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Review of Perspective.  
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (4.5)

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Hello Siim Kepp , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: you

*Butterfly2r* Theme:created this poem using three stanzas with four lines each. or should I say quatrains.

*Moon* Flow: the flow was good and there were no flaws.


*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation looked okay to me.

*Sun* tone: I really was freaked out by the dancing on the graves part.

*Strawberry* Title: The title was appropriate
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*Dragonflyp* Image: I really get the vision of what you are writing about.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought this was well written and good.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (4.0)

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This review is from Lisa Noe *Cat**Dog2*


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Hello Scott A. Lowe Upshotscott , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this is a long verse which worked well for this poem.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: writing about love and current affairs.

*Moon* Flow: the poem flowed well and had no unnecessary pauses or stops.

*Exclaim* punctuation: I think the punctuation was okay, I am not well versed in the subject.

*Sun* tone: loving

*Strawberry* Title: I think the title tells a lot about the poem and the title is also very appropriate for the poem.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: this is a well written and sweet poem,


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (4.0)

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This review is from Lisa Noe *Cat**Dog2*


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Hello Chris Breva , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: you structured this curilew poem with four quick and rhyming lines,

*Butterfly2r* Theme: Tweety seeing Sylvester

*Moon* Flow: the flow was muted as it was so brief.

*Exclaim* punctuation: I think that the punctuation was correct, but I am not really well versed in punctuation. ya know!

*Sun* tone: light hearted

*Strawberry* Title: the title is very cute and appropriate.

*Dragonflyp* Image: can envision Sylvester chasing the little yellow canary.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought that this was cute and light hearted, very good.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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Review of Our New World  
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (4.5)

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Hello ellenraes , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this is structured like an essay in paragraph form.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is to look to the Lord Jesus Christ during this pandemic for a cure and for answers.

*Moon* Flow: the flow was very good and there were no stops or pauses that weren't needed.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation seems to be correct to me

*Sun* tone: the tone is loving

*Strawberry* Title: the title is appropriate for this item.

Correction:
conspiracies theories
it would sound better if you say conspiracy theories.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: you did a good job and I love what you had to say.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)

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Hello jaya , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured using six stanzas.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme of the poem is giving thanks to all
*Moon* Flow: I thought that this poem flowed well, had some rhyming, and a great rhythm.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was good.

*Sun* tone: the tone was most certainly joyful and thankful

*Strawberry* Title: the title was perfect and appropriate
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*StarfishB* Suggestions: I think this was a well written and all-around good poem.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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Review of All the secrets  
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (4.0)

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Hello Kay , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this poem is structured using six stanzas.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme of this poem is about how someone is making you feel these days.

*Moon* Flow: I thought that this poem flowed from start to finish very well.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was well placed as far as I could see.

*Sun* tone: the tone seemed a little hot or melancholy to me.

*Strawberry* Title: the title is good and says something about what the poem is all about it is also very appropriate for the writing,


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought you did a good job creating a poem that speaks to how you are feeling.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (4.0)

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Hello Ned , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: you structured this item using only one and a half lines,.
to tell your little story.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme of this little piece of writing is that a man on his first day of work at a construction site cut off his fingers with a saw.

*Moon* Flow: this was a tweet me a story entry so there is no flow.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation was okay and correct.


*Strawberry* Title: The title is appropriate for this tweeted story,

*Dragonflyp* Image: I hate to say it but I can envision his fingers on the floor and blood all over his arm
*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought this was a good tweet story, it is not easy to tell a story in that few words.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)

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Hello Bikerider , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this was well structured and you did a fabulous job as I followed it from beginning to end so well.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The nonending rain, which kept falling until you stepped out of the bunker to a brilliant blue and beautiful day.

*Moon* Flow: The flow was excellent and it was also so well written and easy to follow.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation was just excellent and I know you did well with that.


*Strawberry* Title: The title is a very good one and it is appropriate for the writing,

*Dragonflyp* Image: I can just visualize a stormy and wet day,..

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I can just imagine how much you appreciated the sun when it did come out that morning.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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Review of Gratitude  
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (4.5)

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Hello 💙 Carly , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: six lines is all your poem has, it is called a six line couplet, I have never heard of this form before. this is really different.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: I think this sounds to me, like a prayer.

*Moon* Flow: this was a
beautiful piece of writing.



*Strawberry* Title: The title is gratitude and that is a beautiful title for this poem and I also think that it is appropriate.



*StarfishB* Suggestions: I think this is a beautiful poem.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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Review of Highway Star  
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)

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Hello Don Two , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: you structured this poem using seven quatrains or stanzas with four lines each.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme was a holiday trip that ended in an accident for a family of four. with a near miss.

*Moon* Flow: the flow was excellent and it had a great rhythm and it also rhymed really well.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was good.

*Sun* tone: the tone was fun

*Strawberry* Title: the title was perfect for the poetry and I thought it was also very appropriate.

*Dragonflyp* Image: I envision something like the National Lampoons vacation movies would have.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: This was a really fun poem and I really enjoyed reading it.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

The Poet's Place


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Review of Child to teen  
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (4.5)

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Hello Chris Breva , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: one long verse created this little poem.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: when does a child turn into a teen but sometimes
it might be backwards. this item flowed well and it was a real
cute little read.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation in this poem was well done and well placed as far as I know, I am not really good with the punctuation, but it looked okay.

*Sun* tone: the tone felt lighthearted to me.

*Strawberry* Title: The title was good and appropriate.

*Dragonflyp* Image: I can envision a young rambunctious boy.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought that this was well written and good.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

The Poet's Place


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Review of Letter From Home  
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)

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Hello , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this poem was structured a bit differently than most but I really think that it worked for this particular poem.

*Butterfly2r* Theme:
waiting for a letter from home for eighty years.

*Moon* Flow: I thought that the poem was written sort of like a letter.

*Exclaim* punctuation: I really didn't notice the punctuation because the content of the poem was so deep.

*Sun* tone: I thought that the poem was kind of solemn

*Strawberry* Title: The title was so appropriate for the poem.

I really can only say Awesome
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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

The Poet's Place


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Review of Cool  
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (4.5)

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Hello Chained , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: there was a structure which included only two stanzas or quatrains.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: This is about a person who thinks that they are older now so they are no longer cool.

*Moon* Flow: I thought it flowed and was a quick read.

*Exclaim* punctuation: I didn't notice anything with this,

*Sun* tone: the tone was, to me, kind of sad.

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "cool," was appropriate for the writing.

,*Dragonflyp* Image: I see someone depressed in this vision,


*StarfishB* Suggestions: The poem was well written and shows your inner feelings,


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

The Poet's Place


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Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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Title:"Our Beliefs: Still Highly Regarded"
*Poseyp*Author: Tim Chiu
*Poseyp*Type: Poetry

*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kitty Love~ *Cat2*
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*Poseyp*First Impression: I'm going to give you a detailed review of your poem today in order to aid you in your quest to become an excellent poet.
I am so sorry but I had a difficult time understanding the meaning of your poem.
You always write so nicely and I always get it. but this time I just am lost with your words.

*Poseyp*EXCERPT OF WRITIA mimicry or outcry
And the blasphemy of derision;
Are we landing on the pedestal of royalty,
Or still undecided?NG:



*Poseyp*Suggestions: I think it needs to be written with more definition in it.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this striking poetry with me,I appreciate the talent you display with this writing.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.


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Review of No one's There  
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Poseyp*Title: No One's There
*Poseyp*Author: Em<3
*Poseyp*Type: poetry

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*Poseyp*First Impression: I'm going to give you a detailed review of your poem today in order to aid you in your quest to become an excellent poet.

I saw this as a sad poem. this writing shows your deepest feelings and I think that it is so brave of you to share them. I loved
your writing as it was so real. I feel for you because you have pain.
You are not alone, we have a Savior in Jesus Christ and He will always be there for you. know that you seem to be so hard on yourself, I bet you are not a screw up.
I bet you are a good and descent person. Just know God loves you.
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*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this striking poetry with me,I appreciate the talent you display with this writing.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.


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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello LegendaryMask❤️ }, I came across this item in your forum. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: It is structured so well and has several stanzas which are written straight from your heart.
*Butterfly2r* Theme: The theme is the sound of God's voice. which was initially inspired by me by the song "Amazing Grace", I am so happy that my poem inspired you to write this beautiful and touching poem about the Lord God.

*Moon* Flow: I thought that it flowed very well and that there were no unnecessary pauses.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation was just very good.

*Sun* tone: the tone was very much in line with the poem, which showed how the Lord accepts you and forgives you for what you do.

*Strawberry* Title: The title was the whole subject of the poem.

*Dragonflyp* Image: God with the little children comes to my mind as we are His
children, and He is with us, speaking to us through our hearts daily.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: Your poem was so wonderful and it made me feel so good
to know that my poem inspired something so beautiful that you wrote for our Father ib Heaven. I think it is beautiful.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Beholden , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: the structure was great

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme was that of Amazing Grace, from the song you took your inspiration. I also did the same and shared first place with you and I think that it is an honor to be held in such heights with you. your poem is beautiful.

*Moon* Flow: I thought that it flowed well and there were no sudden or unusual stops.

*Sun* tone: The tone is just perfect and I liked what you said.

*Strawberry*Title: the title is appropriate for the piece


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I think this was a well-deserved win for you, good job.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Navy  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (3.0)
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Hello black ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary,
You have now been a member of the writing.com family for eight years and we are lucky to have you with us. I chose the item called, "Navy" because I love the military.
you, however did not write a story nor a poem or anything except for one line about the navy of Australia. I would suggest to add at least a paragraph to say something meaningful about the navy. Thank you for sharing and may God Bless You.

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hello ichichra ,I'd like to wish you ayouvery happy account anniversary,

your anniversary was April 3, and you have been a valuable member of writing.com since 2012. That is eight years, congratulations and I am sorry I am a few days late. This was a good poem called "Take my hand", I thought that it was well written and that the title was very appropriate. I so much enjoyed reading this little poem and I commend you on a job well done in writing it and creating it.

thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review of The Bridge  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Angus ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary,
You will be celebrating you account anniversary on April 25, I thought I'd be the first to congratulate you for being a member since 2011. That is quite a while.
you have really got a lot of talent for writing stories.. I really enjoyed reading "The Bridge," which was a short work of flash fiction. I think you really did do a great job on it and it should have won the Daily flash fiction contest, which it did.
by all means you should write more flash fiction and other types of short stories as well.

thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Hello jaya ,I'd to wish you a very happy account anniversary this morning, I do so hope that you are having a blessed morning today. You haver been a valuable member of writing.com
since April 24th, 2008. We are so glad to have you as a member as well. I thought that this piece of writing was just beautiful and I hope you do well with the contest. I loved the title and I also thought that you wrote s very helpful item description for the reader. Thank you for sharing this item with me, your talent is appreciated. God Bless You.

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Hello Vincent Coffin ,I would like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this morning, I see that you have been a valuable member of our writing.com family since April 5, 2013, which is about seven years ago. quite the milestone. I do hope that you are having a blessed day today. This letter is one which I found in your portfolio, it appears to be an invitation.
I am curious if you are talking about time travel in this letter?
I think that that sounds amazing and very interesting.
I wonder if that will ever really be possible.
Of course during the time frame you are speaking of, the people in that area did speak with quite a bit more formality than we do here today. So I guess you are speaking in a correct manner. I found that your letter was well written and that the title was very appropriate for the letter. I also find that the item description was helpful. Thank you so very much for sharing this item with me. God bless You.

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Hello Whiskerfaceschoolsout! ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, as of today you have been a valuable member of the writing.com family since April fourth 2011, which is nine years. We are so happy to have you with us, I do so hope you have had a blessed day today. The title of your poem is "Caveman", which is a very creative and very appropriate title. This poem is a Japanese form of poetry, known as a senryu...

Cavern-like shelter
Cold, dank, and isolated
Internet caveman

This poem is very similar to a Haiku, isn't it?
actually I really do not understand the poem very much. what do you mean by Internet caveman? I am sure it is just me, probably other people can understand this really well, but I really do not get it. Nonetheless, I do wish you much luck in the contest which you have entered it into.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*
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Hello ♫~ Kenword~♫ ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary,

*Think* Structure: The structure of this item is written in paragraphs. It is a devotion and prayer to our Lord God.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: This is a prayer and devotion, which I could really relate to as I write down many of my prayers to God and share them with others.

*Moon* Flow: I thought that the flow of this item was very good.

*Exclaim* punctuation: To me, I believe that the punctuation is correct, but I am not the best with punctuation so you might want to check it out with other people.

*Sun* tone: the tone is smooth and loving.

*Strawberry* Title: I enjoyed the title and I thought that it was very appropriate for the writing. You did a fantastic and creative job with your writing.

*Dragonflyp* Image: If I close my eyes, I can envision the hands of the Lord pressed together in prayer.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I liked that you wrote this, it is very special, I do the same thing myself.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Hello SandraLynn Team Florent! I am here with the power reviewers today as aom now part of our April raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I think that I will have an un- birthday every year so that I will never age again, I will stay fifty-four from now on. If I had known about this when I was in my twenties it would have been so much better. Your imagination really took you so many different places in this item. so congratulations on going down the rabbit hole.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
And Have Fun!

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