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Review of Winter bloom  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)


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Hello Moonglade I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our February raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
what a super piece of writing. you really did do a fantastic job capturing a deep emotional feeling. the title of this poetry is beautiful and appropriate for this item. the item description is very well done and is also very to the reader of the poem.. I really liked reading this piece of writing it tugs on the old heart strigs.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)


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Hello {suser:sdrudd} I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our February raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer. I thought that the title was perfect because Mothers are a blessing. it is appropriate for the poem. The item description is helpful for the reader of the poem. You really did do a wonderful job with this poem. Your mom would be proud.
I found this poem to be just outstanding. I loved it. I like when people show love, respect and caring to a parent. Mothers are so great, I am best friends with my mom and if something happened to her I'd die...
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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)


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Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello Tim Chiu I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our February raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I really enjoyed reading this poetry, you did a good job with this romantic piece.
allbeit a sports poem I found it to be sweet and pure. I think that the title is appropriate for this piece. I also find that the item description is helpful to the reader. you always do such good work it amazes me.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Review of Probe  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)


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Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello Jatog the Green I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our February raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
This was a very good story-poem, I love poems that tell us a story, This one was real good, especially because of the Parrot, I had a talking parrot
and I love them. This is about Jack hearing something in his driveway and going to see what it was. The title was okay, but I thought that the item description was very helpful to the reader,, telling them all about the poem or story.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
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Review of Books Books  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)


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Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello Don Two I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our February raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
this is a wonderfully written piece of writing. I think it is delightful. You used
six quatrains or twenty four lines to tell a story about being trapped in a library with many books. you speak as though it were a jail. you did a good job creating this piece. congratulations on the writing,.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
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Review of Desolation Inside  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)


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Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello HikerAngel I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our February raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
This little poem is very deep and kind of dark I thought. You did a good job creating a poem like this and I feel it is perfect for Valentines day. I think the poem would fare better with an item description, it would be helpful for the reader of the poem. The title says it all, and it is very appropriate for the item.

Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Review of My Sweetheart  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (3.5)


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Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello g I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our February raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to reiew for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I think that it is a wonderful gesture on your part, that you wrote your spouse a beautiful little poem for your fifty-fifth wedding anniversary. I myself have been married for thirty-five years and I would not change it for anything. Your poem was very cute and the title was appropriate for the poem the item description was appropriate. Thank you for sharing your awesome talent with me today, goodbye and God Bless you and yours.


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Review of Beloved.  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)


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Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello rinsoy I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our February raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing ofrom your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer. this form is a welsh poem known as the gwawdodyn, it is a strange name but you followed the protocol well on it. The title was well placed and appropriate for the poem. it is a contest entry is all I really know about the poem other than the form.
you failed to write an adequate item description, we need to know a little something about the poem, describe it.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You. strand Have Fun

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Review of Valentine Broken  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)


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Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello TheBusmanPoet I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our February raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
This poem was structured using, 49 lines and seven stanzas. The theme of the item is a person is heartbroken when another abruptly leaves without a clue as to why. it is a well-written poem about the break. I think it is a sad poem but a just poem for valentine's day. I think you did an excellent job with it. The title was appropriate and the item description was helpful.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 18+ | (1.0)


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Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our February raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I don't like to award just one star but since that is what you are asking for I will.
you did a great job of writing a bad poem. I still thought that it was kind of cute.

It was creative and I do hope that you win or place in the Bards Hall contest.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)


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Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello turtlemoon-dohi I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our February raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
This is a very cute little free verse poem with internal rhymes. It was written for The Bards Hall contest and it meets the prompt very well, to slam cupid. I kind of liked it,, even though it is supposed to be intentionally bad poetry, I liked it,
It made me laugh out loud. This was well written if you ask me.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Review of Dare To Be  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello 🌕 HuntersMoon , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: you structured this item with two quatrains and two sestets
I am afraid that I don't know this form.\

*Butterfly2r* Theme: this is a prayer for a young woman and was written for your daughter.

*Moon* Flow: you flow well in the poem with a great flair for words. I did not see any unnecessary stops or pauses anywhere and it was smooth reading.

*Exclaim* punctuation: As far as I can tell the punctuation looks correct, but I am not the best with that subject.

*Sun* tone: the tone is sweet.

*Strawberry* Title: I loved the title and I do think it is appropriate for the poem.

*Dragonflyp* Image: I close my eyes and envision a sweet woman dressed for purity.
long white gown sort of like an angel.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello scjew ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary today,
I do so hope that you are having a blessed day today. I thought that the title
is very appropriate for the work, The item description is also very helpful to the reader of the poem. This is imaginative, or at least I hope its imagination and don't come true. that would be a huge bother. you did a good job on this.
Thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate you, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*


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Review of An Angel's smile  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello jaya h ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary you have an anniversary coming up on the ninth of February, I do so hope that you have had a wonderfully blessed day today. I just adored the title of your poem,, I like everything spiritual,, about God, or Angels. I believe so deeply in all of these things. Angels watch over us every day for God. Your title is appropriate. I hope you won or placed in the coloring the world contest that you entered. I notice you have a beautiful ribbon I hope you won. It is a beautiful poem and is beautifully written. I did not see any mistakes with your writing. The grammar looked good as was the spelling good.
The punctuation looked correct to me, but I am not the best at punctuation and grammar, but nothing stood out as being wrong with your writing.



thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hello Jeff ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary , Your anniversary will be on the fifteenth and you have been a member here so long. since 2003.
I am really liking that you chose to write an acrostic poem about aliens, This is using your imagination, which is a writer's best friend. I love poetry and you did a good job, this was no two word title to write about, it was a doozy. You did a very nice job creating this piece. You must be awful proud to be a senior moderator, that shows that you are a very valuable member of writing.com and very active in keeping the family here together. I have a belief in something greater but it is not an alien, it is
God. did you win the writer's cramp competition you entered this in?
The item description tells us a little about why you wrote the poem, I guess you figure the title describes the poem.



thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Chazzz ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this wonderful evening, I do so hope that you have a wonderfully blessed day today.
You can't be more right. The Loneliest place on earth is the cemetery. I believe, by the way, that you misspelled cemetery in your item description. it is spelled with an ery not an ary.
It is just one of those words that trips you up sometimes. I notice you decided not to use punctuation except at the end of the poem, that is fine , a lot of people do this with writing poetry.
Your grammar and vocabulary are showcased in this poem, and I must say you did very well with both.
I sometimes go to the cemetery to visit my dad and it is a peaceful and lonely kind of place. but you know some how the peacefulness overrides the loneliness. You title really works and the whole poem is just good.


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Review of Wish upon a star?  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello Pamela Sue Bishop ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this fine evening, I do so hope that you have had a wonderfully blessed day today.
I enjoyed reading this wonderous little love poem I love the title it is timeless.
an d also very appropriate for this particular poem. The item description is also very helpful to the reader of the poem. You chose not to use punctuation in writing this poem. the only punctuation that I noted was at the end of the poem you used a period.
there is nothing wrong with that, many people choose not to use punctuation in poetry.
I thought that the grammar looked okay with me, but I am not the best judge of grammar.
The spelling also looked to be done properly... all in all I would say that this is a well written and created piece of writing. I think you did a great job.

thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review of This Wasteland  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello Thx11283 ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I do so hope that you have had a very wonderful an d blessed day today.
I felt very sad after reading your piece of writing tonight.. The title is so appropriate for the item, and the item description is also very helpful to the reader.
the punctuation on the item was correct to the best of my opinion, I am not the best at grammar, punctuation, but all of the spelling looked correct, and there were no glaring mistakes with it that stood out. The one thing that I did notice was that you had one line that was so much longer than the other ones. I think that you could have probably broken it in half and made two lines out of it, that way it would not stand out so much. It would then look more uniform, which is what we look for in poetry.


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Review of Rice Poems  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello Tica Zey ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I do so hope you have had a blessed day today. T his is an awfully strange subject to create and write a poem about. I think as poems go this one fits the bill.
You did a wonderfully creative job with it. I thought that the title was appropriate for the poem. I also think that the item description is helpful to the reader, as it tells us the prompt was Rice. You used it to describe food to eat, as well as using it as a celebration item to throw at weddings. This was no easy task and I think that you did a nice job with the subject. It appears that you used your punctuation only to end sentences with. I think that your grammar and spelling were all correct, but Heck, I am from the south, we all Know my grammar isn't much.



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Review of A New Day  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello Daedalus Chaos ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I do so hope you have had a blessed day today. I liked your poem you used very nice vocabulary, I especially liked how you said "she gingerly steps out"
I think this is original piece of poetry. It sounded almost like it could have been an excerpt from a short story or novel.
The title is appropriate and also very good. I read a lot of poetry and yours kind of stuck out to me for some reason, I think it is because it reads more like a part of a story than a poem. The punctuation seems to be well placed, the best that I can tell. I am not very schooled in punctuation. The grammar and spelling looked good as well. the overall feel of the poem was kin d of like dread or maybe fear a little bit. I really enjoyed reading your work.

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Review of The Wind  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello 1leila123 ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I do so hope that you have a blessed day today. I enjoyed reading this environmentally friendly poem about the wind. Actually that is the title and I think that it is very appropriate for this poem. I think that the item description is helpful to the reader.. I loved the rhythm which you had and the nice little rhymes as well. The tone was calming. The punctuation seems to be pretty correct to me, I mean I am not the best at judging punctuation, but it looked pretty good. I wrote a poem about the wind myself and it won a ribbon, I was so happy and surprised. you should enter this poem in the Verdant contest, it is all about nature poetry. I see that you have four stars so far, but I am going to give you four and a half stars.



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Review of God's Heavy Hand  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Power Unit ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I really thought that you did a good job creating your poem "Gods Heavy Hand"
that is a good title and it is very appropriate for the item. I can recall off hand what form of poetry this is, I do seem to recognize it though. I am a very spiritual person and I think that God has a reason for everything that happens on earth. Perhaps you were supposed to meed Captain Roger Finley an d the EMT people for some reason. I think this is about a car accident, Am I correct? anyway it is very well written. You chose to write this poem using thirteen tercets. the punctuation appeared to be correct to me, although, I am not the worlds best at judging punctuation. The tone of the poem seemed tragic, or excited. I think you did a fine job creating this item,

thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Rated: E | (3.5)



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Hello ana , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: your poem is structured using one long verse

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme of your poem is love

*Moon* Flow: the poem has too many commas or pauses in the wrong places.

*Exclaim* punctuation: You are using commas in the place of periods. There are commas where they are not needed.

*Strawberry* Title: The title is appropriate for the item.

*Sun* tone: the tone is romantic.

*Dragonflyp* Image: The following sentence needs to be edited.{

*StarfishB* Suggestions: feel you when I regarde the ocean,

feel you when I regard the ocean.
there is no e at the end of regard and you need a period not a comma at the end.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Dadikus , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured using five tercets and one quatrain.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: a talk between friends

*Moon* Flow: Your poem flowed well without any unnecessary stops or pauses.


*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation was well placed as far as I could tell.

*Sun* tone: smooth

*Strawberry* Title: The title is very unique and imaginative I really liked it.

*Dragonflyp* Image: in my mind I see two friends talking and a torrent of leaves blowing from the trees and cascading down around them.
I think that did a good job and I saw no mistakes.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Rated: E | (5.0)

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Hello Rhyssa , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured using four quatrains or stanzas with four lnes each. the first line is repeated throughout the poem.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: this is a beautiful poem about picking cotton in the
autumn.
*Moon* Flow: I thought that the poem flowed well, without any pauses or stops,,

*Exclaim* punctuation: you chose not to use punctuation in the poem which is just fine.

*Sun* tone: fresh sounding

*Strawberry* Title: The title was taken from the poem it was a repetitive line.

*Dragonflyp* Image: I can envision the cotton fields,

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes in your writing, you did a great job,


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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