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Review by elephantsealer
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hey, Jake, what a story!!! I can just imagine how your father looked when you greeted him. And how much I envy you when you and your mother had a good laugh... It was a good piece and I salute you for writing it. For sharing your work, how about 500 GPS for you; it is all I have....



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Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
To the author of "Today I Stepped Over Into Eternity", it is a fact that death does come to us, humans, at the end of our life on earth. It is always accepted that family members do rally when someone does pass. In the weeping and shedding of tears, families do find a way to express their sadness at the passing of a member. And sorrow is always shared...And for that, here are 350 GPs for you...

So you see, your writing has touched me and I do share how you feel about passing on; abobut death...



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Review of Handbags at Dawn  
Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
To the author of "Handbags at Dawn", I salute you for your piece. You do sound like you know how to "interprise"... What a thought...carry on with the good things in your thoughts...and for that, how about 1,000 GPs for you?

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Review of ALONE  
Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
SandraLynn's "Alone" creates a pitiful picture of a human being who has not learned to stay away from potato chips... Great idea to bring to light why humans are such: just humans... For that, here's a 1,000 GPs for you...


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Review of Old  
Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
To the author of "Old": old means one has found the meaning of life; old means one has grown into a human being, able to adjust to changing things in life; old is just that: OLD...because there is love there, there is kindness there, there is great experience there; so being old is an adjustment that one takes and be thankful for...



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Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
To the author of a "a cold hour in humanity", what in the world have turned you into a pessimist? I assure you there is a "light" at the end of a "tunnel"; and if you do not see it as yet, just try again because it is there. You are just missing it a bit; however, it is there... To keep your "wings going", here are !,000 GPS for you; and enjoy them...


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Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello, there, Kathy, I am happy for you and am glad that you are able to see Manabi, which you mentioned is in Ecuador. How about writing about the people in Manabi? They will surely love to know how you think of them.


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Review of My Profile  
Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: E | (2.0)
To the author of "My Profile": it is a great ambition to write. However, I would suggest that you first learn to study the proper way to make your writing interesting. Writing is not just thinking of stories; one must learn to properly write your pieces. I would suggest that you enrol in a writing class; it will help you a lot...



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Review of Fear  
Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
To the author of Fear, quite a thing to be so terribly scared, yes? Writing your fear is the best antidote; drives away all the darkness and misconceptions of the mind...Nevertheless, carry on writing...How about 1,000 GPs to help you with your writing?



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Review of Another Night  
Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Loneliness is a terrible phase in life; and the author has definitely found a way to express the life of alone-ness: a never-ending feeling of regrets; a living memory of "disinterest"; a "solitude" that is "seldom shared"; to read this piece of writing leaves the reader a picture of what "boredom" is.



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Review of Blessed  
Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: E | (3.0)
The author of "Blessed" needs to learn how to write properly. For example, "your" should be "you're"; "guideing" should be "guiding"; "lifes", "life's" should be "lives" "live's"; when a poem is written to express sympathy, it should be properly written in order to be appreciated. Nevertheless, the author is really quite brave enough to express his/her feelings for the passing of a friend.

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Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi, Jackiesmuse, this is fun and thoughtful little tale about a father and a son. You seem to have hit something special between father and son; and it is a good thing because there are stories about father and son that are not special at all.

Do continue with your writing; and let your readers enjoy many more of the good ideas you have!!!


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Review of Scumbaggery  
Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Well done, Jcosmos, for your "Scumbaggery" in relations to Republicans. I would say you hit the right note - because Republicans are that, really, "Scums" of the earth... You have touched the right note, indeed. Carry on with the writing; and for that, here's 235 GPs for your thoughts about Republicans...and for actually writing a poem about them....




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Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
You are going in the right direction, Vaishali. Your emotions are actually your guide to get better as a writer. Do not ignore them; they are precious to you as a writer as long as you make sure you get control of those carelessness, mistakes, your lows, etc, etc.,

Have courage and write well...And for all your effort, have 550 GPs to send you on your way to a good write.



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Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Well done, Joto Kai, for deciding to hold on to writing those detective stories. You may still get it done sooner than you think. Your decision would make you a better writer. Carry on...

I have at this moment have only 230GPs, which I think may give you some kind of "push" to write and write good...


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Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I am glad to be up and about, even as I ache so much; my legs won't even keep me up properly without going weak on me, sending me down to the floor. And why must we go old anyhow? Yes, I am sure it is part of us; that our bodies are really just something that have been loaned to us as we make a journey to OLD AGE...

Hey, Monty, thanks for providing us a space just to "grunt" and "holler" out of our misery... Nevertheless, we are glad that old age gives us a chance to be ourselves...
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Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
This piece of writing is too dark to be read. It seems this individual has lost a lot of energy that should have sustained her/him to "keep up" the hope because there is always hope...This individual has definitely lost the energy to keep on "living". How unfortunate because giving up is actually losing everything...

To the author, keep up the good writing; it is a hope for us, readers, to realize that there are "writers" who can "write".

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Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Here is another tale that is sad because of the actions of humans. The author's story reaches out to the heart and soul of readers; a story of cruelty within the heart and soul of another. It tells a story of the kindness of the person who gave love to a boy in contrast with the way another person just did not care at all, had no love in his heart at all. I salute the author for this little story of love and kindness... Since I have 325 GPs, I would like to give it to the author....


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Review of Unlucky Shortcut  
Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
The "Unlucky Shortcut" is a good, short tale about helping and aiding another human; and it is presented with such an easy read. To the writer, carry on with how you write because you have the right sense...And for that, how about 500 GPs for the author? Sorry, that is all I can afford to give...

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Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
"Alone...At Last" is an utterly sad experience for a mother. Aside from getting old, this mother has even lost the energy to listen to her daughter. Do I see a mother who has lost the ability to be "human"? Do we in, general, forget to love and be loved again and again by our family because we have become elderly?

Growing old and alone because her family has left is actually no reason for a mother to lose the ability to "love" again...However, it seems this short fiction does tell us that being alone is what "old age" means...

To the author, keep up the good work; write more of and about ageing humans...


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Review of I Am  
Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
ProsperousSnow prays 4 Ukraine writes a poem that sends a message to me: that this is a human being, a person who asks questions, believes that there is an "Unknowable Essence", hopes for a future, and knows the inner thoughts that co-mingle with lots of other, human things in the world...

In a world like. ours at this time, we question things that surround us; we either believe or disbelieve what we are told, and most of the time, it is out own understanding of things that bring us the understanding of what we are.

Carry on with your writing, ProsperousSnow prays 4 Ukraine, and continue to believe in what you think is believable...

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Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
This is a dark story of love between two people. Sometimes, we ask ourselves why we love and then fall out of love; and the answer is: it happens. Why does love drive two people away from one another? It becomes a question and the answer is always something we, as humans, are incapable to answer truthfully...

The author of this tale has brought to mind that life is short; and that love, true love, that is, may not even be the answer to get married...


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Review of Cenia  
Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
The story of "Cenia" is a sad tale about leaving; leaving her two daughters, her husband, her family, in fact. And her decision to leave was difficult. However, her decision was final; and away she went...

This is a sad tale of a mother; for what mother would just up and go, leave her family? Although we would never know if she regrets this decision to leave, it is a fact that she left which she thinks will be a new life for her...

Cheers to the author for this brave tale about a mother; and may his/her writing continue to share with us, readers, the sadness of a decision...

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Review of Coronavirus  
Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
It is fun to poke jokes about coronavirus. This disease has been holding us in constant danger for over a year now, and still it is a menace. Writing about it and having fun writing about it is really a good thing. It makes sense because even as we now see the end of the last of this virus; yet we are reminded that it has not actually left us FREE...

Bully for the author to write about this virus in fun because we need that kind of writing to boost our energy, to continue to fight a disease as deadly as coronavirus.

To the author, how about 10,000 GPs for your limerick?????

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Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
Wow and Wow again. The romantic feeling of this tale is in every sentence, every movement of the eyes, every thought... Reading this story is like watching a movie, the feelings are raw, the thoughts of touch and togetherness are exceptional, to the point of almost there...

To the writer, you are good at writing a romantic tale. How about writing something else, like, a romance in the middle of a war?

Anyhow, keep at it because you seem to be good at it...Just please let me know when Bella and William have their first born...


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