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#4541655

Review of Noticing Newbies

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Rated: 13+

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Hello The StoryMistress I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our April raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I think this is a great Idea and a warm welcome.. It is hard to knock writer's block in the head, but you are right, entering a contest is a really good idea I agree with you so very much. also write about memories you have and you'll find new things will soon pop into your mind and you can start writing about that as well.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
And Have Fun
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#4541578

Review of Ballad Of A Small Town Election

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Hello ♫~ Kenword~♫ I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our April raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
this is an excellent poem about an election. It is structured using ten stanzas: five couplets and five quatrains. You decided not to use punctuation in this poem, which ism okay;. it is written in ballad form. in thirty lines.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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#4541575

Review of I'm Just the 'Bone Player

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Rated: E

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Hello Richard ~ Shenanigans INC. I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our April raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
This is a very well written little piece of writing. Your poem was written for the Philosophical Musings Contest, And I sure would like to wish you all of the good luck in the world. I thought that the title was chosen very well and that it is very appropriate for the writing. Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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#4541572

Review of Lucky Limerick Contest Entries

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Hello Richard ~ Shenanigans INC. I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our April raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
You have entered two limericks in the Lucky Limerick contest, My favorite one is the first one, "The horse and the Copper", I just thought it was funnier. The second one about the teacher was also funny but the first one had it beat I thought. I do wish you good luck in the contest.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.

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#4541516

Review of Prohibition

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Rated: 18+

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Hello Mastiff I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our April raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
This is a very important acrostic poem about the dreaded virus that has taken over the world. We are at war with it. I thought that this was a very clever piece of poetry, spelling out do not touch me. which is a very important message right now.
especially for people like me who suffer from lung and heart disease..
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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#4541513

Review of Stairway

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Rated: E

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Hello Moarzjasac I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our April raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
This is an important poem, written as a warning to us all over the world. The virus is frightening. I am on oxygen all the time with lung disease and heart failure, I am terribly afraid of getting the virus, luckily so far there have been no known cases of it in my county of Harlan Kentucky.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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#4541200

Review of Last Flight

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Rated: 13+

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Hello kerrimiller I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our April raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
This is a well written and very fine piece of poetry. for I think that you have a wonderful flair for writing poetry. I recognize the form I believe, however I can't
recall the name of the form. The title of this poem is very appropriate for the piece and the item description is also very helpful to the reader.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
And Have Fun

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#4541118

Review of The Bleak Heart of February

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Hello THANKFUL SONALI Now What? I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our April raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
this begins with ten well-written stanzas which have an abcb rhyme scheme.
I truly enjoyed this item and I thought that the title was so appropriate for the poetry. This was a fine tale of the month of love, which is sometimes overdone.
I enjoyed reading your well put together and cereative piece of literature.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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#4541115

Review of Le Voyage Magnifique

for entry "The Spirit of Summer"

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Rated: 18+

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Hello Dave I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our April raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
Round 67 March 16 , 2020
From Burma, the Ya Du . I see you have entered the Oriental Poetry contest this month, I wish you luck. I loved your entry, I think it is beautiful. You always write such nice poetry and it is always so well written. The title of the poem is awesome and also very appropriate for the item. the item description is also very helpful. I wish you all the luck in the world on winning this contest you have a vast amount of talent.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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#4541114

Review of Purple Plush

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Hello Beholden I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our April raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
this is a well written piece of literature and very creative and imaginative. I reallty liked it. the title is appropriate and the item description is helpful to the reader. I hope you do well in the contest for which you have entered this piece.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Review of The Ozzard of Wiz

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Hello ☮ The Grum Of Grums I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our April raid. I would hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I adore limericks, I think that they are very quirky and cute for the most part.
You have written one for the Limerick contest, and it is about a wizard, I liked it. You have a witty sense of humor, I do so hope you place or win in your endeavor.
You have written a very creative piece of poetry and you must be pleased with your effort.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with meou keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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#4540995

Review of You is You

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Rated: E

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Hello percy goodfellow ,I would like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I see that you have been a valuable member of our writing.com family for eleven years today, Since April 1, 2009. I do so hope that you have had a blessed day today. I chose this poem, "You is You", because it seemed like a very fun little poem, you paid no attention to grammar but that was what made it fun I suppose. you categorized this poem as nonsense, which really I suppose it was.
You also did not use any of the punctuation that we would normally expect. That is quite alright, however because we don't always use punctuation when we write poetry.
I thought that this was a clever little piece of writing, I like the fact that you seemed to be just having fun with your craft. I have done this a bit myself.
you seem to have a good sense of humor, which I do like.

thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.

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#4540991

Review of One Raindrop

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Hello SandraLynn Team Florent! , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, You have been a valuable member of the writing.com family since April 13, 2014, This month you will be a member of our group for six years, we are so glad to have you with us. I chose this particular poem because the title really just spoke top me in a great big way. I thought that the title was appropriate and also very creative for the poem. You called this a joybell poem, I am no so sure that I have heard of this form before, but I surely liked it. I don't know the rules for the poem, and I also do not know what constitutes the poem. I would like to offer the helpful suggestion that you add a note following your poem, telling what a Joybell poem is and what the rules of the form are, I do think that it would be very helpful to all of the readers of this poem, I really enjoyed reading this poem, I thought that it was quite brief, however, I do not know the rules of the form so I can only guess if it is correct.

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#4540870

Review of The Big Catch

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Hello Angelica- Happy Mothers Day! , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: you structured this poem using six stanzas of three and four lines each. I thought that this was an unusual but sweet subject on which to write a poem.

Theme: Going fishing and catching a Largemouth bass., You really struggled but in the end you really got the little booger.

Flow: The flow of the poem was good and I liked how you separated all of the stanzas with lines of some type.

punctuation: The punctuation in the poem was right on que, I am not really that good with punctuation but I think that it looks right to me.
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tone: it sounded like you had a difficult but fun time reeling in the large fish.

Title: I thought that the title was appropriate and also very good,.

Image: I
can envision you on a hillside next to a pond fishing.

Suggestions: I think that this was anb excellent poem.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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#4540864

Review of Clarity

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Hello kwerky123, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: the structure was very simple

Theme: it was about Christ and I truly don't know what I think about it. I love God and believe that Jesus died for our sins. He is my Savior and I believe and trust in Him very much. the flow of the poem is done well. and there are no stops or pauses that are not needed.

punctuation: As far as I can tell the punctuation is okay, I am not the best person to judge punctuation though. The grammar and the spelling also seem correct to me.

tone: to me the tone is dark and sad. The title, "Clarity", is also very creative and appropriate for the writing.

Image: The image I can envision is of The Lord Jesus Christ Nailed to a cross on the miserable and important day of His Crucifixion...
I can see Mary and His Mother Mary weeping at His feet in sadness...

Suggestions: I don't know what you believe but let me witness to you that Jesus died for your sins as well as mine. It says in the bible,
"I and my Father are one..." I for one believe that. You believe what you will
but always remember that God so loved the world that He gave His only begotten son
that whosoever believeth in Him shall not perish but have everlasting life.
John 3:16 KJV

Thank you for sharing your talent with us
and may God Bless You.

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#4540860

Review of A Sticky Subject for All

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Hello Tim Chiu , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: this item is structured using four stanzas one of which is a couplet.

Theme: t is a really good message to all of us and we all need to follow it. to shred all of our documents so that thieves and hackers cant get it and do wrong with it.

Flow: the item flowed well and is a great idea for a poem,

punctuation: the punctuation is good as far as I can tell.

tone: the tone is in a warning so it is quite serious.

Title: the title is appropriate for the item and I liked it.

te:dragonflyp} Image: it brings forth the image of people rifling through your garbage cans.

Suggestions: a year ago I had my identity stolen and they charged several thousand dollars of stuff on various accounts in my name. The police knew who it was and because he was a police informant they let him go. I didn't have to pay for the items that were stolen, but I had so much paper work to do you would not believe it.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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#4539657

Review of Tick Tock

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Hello Raven , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: this is created with a structure of four cinquains or four five line stanzas. this is some kind of timing for this poem with what is going on all over the world.

Theme: a poem about locking away pain and lies.

Flow: I thought that the poem flowed well without any untimely pauses or stops.

punctuation: the punctuation looks to be correct to me.

tone: the item was smooth

Title: I felt that the title is appropriate for the item.

Image: this is really not applicable for this poem.

Suggestions: I thought that you did really well.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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#4539266

Review of I am awake

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Hello ouphist, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: this item is structured using six quatrains and a single line. The words I am awake, are the repetition in the poem.

Theme: it is about a vampire out for sucking blood from his victims.

Flow: the poem flowed well and there were no unnecessary stops or pauses.

punctuation: punctuation seemed to be fine.

tone: tragic tone as we are talking about death

Title: the title is appropriate for the item.

Image: I can envision a vampire sucking the blood from a victim.

Suggestions: this was a thriller and was very dark.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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#4539262

Review of True Love Makes Sense, From Time to Time

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Hello {suser:mirtx }, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: This item is written using all quatrains, you might call it a quatrain poem.

the theme of this poemn is love occurring for those who seem forever single.
Flow: It flowed well and had no unnecessary stops or pauses.

punctuation: the punctuation seems to be correct to m

Title: The title of this item is pretty long, but it does work.

Suggestions: I think this was a well written piece of poetry, you did a fine job creating it.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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#4539260

Review of A Breath Away

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Hello MirandaCookies COLLEGE SOON , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Flow: this item is structured using five tercets or three line stanzas and one quatrain, which is a four line stanza. it flowed well without any pauses.

punctuation: the punctuation in this item is good as far as I can tell.

tone: anxious

Title: the title is very appropriate form the item, and creative.

Suggestions: I think this was a well written piece of work.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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#4539257

Review of Oh, What an April Fool

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Hello Vanishing Vapor , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: This poem was structured using five sestets, or five stanzas of six lines each.

Theme: A man feels like a fool

Flow: the item flowed well without any unnecessary stops or pauses anywhere.

punctuation: it looked to me that the punctuation was done correctly.

tone: the tone was melancholy

Title: this was an excellent title for this poem, it was very appropriate.

Image: this really is not applicable for this poem.

Suggestions: I thought that this was a well written piece of poetry.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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#4539254

Review of Huggie the Kitty Cat

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Hello charrell, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: this item was structured using what is called two septets or two verses of seven lines each.

Theme: the theme of this item was a playful little kitty cat, which I thought was just adorable, as I love cats.

Flow: I thought that the poem flowed well without any unnecessary stops or pauses anywhere.

punctuation: You chose not to use end line punctuation in this poem, which is quite alright, as it is up to the individual writer as to whether to use punctuation or not.

tone: the tone was fun and energetic.

Title: I thought that the title was adorable, it is also very appropriate..

Image: I can just close my eyes and envision a sweet kitten playing.

Suggestions: I would suggest that you go back and read the poem out loud to yourself and edit it in several places. you should be able to see what I am talking about in several spots you are missing a letter or something. all in all this was a great little read.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless Yo=lu and Yours.

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#4539247

Review of A Heart’s Whisper

Review by Lisa Noe

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

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Hello MirandaCookies COLLEGE SOON , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: structured this little poem using two septets and one tercet, this is an odd format, which I've not seen before, Is it a new form of poetry?

Theme: recalling the moments spent with a first love,

Flow: I thought that the poetry flowed well and that it had a nice feel to it.

punctuation: the punctuation was well done and seemed right to me.

tone: I thought the poem felt a little meloncholy.

Title: The title of the item was perfect, I really liked it I felt that it was very appropriate for the poem.

Image: Suggestions: You did a great job creating this item.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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#4536836

Review of IT HAPPENED!

Review by Lisa Noe

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

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Hello Dr M C Gupta , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: you have structured this poem using eight quatrains at Written in abcb 7-6-7-6 format.

Theme: A welcoming meeting with a writer on writing,.com, this is probably a thing that happens often to you since you share the name and position with a famous doctor on CNN named Dr. MC Gupta. I do believe he is several years younger though.

Flow: The flow of this piece is very good and no unnecessary stops or pauses are seen.

punctuation: the punctuation is okay as well

tone: happy, smooth

Title: The title is good and appropriate

Image: I can envision the two of you chatting on line

Suggestions: this was a good poem by a very established and talented writer.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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#4536833

Review of LIFE WITHOUT YOU

Review by Lisa Noe

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

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Hello Dr M C Gupta , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: this item is written using four quatrains, Written in abcb 8-8-8-8 format

Theme: Memories of a beloved and missing spouse

Flow: The item flowed well with a subtle hint of rhyme.

punctuation: to the best of my knowledge, the punctuation is correct.

tone: the tone is nostalgic

Title: The title is perfect for the item, It is very appropriate.

Image: I get an image of a man sitting near a headstone, talking to his beloved in Heaven.

Suggestions: I have no suggestions, I think this was a well-written piece. I would think if the rhyme were more apparent then it would be 5 stars.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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