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Review of Gina  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Renee , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This is written as a short nonfiction item in one paragraph.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: This is about your best friend, sister type friend, Gina. She sure does sound like a wonderful person.
*Moon* Flow: the item flows well with no unnecessary pauses

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation looks okay to me.

*Sun* tone: friendly

*Strawberry* Title: The title is appropriate and good.

*Dragonflyp* Image: I can envision the two of you embraced in a friendship hug.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: there a re a few little type O"s but it is so touching it don't matter.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)

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Hello Vanishing Vapor , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.


*Butterfly2r* Theme: You have structured this poem using four quatrains. this is s poem about the pitfalls of telling a lie, it is wrong of course.

*Moon* Flow: I thought that your poem flowed well, without any unnecessary stops or pauses anywhere.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation looked to be done correctly if you ask me.

*Sun* I thought that you had a good rhythm and a good rhyme going for you.

*Strawberry* Title: The title was very appropriate for this particular poem.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought that you did a fantastic job creating and writing this little piece of writing.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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Review of best friend  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)

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Hello {suser;icedcoffee} , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: structured using twelve lines in one stanza.

s*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme of this poem is friendship and not losing it if you have it.

*Moon* Flow: this is a cool little poem with good flow, no unnecessary pauses anywhere.

*Exclaim* punctuation: as far as I tell, the punctuation was correct.

*Sun* tone: The tone was smooth and light.

*Strawberry* Title: the title '"best friend", is appropriate for this piece.

*Dragonflyp* Image: the image that comes across from this poem is of two friends or three
laughing and having fun.

e:StarfishB} Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you, as I saw no mistakes with your writing,



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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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Review of Having it Too  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)

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Hello Don Two , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: you have structured this poem using four quatrains or four line stanzas.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: this is a poem written about taking a bite out of a wonderful cupcakes is a poem

*Moon* Flow: I thought that you had good rhythm and rhyme also the flow was good without any unnecessary stops or pauses.

*Exclaim* punctuation: to me, I think the punctuation was correct, I am not so good at punctuation.

*Sun* tone: the tone was light and fun,

*Strawberry* Title: The title was good and very appropriate for the poem.

*Dragonflyp* Image: I can envision a huge plate of cupcakes.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes with your poem.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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Review of Name on the Air  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

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Hello Dadikus , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this poem is structured using six stanzas, mostly quatrains. though not all.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: this is about meeting someone

*Moon* Flow: it flowed well without any unnecessary stops or pauses.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation looked as if it were okay to me.

*Sun* tone: smoothly written

*Strawberry* Title: a very unique title that is appropriate for the poem.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you, as I saw no mistakes with your writing.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)

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Hello moondog02 , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: it is written using only one tiny verse.
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*Butterfly2r* Theme: about a man looking a photo of a female holding a pu[

*Moon* Flow: there really is no flow ther is only a couple of lines
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*Exclaim* punctuation: you chose not to use punctuation, which is fine.

*Sun* tone: the tone was reminiscent.

*Strawberry* Title: The title is fine it tells the whole story actually.

e:dragonflyp} Image: I can just envision someone holding a sweet little pup


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes, and I thought this was a cute little poem

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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Review of The Diamond  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)

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Hello 🌕 HuntersMoon , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this is a double Ethree, they are really fun to write, I've written one before, not as good as yours though, yours id excellent.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: I thought that this was unusual and though good.

*Moon* Flow: the flow was good, there was not any stops or pauses.


*Exclaim* punctuation: You chose to write this item without using punctuation, which is always good with this type.

*Sun* tone: I thought that the poem read very smoothly

*Strawberry* Title: This is an excellent title, it helps to tell us before hand what the poem is about. the poem is appropriate

*Dragonflyp* Image: I see shining diamonds everywhere while reading this.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: You always put out good writings, this one is up to your standard.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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Review of MOM  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)

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This is an informal review I am writing to you because I want to share with you our similarities. I too am best friends with my mom, I love her more than life. She taught us well and we also had God as the center point of our lives. I like that you wrote this story which was inspired by a hard-working, loving, Mom. I think your writing was straight from your heart, which is the best and most interesting writing there is, if you ask me. I saw a few little type o's here and there, but they were so insignificant that I didn't even take not of them. mostly it was a dropped letter at the end of a word. a quick read through by you and you should be able to catch it easily and repair it.
I love your writing and think you need to write more things from your heart.
Thank you so kindly for sharing this item with me. it was wonderful.


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Review of Triolet poetry  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello {suser: }, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this is structured where you have a definition as well as a history of the form.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: this is a history of the triolet form of poetry.



*Exclaim* punctuation:the punctuation seemed to be correct to me.

*Sun* tone: the tone was educational I guess you would say.

*Strawberry* Title: the title was appropriate as it is what the entire thing was about.



*StarfishB* Suggestions: I think you did a good job introducing this form to readers who might not know anything about it.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Raw and Easy  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)

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Hello Keaton Foster: Know My Hell! , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: I don't see how you create this pattern with your poetry, it does make it easy to read though.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: it is a poem in general about your life and purpose.

*Moon* Flow: I thought, because of the way that it is written, it comes off sounding a bit choppy.

*Exclaim* punctuation: as usual you use no punctuation, which is just fine in poetry.


*Strawberry* Title: the title is a bit unusual, but it works with the unusual poem.

*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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Review of I WOULD RATHER  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello bLackSphere77 , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This was written and structured in one verse.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: it was an unrhymed piece very inquisitive.

*Moon* Flow: It flowed well with no unnecessary stops or pauses.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation, for the most part, looked to be okay to me.

*Sun* tone: again it was an inquisitive tone to the poem.

*Strawberry* Title: The title is very appropriate for the item.

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*StarfishB* Suggestions: I noticed the following:

I would rather be the prisoner than the caprurer

I see that both times you misspell the word captor,, also in the last few sentences you need to double check the punctuation. I am not sure about it. Just check it.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)

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*Think* Structure: this poem is structured using tercets and couplets

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is happiness or lack there of.

*Moon* Flow: I felt it flowed well without any unnecessary stops or pauses,

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation seemed to be correct to me.

*Sun* tone: the tone was soft empathetic, if that is such a tone,

*Strawberry* Title: The title is appropriate as it is what the poem is about.

*Dragonflyp* Image: it brings to mind the sad things that can happen in one's life.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I that you did a very good job creating this poem it was very well written.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)



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Hello Rhyssa , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: There is a structure of three, six-line stanzas

*Butterfly2r* Theme: it is about plot bunnies and how painful they are

*Moon* Flow: The poem flows very well has a pretty good rhythm and good rhyme as well.

*Exclaim* punctuation: punctuation is correct to the best of my knowledge.

*Sun* tone: it is a smoothly written poem, has a witty bit to it I felt.

*Strawberry* Title: The title is appropriate for the item. as it is what the
item was about.

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*StarfishB* Suggestions: I really have no suggestions for you because I didn't really see any mistakes.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Nature's kiss  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Onenessinall , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this poem is structured using twelve lines in a sequence of two each.pairs

*Butterfly2r* Theme: remembering a kiss from a lover but it is just the jungle

*Moon* Flow: it flows well and uses many poetic devices,


*Exclaim* punctuation: you are not consistent in how you use the punctuation throughout the poem. some lines you use it and some you do not.

*Sun* tone: It has a smooth tone,kind of witty I thought.

*Strawberry* Title: liked the title and I found it to be very appropriate for the writing.

*Dragonflyp* Image: I can envision you in the lush jungle and a snail on you.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I would suggest that you always capitalize the pronoun I
throughout your poem. and that you be more consistent on the punctuation.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Alas, my lass!  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)



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Hello ,Ben Langhinrichs , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: The structure is three four-line with one being a quintet lines stanza. I think you did a good job with this.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The end for her, was the end for him as well.


*Moon* Flow: The item flowed well without any awkward pauses anywhere.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation was spot on.

*Sun* tone: the tone was even

*Strawberry* Title: The title was a lay on words, which I liked.

*Dragonflyp* Image: I think this brings out a lot of imaging in my mind

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes with your writing.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello 💙 Carly , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This was a very brief little piece of writing containing
only two stanzas or qautrains, but it is a powerful personilization piece.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: This poem was written for day 12 of the birthday bash contest. it is a personal insiration for the writer's life.

*Moon* Flow: This poetry flowed swell without any unusual stops or pauses.

*Exclaim* punctuation: This particular poem was written without the use of punctuation, which so many are written this way.

*sunp* tone: I feel like the tone of this poem come across as being proud and strong...

*Strawberry* Title: "architect of my own design", this is an appropriate title for this poem, it shows that you are in control of your own life and you create what happens in your life.

*Dragonflyp* Image: I see you as a strong and independent person who doesn't need anyone but self.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: you have good self-esteem and it shows in your writing.
your writing is good and strong.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Forget-Me-Nots?  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)



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Hello Writer_Mike , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: it is structured as a very short story. or a conversation.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: choking on a donut was the theme of the item and how flowers do not always help when you are forgetful.
"The title, "forget-me-nots?" is a clever play on words.

*Dragonflyp* Image: I can envision some forget-me-not flowers in a vase near a donut on a saucer which you choke on.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes, you did a good job creating this flash fiction.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of My Own Sins  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Keaton Foster: Know My Hell! , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: The structure is like that of all of your work very few words per line, leaving many lines in tow.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is of a man who is contemplating paying for his sins with hell. I think

*Moon* Flow: this flowed from word one until last word

*Exclaim* punctuation: I do not know about the punctuation, I don't recall seeing any of the punctuation used in this item. which is fine. it was consistent.

*Sun* tone: as usual it was depressing and dark in tone.

*Strawberry* Title: The title "My Own Sins", speaks to what the entire poem was about. It is about your sinfulness. This brings all of your poems to my mind as they are all similar.



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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Faceless Lies  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Keaton Foster: Know My Hell! , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: Your structure is one long verse and it is laid out into a design sort of.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: trying to escape a fate that's not your own

*Moon* Flow: very good flow with no unnecessary stops or pauses.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation is not formal, there are some but for the most part there is not.

*Sun* tone: the tone is sort of dark or at least I felt it was

*Strawberry* Title: The title "Faceless Lies", is very good and appropriate I really thought it was good and original.

*Dragonflyp* Image: this is sort of a depressive type of poem, that is what it brings to my mind, someone who is trapped and wants out.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: You did a good job creating this item. It is original, but the format is so much like all of your other pieces of writing.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Last Lunch  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)



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Hello {suser: }, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item has five stanzas with no certain number of lines per stanza.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is of a last meal

*Moon* Flow: there is no unnecessary stops or pauses in the item

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation seems to be consistent and correctly done.

*Sun* tone: the overall tone of the poem came off as a bit dark to me.

*Strawberry* Title: The title is appropriate for this particular poem. it is what the whole poem is about really.


*Dragonflyp* Image: the image brought to my mind is one of a person eating poison in his or her lunch.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought you wrote a good little story poem and
it was easy to follow.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of April Winds  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: the structure of this item is A Cameo , an unrhymed 7-line poem

*Butterfly2r* Theme: An April Day in Las Vegas with winds and all.

*Moon* Flow: there was hardly any flow to the item, as it was so brief.

*Exclaim* punctuation: I am the world's worst with punctuation so you might ask someone else about that, as far as I know, you did it correctly.

*Sun* tone: I thought that this item was very smooth

*Strawberry* Title: The title of the item was perfect as it was what the poem was all about. It was very appropriate.

*Dragonflyp* Image: to me it brings to mind a brisk breeze blowing and tossing stuff around.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: This is a well written poem and I think you picked the perfect form in which to write it.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)


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Hello Tim Chiu , I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe . I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group.
This is a poem written to show how you are feeling good about an unknown future.
or at least that is what I think it is about. I think that the title is very appropriate for the item and I also think that the item description is helpful for the reader.

Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.


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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)


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Hello Brenpoet , I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe . I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group. I loved this beautiful piece of writing, though I love all things that are written about my Jesus and those who have faith in Him. He has saved me so many times in so many ways. heart, soul, and health He has saved me. I was nothing and in me He created something, I had no talent but through me He chose I should write.
I love Jesus.


Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.


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Review of Second Chance  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)


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Hello Norman , I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe . I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group. This looks like you have had a little spat of some sort with your mate.
you did something to make her very angry is how this reads. You are desperately trying to make it up to her and get her not to be angry any longer. in the end you are questioning whether or not the candy and flowers were enough.


Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.


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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)

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Hello Jaiam , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: I see that you use four quatrains followed by a single line.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: I loved the theme, It is about God and how through Him all things are possible. You have to love Gods, but if He doesn't answer your prayer the way you want Him to don't stop believing in Him, He knows what's best for us.

*Moon* Flow: there were no interruptions in the flow of the poem.

*Exclaim* punctuation: I am the world's worst at punctuation but it looks to me like you did very well.

*Sun* tone: The tone of the poem seems to me that it was written with love and strong emotion and faith.

*Strawberry* Title: The title says it all, it is so very important and it is the message of the whole poem. it is very appropriate for the poem.

*Dragonflyp* Image: if I close my eyes I see an angel helping Jesus. I don't know why but I just do.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought that this was a beautiful piece of writing and if I could I would give it 5 stars.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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