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Review of The Snake  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, John Doe,

I just finished reading your fun poem, "The Snake." It made me remember all of the snakes I've kept. I am a big reptile fan and was the secretay for a state herp. club. Snakes are hard to keep, but it sounds like Fred is well loved and cared for. I enjoyed reading it.

Yours,
Lesley


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Review of Dog Walk  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Hello, Bandit's Mama,
I just finished reading your 55 Word Contest story. Bandit must be your pooch? Even though there are few words in your story, you paint a picture. I have to run after my dog when she gets out of the yard. I wonder whose dog ran up to you.

Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Good morning, Elisa,

I just finished reading your poem, "...And we stood still." I thought it was a message to wake up as the world is going to Hell. I believe a we will also stand still while chaos is going on. I found it interesting and would recommend it to everyone.
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Hello, Spidey,
I just finished reading your cool poem, "Black, Leather Dreams." I found it amusing and entertaining. I can just picture you swishing on the street in black leather and knew high boots. I am a fool for leather, though I belong to PETA.
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hello,
It's me again! I just finished reading your romantic poem, "A Song In My Heart." I get that feeling sometimes. It is what your poem is about? I love the ending, "Let's sing our song until we'll never forget, It is part of our love we need to always respect..."


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Review of Seek and Destroy  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hello, YellowRose,
I just finished reading your free verse poem, "Seek and Destroy." I found it very descriptive and realistic. I had friends in Nam and they told me about the rats and other creatures climbing into laps of men who were sleeping hunkered down.


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Review of The Choice  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hello, SoCalSribe,

I just finished your story, "The Choice." The love that Roger has for his dying wife is touching. I remember, as a child, going to St. Augustine, Florida. We are taught in our history books that it was discovered by Ponce de Leon. It is fiction, of course and I like the Everglades better. It seems a more likely place. I loved the ending!
Lesley


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Review of Bobbie  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, Pat,

I just finished reading your poem, "Bobbie." It is very uplifting and Bobbie is one of the best people. I wish there were more of "us!" I don't remember what style you are using but I like the way the beginning of each line says "Reading."


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Review of Two Worlds  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, again, Turtle!

I just finished reading your poem, "Two Worlds, a cry for escape. It reflects what is happening to the world today and what will happen in the future. I am upset about all the wildlife that has all but disappeared. I belong to a lot of nature and conservatory groups. We are fighting for the wolves to be put back on the endangered list. I sign a lot of petitions. I always like your work.
Your Friend,
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, Percy,
I just finished reading your monolauge, "Andromace's Dilemma," I enjoyed read about history and thought you piece displayed the Battle of Troy in a realistic way. The woman in the story must be very strong to be able to endure what was happening to her.
Keep on Writing!
Lesley
ps please forgive my spelling. I haven't had breckfast yet.
L.


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Review of Predestined  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Hello, Feather Duster.
I just finished your poem about, "Predestined." I liked reading it and it made me feel spritual. I don't know if that was what your poem meant. I don't write poetry, myself, but I like reading it because poetry always makes me feel something.I enjoyed your poem very much and it made me feel like we are all predestened.
Lesley


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Review of Stupid People  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hello, bob, country,

I just finished reading your short story about "Stupid People." I thought Sneator Freddy was really "on the ball" with his ideas. I also liked how he met up with the Guardian Angel, Rhoda. She was instumental in helping Senator Freddy with his budget ideas. I agree about stupid people. I just read a book of how America is "dumbing down."
Yours,
Lesley


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Review of Intersection  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, megabob,
I just finished your short story, "Intersection." I found it amusing and so very true. I think life is always at an intersection, myself. I was surpised that your refused the job interview, but I understand why. When I was unemployed, I worked hard to find a job, but came up empty. I was asked to take a job at the SPCA. I've had more jobs that I can remember, and usually, it was the employer asking me to come work for them. I am sure the character, you, found a job you enjoy. It always makes you do your best.

Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, Funky Scibbles,

I just finished reading, "The Middle of Nowhere." I can imagine how small a space can be. I once worked as an animal control officer for the town of Folly Beach. I was beatiful but as small as your banana shaped island, Kwaj. It also reminds me of the small town of Whitackers in North Carolina, where everyone did know each other and were friendly and kind.

Yours,
Lesley


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Review of Happy Face Song  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, Shaara,

I just finished reading your upbeat poem, "Happy Face Song." I wish I could hear the music for the words. You must be an extreme extrovert and always tell your friends when they gripe about something, "It's not open heart surgery."That is one thing I like to say.
Yours,
Lesley


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Review of Cold Front  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, Sir Varicous,

I just finished your poem, "Cold Front." I don't see any glaring errors and your poem is very good, considering it is your first one. I don't write poetry. I do love to read it because poetry always makes me feel something. Your poem was very descriptive. It made me feel like I was there.
Yours,
Lesley


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Review of Fragile  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, Pat Nelson,

I just finished reading your lovely poem, "Fragile," I really did like it. It made me think of how fragile we are, here on earth. "I see His image now, in the rocky, uncut borders of the river and the cool, shimmering water of His calming glory."

Yours,

Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, Warrior,

I just finished reading your poem, "Behing Closed Doors." Apparently, or so I think it is a bit sad and true. We human beings seem to close the door a lot. I've done it, myself. Luckily, the door always opens, eventualy. I dont see any glaring faults, except my typing.\
Lesley


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Review of Fraidy Grady  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: ASR | (3.0)
Hello, SoCalScribe,

I just finished reading your cute story about, "Fraidy Grady." It is descriptive and well-written as well as fun to read. I can just picture Fraidy Grady working up the courage to face his fear of the water. He should be able now to face other fears, as well.

Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Dear Iva Lilly,

I just finished reading your cute story, "O Happy Day," It reminded me of how I felt about going to church, especially when it is crowded on Easter Sunday and Christmas. Those are the only two days I go to church and take communion. I am so glad that, " Jesus washed my sins away..." Just a suggestion... I don't think you need a comma after Jesus. I did enjoy your heart warming story.
Yours,
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, once again!

Your poetry is so romantic. I enjoyed reading "My Wants and Needs." your introductery quote, "What words could I use to tell you of the love you have brought to me," made me feel how much you are in love with someone. "With God's Blessings it will always endure."
Your Friend,
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Dear Koyel,

I just now finished reading your poem, "Happy Ninth Birthda." It must be a tribute to your son or how you felt on you ninth birthday. I have not read "Chained Haiku," but the style is really interesting. I don't write poetry but love to read it because it takes a lot of thought and talent.
Lesley


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Review of P.S. I Love You  
Review by Lesley Scott
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hello, Lynn,

I just finished reading your short story, "P.S. I Love you." I was and will always be a big Beatles fan, too. I loved their hair, "At least it isn't greasy." I wanted to write them fan mail, but we collected Beatle Bubble Gum cards and everything that was "Beatle." I liked the end of your story about Jesse being a guy.
Yours,
Lesley


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Review of Patient Dreams  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, again, KIngs!

It seems that I have read a lot of your work. I just finished your poem, "Patient Dreams." To me, it is romantic that you love your wife so much you dream of being with her at night and think about her during the day. As much as she is loved, I would like to believe she will return to her husband.
Yours,
Lesley


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Review of Seldom Spoken  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, Kings,
I've read and liked other things of yours. I just finished reading "Seldom Spoken" and you are so right about true love. I agree we should, "Give it our best and love one another." I do my best to "fight fair" when we agrue. Most of the time, we are friends, lovers, husband and wife. You reminded me how strong love can be.

Yours,
Lesley


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