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Review of Brainstormers Sig  Open in new Window.
Review by Lesley Scott Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, there, Deanna,

I really do like a lot of the lovely art work you now have. I sent my URL so you can read of my joy and other wise. The last time I went to the hospital, I didn't want to leave. I made a lot of friends, the food was wonderful and we took our meds after we ate. I didn't even know it was Thanksgiving until we were served the traditional food!

Your Friend,
Lesley
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Review of Brainstormers Sig  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, Deanna,
We have been such strangers and i don't know why. It is probably because I haven't been in contact lately. I was in the hospital twice and had a mess to clean after I came home. We've been planting and working so hard before summer comes around. The temps here are wonderful.

I had my 15 year old cat to sleep last week. She has hypothalimis problems and the medicine wasn't helping. I felt like she was in a better place.

So sometimes, I rarely cut on my computer to check my email.

Your Friend,
Lesley

ps How much is the registation fee and how to I get it to you? I want to be a part of "The Brainstormers."
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for entry "Easter Traditions" Open in new Window.
Review by Lesley Scott Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Well, BBW,

I just finished your piece about your Easter Tradition. It is a lot like my Easter. Momma bakes a big meal and the girls still love Easter Egg Hunts, although they are 13 and 12. My sister adopted them from China when they were little babies. The eggs are plastic and filled with prizes.

Your Friend,

Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (2.5)
Hello,
I just reviewed your WDC Technical Support site. I am surprised we only have sixteen members. I thought there would be more. I just wanted to thank everyone involved in the Support Groups that they are doing a great job and have helped me out a lot of times.
Lesley
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Review of Boxer Pup  Open in new Window.
Review by Lesley Scott Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, Maryann!
Your boxer image is so cute. Boxers are such great dogs. I love the little bandana. The groomers give Tinkerbelle one and she takes them off when we get home. I am als glad you didn't have his ears done. I have seen how the vets do the procedure, and it is awful. Also, the "ear job' is very painful for a long time.
Yours,
Lesley
ps I want to enter my whales as a sig, but can't figure out how. I will try some more and hope you might help some.
L.
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Review of A Fine Blade  Open in new Window.
Review by Lesley Scott Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, Chris,
I just finished reading your story, "A Fine Blade." I liked the characters and the plot. Poor Brand didn't understand the magic he held and it was his downfall. His sister,Pedra, begged him that he should keep Elton's sword and not just sell it at the market.
It was sad that Sentinel was stolen by the group who wanted the magic sword. "In the end, it didn't matter."

Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (2.5)
Hello,

I just finished reading your poem, "Money Isn't Every thing." It made me feel sad about people who don't have any monry for groceries. But the family will work hard and the family will survive.
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hello, old Friend! I had a few minutes to check to see what I've been missing, WDC! You have a catagory for everything! You also have a lot going on. I always talk about you to my family. I say, "My Friend, Maryann this or Maryann told me..". Seriously, I admire your energy and using your skills and make it seem like, "Oh, yeah, that.."

I have to go outside and crawl into my sleeping bag. We have a tent in the yard. It's something like country folk in the city, sometimes I like to rough it even if I can see it outside my window.

I was trying to find a way to tell you about putting 15 year old terminally ill Ruf to sleep today. I haven't forgotten your losses, but it was something I had to tell you first. The Vet didn't charge me and we have a unique rapport. He knows because I am a vet tec, animal control officer and animal rights and Animal Consultant. We joke around about different drugs, how certain medications work the best. I've assisted him on a couple of surgeries on my two bunny boys. He had never done it, but I pleaded and told him how easy it would be. He did some research and talked to another specialty vets and we sailed through on a nice breeze and cool water!

So now, Ruf is in a better place. She was so damn sick, it made me feel sick. She was a gorgeous ball of fluff when I brought her home from whatever shelter or police Dept. I was working for at the time. Maryann, she was the lightest shade of charcol tabby and always and forever, she will keep those deep and sweet eyes. They are the color of a butterbean. I'd better get going now!
More later!
Love you!
L.


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Review of "Thank You RAOK"  Open in new Window.
Review by Lesley Scott Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I was just surfing around on contests and activities and your site came into focus. I think that is one of the things that makes R.A.O K. All of you do so many kind things for us is almost too much. I don't know how Y'all can handle so many projects. I don't need an upgrade unless you can help me get my yellow suitcase. I lost it over a missunderstanding over a year ago and I have done well and I am proud of what I have done with WDC and I want to keep trying to make our world (WDC)less stressful.
Keep up the good work!
Love,
Lesley
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Review by Lesley Scott Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
While looking present moment, the King noticed a pattern in the shapshots in the information of the camera' card that was recovered. even affer delitiing the items. The murderer though she knew what to do and how to stay, counted on the photos being erased. When the pictures, after many other tests was converted to the seasons they represented. The poems were easy to read the number and subject.

I plan is to add the story to my collectiom. I have been thinking for a while now, and have several in my mind I will share later.

Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, Chris,
I just finished reading your short story, "From Under the willow Tree." The story started out peacefully, with Fae relaxing and sucking on a peach pit. It became a big spooky to find out about all of the "haunts" that Fae was able to see. At first, I thought she'd stumbled upon an old graveyard. The ending was a surprise to find out that Bucky was the evil one and the others were trying to warn her to stay away.
Keep up the Good Work!
Lesley


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Review of Acting  Open in new Window.
Review by Lesley Scott Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Hi, Bob county,
I just now finised your short story,"Acting." You had me fooled. I really thought she was on the "casting couch" and was trying out an opportunity to be a porn star. I laughed out loud at the end of your funny story. It probably can happen anywhere! I am glad Jaspher could help her out, in more ways than one.
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, Bob!

I just finished reading your cool story, "Is Tom Cruise a Fascist." You are right on the mark about Scientology. I think it is to control others and deny what is right, ie: The refusial of medical care. How many have died? I think the pharmacutical companies are more out to sell drugs to line their pockets. Some of us truly need medication. I am Bipolar with ADHD and take a lot of different meds. I've tried to gradually wean myself from the drugs, but suffered one bad mishap after another. I finally had to spend five days in a hospital.

I do wish these foolish people could think for themselves and use common sense. I read the first book and thought is was a way to control others. I prefer reading Lao Tzu's work, "The Tao Te Ching," and several of the new translations. My favorite is "The Tao of Inner Peace." Anyone who wants to improve themselves and help save the world should include the Tao in their different readings. If I don't read some of the Tao everyday, I think about the verses I know."

Good Job!

Lesley

ps When the Jesus Freaks knock on my door to read me their scriptures, I say, "I am a Sage of the Tao."They walk away, confused. Why didn't one of them even ask about the Tao?


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Review by Lesley Scott Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello, Keaton,

I checked out your port, but only had time to read your Bio. You have a lot of interesting tales to tell. I am thankful you spend time, writing for WDC. You have been a great help and inspiration for all of us. I will try to find a copy of "The Saphire Moon 2008." It will be easy to find with Barnes and Noble who will order the book or find it on Amazon. Barnes and Noble is easier. I do admire how versitile your writing can be. One time, I was checking out "Random Reviews," and the first four were writen by you! Each piece had its own personality. I don't write poetry, but love reading your poems.

I have to go work on the garden now.

Keep Up the Good Work!
Your Friend, and Fan,
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Hello,
I just finished your story entry, ""There's Another Side; Accomplised." I really did think it was the kind of story that I enjoy reading. The story had a lot going on, and was unpredictable. So, "THE SEVENTH SON OF A SEVENTH SON" with an interest in the paranormal. It was a good read!
Lesley


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Review of Homecoming  Open in new Window.
Review by Lesley Scott Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Hello, OOTster Bunny!

I love your handle. I just finished reading your story, "Home Coming." I remember those kinds of thoughts when I was younger. I had a lot of different boyfriends and loved each one of them. We are still on good terms. One of my favorites calls me from across the country in Idaho just to tell me he loves me, still. We met when he was a cop and I was an animal control officer.

I can recall aching for my husband, now, he is always with me and our sexlife is greater than before. I think that Sheila and Tony have something real special and share the same feeling for each other. I hope they get married, or live together forever.

Keep On Writing,
Lesley


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Review of Warning  Open in new Window.
Review by Lesley Scott Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, again, Keaton,

I have always enjoyed your writing. I thought it was funny that your item number has 666 in it. Your poem, "Warning," is true, I think. I hope I understand your poem as you wrote. I found it similar to "The Tao Te Ching." The verses are profound.

Again, I did like your poem and will read it to my husband. He loves to write poetry.

Your Friend,
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (3.0)
Hello, Prowperous Snow,

I just finished your poem, "The First Day of Might." I thought you came up with a good title about a person, not something else. It is romantic that Might's first day was dawn. Strolling with his girl friend, I am guessing, was realistic. I can just imagine the feel of feet walking on a side walk and smell the freshness of dawn.

keep Writing!
L.


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Review by Lesley Scott Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, Tim,

I just finished reading your poem, The Smugger Burglar." It was fun to read and I liked the way it was written. It made me put myself in the lady with the gun, and it was scary. My husband will lock his beat up old car, but he never locks the house. So I worry about burlars and home invasion.

I liked the ending when the burglar was caught by the brave lady. Did you know that The Night Stalker and other serial murderers start out peeping and then burgle. It escalates and eventually the criminal becomes a violent killer. I found that tid bit interesting.

Keep on Writing,
Lesley

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Review of Mighty Joe Ugly  Open in new Window.
Review by Lesley Scott Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (3.0)
Hello, Murf,
I just now finished reading your story, "Mighty Joe Ugly," I found it entertaining and an easy story to read. I like your sense of humor. It is funny that God spoke to Joe and said he was a result of a "divine mistake." I liked the ending.
L.


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Review of An Angel's Kiss  Open in new Window.
Review by Lesley Scott Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (2.5)
Hello, D Moarzjasac,
I just finished reading your piece. It reads like a romanic and erotic poem, yet has the format of a story. I think that is really cool. "An Angel's Kiss," is a great name, too. The story/poem made me remember my own encounters. I have never kissed an angel, unless you count a mule.
Lesley


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Review of The Band  Open in new Window.
Review by Lesley Scott Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, Sum 1,

I just finished reading your poem, "The Band." I liked it very much because it took me back to the times I used to go to concerts. My favorite was Eric Clapton with Pete Tonwnsend. There is something about music we humans need. We started by probably knocking two sticks together, who knows.
Keep up the good work!
Lesley


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Review of Willow Wonderland  Open in new Window.
Review by Lesley Scott Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello, again, Drifter!
I see you really have been a drifter. I really never had a picture of Viet Nam in my head before. All I remember was that awful war! Willow Lake sounds like such a perfect refuse. I live in the city and miss being on the farm. The stars are so visible, it looks like I can touch one.
Later, Cricket!
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, Harry,

I just finished reading your poem, "Pigeons are Deserving, Too." We have a lot of bird feeders and enjoy those little birds like chickadees and tufted Titmice. Timouse is singular. We have trouble with squirrels. So we put up squirrel feeders, offering corn cobs. That has helped some.

I love pigeons. They are so colorful and their feathers reflect the light iridescently. I really love the Mourning Doves that eat the left overs on the ground. I used to raise white doves and their cooing is so pleasant.

I enjoyed reading about your bird adventures.
Lesley


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Review of My Heart  Open in new Window.
Review by Lesley Scott Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, Kings,
I just finished your poem, "My Heart." I don't know a whole lot about poetry, so if you have made any grammatical mistakes or anything like that, I wouldn't notice. I thought your poem showed how much you are in love. Apparently, your heart had been broken before and you made a promise to your love and asked her to,"Say you'll stand by me all the way." I hope so.
Keep on writing!
Lesley


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