I did find one error in spelling. In the 3rd line you put (colours} should be spelled (colors}.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: Good imagery in the readers mind of someone walking down the road and the colors are glowing. Which helps the reader to see in her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. All in all a good poem.
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I think that is just great that you setup your own website. Especially because your were only 13 years old. What an accomplishment for a 13 year old. Congratulations on your website. That is awesome.
I however did not like the fact that you wrote this article in some letters. It really made it hard for the reader to read. I think you should go back and redo it. And capitalize words, were needed.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: I found this poem is so heart catching, breath taking, and tear dropping and heartbreaking. About a person losing a loved one. Just by reading this you could tell that he or she loved that person very much and miss them a lot. This poem is a very sad and emotional one. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. Although this was a very sad poem, it was a very good read. If you are speaking from experience, I wish you my deepest condolences. Very well done!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Perfect just the way it is.
Overall: This must have been awful hard for you to write about your son with Attachment Disorder. As I read this poem, I felt so sorry for the parents and the boy. You conveyed the message of love very well in this poem, because you did not give up on him. Just pulled at my heartstrings. I can not even begin to imagine as a parent what that must be like. I know it must have be hard for you to write this. But, I commend you for putting the message out there on Attachment Disorder. There is very strong depth of emotion and feeling in every line. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. This is a poem I would highly recommend. Kudos to the author. I'm sorry about your son, I keep him in my prayers!!
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Title: A great title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. The flow is nice and easy. The form is lovely, being centered on the page, which makes it attractive to the eye.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: I have no suggestion to make this poem any better
Overall: Wow, another great poem. You put great imagery in the reader's mind. I could just picture all those wives going to the mall and maxing out the credit card. But that is what he gets for having so many wives. Very nice originality and great imagination. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. My favorite phrase, (although hard to choose} was:
The moral of this sorrowful tale
is to marry no more than one wife,
lest you spend all your money paying
credit card bills all your miserable life!
I thought this phrase was really funny and also a great way to wrap up your poem. I enjoyed reading this poem because it was so well written. One in which I would highly recommend. Kudos to the author!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. The flow is nice and easy. The form is lovely, being centered on the page, which makes it attractive to the eye. This, of course, is a matter of taste, and what I prefer.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: What a nice poem you have written here. Good imagery of what God does, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. While reading this I could just image the smell of a freshly blossoming flower. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Very nicely done and a joy to read.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: I found this poem to be very inspirational. It shows so well how it feels when one is willing to let the false sense of self go and become one with God. He does all of these things and more, giving a sense of peace and relief in the wake of fear and pride. Gods love is probably the most taken for granted thing in the universe. Which I think is just a shame. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. I really enjoyed reading this inspirational poem. And keep hiding His word in your heart.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: This poem is a very sad and emotional one. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. It just reminded me of all the men and women who are still overseas fighting for our country. And also for all the men and women who have sacrifices their lives for us. I pray to God each night to watch over them and to bring them home safely. All in all a good poem.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem, that caught my interest.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: This poem is very touching. About parents that want to adopt a son with bipolar disorder and who is always getting into trouble. Just pulled at my heartstrings. There is wonderful depth of feeling and emotion in this poem and it shows through in every phrase. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. I really enjoyed reading this poem because it was so touching.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. The flow is nice and easy. The poem draws the reader in from the first sentence and holds the reader's attention throughout.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. As I was reading this, I felt like I was right along with you. Great imagery here.Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Very nicely done and a pleasure to read to boot!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem, that caught my interest.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. The flow is nice and easy. The form is very nice, being centered on the page.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: Another great poem on your sister. She sounds like a very strong, giving and loving woman. I can really relate to this poem. I have a sister who is just like your sister. My sister is my Rock!! Isn't it great to have such a special sister like ours? I thank God everyday, that he sent her to me. And by the way you write about your sister, you can tell you love her very much and the two of you are very close. There is wonderful depth of feeling and emotion in this poem and it shows through in every phrase. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. I really enjoyed this poem because it was well written and came from the heart. Very nicely done.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. The flow is nice and easy. The form is lovely, being centered on the page, which makes it attractive to the eye. This, of course, is a matter of taste, and what I prefer.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: What a great poem and tribute you have written to your sister. I can really relate to this poem because I have a sister that is raising her 3 children and she has fibro myalgia. Which is a very crippling disease. Which it makes it so hard to raise children when you have a disease like your sister or mine. Your sister sounds like a very loving mother. Just lovely. The language in this poem is beautiful. You chose your words carefully to evoke beautiful images for the reader of what a good mother should be. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. I'm sure your sister would love to see this beautiful poem you have written about her. I'm sure she would be just beaming with pride. Very nicely done and a great read.
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Please remember that I am an author, just like yourself, and as an author I am also reviewed by my peers, and I know what it feels like. I hope that my observations are in someway helpful, though I ask you to take into account that what I offer is only a personal opinion and respectfully given to you. Only you know what is right for your writing!
Title: The title is good, and fitting the content of the poem.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: I do have a suggestion on punctuation. I would place a strategically placed comma at natural pauses will give emphasis to your thoughts as well as make the flow and rhythm even better in my opinion.
Overall: This poem is a very sad and emotional one about a person who what someone to notice them and love them. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. All in all a good poem
Keep On Writing And Rock On!!!
Thank you for allowing me to review your writing -- I consider it an honor and privilege.
Please remember that I am an author, just like yourself, and as an author I am also reviewed by my peers, and I know what it feels like. I hope that my observations are in someway helpful, though I ask you to take into account that what I offer is only a personal opinion and respectfully given to you. Only you know what is right for your writing!
Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem, that caught my interest.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: What a beautiful poem you have written here. You have painted a lovely picture in the reader's mind of Maria. The language in this poem is beautiful. There is wonderful depth of feeling and emotion in this poem and it shows through in every phrase. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Very nicely done, and a pleasant read to boot.
Keep On Writing And Rock On!!!
Thank you for allowing me to review your writing -- I consider it an honor and privilege.
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