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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Tim Chiu , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this poem is definitely structured in a unique way using one cinquain, one sestet, and followed by a septet.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: A poem written about the sport of surfing.

*Moon* Flow: I thought the poem flowed well and I love that you really used good language

*Exclaim* punctuation: To the best of my ability it looks as if you did a good job with the punctuation and vocabulary was extraordinary.

*Sun* tone: kind of a thrilling and suspenseful tone I thought.

*Strawberry* Title: The title is surprising but it works.

*Dragonflyp* Image: I caan envision someone on a surfboard at the beach.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: This was an exciting poem.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Elisa the Bunny Stik , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This structure suited this poem very well. You used five tercets and one quatrain to end the poem.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: A person who only cared about others, this is a person I'd like to meet. It is a rarity.


*Moon* Flow: The flow is very good and there is no unnecessary stops or pauses.

*Exclaim* punctuation: I am not the best with the punctuation, but it looks to me
like you aced it.

*Sun* tone: calm kind of tone I would say.

*Strawberry* Title: I liked the title and I thought it was appropriate for this item.


*Dragonflyp* Image: this is not really applicable for this item.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I loved the concept of the subject you chose. I found this poem to be refreshing.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Baby Powder  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Poseyv*Reviewed by: *Paw* Lisa Noe*Cat2*

Hello Bikerider ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary ,
this beautiful evening, I do so hope that you have had a wonderfully blessed day today as I have had. This is the second of two reviews I have written for you this evening, I find your writing to be quite poignant and sweet. I especially loved this one. which was inspired by your grandchild. I think it is quite different and unique.
The title, "Baby Powder", is so good and very appropriate for the item which you wrote. The item description is so very helpful to the reader. it is very telling.
Your granddaughter will be a very fortunate little girl to have such beautifully sweet poetry written for her, as she gets older, I do hope you share some of this work with her, it is a special gift you could give to her. it is touching. You granddaughter will be proud to receive such beautiful words just for her;.

thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Thumbsup*
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Review of Fruity fun  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Poseyv*Reviewed by: *Paw* Lisa Noe*Cat2*

Hello Chris Breva ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this beautiful evening. I do so hope that you have had a wonderfully blessed day today, as I have had. On the twenty-first of March, you will be celebratin g your seventh account anniversary. I am sure you are looking forward to this milestone.
The title, "Fruity Fun" is very appropriate for this item. I think this is an odd subject for a poem, but it works for you/ it is a triolet poem, and I did catch a mistake in it:

Front Loops are my favorite food
I eat them by the box!

in line one above it should read fruit loops not front loops.
it is just a small little mistake which is easy for any of us to make. it is an easy fix. I like fruit loops myself they are a terrific breakfast cereal. I think this is creative and cute.

{thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review of The Split  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello Chris Breva ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary ,
this beautiful evening. I do so hope that you have had a wonderfully blessed day today, as I have had. I am writing this review for your gift for your seventh account anniversary which will take place on the twenty-first of March. You have written a wonderfully cute little limerick about an older woman who does the splits and rips her britches. this was a humorous little ditty and I really like light comedy. The split, which is the title is very appropriate for the item. This was a contest entry for the Senior Forum for November 2019. The item description was helpful for the reader. I think that you did a fantastic job creating this little item. You show great creative ability and I enjoyed reading your piece of writing.


thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello Katdembickjy , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I do so hope that you have had a wonderfully blessed day today. This review is going to be a gift to you for your first account anniversary here at writing.com. You are a blessed and valuable member of our writing family.
These lyrics are well written, I would like to say that your writing is very nicely executed. I enjoyed reading this item. it is not an easy task to write a song, you must write one with a certain sound in mind. rock, country, jazz, a ballad, dance music and so on. I love to share music with my friends as it is something that is better listened to in a group than alone I think. I wonder what type of sound you think of for this particular piece. The title is appropriate for the item I thought.



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Review of Big Bang Theory  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello Stellar Empress , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this wonderful evening, I do so hope that you have a blessed evening today as I had.
This is a long poem about the big bang theory, you know on another note, that is my all time favorite television show, I find it to be well written and very funny a real stress reliever. but I enjoyed your very different poem which is very serious. The titel "Big Bang Theory", is very appropriate for this item. And I found that the item description is also very helpful to the reader of the poem.. I liked this unrhymed poem which is structured using various lengths of stanzas. I thought that the subject matter is very original and not one that is overused at all. It is well executed and a very strong
type of poem to read. I enjoyed reading this item.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello masseye75 ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary
this wonbderful evening. I do so hope that you have had a blessed day, as I have had. I see that you decided to structure this item using tercets, or three line stanzas. I so dearly love poetry, and I think you have written an interesting little piece of, "Brooke found a Lily", is very appropriate for the piece of writing.
I find this to be a cute and intriguing little poem and it is written with a little flare .. I found the poem to be colorful and descriptive, which is always a good thing. I think you probably had children in mind while writing this little poem about a little girl who finds a lily; This is your eleventh year with writing.com and I chose to review this piece as a gift for your anniversary today;. I do hope you write more little poems about the little girl named Brooke, you could make an entire series of them; have her going place, learning things and etc.


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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Hello Ollie ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this wonderful evening, I do so hope that you have had a blessed day today. This is a brief little poem about insomnia, this is one of the most miserable feelings in the world, to have insomnia. laying there hour after hour, thoughts rushing through your mind, tearing you apart. "Stress and Madness at 3am" is a great title as it tells of the desperate feelings you are being dragged through. This title is very appropriate for the item. The item description is also very helpful as it tells us that the poem is about insomnia. Your writing depicts the desperation of one who is stuck in a place that he can't bare. I think that I would spell out the number three in the title, if it were mine. but either way is correct I suppose.

thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review of AN ODE TO GANDHI  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Dr M C Gupta , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure:
this poem is structured using twenty couplets
*Butterfly2r* Theme: the story of Gandhi, who was a political leader and genuine person.

*Moon* Flow: it flowed well without unnecessary stops or pauses.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was good

*Sun* tone: the tone was pleasing.

*Strawberry* Title: the title was appropriate for the poem

*Dragonflyp* Image: it brought to my mind the man himself.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes,


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Tim Chiu , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: the poem is structured using one long sixteen line verse.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is love and it is prose written for your girlfriend.

*Moon* Flow: the poem flows nicely with out rhymes.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation appears to be correctly done.

*Sun* tone: the tone is loving.

*Strawberry* Title: the title is approprite for the writing.
*Dragonflyp* Image: I can envision two lovers embraced and kissing.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes,


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Perspective  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Jeff , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day
*Butterfly2r* Theme: there was two hundred and seventy six words in this piece of flash fiction which I loved dearly. it flowed well without any unnecessary pauses.
*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation appears correct to me.

*Sun* tone: it read smooth and was surprising and sweet.

*Strawberry* Title: I can envision a NASA rocket gliding by the planet Mars.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought that this was a surprising and refreshing twist to the UFO stories.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello {suser: }, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: You have chosen to structure this poem using five stanzas, which include three quatrains, one couplet, and one septet. This is a unique format I must say.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The theme of this poem is angels in chorus on earth or above

*Moon* Flow: this unrhymed poem flows well and I enjoyed it.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation appears coorrect to me.

*Sun* tone: the tone is soft and natural

*Strawberry* Title: the title is appropriate.

*Dragonflyp* Image: it brings to my mind a choir of beautiful angels.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes with your poem it was well written and good,

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Circus  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (3.5)



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Hello vaylostefkov, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: you chose to structure your poem using two quatrains or stanzas with four lines each for a total of eight lnes.
the theme is welcome to our home.

*Moon* Flow: it flowed well with an aa bb rhyme scheme.

*Exclaim* punctuation: punctuation was used correctly.

*Sun* tone: the tone is welcoming and natural.

*Strawberry* Title: the title is appropriate as it is talking about a circus in the second stanza.

*Dragonflyp* Image: brings to my mind clowns and acrobats.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I think that I would try to stretch it out just one more stanza to bring it all together cohesively.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Dr M C Gupta , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: you structured this poem using four quatrains with abcb rhyme scheme and 7-6 7-6
the themd is Christmas and how we do what Christ says.

ivo we:moon} Flow*Exclaim* punctuation: I found that the punctuation that was used was correct.

e:strawberry} Title: the title is appropriate for this particular poem.

*Dragonflyp* Image: I visualize a baby in a manger with this poem.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I love Christ and I am glad you made this poem all about him.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of MY HATS  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Dr M C Gupta , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: you structured this item using ten quatrains or stanzas with four lines. 7777 aabb, which is my favorite rhyme scheme.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme of this poem is about the many different careers you have had, which is very impressive, medical, legal, and education.

*Moon* Flow: the flow was just wonderful, I liked the rhyme as well.

*Exclaim* punctuation: I'm not the best with punctuation, but it looks like you have it correct.
*Sun* tone: the tone is nostalgic.

*Strawberry* Title: the title is whimsical and appropriate.

*Dragonflyp* Image: this particular poem has no image.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I think this is great where you have had the life experience of three people.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello TheBusmanPoet , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: the structure of this poem is five stanzas of four lines each or quatrains. there is a total of twenty lines in the poem.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme of the poem is about the love you and your cat have for one another.

*Moon* Flow: this non rhyming poem flows well and has sweet sentiments to it.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation looks correct to me.

*Sun* tone: the tone of the poem is loving

*strawberryt* Title: The title of the poem is very appropriate and good.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I can just see you and your lovely little cat hugged up together in an arm chair.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of The Old Veteran  
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Sum1 , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This is structured using quatrains, about eight of them I believe.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The theme is about an elderly veteran who would believe he fought valiantly for our nation?

*Moon* Flow: The flow of this poem is very good. I thought it rhymed good and had a perfect rhythm. just beautiful.

*Exclaim* punctuation: You chose not to use punctuation in creating this poem, which is just fine.

*Sun* tone: the tone is pride

*Strawberry* Title: The title is very appropriate for the poetry.

*Dragonflyp* Image: I can just see him sitting in a wheelchair looking outside the window telling someone about his memories of his service to the country.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: This was a rich and beautiful piece of writing.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Hello Lady Catesstrophe , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured using three quatrains.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: Stop the fighting and enjoying peace

*soon* Flow: the flow of this poem is very well, it has a subtle rhythm.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation is done very well the best I can tell.

*Sun* tone: it is smoothly written, with no pauses or stops that are unnecessary.

*Strawberry* Title: The title is very appropriate.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I saw no mistakes that I could tell.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of A Day’s Reason  
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Hello KODA , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This item is structured using only one long verse.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: coming to a reason with each other.

*Moon* Flow: This item flowed well and I thought it had a goodly rhythm but subtle.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation is done very well. I am usually not well versed in punctuation, but you did seem to hit it well.

*Sun* tone: The tone is questionable I thought. it is very good,

*Strawberry* Title: "A Day's Reason", this is a perfect sounding title.

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*StarfishB* Suggestions: You did a very good job and I saw no mistakes.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Hello dmack ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I do so hope that you have had a blessed day today. I loved this Haiku, It is for Easter :

glorious morning
rejoice the grave stands empty
for He is risen

I had to add it on the review because it is so wonderfully true and it is an important message, that as a Christian, I Want to spread it to everyone who can hear or see the message. Jesus has risen and He will forgive your sins if you ask and believe on Him as the Son of God.



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Hello Maryann I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our February raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
to our fearless leader, wow what cards, you have a fabulous selection. I mostly enjoyed the one with the flying little angel that says sending you prayers or something like that. I love prayers being sent my way. You have great all occasion cards, at a very affordable price.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Review of Mother's Day  
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your reviewer today is:
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Hello Purple Princess I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our February raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
This image is very special, it is pink and purple flowers and it says happy mother's day. To me, there is nothing in this world more important than a mother or at least my mom. That is except God, who gave me my mom. A mother is loving and caring and helpful, she is worth more than all of the gold in the entire world,
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Review of Sunrise/Sunset  
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Hello Lou-Here By His Grace I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our February raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I loved this beautiful piece of writing. I think the title"Sunrise/Sunset" is very appropriate for the item. I believe that this writing was inspired by the King James Version of the Holy Bible, Mathew: 16:2-3. The item description on this writing is also very helpful to the reader.

Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Hello LegendaryMask❤️ I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our February raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
This is a sweet and precious image of sunflowers forming a heart. and how beautiful the verse is that is written inside of the heart. The title is "never change who you are" this is a good message for good people, but for those who do wrong, there is a chance you can change who you are and be forgiven for the bad you have done.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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